Vengeance at Red Rock Pt 4:- The House Goes Bust

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meditions142 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:02 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Jan 04, 2025 7:31 pm

Yep, thanks to her upbringing in the wild with her tribe Sand is a great deal stronger than Nancy with better upper body strength. Hence Constance staying unconscious longer than Abigail.
Makes sense. And probably why it was Sand and Clinton were the ones to knock out Sylvié and Eleanor as they are the strongest of the three.

I still felt bad for Sylvié. She was just a cute little maid dragged into the saga because Nancy needed to impersonate her boss. She did exactly what she was told to do. However, she still ended up getting the nasty blow to the back of her neck to knock her out.

Indeed, Nancy is more the lithe and dexterous one who also as you might have noticed has the silver tongue utilising cunning while she's in disguise and also out of it. Sand is the muscle and Clinton is the middle ground between the two, possessing both strength and cunning but also a strong sense of justice. I based Nancy on a combination of John Cooper and Catherine O'Hara from the video game Desperadoes 3.


Me too, Sylvié like Abigail and Constance where innocent cute girls that got caught up on events bigger than them. Although, their may be an happy ending for Sylvié when the dust settles she deserves that much.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:10 pm

Me too, Sylvié like Abigail and Constance where innocent cute girls that got caught up on events bigger than them. Although, their may be an happy ending for Sylvié when the dust settles she deserves that much.

I definitely think the scene with Eleanor and Sylvié was fun the way the women had given up their clothes and had been tied up. However, they still end up getting knocked out.

There is something fun about a scene where the woman gives up her clothes and still ends up being put to sleep.
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Re: Vengeance at Red Rock Pt 4:- The House Goes Bust

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meditions142 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:17 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:10 pm

Me too, Sylvié like Abigail and Constance where innocent cute girls that got caught up on events bigger than them. Although, their may be an happy ending for Sylvié when the dust settles she deserves that much.

I definitely think the scene with Eleanor and Sylvié was fun the way the women had given up their clothes and had been tied up. However, they still end up getting knocked out.

There is something fun about a scene where the woman gives up her clothes and still ends up being put to sleep.

Thanks, I'am glad you think so. And I couldn't agree more. The team couldn't risk Eleanor and Sylvie being discovered too soon or that would have ruined the plan. So knocking them out even after they gave up their clothes made the women more manageable and allowed our heroes to stay in character as bandits. After all Eleanor and Sylvié had no idea they were being held up for their clothes, they assumed they were just being robbed.

Yeah, it's definitely adding insult to injury to be knocked out even after being forced to strip that's what makes it fun.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:24 pm
Yeah, it's definitely adding insult to injury to be knocked out even after being forced to strip that's what makes it fun.
This is a great concept. I can picture a fun scene.

A pretty brunette security guard is standing in her sports bra and boyshorts while a woman finishes getting dressed in her uniform. The guard has a cute round face with a "girl next door" look to her. She is around 5'4" with a nice toned athletic but not overly muscle body and has nice perky B-Cup breasts with the nipples just peaking through the fabric of her bra. Her mid-back length medium-dark brown hair is tied in a low ponytail. She looks to be in her early to mid-20s.

The woman says: "There we go. Not too bad of a fit. Thanks for letting me borrow it. Well, I guess the only thing left is for me take care of you."

A look of fear comes across the guard's pretty face. "What? You told me if I gave you my uniform and the access codes you wouldn't kill me."

"And indeed I am a woman of my word. However, I can't have you sounding the alarm as soon as I leave."

The woman responds "No please, I will stay here and be quiet. I wont raise the alarm."

"Sorry sweat heart but in my business, you can't trust anyone. Even cute little security guards like you. No, so what I am going to do is give you a little something that is going to put you to sleep for a good long time."

"No, please, I don't want you to put me to sleep. Maybe you could just tie me up?"

"Sorry, don't have any rope. But don't worry. I am just going to give you a little drug. It will put into a nice, deep sleep for ten hours or so. And you know what? It also erases short term memory so when wake up you wont remember me or any of this. Now you just be a good little girl and let me put you to sleep."

The woman than guided the guard over to a chair and gently pushed her down into it. The woman than sat down on the guard's lap straddling her. She caressed the woman's check and then took out a needle. The intruder then sticks the needle into the woman's carotid artery, and pushes the plunger down to give her a full dose.

The poor woman winches and lets out a little "ouch" as the needle is stuck in her neck but otherwise doesn't resist.

"There you go sweetie. You just go sleepy-bye now." the woman says in a soft, soothing voice.

The look of fear on the woman's face is replaced by a vacate, distant look as her pretty hazel eyes stare blankly into space. The powerful drug is doing its work on her. She is being sent into a deep coma like sleep.

Just as woman is just about to go completely out the intruder cups her chin in her hand and kisses her on her lips. The brunette actually returns the kiss a bit opening her mouth to let her attack's tongue into her mouth. She probably doesn't realize what she is doing but the intruder enjoys it nonetheless. She reaches down with her free hand and gently rubs the woman's breast eliciting a quiet "mmmmm . . ." from the soon to be unconscious woman.

The intruder then feels the woman's body go completely limp. She releases her chin and pulls back from the kiss letting the woman's head loll forward. The intruder placed two finger's on the woman's neck to check for a pulse to confirm she had not had an unexpected adverse reaction to the drug. She found a very slow but steady pulse indicating the woman is deeply unconscious but very much alive. It actually didn't matter all that much to the intruder but her employer had told her to try and avoid leaving a body count.

The woman stood up and for the first time looked down at the id card clipped to the uniform shirt. "Well, thank you Allison. This has been fun. And thanks so much for kindly letting me borrow your uniform. I just wish you were a bit more well endowed so the shirt fit a bit better. Regardless, pleasant dreams my dear." And with that she left the room leaving the slumbering Allison to her sleep.
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Re: Vengeance at Red Rock Pt 4:- The House Goes Bust

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meditions142 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 1:51 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:24 pm
Yeah, it's definitely adding insult to injury to be knocked out even after being forced to strip that's what makes it fun.
This is a great concept. I can picture a fun scene.

A pretty brunette security guard is standing in her sports bra and boyshorts while a woman finishes getting dressed in her uniform. The guard has a cute round face with a "girl next door" look to her. She is around 5'4" with a nice toned athletic but not overly muscle body and had nice perky B-Cup breast with the nipples just peaking through the fabric of her bra. Her mid-back length medium-dark brown hair is tied in a low ponytail. She looks to be in her early to mid-20s.

The woman says: "There we go. Not too bad of a fit. Thanks for letting me borrow it. Well, I guess the only thing left is for me take care of you."

A look of fear comes across the guard's pretty face. "What? You told me if I gave you my uniform and the access codes you wouldn't kill me."

"And indeed I am a woman of my word. However, I can't have you sounding the alarm as soon as I leave."

The woman responds "No please, I will stay here and be quiet. I wont raise the alarm."

"Sorry sweat heart but in my business, you can't trust anyone. Even cute little security guards like you. No, so what I am going to do is give you a little something that is going to put you to sleep for a good long time."

"No, please, I don't want you to put me to sleep. Maybe you could just tie me up?"

"Sorry, don't have any rope. But don't worry. I am just going to give you a little drug. It will put into a nice, deep sleep for ten hours or so. And you know what? It also erases short term memory so when wake up you wont remember me or any of this. Now you just be a good little girl and let me put you to sleep."

The woman than guided the guard over to a chair and gently pushed her down into it. The woman than sat down on the guard's lap straddling her. She caressed the woman's check and then took out a needle. The intruder then pulls out a needle, sticks it into the woman's carotid artery, and pushing the plunger down to give the her a full dose.

The poor woman winches and lets out a little "ouch" as the needle is stuck in her neck but otherwise doesn't resist.

"There you go sweetie. You just go sleepy-bye now." the woman says in a soft, soothing voice.

The look of fear on the woman's face is replaced by a vacate, distant look as pretty hazel eyes stare blankly into space. The powerful drug is doing its work on her. She is being sent into a deep coma like sleep.

Just as woman is just about to go completely out the intruder cups her chin in her hand and kisses her on her lips. The brunette actually returns the kiss a bit opening her mouth to let her attack's tongue into her mouth. She probably doesn't realize what she is doing but the intruder enjoys it nonetheless. She reaches down with her free hand and gently rubs the woman's breast eliciting a quiet "mmmmm . . ." from the soon to be unconscious woman.

The intruder then feels the woman's body go completely limp. She releases her chin and pulls back from the kiss letting the woman's head loll forward. The intruder placed two finger's on the woman's neck to check for a pulse to confirm she had not had an unexpected adverse reaction to the drug. She found a very slow but steady pulse indicating the woman is deeply unconscious. It actually didn't matter all that much to the intruder but her employer had told her to try and avoid leaving a body count.

The woman stood up and for the first time looked down at the id card clipped to the uniform shirt. "Well, thank you Allison. This has been fun. And thanks so much for kindly letting me borrow your uniform. I just wish you were a bit more well endowed so the shirt fit a bit better. Regardless, pleasant dreams my dear." And with that she left the room leaving the slumbering Allison to her sleep.
Wow what a fun little story! It has everything; a cute brunette girl next door guard in Allison, who's obviously out of her element but takes care of her body and wearing some cute sexy undies ( you really can't go wrong with a sports bra, boy short combo) who's done what's she's told by the intruder but unfortunately it's still not enough. Her whole reaction; the fear and the panic is spot on. She's obviously the submissive type; she's given over her uniform without resistance and is letting herself get sedated. Like we discussed she's in that 60% bracket of women who just love to be dominated by a skilled forceful personality.

And we come to the intruder, who's a skilled professional but likes to take the opportunity to mix business with pleasure by snogging Allison who's slowly falling unconscious while copping a feel of her breasts, and the guard is getting turned on herself, a wonderful scene. The woman is also detached, she would happily kill Allison if she had the option but is following her bosses instructions to keep the body count low. Poor Allison should count herself lucky, but wont remember all this after her 10 hour nap. Cold, sexy and just a little bit ruthless, my type of infiltrator. And we have the little quip at the end mocking Allison's small breasts( which I have no problem with by the way.) since the shirt doesn't fit all that well, marvellous!

Absolutely perfect my friend, thank you very much for sharing this!
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 2:06 pm
Wow what a fun little story! It has everything; a cute brunette girl next door guard in Allison, who's obviously out of her element but takes care of her body and wearing some cute sexy undies ( you really can't go wrong with a sports bra, boy short combo) who's done what's she's told by the intruder but unfortunately it's still not enough. Her whole reaction; the fear and the panic is spot on. She's obviously the submissive type; she's given over her uniform without resistance and is letting herself get sedated. Like we discussed she's in that 60% bracket of women who just love to be dominated by a skilled forceful personality.

And we come to the intruder, who's a skilled professional but likes to take the opportunity to mix business with pleasure by snogging Allison who's slowly falling unconscious while copping a feel of her breasts, and the guard is getting turned on herself, a wonderful scene. The woman is also detached, she would happily kill Allison if she had the option but is following her bosses instructions to keep the body count low. Cold, sexy and just a little bit ruthless, my type of infiltrator. And we have the little quip at the end mocking Allison's small breasts( which I have no problem with by the way.) since the shirt doesn't fit all that well, marvellous!

Absolutely perfect my friend, thank you very much for sharing this!
Indeed Allison is that perfect type of guard. She took the job thinking nothing much would happen and surely didn't expect real trouble. It is left to the imagination as to what the intruder did to gain the advantage but seemingly Allison just quickly surrendered. Although if she had put up a fight I am sure the superior intruder would have made quick work of her.

And definitely she seems to be the submissive type. Maybe that is why she returned the kiss. Also, maybe that explains why she offered to let the intruder tie her up.

I do like the idea that ultimately after some resistance she doesn't fight being sedated. Maybe it is a bit of her submissiveness. Or maybe she just realizes she has no choice. Either way, Allison is going to be asleep for a very long time. Hope she didn't have date after her shift but if she did she's going to miss it. My guess is that drug is so powerful even if she is found they wont be able to wake her up until it wears off.

And I am with you. I actually prefer a nice set of perky B-Cups to bigger breasts. However, our intruder obviously is proud of her's.
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meditions142 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 2:23 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 2:06 pm
Wow what a fun little story! It has everything; a cute brunette girl next door guard in Allison, who's obviously out of her element but takes care of her body and wearing some cute sexy undies ( you really can't go wrong with a sports bra, boy short combo) who's done what's she's told by the intruder but unfortunately it's still not enough. Her whole reaction; the fear and the panic is spot on. She's obviously the submissive type; she's given over her uniform without resistance and is letting herself get sedated. Like we discussed she's in that 60% bracket of women who just love to be dominated by a skilled forceful personality.

And we come to the intruder, who's a skilled professional but likes to take the opportunity to mix business with pleasure by snogging Allison who's slowly falling unconscious while copping a feel of her breasts, and the guard is getting turned on herself, a wonderful scene. The woman is also detached, she would happily kill Allison if she had the option but is following her bosses instructions to keep the body count low. Cold, sexy and just a little bit ruthless, my type of infiltrator. And we have the little quip at the end mocking Allison's small breasts( which I have no problem with by the way.) since the shirt doesn't fit all that well, marvellous!

Absolutely perfect my friend, thank you very much for sharing this!
Indeed Allison is that perfect type of guard. She took the job thinking nothing much would happen and surely didn't expect real trouble. It is left to the imagination as to what the intruder did to gain the advantage but seemingly Allison just quickly surrendered. Although if she had put up a fight I am sure the superior intruder would have made quick work of her.

And definitely she seems to be the submissive type. Maybe that is why she returned the kiss. Also, maybe that explains why she offered to let the intruder tie her up.

I do like the idea that ultimately after some resistance she doesn't fight being sedated. Maybe it is a bit of her submissiveness. Or maybe she just realizes she has no choice. Either way, Allison is going to be asleep for a very long time. Hope she didn't have date after her shift but if she did she's going to miss it. My guess is that drug is so powerful even if she is found they wont be able to wake her up until it wears off.

And I am with you. I actually prefer a nice set of perky B-Cups to bigger breasts. However, our intruder obviously is proud of her's.

She certainly is. I can picture Allison taking the job for a combination of easy money, low expectations and the uniform. Unaware that on her first night she would become the target of a skilled infiltrator. In my mind, the intruder clamped a hand over Allison's mouth while she was looking at naughty pictures of her girl on her phone and jabbed a replica firearm in the small of her back. Telling her to strip or else she will eat a bullet and her friends will find her stripped corpse in the morning. Not knowing the difference between a real gun and a fake, plus the threat of death she compiled.


Indeed, she probably likes the idea of bondage and is desperately seeking Ms Right, someone like the intruder who is the dominant forceful personality of her dreams.


I think it's definitely a combination of Allison's submissive personality and the resignation that she has no choice but to comply, that she allows herself to be sedated. I like the sound of that, I can picture Allison phone vibrating with a picture of a girl called Vicki. The intruder picks it up. "Ohh a hot date, I see. Well sorry, sweetheart Vicki is going to have to do without that sweet little body of yours for a while. But I can do you a small favour..." She drops the phone under Allison's shorts, resting it on her pussy. "...there, I'am a giver toodles." Indeed, I can picture her colleagues discovering her in the morning and they try to revive her but still little Allison is asleep. They call the paramedics and still nothing but once they arrive at the hospital she wakes but as no memory of her encounter with the intruder.


I'am glad you agree. There's something so attractive about smaller breasts on a cute girl, especially perky B cups but I love my A's and C-s too. And the intruder should be proud of her well endowed breasts, she's a skilled and decerning you infiltrator after all with a sexy personality.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 2:45 pm
I think it's definitely a combination of Allison's submissive personality and the resignation that she has no choice but to comply, that she allows herself to be sedated.

Indeed, I can picture her colleagues discovering her in the morning and they try to revive her but still little Allison is asleep. They call the paramedics and still nothing but once they arrive at the hospital she wakes but as no memory of her encounter with the intruder.


I find a certain elegance in the idea of using a sedative to keep a woman asleep. In this case Allison was completely at the mercy of the intruder. Sure the intruder could have simply ordered to turn around and given her a neck chop. She could have then tied her up after all.

But here, the intruder can make it much easier and more effortless. Allison is already being obedient so there will be no resistance. All takes is one injection into her neck and its all over for Allison. She going to be in sleepyland for a very, very long time.

And you could see her colleagues the discovering her. One shakes her and gets no response. The woman says with a look of horror in her eyes "Is she dead?" The other pulls back Allison's eyelid and says "No, but she is deeply unconscious".
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meditions142 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 4:29 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 2:45 pm
I think it's definitely a combination of Allison's submissive personality and the resignation that she has no choice but to comply, that she allows herself to be sedated.

Indeed, I can picture her colleagues discovering her in the morning and they try to revive her but still little Allison is asleep. They call the paramedics and still nothing but once they arrive at the hospital she wakes but as no memory of her encounter with the intruder.


I find a certain elegance in the idea of using a sedative to keep a woman asleep. In this case Allison was completely at the mercy of the intruder. Sure the intruder could have simply ordered to turn around and given her a neck chop. She could have then tied her up after all.

But here, the intruder can make it much easier and more effortless. Allison is already being obedient so there will be no resistance. All takes is one injection into her neck and its all over for Allison. She going to be in sleepyland for a very, very long time.

And you could see her colleagues the discovering her. One shakes her and gets no response. The woman says with a look of horror in her eyes "Is she dead?" The other pulls back Allison's eyelid and says "No, but she is deeply unconscious".

I completely agree, it's much gentle and as you said elegant to use a sedative on an already unconscious or waking victim. Indeed, the intruder had so many options to render little Allison asleep but she chose the more slower elegant way. In a way she was further enforcing her dominance on the submissive Allison and quite possibly she enjoyed it, particularly the arousal.


Definitely. The intruder is demonstrating her sophistication at using the sedative instead of the quicker more brutish physical takedown. You could she is rewarding her sexy little captive for being so helpful and complient. Just one little prick and a brief sensation of pain leaves Allison in sleepyland for a while. Completely at the mercy at of the intruder, who could well return to enjoy the little guard once her mission is finished and give Allison a much more personal reward. If she as time of course.


That's a sexy mental image indeed. You can certainly picture Allison's colleagues turning up in the morning and finding the security office deserted. They call her name but nothing. "Do you here that? It sounds like snoring." The first woman says. The second looks to the locker in the corner. "What the hell? It's coming from that locker!" They open it up and out tumbles Allison. They have the brief conversation checking her over as tou envisaged. Then the first says. "Er...We're her clothes?" The second says. "My god! I think someone... stole them." The first replies. "What type of twisted woman would do that?!" The second shakes her head. "It doesn't matter. We need to call the paramedics for Allison and the cops right now. We've just had a break in."
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 4:49 pm I completely agree, it's much gentle and as you said elegant to use a sedative on an already unconscious or waking victim. Indeed, the intruder had so many options to render little Allison asleep but she chose the more slower elegant way. In a way she was further enforcing her dominance on the submissive Allison and quite possibly she enjoyed it, particularly the arousal.


Definitely. The intruder is demonstrating her sophistication at using the sedative instead of the quicker more brutish physical takedown. You could she is rewarding her sexy little captive for being so helpful and complient. Just one little prick and a brief sensation of pain leaves Allison in sleepyland for a while.
Indeed. It is wonderful to imagine the intruder still sitting on Allison's lap as the drug takes effect. It works fairly quickly but is not instantaneous so Allison will take a little while to go under. This of course gave the intruder time for the little make out session.

You can also imagine the effect of the drug on Allison's mind. She starts out nervous about what the intruder has planned for her. However, as the drug goes to work I would assume she will start to relax. She will try and string her thoughts together but will find it increasingly difficult. Then she'll start feeling really sleepy. When she feels the intruder begin to kiss her and she will just go with it without the mental will to resist. Then the drug will finish its work and she will drift off into an extremely deep sleep.

At this point Allison is nothing but a little plaything for the intruder.
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