meditions142 wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 12:07 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 8:47 am
I think a scene like that is what we call on the USB, a Holy Grail scene. It's what makes nerve pinches so effective against the unprepared. The woman as no time to defend herself, she's standing there with her neck exposed. She's pretty to boot. The uniform is a sure fit, one pinch later from our sexy infiltrator and she's tied up, naked and out of commission.
And I think that's what we love the most about pretty mook level girls, like Darkwatch girls or low level MiB personell like Samantha or Carmen. They are just ordinary women, doing their jobs. Whether guarding a door for an evil organisation or clerical work for the MiB, these girls are just doing their jobs. Then along comes the SI or Ellana, and they end up finishing their shift naked. Waking up in the most unusual( and uncomfortable) of places.
Perfect description and why I love these scenes so much. As you say "it's what makes nerve pinches so effective against the unprepared. The woman has no time to defend herself, she's standing there with her neck exposed." Love to imagine a pretty female sentry standing at her post totally unaware as an infiltrator slips up behind. Then with just a skilled pinch to the right spot on her neck and she is taken care of.
And indeed "they are just ordinary women, doing their jobs". Exactly the way I like to imagine it. That is why I think two of my favorite characters you created were Michaela and Liesel from The Last Holdout. They were just two cute local girls who happened to take a job. They were no match for the intruders who needed to get past them and get their uniforms.
Me too, it's one of the most titillating things of USB. The build up. It's arguably the most important part of any good USB scene. We introduce a pretty character (a guard, nurse, maid or random civilian etc) then an infiltrator who needs her clothes. We see our infiltrator creeping up on the unsuspecting girl, we either see the takeout or don't. Hopefully we will see the aftermath. We have all three in one scene, then we have the Holy Grail.
Three of my favourite scenes with good build up are the cultist in Conan, the Nurse in Exorcist 3 and the Nurse in counterstrike. The first has great build up, we have no idea if the girl is dead or alive, but we can imagine the aftermath. In Exorcist 3, we have the build up with the sexy nurse still in uniform, then the old girl climbing across the wall, and finally the discovery with the poor dead nurse in her panties. No takeout but it was fatal. And finally the nurse in Counterstrike we get all three, build up, takeout and aftermath, a rare scene in mainstream media. They were all ordinary women, who were taken out by more skilled (or demonically possesed) women rather quickly. How I would love to see a Holy Grail scene with a nerve pinch takedown.
Also a special mention to that unfortunate cute blonde waitress in that Turkish series. That had a great buildup and a fantastic takeout, that I think probably was lethal.
Yeah, I remember Michaela and Liesel. I have a little soft spot for them myself. I have been meaning to reread my past stories, but have been busy with Ellana. I agree that they are among my best characters I have written, even though they have very brief scenes. In particular I enjoyed writing their exchange before Nadja and Miranda took them out. It just underpinned how out of their depth they were. Darkwatch just gave them a uniform, shoved guns in their hands and said "Guard this." They didn't expect to wind up naked sleeping in bushes for the rest of the night.
I do miss my Darkwatch sentries. They were the epitome of the innocent, cute mook level guards that always fail. Although, they may return whenever I get back to Squad 1's adventures. My two favourite sentries have to be Siobahn and Annabelle. The two star crossed lovers, who made good in the SI.