Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

[rufusluciusivan]

Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!

You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.

The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.

And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.

Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.

Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.

The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.

Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.

The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."

Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."

Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."

I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."

Then a great bit of dialogue:

“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”

And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:

"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."

I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?

I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

I'm glad you liked it. Looks like we have the same highlights this time. The scenes of Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, and with the maid, were the ones on which we spent the most time, so I'm quite happy they left an impact!

As I said, if you liked Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, then you're in for a treat. Expect more of them!

I completely agree with you Rufus, between the three stoogettes, the ponchos' and the maid takeout, I couldn't really pick a clear favourite scene of mine so let's just say all of them I remember coming up with the three stoogettes takedown as a clear reference to Desperados III gameplay; complete with sight lines and the careful timing. Which is further reflected in the poncho takeout scene.

Let's all share one minute of silence for that poor overseer left trussed up in a haystack, who didn't get any respect in the story, and is still not getting any respect outside of it.

[Stormtrooper1990]

I have to say, that I agree completely that Rufus did an absolutely incredible job with the maid's takeout in the garden. It was a standout scene, much like Lottie's in Chapter 3, and also happens to be my favourite scene in this Chapter as well. The whole set up, take out of the maid, the stripping, dialogue and the two lovebirds making out was done to perfection.

Yea, what for me makes the scene so perfect is the idea of the pretty young maid just dozing off having no idea she is being watched.

Then the light hearted dialogue while they are stripping a woman they have just rendered unconscious.

I agree, the mental image of the maid picking the wrong place to have an afternoon's nap was just the most perfect set-up. The poor dear had no idea that she was being watched or was about to get pulled into the bushes and punched out, before getting stripped. And to make matters worse for her, she would be missing her date with a certain Mexican poncho girl...


Indeed, such a favourite trope of mine which I always think spices up a USB scene. Just like Satine and Cora do.

[Stormtrooper1990]

Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!

You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.

The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.

And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.

Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.

Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.

The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.

Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.

The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."

Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."

Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."

I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."

Then a great bit of dialogue:

“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”

And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:

"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."

I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?

I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

I'm glad you liked it. Looks like we have the same highlights this time. The scenes of Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, and with the maid, were the ones on which we spent the most time, so I'm quite happy they left an impact!

As I said, if you liked Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, then you're in for a treat. Expect more of them!

I completely agree with you Rufus, between the three stoogettes, the ponchos' and the maid takeout, I couldn't really pick a clear favourite scene of mine so let's just say all of them I remember coming up with the three stoogettes takedown as a clear reference to Desperados III gameplay; complete with sight lines and the careful timing. Which is further reflected in the poncho takeout scene.

Let's all share one minute of silence for that poor overseer left trussed up in a haystack, who didn't get any respect in the story, and is still not getting any respect outside of it.

( Takes off stetson and puts it to my chest, then puts it back on after a minute.) Of course, that poor unnamed overseer who was a cute thirty something brunette who somehow got overlooked, the poor dear.

I wonder is she still in that haystack, with hay stuck in her nethers?

[rufusluciusivan]

Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!

You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.

The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.

And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.

Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.

Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.

The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.

Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.

The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."

Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."

Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."

I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."

Then a great bit of dialogue:

“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”

And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:

"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."

I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?

I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

I'm glad you liked it. Looks like we have the same highlights this time. The scenes of Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, and with the maid, were the ones on which we spent the most time, so I'm quite happy they left an impact!

As I said, if you liked Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, then you're in for a treat. Expect more of them!

I completely agree with you Rufus, between the three stoogettes, the ponchos' and the maid takeout, I couldn't really pick a clear favourite scene of mine so let's just say all of them I remember coming up with the three stoogettes takedown as a clear reference to Desperados III gameplay; complete with sight lines and the careful timing. Which is further reflected in the poncho takeout scene.

Let's all share one minute of silence for that poor overseer left trussed up in a haystack, who didn't get any respect in the story, and is still not getting any respect outside of it.

( Takes off stetson and puts it to my chest, then puts it back on after a minute.) Of course, that poor unnamed overseer who was a cute thirty something brunette who somehow got overlooked, the poor dear.

I wonder is she still in that haystack, with hay stuck in her nethers?

Oh, I'm quite sure she was found out. Eventually. A couple of hours after all the others.

[Stormtrooper1990]

I'm glad you liked it. Looks like we have the same highlights this time. The scenes of Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, and with the maid, were the ones on which we spent the most time, so I'm quite happy they left an impact!

As I said, if you liked Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, then you're in for a treat. Expect more of them!



Let's all share one minute of silence for that poor overseer left trussed up in a haystack, who didn't get any respect in the story, and is still not getting any respect outside of it.

( Takes off stetson and puts it to my chest, then puts it back on after a minute.) Of course, that poor unnamed overseer who was a cute thirty something brunette who somehow got overlooked, the poor dear.

I wonder is she still in that haystack, with hay stuck in her nethers?

Oh, I'm quite sure she was found out. Eventually. A couple of hours after all the others.

Ouch, the poor woman! She's going to be itching for days if not a week after the fact. And finding hay in...all the wrong places.

We can picture the scene though; a young 18 year old stable girl working the stables then she hears a muffled "mmmph!" from the haystack. The girl screams and runs out terrified. "Oh my dear Lord?! Someone help me, I found another one those outlaws left behind!"

[rufusluciusivan]

( Takes off stetson and puts it to my chest, then puts it back on after a minute.) Of course, that poor unnamed overseer who was a cute thirty something brunette who somehow got overlooked, the poor dear.

I wonder is she still in that haystack, with hay stuck in her nethers?

Oh, I'm quite sure she was found out. Eventually. A couple of hours after all the others.

Ouch, the poor woman! She's going to be itching for days if not a week after the fact. And finding hay in...all the wrong places.

We can picture the scene though; a young 18 year old stable girl working the stables then she hears a muffled "mmmph!" from the haystack. The girl screams and runs out terrified. "Oh my dear Lord?! Someone help me, I found another one those outlaws left behind!"

A blessing in disguise for sure. Being found after Victoria left the estate to chase after Nancy, the overseer dodged the scolding of her life.

[Stormtrooper1990]

Oh, I'm quite sure she was found out. Eventually. A couple of hours after all the others.

Ouch, the poor woman! She's going to be itching for days if not a week after the fact. And finding hay in...all the wrong places.

We can picture the scene though; a young 18 year old stable girl working the stables then she hears a muffled "mmmph!" from the haystack. The girl screams and runs out terrified. "Oh my dear Lord?! Someone help me, I found another one those outlaws left behind!"

A blessing in disguise for sure. Being found after Victoria left the estate to chase after Nancy, the overseer dodged the scolding of her life.

Indeed, Elizabeth is definitely a lot more forgiving than her elder sister. She might even give that poor unloved Overseer a few days off to recover from her ordeal and to wash herself thoroughly.

[meditions142]

I agree, the mental image of the maid picking the wrong place to have an afternoon's nap was just the most perfect set-up. The poor dear had no idea that she was being watched or was about to get pulled into the bushes and punched out, before getting stripped. And to make matters worse for her, she would be missing her date with a certain Mexican poncho girl...

And what makes the scene so amazing is the idea of just how turned on it gets Sylvié. The idea of Sylvié kissing Sand's neck because she is so turned on by what she just saw while the woman Sand just rendered unconscious laws at her feet is so sexy. Also love the idea of Sylvié watching and getting aroused while watching the maid put to sleep by Sand's sleeperhold. Just such a great scene.

[Stormtrooper1990]

I agree, the mental image of the maid picking the wrong place to have an afternoon's nap was just the most perfect set-up. The poor dear had no idea that she was being watched or was about to get pulled into the bushes and punched out, before getting stripped. And to make matters worse for her, she would be missing her date with a certain Mexican poncho girl...

And what makes the scene so amazing is the idea of just how turned on it gets Sylvié. The idea of Sylvié kissing Sand's neck because she is so turned on by what she just saw while the woman Sand just rendered unconscious laws at her feet is so sexy. Also love the idea of Sylvié watching and getting aroused while watching the maid put to sleep by Sand's sleeperhold. Just such a great scene.

Indeed, has Rufus hinted this is only the beginning of Sylvié’s USB journey and there will be more instances where the lovebirds will express their love for each other, and be turned on by the sight of knocking out other women. No spoilers I'm afraid. But Sylvié is enjoying these new sensations and experiences she never had the opportunity to do while being shackled to Eleanor.


That being said it was definitely a very sexy scene, with Sand and Sylvié making a cute couple.