Vengeance at Red Rock Pt 4:- The House Goes Bust

[Stormtrooper1990]

I like to picture Clinton off screen seeking out Abigail, because he knew her and knew from his intimacy with Nancy that she's the perfect match for his belle. Possibly she and Constance where just doing their rounds when Clinton sized them up and tricked them into going to the dressing room. And knowing what he knew about how Nancy and Sand operate, Clinton placed a lot of trust in the girls to be as gentle as can be allowed when neutralising them. Did he regret using them like this? He probably did but his love for Nancy and his desire for Red Rock to be free of McClaine lessened the guilt he felt.

It makes for a great, great scene. Clinton goes up to Abigail and tells he Ms. Cavill and her maid need some water. We are shown Nancy noticing this when as you say: "In the crowd she nodded to Clinton who pulled over two young waitresses, one the girl who had shown to her room, the other an attractive auburn haired girl." Love the idea of the nod that no one else would notice but Clinton could see as "those two will do fine". Then Abigail and Constance obediently follow his instructs and are off. Perhaps under his breath Clinton says "sorry girls" as he eyes up their cute asses as they walk off.

Definitely, it's a great scene to picture and one that's reminiscent of shows like Mission Impossible where we see an entire team of infiltrators working together. Like you envisioned, Nancy herself as already sized them up herself and signals Clinton with the coded nod. He then gives them their orders, which they have no reason to disobey, they trust him after all and they are off. Then that sexy image of him eyeing up their cute asses and that single quip. An absolutely perfect scene! Thank you my friend.

[meditions142]

Definitely, it's a great scene to picture and one that's reminiscent of shows like Mission Impossible where we see an entire team of infiltrators working together. Like you envisioned, Nancy herself as already sized them up herself and signals Clinton with the coded nod. He then gives them their orders, which they have no reason to disobey, they trust him after all and they are off. Then that sexy image of him eyeing up their cute asses and that single quip. An absolutely perfect scene! Thank you my friend.

Definitely see the similarity to Mission Impossible with a group of infiltrators working as a team. Fun to picture the team sizing up the poor women that will be their victims.

And we can also imagine a follow up scene. We would see Abigail and Constance sitting in McClaine's office wrapped in blankets with a couple of McClaine's guards standing behind them.

McClaine comes in, sits down and says: "Wound one of you two women like to explain how two of my waitresses ended up getting found by my guards naked and unconscious in a closet?"

Abigail responds "I sorry Mr. McClaine but we don't really know what happened. Mr. O'Hara told us to deliver Ms. Cavill and her maid some water. We delivered the water when Ms. Cavill grabbed me from behind and squeezed my neck hard. She said something about my dress and then I passed out. Then, as I start to wake up, Ms. Cavill comes over, sits on my lap and stuck some kind of needle in my neck. Next thing I know I woke up here."

McClaine then takes a long look at them and looks at Constance and says: "Is this true?"

Constance responds "Yes sir. However, I don't remember being injected with anything."

McClaine then says "I have half a mind to have my guards take you both out and string you up. You realize thanks you both losing your dresses those two woman managed to knock out two of my guards and steal from me? Well, I guess you were fooled by O'Hara too. He'll be the one strung up. But you two are fired. Get out of my sight!"

[Stormtrooper1990]

Definitely, it's a great scene to picture and one that's reminiscent of shows like Mission Impossible where we see an entire team of infiltrators working together. Like you envisioned, Nancy herself as already sized them up herself and signals Clinton with the coded nod. He then gives them their orders, which they have no reason to disobey, they trust him after all and they are off. Then that sexy image of him eyeing up their cute asses and that single quip. An absolutely perfect scene! Thank you my friend.

Definitely see the similarity to Mission Impossible with a group of infiltrators working as a team. Fun to picture the team sizing up the poor women that will be their victims.

And we can also imagine a follow up scene. We would see Abigail and Constance sitting in McClaine's office wrapped in blankets with a couple of McClaine's guards standing behind them.

McClaine comes in, sits down and says: "Wound one of you two women like to explain how two of my waitresses ended up getting found by my guards naked and unconscious in a closet?"

Abigail responds "I sorry Mr. McClaine but we don't really know what happened. Mr. O'Hara told us to deliver Ms. Cavill and her maid some water. We delivered the water when Ms. Cavill grabbed me from behind and squeezed my neck hard. She said something about my dress and then I passed out. Then, as I start to wake up, Ms. Cavill comes over, sits on my lap and stuck some kind of needle in my neck. Next thing I know I woke up here."

McClaine then takes a long look at them and looks at Constance and says: "Is this true?"

Constance responds "Yes sir. However, I don't remember being injected with anything."

McClaine then says "I have half a mind to have my guards take you both out and string you up. You realize thanks you both losing your dresses those two woman managed to knock out two of my guards and steal from me? Well, I guess you were fooled by O'Hara too. He'll be the one strung up. But you two are fired. Get out of my sight!"

Wow! That's a wonderful perfect follow up! And it leads quite nicely to the present where Clinton as been caught by McClaine and taken to the Brothel for questioning, trying to find out just who 'Miss Cavill' and her 'maid' are. Nancy is currently trying to bust him out, which will lead to the inevitable final confrontation.

As little addition once they leave, McClaine turns to his lieutenant Wild Marge. "Round up those two and send them to the Brothel, they are far too pretty a resource to throw away. But they won't get a single dime for their work." Marge smiles. "With pleasure, sir. I've had my eye on that brunette for a good long while."

[meditions142]

As little addition once they leave, McClaine turns to his lieutenant Wild Marge. "Round up those two and send them to the Brothel, they are far too pretty a resource to throw away. But they won't get a single dime for their work." Marge smiles. "With pleasure, sir. I've had my eye on that brunette for a good long while."

But of course we can hope that Abigail and Constance will be saved when Nancy and Sand rescue Clinton and bring an end to McClaine's control of the town!

[Stormtrooper1990]

As little addition once they leave, McClaine turns to his lieutenant Wild Marge. "Round up those two and send them to the Brothel, they are far too pretty a resource to throw away. But they won't get a single dime for their work." Marge smiles. "With pleasure, sir. I've had my eye on that brunette for a good long while."

But of course we can hope that Abigail and Constance will be saved when Nancy and Sand rescue Clinton and bring an end to McClaine's control of the town!

Exactly! McClaine's control of the town is slipping and it won't be long until Four Fingers has his well deserved comeuppance and Abigail and Constance along with the rest the townsfolk will finally be free!

[meditions142]

You know, I was so busy commenting on the wonderful scene with the waitresses I forgot to comment on something else I really enjoyed. That is the two guards simultaneously sliding down the wall as the drug puts them to sleep. There is something sexy about that to me. I always like the image woman sliding down the wall as she goes unconscious. I always really enjoyed the scene Holly sliding down the wall in "To Free a Nightingale" after Vesper knocked her out with a nerve pinch. And of course there is the great scene in the episode of Chuck where the two female guards both simultaneously slide down the wall after being hit with the tranq darts.

[Stormtrooper1990]

You know, I was so busy commenting on the wonderful scene with the waitresses I forgot to comment on something else I really enjoyed. That is the two guards simultaneously sliding down the wall as the drug puts them to sleep. There is something sexy about that to me. I always like the image woman sliding down the wall as she goes unconscious. I always really enjoyed the scene Holly sliding down the wall in "To Free a Nightingale" after Vesper knocked her out with a nerve pinch. And of course there is the great scene in the episode of Chuck where the two female guards both simultaneously slide down the wall after being hit with the tranq darts.

Yeah I know what you mean. I have fond memories of Holly sliding that wall in 'To Free a Nightingale' after Vesper pulls her in, pins her to the wall and gives her a pinch. Another one of my all time favourite scenes I have written, with a brilliant set-up. Actually it was that scene in Chuck that inspired this particular scene with Brenda and Carmen, only I swapped the dart gun with the drugged drinks and kept the set-up. When you showed it me, it left an impression do I thought it high time to emulate the scene.

What was my favourite part of writing this was how our dumb clueless guards took for granted they were being served by two pretty waitresses with a 'surprise' from the boss. They had no idea that they were going to spend the night naked in the vault, and probably get fired by McClaine in the morning.

[meditions142]

What was my favourite part of writing this was how our dumb clueless guards took for granted they were being served by two pretty waitresses with a 'surprise' from the boss.

Definitely a good take on the "dumb guard" trope. Although, in fairness to the women, Nancy and Sand looked the part of waitresses. Still they should have known better.

It actually also adds a fun touch that Abigail and Constance had been neutralized for just one reason. To allow Nancy and Sand to trick the guards. Then the waitress outfits were quickly discarded.

However, even thought they only need the uniforms for a short period of time they still needed to be put to sleep and kept out of sight. This resulted in two great comments from Clinton. First we get "It's laudanum. We need it to keep them quiet for the next three hours." and then "Right let's get them stashed away, so we can discuss the next stage of the plan."

[Stormtrooper1990]

What was my favourite part of writing this was how our dumb clueless guards took for granted they were being served by two pretty waitresses with a 'surprise' from the boss.

Definitely a good take on the "dumb guard" trope. Although, in fairness to the women, Nancy and Sand looked the part of waitresses. Still they should have known better.

It actually also adds a fun touch that Abigail and Constance had been neutralized for just one reason. To allow Nancy and Sand to trick the guards. Then the waitress outfits were quickly discarded.

However, even thought they only need the uniforms for a short period of time they still needed to be put to sleep and kept out of sight. This resulted in two great comments from Clinton. First we get "It's laudanum. We need it to keep them quiet for the next three hours." and then "Right let's get them stashed away, so we can discuss the next stage of the plan."

Thanks, and they most certainly did even Clinton himself said as much. With Sand easily being mistaken for a Hispanic girl. Still like you said, the guards definitely were not being vigilant and were most likely fed up because of being unable to partake of the pleasures in the Casino.


Indeed, like we discussed previously it's one of my favourite tropes in USB that the disguises our heroines took from Abigail and Constance had one purpose; to acquire the clothes from the vault guards Brenda and Carmen via trickery.


Yep, it was all part of Clinton's well worked meticulous plan that could only be achieved by the skills of Nancy and Sand and all three plsying their parts to perfection. Even though they only needed the waitresses clothes for about 10-15 minutes, they still needed to be professional and keep Abigail and Constance out of sight and mind so the plan wouldn't be rumbled.

It's why I'am so very fond of disguises like waitresses and maids; after all nobody suspects the staff or help. The outfits from Abigail and Constance allowed our heroines to blend into the casino, with nobody paying them any mind then get to the vault to trick the clueless guards.

[meditions142]

Yep, it was all part of Clinton's well worked meticulous plan that could only be achieved by the skills of Nancy and Sand and all three plsying their parts to perfection. Even though they only needed the waitresses clothes for about 10-15 minutes, they still needed to be professional and keep Abigail and Constance out of sight and mind so the plan wouldn't be rumbled.

I really think that is what I like so very much about the scene. The plan is so meticulous and well organized and it is fun to watch Abigail and Constance fall into it and have no clue. There are such fun touches like Clinton calling the two women over and telling them to provide water to Nancy and Sand while Nancy gives him an approving nod.

Then we get the scene when the women come into the dressing room. "She looked the girls up and down. Clinton has sized them up, they are both perfect fits. This girl is exactly my size..." Love the idea of Nancy sizing Abigail up while the pretty brunette doesn't have a clue. Then the great imagery of Nancy gesturing to Sand to get behind Constance while Nancy herself maneuvers behind unsuspecting Abigail. I always like a scene where the attacker is right behind the woman ready to strike but she has no clue. Kind of like the scene in Star Trek when Spock comes up behind the radio engineer and pausing for a moment before nerve pinches her while she remains unaware.

The best part is Abigail seemingly doesn't comprehend what is happening. He comment "S-stop it! Your hurting meee..." seems to show she doesn't understand what is happening. Then we get the "W-what happened...?" as she starts to wake up.