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A Star Wars:- Rogue One Deleted Scene( Requested by Darth Chlorophorm) )
Hi everyone, this one's is a special one. Darth asked me to do a deleted scene for our favourite Star Wars movie; Rogue One. This is the scene when Cassian, Jyn, K2-SO, Bodhi and the Alliance Commando's land on Scarif to steal the plans of the Death Star. Of course for their plan to work, they first need imperial uniforms to walk through an entire legion of stormtroopers. Now in the movie, Jyn steals the uniform of an Imperial ground crew but he just turns to be a very small man. But this is the USB and here anything goes. Now without further ado....
As their stolen Imperial shuttle, broke through the upper atmosphere of Scarif and past the Empire's shield gate , thanks to the quick thinking of Bodhi and the inefficiency of Imperial security, Jyn absent mindedly thumbed her mother's Khyber crystal looped around her neck. She reviewed the plan that she, Cassian and the rebel commandoes came up with. It was bold, daring even, Saw would have been proud of her. The chances where that many of the team would die, but if they contacted the rebel fleet orbiting Yavin, they stood a chance of pulling this off, even surviving. Then her family will be avenged and hope restored in the galaxy to fight. The sight of Cassian and the hulking K2-SO, entering the cargo space brought her back into the present.
" I'am just saying, Cassian, that the odds of both of you successfully impersonating imperial personnel are 5000 to 1, each. I don't suppose you want to hear the odds that one of the imperials, is a female that is the exact body size to Jyn Erso--" Cassian rolled his eyes and turned to his droid friend. " Not now K2, go and help Bodhi bring the shuttle to land once we get clearance to land." He snapped, but with no real malice. K2 looked as if he would retort but simply shrugged and turned away. " Nobody wants to hear what I have to say. Never, all you ever bring me for is to fly the ship. Which where I will be, like a simple pilot droid." Jyn had to smile, hearing the two bicker like a pair of Jawas over scrap was a comfort to her, in the short time she had known them. Cassian knelt in front of her. "You ready Jyn. There is no going back now." Jyn tucked the crystal back under her shirt. " I have been ready, since Jedha. So what can we expect when we touchdown." Cassian nodded, spurred on by her confidence. " Well they will run an inspection, usually two, one officer, one ground crew. Thats our ticket in" Jyn got up and walked towards the Commandos, who where running last minute Comms and equipment checks. Some exchanged smiles with her, buoyed on by her speech no five minutes before. " Hi kid, over here." It was one of the Commando's, a Abedeno, by his huge head. She sat down next to him. " I hear you need to put down an Imp quick." He pulled out a small device like a scanner, and pressed it. It emitted an electric surge. He smiled " Now the trick is to zap 'em in the nape of the neck, just below the helmet. It shorts out their Central Nervous System, they drop like a bad hand at sabacc. They ain't getting back up, ever." She took it and pressed it " I will put this to use. Thanks." The Abedeno grinned again ",Give it back, when you're done kid. I need it to kill some Imps myself." As she got up and walked back to Cassian, she felt the shuttle land. She took a deep breath " This is it."
As the shuttle touched down on Scarif loading dock 2, two figures emerged. One was an Imperial Lieutenant, the other was a member of the ground crew that waved the shuttle in. For Corporal Dax Vasser, this was just like any other of the 50 routine inspections, she performed daily as her duty demanded. It was dull boring work, but she liked to think she was serving the Empire in her small, insignificant way. She wished she was flying TIE fighters and killing rebel scum. but here she was. But as she and the Lieutenant boarded the shuttle ramp, and it ominously closed behind them. Something didn't seem right. Before she could react, a rebel had caught the Lieutenant in a headlock and swiftly broke his neck. The last thing she felt was a hand clamping her shoulders and the sensation of electricity coursing up her body, before she dropped dead. Her imperial career cut prematurely short.
Jyn and Cassian looked at each other, full of adrenaline and nodded. Jyn tossed the shocker back at the Abedeno commando, who caught it. " Thanks, works like a charm." The Commandos filed out to give them room. She turned back to Cassian. " Ok let's get to work. As Cassian began relieving the officer of his uniform, Jyn knelt beside the ground crew and began to strip her. She first removed her helmet, Jyn was surprised to see a young face stare back at her. She was around Jyn's age. Pretty for an Imperial with turquoise eyes, and a round face, that could be called kind, if she wasn't Empire. With a crown of auburn hair, cut into a military pixie cut. She closed the dead girl's eyes, and unclipped her shoulders and belt removing her breast plate, which still had her control batons stowed in the back. Jyn pulled off the dead girl's boots and was amazed that they were near Jyn's size. She then turned the dead Imperial on her side and unzipped her jumpsuit, peeling it off. Leaving the dead woman in nothing but a small black tank top and matching shorts. Jyn took off her boots, jacket and blaster and dressed in the dead woman's uniform. Finally donning the heavy black helmet. Her disguise finished. Cassian was also dressed in his stolen uniform. Leaving both Imperials dead in their underwear. The rest of the Commando's filed back in. Along with K2. Jyn, threw the hulking droid a sassy look, her hands on her hips." So, you where saying K2? " Cassian burst out with laughter. The droid merely shrugged, implacable as always" You make passable Imperials, at best." As the commando's, stashed the stripped bodies of the Imperials in the engineering section below the cargo deck , they handed their belongings to K2, who stashed them in his secret compartments. Cassian pressed the Cargo release ramp, as the the ramp descended, Jyn said "Let's do this." As she flicked down her visor, and both walked into the warm Scarif sunshine.
As their stolen Imperial shuttle, broke through the upper atmosphere of Scarif and past the Empire's shield gate , thanks to the quick thinking of Bodhi and the inefficiency of Imperial security, Jyn absent mindedly thumbed her mother's Khyber crystal looped around her neck. She reviewed the plan that she, Cassian and the rebel commandoes came up with. It was bold, daring even, Saw would have been proud of her. The chances where that many of the team would die, but if they contacted the rebel fleet orbiting Yavin, they stood a chance of pulling this off, even surviving. Then her family will be avenged and hope restored in the galaxy to fight. The sight of Cassian and the hulking K2-SO, entering the cargo space brought her back into the present.
" I'am just saying, Cassian, that the odds of both of you successfully impersonating imperial personnel are 5000 to 1, each. I don't suppose you want to hear the odds that one of the imperials, is a female that is the exact body size to Jyn Erso--" Cassian rolled his eyes and turned to his droid friend. " Not now K2, go and help Bodhi bring the shuttle to land once we get clearance to land." He snapped, but with no real malice. K2 looked as if he would retort but simply shrugged and turned away. " Nobody wants to hear what I have to say. Never, all you ever bring me for is to fly the ship. Which where I will be, like a simple pilot droid." Jyn had to smile, hearing the two bicker like a pair of Jawas over scrap was a comfort to her, in the short time she had known them. Cassian knelt in front of her. "You ready Jyn. There is no going back now." Jyn tucked the crystal back under her shirt. " I have been ready, since Jedha. So what can we expect when we touchdown." Cassian nodded, spurred on by her confidence. " Well they will run an inspection, usually two, one officer, one ground crew. Thats our ticket in" Jyn got up and walked towards the Commandos, who where running last minute Comms and equipment checks. Some exchanged smiles with her, buoyed on by her speech no five minutes before. " Hi kid, over here." It was one of the Commando's, a Abedeno, by his huge head. She sat down next to him. " I hear you need to put down an Imp quick." He pulled out a small device like a scanner, and pressed it. It emitted an electric surge. He smiled " Now the trick is to zap 'em in the nape of the neck, just below the helmet. It shorts out their Central Nervous System, they drop like a bad hand at sabacc. They ain't getting back up, ever." She took it and pressed it " I will put this to use. Thanks." The Abedeno grinned again ",Give it back, when you're done kid. I need it to kill some Imps myself." As she got up and walked back to Cassian, she felt the shuttle land. She took a deep breath " This is it."
As the shuttle touched down on Scarif loading dock 2, two figures emerged. One was an Imperial Lieutenant, the other was a member of the ground crew that waved the shuttle in. For Corporal Dax Vasser, this was just like any other of the 50 routine inspections, she performed daily as her duty demanded. It was dull boring work, but she liked to think she was serving the Empire in her small, insignificant way. She wished she was flying TIE fighters and killing rebel scum. but here she was. But as she and the Lieutenant boarded the shuttle ramp, and it ominously closed behind them. Something didn't seem right. Before she could react, a rebel had caught the Lieutenant in a headlock and swiftly broke his neck. The last thing she felt was a hand clamping her shoulders and the sensation of electricity coursing up her body, before she dropped dead. Her imperial career cut prematurely short.
Jyn and Cassian looked at each other, full of adrenaline and nodded. Jyn tossed the shocker back at the Abedeno commando, who caught it. " Thanks, works like a charm." The Commandos filed out to give them room. She turned back to Cassian. " Ok let's get to work. As Cassian began relieving the officer of his uniform, Jyn knelt beside the ground crew and began to strip her. She first removed her helmet, Jyn was surprised to see a young face stare back at her. She was around Jyn's age. Pretty for an Imperial with turquoise eyes, and a round face, that could be called kind, if she wasn't Empire. With a crown of auburn hair, cut into a military pixie cut. She closed the dead girl's eyes, and unclipped her shoulders and belt removing her breast plate, which still had her control batons stowed in the back. Jyn pulled off the dead girl's boots and was amazed that they were near Jyn's size. She then turned the dead Imperial on her side and unzipped her jumpsuit, peeling it off. Leaving the dead woman in nothing but a small black tank top and matching shorts. Jyn took off her boots, jacket and blaster and dressed in the dead woman's uniform. Finally donning the heavy black helmet. Her disguise finished. Cassian was also dressed in his stolen uniform. Leaving both Imperials dead in their underwear. The rest of the Commando's filed back in. Along with K2. Jyn, threw the hulking droid a sassy look, her hands on her hips." So, you where saying K2? " Cassian burst out with laughter. The droid merely shrugged, implacable as always" You make passable Imperials, at best." As the commando's, stashed the stripped bodies of the Imperials in the engineering section below the cargo deck , they handed their belongings to K2, who stashed them in his secret compartments. Cassian pressed the Cargo release ramp, as the the ramp descended, Jyn said "Let's do this." As she flicked down her visor, and both walked into the warm Scarif sunshine.
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Re: A Star Wars:- Rogue One Deleted Scene( Requested by Darth Chlorophorm) )
Aha, I see some inspiration, but with underwearStormtrooper1990 wrote: Wed Feb 01, 2023 8:34 pm Hi everyone, this one's is a special one. Darth asked me to do a deleted scene for our favourite Star Wars movie; Rogue One. This is the scene when Cassian, Jyn, K2-SO, Bodhi and the Alliance Commando's land on Scarif to steal the plans of the Death Star. Of course for their plan to work, they first need imperial uniforms to walk through an entire legion of stormtroopers. Now in the movie, Jyn steals the uniform of an Imperial ground crew but he just turns to be a very small man. But this is the USB and here anything goes. Now without further ado....
As their stolen Imperial shuttle, broke through the upper atmosphere of Scarif and past the Empire's shield gate , thanks to the quick thinking of Bodhi and the inefficiency of Imperial security, Jyn absent mindedly thumbed her mother's Khyber crystal looped around her neck. She reviewed the plan that she, Cassian and the rebel commandoes came up with. It was bold, daring even, Saw would have been proud of her. The chances where that many of the team would die, but if they contacted the rebel fleet orbiting Yavin, they stood a chance of pulling this off, even surviving. Then her family will be avenged and hope restored in the galaxy to fight. The sight of Cassian and the hulking K2-SO, entering the cargo space brought her back into the present.
" I'am just saying, Cassian, that the odds of both of you successfully impersonating imperial personnel are 5000 to 1, each. I don't suppose you want to hear the odds that one of the imperials, is a female that is the exact body size to Jyn Erso--" Cassian rolled his eyes and turned to his droid friend. " Not now K2, go and help Bodhi bring the shuttle to land once we get clearance to land." He snapped, but with no real malice. K2 looked as if he would retort but simply shrugged and turned away. " Nobody wants to hear what I have to say. Never, all you ever bring me for is to fly the ship. Which where I will be, like a simple pilot droid." Jyn had to smile, hearing the two bicker like a pair of Jawas over scrap was a comfort to her, in the short time she had known them. Cassian knelt in front of her. "You ready Jyn. There is no going back now." Jyn tucked the crystal back under her shirt. " I have been ready, since Jedha. So what can we expect when we touchdown." Cassian nodded, spurred on by her confidence. " Well they will run an inspection, usually two, one officer, one ground crew. Thats our ticket in" Jyn got up and walked towards the Commandos, who where running last minute Comms and equipment checks. Some exchanged smiles with her, buoyed on by her speech no five minutes before. " Hi kid, over here." It was one of the Commando's, a Abedeno, by his huge head. She sat down next to him. " I hear you need to put down an Imp quick." He pulled out a small device like a scanner, and pressed it. It emitted an electric surge. He smiled " Now the trick is to zap 'em in the nape of the neck, just below the helmet. It shorts out their Central Nervous System, they drop like a bad hand at sabacc. They ain't getting back up, ever." She took it and pressed it " I will put this to use. Thanks." The Abedeno grinned again ",Give it back, when you're done kid. I need it to kill some Imps myself." As she got up and walked back to Cassian, she felt the shuttle land. She took a deep breath " This is it."
As the shuttle touched down on Scarif loading dock 2, two figures emerged. One was an Imperial Lieutenant, the other was a member of the ground crew that waved the shuttle in. For Corporal Dax Vasser, this was just like any other of the 50 routine inspections, she performed daily as her duty demanded. It was dull boring work, but she liked to think she was serving the Empire in her small, insignificant way. She wished she was flying TIE fighters and killing rebel scum. but here she was. But as she and the Lieutenant boarded the shuttle ramp, and it ominously closed behind them. Something didn't seem right. Before she could react, a rebel had caught the Lieutenant in a headlock and swiftly broke his neck. The last thing she felt was a hand clamping her shoulders and the sensation of electricity coursing up her body, before she dropped dead. Her imperial career cut prematurely short.
Jyn and Cassian looked at each other, full of adrenaline and nodded. Jyn tossed the shocker back at the Abedeno commando, who caught it. " Thanks, works like a charm." The Commandos filed out to give them room. She turned back to Cassian. " Ok let's get to work. As Cassian began relieving the officer of his uniform, Jyn knelt beside the ground crew and began to strip her. She first removed her helmet, Jyn was surprised to see a young face stare back at her. She was around Jyn's age. Pretty for an Imperial with turquoise eyes, and a round face, that could be called kind, if she wasn't Empire. With a crown of auburn hair, cut into a military pixie cut. She closed the dead girl's eyes, and unclipped her shoulders and belt removing her breast plate, which still had her control batons stowed in the back. Jyn pulled off the dead girl's boots and was amazed that they were near Jyn's size. She then turned the dead Imperial on her side and unzipped her jumpsuit, peeling it off. Leaving the dead woman in nothing but a small black tank top and matching shorts. Jyn took off her boots, jacket and blaster and dressed in the dead woman's uniform. Finally donning the heavy black helmet. Her disguise finished. Cassian was also dressed in his stolen uniform. Leaving both Imperials dead in their underwear. The rest of the Commando's filed back in. Along with K2. Jyn, threw the hulking droid a sassy look, her hands on her hips." So, you where saying K2? " Cassian burst out with laughter. The droid merely shrugged, implacable as always" You make passable Imperials, at best." As the commando's, stashed the stripped bodies of the Imperials in the engineering section below the cargo deck , they handed their belongings to K2, who stashed them in his secret compartments. Cassian pressed the Cargo release ramp, as the the ramp descended, Jyn said "Let's do this." As she flicked down her visor, and both walked into the warm Scarif sunshine.

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I assume this is the scene and the stolen uniform


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It is a great outfit, one of my favourites of the series. Felicity Jones, really rocked that outfit.
When I watched the movie, I was trying to guess whether the imperial she took it off was a man or woman. The films makers where a little ambiguous. For me the shape of the ground crew, looked too small to be a man and there were feminine curves. So I always assumed it was a woman.
I should start post some pics of female imperial officers as they are appear in Andor, Mandalorian and Obi-Wan. There were many beautiful Imperials there just begging to get their uniforms stolen.
When I watched the movie, I was trying to guess whether the imperial she took it off was a man or woman. The films makers where a little ambiguous. For me the shape of the ground crew, looked too small to be a man and there were feminine curves. So I always assumed it was a woman.
I should start post some pics of female imperial officers as they are appear in Andor, Mandalorian and Obi-Wan. There were many beautiful Imperials there just begging to get their uniforms stolen.
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Hi female spy. I suppose I could have gone with the naked underneath option, given my usual MO
I just thought what would a female imperial would wear under her uniform. Since we have no precedence, I went with a bit of fan logic and some artistic licence, and went with no nonsense military underwear. The preferred option for most female soldiers the world over.
I hope I have done it justice

I just thought what would a female imperial would wear under her uniform. Since we have no precedence, I went with a bit of fan logic and some artistic licence, and went with no nonsense military underwear. The preferred option for most female soldiers the world over.
I hope I have done it justice

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Yep, it's okay, I'm read some facts about military woman, so if Scariff so hot - I'm think they really just going comandoStormtrooper1990 wrote: Wed Feb 01, 2023 9:16 pm Hi female spy. I suppose I could have gone with the naked underneath option, given my usual MO![]()
I just thought what would a female imperial would wear under her uniform. Since we have no precedence, I went with a bit of fan logic and some artistic licence, and went with no nonsense military underwear. The preferred option for most female soldiers the world over.
I hope I have done it justice![]()

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Compared to the other places the Empire militarised, Scarif is very beautiful. A tropical paradise. Stormtroopers have climate controlled systems in their armour, so their covered. The rest of the imperials, probably went light under their uniforms. So tank tops and shorts probably fit the bill
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I'm honored you took the time to write this tale.
Rogue One is by far the best Star Wars movie to be produced by Disney.
I'm actually going to listen to this story by using "Immersive Reader" with a female voice. It's for the full effect.
Rogue One is by far the best Star Wars movie to be produced by Disney.
I'm actually going to listen to this story by using "Immersive Reader" with a female voice. It's for the full effect.
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That's sounds really cool I hope you enjoy it.
You are very welcome, I hope that I have done this scene and rogue one itself, justice.
You are very welcome, I hope that I have done this scene and rogue one itself, justice.
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great story to add to a great movie,evil stormtrooper killed that i can get behind .....kudos