Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity Chapter 20:- On Human Boat Vacations Pt2 Santorini

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meditions142 wrote: Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:19 pm Another fabulous chapter. I don't know how you do it but you always find ways to add new little touches that make the stories so fun.

The scene with Bryony is really fun. Even though a uniformed woman basically made herself a target delivering the food Ellana would not have taken her out if she hadn't gone to investigate the noise Mimi was making. If only Bryony had not decided to investigate she would have gone about her day and not gotten a neck chop and lost her uniform.

And of course a sexy touch of Ellana leaving Mini and Bryony tied up together.

We also get the great scene with Achara including another great Ellana comment: "Shh! Don't fret pretty thing. You look like you use a break."

Also liked the take out of Georgia. Not only was it a smoke break takeout but we also get another scene where the victim should have just ignored the noise she heard. However, here she walked right into the trap. And great description of Georgia's point of view "A sharp pinch to the sides of her neck turned her whimper into a pained muffled squeak as she felt her eyes roll into the back of her head, slumping unconscious in her attackers arms. The final sensation Georgia was her dress being slipped from her shoulders."

Also really liked the neck pinch of Sofia. Very sexy. And we also get the Helga take down where it is back to the good only kiss knockout. As much as I love the pinch, fun to see that one still used.

The MiB report for the epilogue was also a really nice touch.

Great story as always.
Thanks my friend, I'am glad you enjoyed it. I can honestly say that I have these fun little flashes of inspiration that just come to me. I have to thank Arc for coming up with the cruise ship trilogy. It is a pleasure working with him to bring Ellana's story to life.


Indeed, Ellana had awoken a little bit grumpy and starving to boot but she wasn't even thinking about acquiring a new face...yet. Then walks in Bryony who's only doing her job, delivering food, but becomes a prime example of that old phrase; Curiousity kills the cat. Instead, Ellana decided to make lemons into lemonade and salvage the situation. Which didn't end well for poor Bryony.


Thank you. Judging by Mimi's reaction she wasn't exactly opposed to the idea of having a naked bound woman next to her. And I always enjoy having two naked woman bound for tbe price of one.


One of the things I have enjoyed about fleshing out Ellana's character is her capacity for humour. While she is on a serious mission for the sake of her people, that doesn't mean she can't enjoy herself and take pride in her work. As was the case with Achara. The poor girl was far engrossed in her duties to notice Ellana sneaking up behind her to give her a quick little pinch.


Georgia is another textbook example of someone's curiosity overriding their common sense. Humans are hard wired to investigate anything strange or out of the ordinary, even if our better nature tells that's a really bad idea. Had Georgia ignored the sound, Ellana would have rounded the corner and put her down with her chop in any case. She was using an old trick Kremm had taught her and it worked right on the money. And it was sexy indeed for Ellana to undress the waitress as she's still standing.



Sofia is another example of a woman too engrossed in her distractions to see Ellana coming. Similar to the scene in Night Agent, she mistakes ( well rightly in this instance) Ellana as staff giving Ellana all the time to ambush the girl, with a pinch. And I couldn't resist having a kiss takedown on Helga who was completely taken by surprise, even surprised when she returned it. Ellana's pheromones working their magic. I always feel it good to mix up Ellana's takedowns so she adapts to whatever situation she finds herself in.


Thanks, Ellana's activities have now made her the target of an MiB task force, dedicated to tracking her down with L as the lead agent. Arc and I have been fleshing out the MiB over the last few days. We plan to give them more scenes in Ellana's stories as our two agents will end up resorting to desperate tactics in order to try and catch their quarry. This will not only develop their characters but also provide them with a voice as well.
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And last but not least the traditional greek costume.

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Here is the inspiration behind Trudl's sweater dress.

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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Apr 07, 2024 1:08 pm
One of the things I have enjoyed about fleshing out Ellana's character is her capacity for humour. While she is on a serious mission for the sake of her people, that doesn't mean she can't enjoy herself and take pride in her work. As was the case with Achara. The poor girl was far engrossed in her duties to notice Ellana sneaking up behind her to give her a quick little pinch.

Sofia is another example of a woman too engrossed in her distractions to see Ellana coming. Similar to the scene in Night Agent, she mistakes ( well rightly in this instance) Ellana as staff giving Ellana all the time to ambush the girl, with a pinch. And I couldn't resist having a kiss takedown on Helga who was completely taken by surprise, even surprised when she returned it. Ellana's pheromones working their magic. I always feel it good to mix up Ellana's takedowns so she adapts to whatever situation she finds herself in.
It was a terrific scene with Achara. She was busy doing her job. Never say the danger approach. All it takes is a grab and a good old pinch. In a way the scene reminds me of the Turkish waitress scene we have discussed.

And Sofia is indeed a great one. Very much like the Night Agent scene. A woman engrossed in her duties and makes herself an easy target thinking the person behind her is just another employee.

They are great scenes. A woman just doing her job going about her business when suddenly a skillful hand uses the nerves in her neck to put her to sleep. Then off goes her uniform!
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meditions142 wrote: Mon Apr 08, 2024 1:14 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Apr 07, 2024 1:08 pm
One of the things I have enjoyed about fleshing out Ellana's character is her capacity for humour. While she is on a serious mission for the sake of her people, that doesn't mean she can't enjoy herself and take pride in her work. As was the case with Achara. The poor girl was far engrossed in her duties to notice Ellana sneaking up behind her to give her a quick little pinch.

Sofia is another example of a woman too engrossed in her distractions to see Ellana coming. Similar to the scene in Night Agent, she mistakes ( well rightly in this instance) Ellana as staff giving Ellana all the time to ambush the girl, with a pinch. And I couldn't resist having a kiss takedown on Helga who was completely taken by surprise, even surprised when she returned it. Ellana's pheromones working their magic. I always feel it good to mix up Ellana's takedowns so she adapts to whatever situation she finds herself in.
It was a terrific scene with Achara. She was busy doing her job. Never say the danger approach. All it takes is a grab and a good old pinch. In a way the scene reminds me of the Turkish waitress scene we have discussed.

And Sofia is indeed a great one. Very much like the Night Agent scene. A woman engrossed in her duties and makes herself an easy target thinking the person behind her is just another employee.

They are great scenes. A woman just doing her job going about her business when suddenly a skillful hand uses the nerves in her neck to put her to sleep. Then off goes her uniform!

Thanks. The scene with Achara does remind me of the scene with our favourite Turkish waitress. Both are young quite attractive girls who go to work that day, thinking its just another regular day. They have no idea that they are in danger from an assassin or Ellana who needs a change of clothes, and they are in the wrong place wrong time to provide that. It's my third favourite type of victim is the unsuspecting, woman at work.


Indeed, had she turned around she would have seen just another employee but like our cute blonde from Night Agent, Sofia made the mistake of assuming the person who as just walked is friendly. Plus she was distracted by making herself look good, a risky thing when Ellana's around.


Absolutely! I couldn't have put it better myself. The ordinary woman at work is my third favourite victim, behind sentry girls and receptionists. They are just innocent pretty women going about their job, earning their wages. They go to work not expecting to be the target of a wily infiltrator, who pulls her into a storeroom or a bathroom cubicle or maybe even the back seat of her car. All it takes is one pinch and the girl is out cold, tied up either in her fetching underwear or if she's very unlucky naked.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Apr 08, 2024 1:28 pm All it takes is one pinch and the girl is out cold, tied up either in her fetching underwear or if she's very unlucky naked.
And therein lies the perfection of the pinch. As soon as the skilled intruder places her fingers on the right spot its all over. The skillful pinch to those important nerves knocks the woman out with ease. Once the fingers land on her neck she never stands a chance.
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meditions142 wrote: Tue Apr 09, 2024 12:25 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Apr 08, 2024 1:28 pm All it takes is one pinch and the girl is out cold, tied up either in her fetching underwear or if she's very unlucky naked.
And therein lies the perfection of the pinch. As soon as the skilled intruder places her fingers on the right spot its all over. The skillful pinch to those important nerves knocks the woman out with ease. Once the fingers land on her neck she never stands a chance.

Indeed. Off to sleepyland she goes and our infiltrator as herself a nice new uniform or set of clothes so she can achieve her goal.



A most satisfying takedown. And for me one of the more elegant, if not the most elegant takedown you can picture. From a non lethal standpoint.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Tue Apr 09, 2024 12:32 pm
A most satisfying takedown. And for me one of the more elegant, if not the most elegant takedown you can picture. From a non lethal standpoint.
Indeed, "elegant" is a good word. When an intruder sneaks up on a sentry standing at her guard post there are a multiple of options the more skilled, stealthy intruder could use. She could give her a neck chop or she could grab her, spin her around and punch her. She could give her a sleeperhold or perhaps hit her on the head with a blackjack. However, there is something so, as you say, elegant about silently reaching for the right spot on the woman's neck and then pinching the nerves just right to send her off to sleepyland.
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meditions142 wrote: Tue Apr 09, 2024 12:58 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Tue Apr 09, 2024 12:32 pm
A most satisfying takedown. And for me one of the more elegant, if not the most elegant takedown you can picture. From a non lethal standpoint.
Indeed, "elegant" is a good word. When an intruder sneaks up on a sentry standing at her guard post there are a multiple of options the more skilled, stealthy intruder could use. She could give her a neck chop or she could grab her, spin her around and punch her. She could give her a sleeperhold or perhaps hit her on the head with a blackjack. However, there is something so, as you say, elegant about silently reaching for the right spot on the woman's neck and then pinching the nerves just right to send her off to sleepyland.

Thanks, I'am glad you agree. Quite few of those takedowns like spinning the guard around and punching her in the face, does endanger a lot if risk. What if she isn't decked by the first punch? But with a neck pinch, the infiltrator is guaranteed a knockout and can maintain stealth. The infiltrator can quietly take her uniform, hide her away and it's down to business. Elegant and sexy all in one.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Tue Apr 09, 2024 1:43 pm
Thanks, I'am glad you agree. Quite few of those takedowns like spinning the guard around and punching her in the face, does endanger a lot if risk. What if she isn't decked by the first punch? But with a neck pinch, the infiltrator is guaranteed a knockout and can maintain stealth. The infiltrator can quietly take her uniform, hide her away and it's down to business. Elegant and sexy all in one.
Indeed, the pinch is wonderfully stealthy. A punch or even a neck chop can make noise and potentially alert other guards. Even a sleeper hold could lead to a struggle that makes noise.

But with a hand over the mouth to muffle any moans followed by a pinch to the right spot on the neck it is nice and quiet. Done correctly the pinch causes temporary paralysis so even before the woman is put to sleep she can't struggle and make noise. You can picture a woman grabbed in close proximity to one of her colleagues who never realizes that just feet away a fellow guard is being knocked out and stripped of her uniform.
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