Vengeance at Red Rock Pt 5:- Justice is Served

[Stormtrooper1990]

And at least Abigail was feisty enough to try and fight back but in the end, a combination of Nancy's strength and the Laudanum itself it was to no avail. And in a strange sense of irony, like you said the drug did indeed work as advertised.

Indeed. that is what makes the scene so sexy. The way you describe it: "Abigail bucked for a moment then let out a low sigh eyes rolling back into her head as she slumped unconscious naked into the chair." Love to picture Nancy sitting on Abigail's lap keeping her hand over her mouth to both keep her quiet and keep her in place. Nancy gets to watch Abigail succumb to the drug and ultimately see her pretty pale green eyes roll back as slumps back into the chair.

Very sexy scene!

Thanks, looking back I think a part of Nancy did enjoy watching Abigail succumb slowly to the drug and admire her naked body. While not into girl's herself, Nancy probably appreciated Abigail from an artistic point of view. While Abigail gets the confused experience of seeing a woman put her asleep, wearing her dress that she herself had been wearing only a few minutes ago. I mean I got such a buzz myself picturing the whole scene as I wrote it.


Again, it was such a pleasure writing that scene and I'am glad you liked it!

[meditions142]

While Abigail gets the confused experience of seeing a woman put her asleep, wearing her dress that she herself had been wearing only a few minutes ago. I mean I got such a buzz myself picturing the whole scene as I wrote it.

Indeed, it must have been a really confusing situation for Abigail. As she starts to regain consciousness she makes the "W-what happened...?" comment showing she is only slowly getting her consciousness back. Then she realizes that the person she thinks is the guest signer is sitting on her lap and wearing her dress. Then poor little Abigail receives an injection. She starts to panic but soon enough I am sure the drug started to do its work on her. Abigail probably fell back into a state of complete confusion. Although I am sure the drug made her begin to relax.

Oh and by the way, I agree with you that "While not into girl's herself, Nancy probably appreciated Abigail from an artistic point of view." I have to say while she is straight i think it is certainly possible Nancy might a bit turned on by looking at the very pretty naked brunette and feeling squirming around under her own crotch.

Sorry to hijack your new story with references back to the previous chapter but, as you know, I really liked that scene!

[Stormtrooper1990]

While Abigail gets the confused experience of seeing a woman put her asleep, wearing her dress that she herself had been wearing only a few minutes ago. I mean I got such a buzz myself picturing the whole scene as I wrote it.

Indeed, it must have been a really confusing situation for Abigail. As she starts to regain consciousness she makes the "W-what happened...?" comment showing she is only slowly getting her consciousness back. Then she realizes that the person she thinks is the guest signer is sitting on her lap and wearing her dress. Then poor little Abigail receives an injection. She starts to panic but soon enough I am sure the drug started to do its work on her. Abigail probably fell back into a state of complete confusion. Although I am sure the drug made her begin to relax.

Oh and by the way, I agree with you that "While not into girl's herself, Nancy probably appreciated Abigail from an artistic point of view." I have to say while she is straight i think it is certainly possible Nancy might a bit turned on by looking at the very pretty naked brunette and feeling squirming around under her own crotch.

Sorry to hijack your new story with references back to the previous chapter but, as you know, I really liked that scene!

Exactly! Abigail probably barely had enough time to comprehend that she was first knocked out by "Miss Cavill" then stripped of dress and everything else, then she sees the "singer" perched on her lap wearing her clothes. Before she can even consider screaming, poor little Abigail is injected and experiences the brief panic before the confusion and finally relaxation and sleep. It must have been quite the ordeal and experience, feeling all those emotions one after the other.


I'am glad you agree. A friend of mine once told me that statistically most women do have bisexual feelings or at least on some level bicurious, even straight girls. So I wouldn't be at all surprised, like you say for Nancy to get a little aroused from seeing the pretty naked Abigail rubbing against her crotch. Sand was probably looking over and thinking 'Lucky cow, I wouldn't have minded if Constance was to wake up right now.' And poor Clinton he missed all this by being a perfect gentleman.


No worries my friend, you don't need to apologise. It means a lot to me that you really loved this scene and I'am always happy to discuss it. I really appreciate it the support.

[meditions142]

No worries my friend, you don't need to apologise.

Well, let me get back to the story at hand. As we saw throughout the story, Nancy and Sand obviously were willing to kill McClaine's evil henchwomen.

However, while they were not always gentle (like in the case of Eleanor and Sylvie) for the most part they didn't hurt the women too badly like using sleeperholds on Abigail and Constance and Grace and Emma.

However, with Wendy they definitely got rough. First off, she gets punched. Then not only does she get knocked out a second time but tied up. And then Sand has not problem shoving in a barrel. Wonder if it was just the stress of Clinton being in danger or maybe looking down on her as being a prostitute.


And now that the story has come to an end you have to sit back and think that while Nancy, Sand and Clinton will be considered heroes, there will be a few young women who hold a bit of a grudge for being knocked out.

[Stormtrooper1990]

No worries my friend, you don't need to apologise.

Well, let me get back to the story at hand. As we saw throughout the story, Nancy and Sand obviously were willing to kill McClaine's evil henchwomen.

However, while they were not always gentle (like in the case of Eleanor and Sylvie) for the most part they didn't hurt the women too badly like using sleeperholds on Abigail and Constance and Grace and Emma.

However, with Wendy they definitely got rough. First off, she gets punched. Then not only does she get knocked out a second time but tied up. And then Sand has not problem shoving in a barrel. Wonder if it was just the stress of Clinton being in danger or maybe looking down on her as being a prostitute.


And now that the story has come to an end you have to sit back and think that while Nancy, Sand and Clinton will be considered heroes, there will be a few young women who hold a bit of a grudge for being knocked out.

Indeed, our heroes were willing to kill McClaine's henchwomen because of their cruel treatment and willingness to follow a morally bankrupt individual like McClaine, but they tried when possible to be gentler to the innocent women they had to rob during the course.

Of course it's a matter of perspective just how gentle they were, but at least with chokehold the damage inside invasive and longer time.

The scene with Wendy was a nod on how rough Catherine O'Hara got with the women she would knock out and strip, in Desperados 3 , there she knees them in the crotch before finishing them off with a swift right hook. I think a case can be made for both. With Sand she certainly looked down upon Wendy for being a prostitute, largely because as a proud Navajo, the idea of a woman selling her body for money was contradicting to her pride, whereas Nancy was more forgiving. Now Nancy certainly was stressed with Clinton in danger and didn't want him in the brothels basement a moment longer, so she was willing to forgo being civil if it meant she could save time to rescue her lover. So Sand knocking Wendy out again and shoving her in a barrel was her form of punishment.


Indeed, I don't doubt there will be quite a few women would hold grudges against our heroes. Abigail and Constance for one, Grace and Emma for another. Then there's Wendy and Mary. Although with Mclaine gone you can bet that some of these women would have left town, to escape the trauma.

And you're right, Nancy, Sand and Clinton will be hailed as heroes. The people they saved will always be grateful and if they were asked, they would say that the discomfort of a few innocent women is a small price to pay for seeing an evil man like McClaine being brought to justice and the law returning to the town.

[meditions142]

Indeed, I don't doubt there will be quite a few women would hold grudges against our heroes. Abigail and Constance for one, Grace and Emma for another. Then there's Wendy and Mary. Although with Mclaine gone you can bet that some of these women would have left town, to escape the trauma.

And you're right, Nancy, Sand and Clinton will be hailed as heroes. The people they saved will always be grateful and if they were asked, they would say that the discomfort of a few innocent women is a small price to pay for seeing an evil man like McClaine being brought to justice and the law returning to the town.

You could imagine a fun scene. We see a staff at the Silver Streak Casino chatting. Abigail is there dressed in her waitress uniform. We also see Wendy who has given up prostitution and is working as a barkeep.

One of the staff is talking about what a hero the Sheriff is and what a wonderful thing the Mayor, Sheriff and their friend did for the town.

Abigail chimes in and says "That's easy for you to say. The Sheriff tricked me and knocked me out. She stole my clothes and then she drugged me. Then she left me naked in a closet with Constance."

Wendy then says "And she punched me out. I have a bruise on my face for a week. And her friend stuffed me a barrel. I was stiff for days".

And to you point, "Indeed, our heroes were willing to kill McClaine's henchwomen because of their cruel treatment and willingness to follow a morally bankrupt individual like McClaine, but they tried when possible to be gentler to the innocent women they had to rob during the course." I guess they assumed the guards at the vault were just lackeys and not really bad guys. After all they could have put enough Laudanum to kill them if they wanted to. So they made the choice to just put the guards to sleep.

[Stormtrooper1990]

Indeed, I don't doubt there will be quite a few women would hold grudges against our heroes. Abigail and Constance for one, Grace and Emma for another. Then there's Wendy and Mary. Although with Mclaine gone you can bet that some of these women would have left town, to escape the trauma.

And you're right, Nancy, Sand and Clinton will be hailed as heroes. The people they saved will always be grateful and if they were asked, they would say that the discomfort of a few innocent women is a small price to pay for seeing an evil man like McClaine being brought to justice and the law returning to the town.

You could imagine a fun scene. We see a staff at the Silver Streak Casino chatting. Abigail is there dressed in her waitress uniform. We also see Wendy who has given up prostitution and is working as a barkeep.

One of the staff is talking about what a hero the Sheriff is and what a wonderful thing the Mayor, Sheriff and their friend did for the town.

Abigail chimes in and says "That's easy for you to say. The Sheriff tricked me and knocked me out. She stole my clothes and then she drugged me. Then she left me naked in a closet with Constance."

Wendy then says "And she punched me out. I have a bruise on my face for a week. And her friend stuffed me a barrel. I was stiff for days".

And to you point, "Indeed, our heroes were willing to kill McClaine's henchwomen because of their cruel treatment and willingness to follow a morally bankrupt individual like McClaine, but they tried when possible to be gentler to the innocent women they had to rob during the course." I guess they assumed the guards at the vault were just lackeys and not really bad guys. After all they could have put enough Laudanum to kill them if they wanted to. So they made the choice to just put the guards to sleep.

I like that exchange it's so fun and it's good to see Wendy has given up the prostitutes life, after the brothel closed down and all. Then one of the men from the mine chips, in the blacksmith. "Well at least you aren't dead, ladies. Take what you can get. Besides, would you be happier if McClaine were still in charge?" The women look at each and shrug. "I suppose you have a point." Abigail says. "At least they spared us and the guards from the vault, I wouldn't want to be any of the girls in McClaine's gang. "


Yeah the guards at the vault were really just lackeys and worked exclusively in the casino, they weren't raiders like the other women. So they used just enough of the Laudanum to put them to sleep only. And also because Clinton's plan was to make the robbery look like an inside job, that Brannigan was stealing from McClaine. That required the guards to be left alive as well or it would have looked suspicious if they were killed. It would have suggested outside interference.

[meditions142]

I like that exchange it's so fun and it's good to see Wendy has given up the prostitutes life, after the brothel closed down and all. Then one of the men from the mine chips, in the blacksmith. "Well at least you aren't dead, ladies. Take what you can get. Besides, would you be happier if McClaine were still in charge?" The women look at each and shrug. "I suppose you have a point." Abigail says. "At least they spared us and the guards from the vault, I wouldn't want to be any of the girls in McClaine's gang. "


Yeah the guards at the vault were really just lackeys and worked exclusively in the casino, they weren't raiders like the other women. So they used just enough of the Laudanum to put them to sleep only. And also because Clinton's plan was to make the robbery look like an inside job, that Brannigan was stealing from McClaine. That required the guards to be left alive as well or it would have looked suspicious if they were killed. It would have suggested outside interference.

And after this comment it would be fun for her to say: "I suppose you have a point." Abigail says. "At least they spared us and the guards from the vault, I wouldn't want to be any of the girls in McClaine's gang. "

"I just wish she told me what her plan was an ask me for my clothes. I probably would have given them to her to help take down McClaine. Then she wouldn't have had to put me to sleep."

Then the man responds, "But then McClaine would have figured out you helped them and he surely would have killed you for it. Knocking you out was necessary. At a minimum if you had cooperated the Sheriff would still have had to drug you for your own good."

[Stormtrooper1990]

I like that exchange it's so fun and it's good to see Wendy has given up the prostitutes life, after the brothel closed down and all. Then one of the men from the mine chips, in the blacksmith. "Well at least you aren't dead, ladies. Take what you can get. Besides, would you be happier if McClaine were still in charge?" The women look at each and shrug. "I suppose you have a point." Abigail says. "At least they spared us and the guards from the vault, I wouldn't want to be any of the girls in McClaine's gang. "


Yeah the guards at the vault were really just lackeys and worked exclusively in the casino, they weren't raiders like the other women. So they used just enough of the Laudanum to put them to sleep only. And also because Clinton's plan was to make the robbery look like an inside job, that Brannigan was stealing from McClaine. That required the guards to be left alive as well or it would have looked suspicious if they were killed. It would have suggested outside interference.

And after this comment it would be fun for her to say: "I suppose you have a point." Abigail says. "At least they spared us and the guards from the vault, I wouldn't want to be any of the girls in McClaine's gang. "

"I just wish she told me what her plan was an ask me for my clothes. I probably would have given them to her to help take down McClaine. Then she wouldn't have had to put me to sleep."

Then the man responds, "But then McClaine would have figured out you helped them and he surely would have killed you for it. Knocking you out was necessary. At a minimum if you had cooperated the Sheriff would still have had to drug you for your own good."

That's an excellent exchange, thank you! I think Abigail would have to concede that point, after all McClaine may have been evil bandit king but he was no fool and would have punished both girls had they willingly cooperated. So Nancy would have had to drug them to make it convincing.


Then Wendy chimes in. "But what about me? I thought that the Sheriff and Deputy Sand were just another pair of Jane's. They didn't have to punch me, strip me naked and stuff me in a barrel."

The blacksmith says. "Come on Wendy. We all know how friendly you were to McClaine. You would have tattletaled off to him at the first opportunity. They were well within their rights to knock you out and tie you up. At least you've got a respectable job now, so why are you complaining?"

[rufusluciusivan]

There's always this feeling a satisfaction when a saga reaches its conclusion. Revenge stories are a staple of the Far West genre, and McClaine and his gang finally get their just desserts.

The epilogue was a fine addition, though maybe a little too short. I particularly appreciated Sylvié's return - I always like when minor characters make a surprising return. Looks like Sand taking a fancy to the maid in the previous part was actually foreshadowing...

Nancy, Sand, and Clinton were solid protagonists - not the most memorable characters I've ever seen, but they carried their story well, and it feels satisfying to see them get their "happily ever after". - I'm a sucker for epilogues that show the main characters have had kid(s). - What I appreciated in them the most is how coherent they were. One example: they were careful to always make a distinction between the civilians and the non-criminal employee's of McClaine (including the "guards" like Carmen and Bertha) and the raiders, and Clinton has always showed concern for the bystanders caught in the crossfire.

Then Wendy chimes in. "But what about me? I thought that the Sheriff and Deputy Sand were just another pair of Jane's. They didn't have to punch me, strip me naked and stuff me in a barrel."

The blacksmith says. "Come on Wendy. We all know how friendly you were to McClaine. You would have tattletaled off to him at the first opportunity. They were well within their rights to knock you out and tie you up. At least you've got a respectable job now, so why are you complaining?"

Reading your and meditions' comments in this part (or especially in the previous part) almost make me feel like I'm reading stories being written live in front of my eyes.

"Here kitty, kitty, kitty"... the Red Lantern... Wild Marge... "Fifteen paces"... References to Desperados III everywhere! My favorite was the fact that O'Hara was interrogated by a woman named Kate.

Wendy not being a redhead, it almost feels there's a missed opportunity for a joke...