The Nakamura Tower Heist Pt1

[rufusluciusivan]

You're welcome. It was the perfect occasion for me to leave a comment, and to encourage you. I may not personally enjoy a good chunk of your content (because I dislike lethal stories and usually dislike frontal nudity and absence of bondage), but like everyone else I'm amazed (and impressed) by your productivity. Seeing the story section having become a lot more lively thanks to you brings a smile to my face. So I waited for an occasion to say thank you for that.

[Stormtrooper1990]

Well Stormtrooper1990, that story is just amazing. When you and I started discussing the story I knew it would be good, but, wow did you put together a spectacular story.

The take out of Melissa was absolutely perfect. Starts off with the pretty brunette being bored at the lack of activity. Passing the time being distracted by her phone and Twitter. Then two women enter and Melissa goes into professional receptionist mode greeting them but not having a clue about what is about to her.

Loved the “Hi Melissa, my friend here needs your clothes” comment from Ingrid. Then the actual take out is so perfect. Before Melissa can recover from her confusion and react by pressing the alarm, Ingrid pulls out the dart gun and shoots her in the neck.

What type of drugs are the thieves using? It was called a “modified tranq.” Whatever it is powerful stuff. Sounds like Melissa was unconscious before her sexy body even hit the floor. And we know the drug will keep her unconscious for 10 hours. So what is this great drug?

The stripping was great. Love Naomi’s comment “OK let’s unwrap my present, sorry about this Melissa.” And like the touch of her not only removing the clothes but the watch and earrings too. And removing the dart from Melissa’s neck as well.

Love the image of Naomi completely taking Melissa’s place while resting her feet on Melissa’s half naked unconscious body.

Then we get the great set up of the guard scene. Bored guards passing the time playing poker. They should have been more alert. They made themselves such easy targets.

Love Caitlyn discussing taking Melissa out on a date not realizing that just across the lobby thanks in part to she and her fellow guards not doing their jobs Melissa had been put to sleep and was now stripped to her bra and panties.

Great scene of all three woman slumping over and then falling to the floor as the gas overcame them. Fun that they used the Morpheus gas from SI against the guards. Since it is Morpheus gas we know the women will sleep for 12 hours, wake up with no memory of what happened and have headaches.

We then get the quick take outs of the waitresses. The great take out of Nicki. Quick cover the mouth and inject the neck move. Wonder if the drug in the injection was the same stuff in the dart used on Melissa? It seemed to knock Nicki out just as quickly.

When then get the quick double take out of Wendy and Rachel. Love to imagine them both simultaneously slumping back into their attacker’s waiting arms.

Then loved Gina’s attack on Gail. The old “Hey need a light” comment before forcing Gail up against a column and injecting her was really cool.

Then, when it is all over, we get the fantastic image of all six sexy young waitresses laying unconscious together in the back of the van in nothing but their bras and panties.

Loved everything about this story. Thanks so much for doing it.

Thank's meditions, you are very welcome. I had a great time writing it.

The fact that they were using SI technology, procured by the black market, the modified tranqs and sedatives that they used were experimental drugs stolen from an SI R&D lab by Gina's contacts.

And what could be better then 6 underwear clad waitresses laying in the back of their van.

Thanks very much, for helping with the concept and planning of the story. It was a pleasure bringing it to life for the Board

[Stormtrooper1990]

You're welcome. It was the perfect occasion for me to leave a comment, and to encourage you. I may not personally enjoy a good chunk of your content (because I dislike lethal stories and usually dislike frontal nudity and absence of bondage), but like everyone else I'm amazed (and impressed) by your productivity. Seeing the story section having become a lot more lively thanks to you brings a smile to my face. So I waited for an occasion to say thank you for that.

No worries, mate and thank you for your support. It is much appreciated.

[meditions142]

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The fact that they were using SI technology, procured by the black market, the modified tranqs and sedatives that they used were experimental drugs stolen from an SI R&D lab by Gina's contacts.

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So the tranq and sedatives were both SI technology. Then we know that Melissa and the waitresses will be in very deep sleep. I just hope that given the drugs were still experimental there will not be any bad side effects for Melissa and the waitresses.

[Stormtrooper1990]

The fact that they were using SI technology, procured by the black market, the modified tranqs and sedatives that they used were experimental drugs stolen from an SI R&D lab by Gina's contacts.

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So the tranq and sedatives were both SI technology. Then we know that Melissa and the waitresses will be in very deep sleep. I just hope that given the drugs were still experimental there will not be any bad side effects for Melissa and the waitresses.
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Apart from the usual loss of memory, and dry mouth. They should make a complete recovery.

However, if the tech the Merry Women used is linked back to the SI they face some very awkward questions.

[meditions142]

The fact that they were using SI technology, procured by the black market, the modified tranqs and sedatives that they used were experimental drugs stolen from an SI R&D lab by Gina's contacts.

So the tranq and sedatives were both SI technology. Then we know that Melissa and the waitresses will be in very deep sleep. I just hope that given the drugs were still experimental there will not be any bad side effects for Melissa and the waitresses.
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Apart from the usual loss of memory, and dry mouth. They should make a complete recovery.

However, if the tech the Merry Women used is linked back to the SI they face some very awkward questions.
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Glad to hear the women will be okay albeit remember nothing of what happened to them.

And thanks again for doing the tribute to the Die Hard scene. I always thought that scene would have been awesome with a female receptionist and non-lethal.

I always like the idea of taking out the receptionist. I guess it is because she is the first person an infiltrator needs to get past.

I love the scene in the short film Razor Sharp where the infiltrator has taken out the receptionist and stolen part of her uniform. The only down side is we only see the unconscious receptionist tied up and partially stripped under the desk. We don't get to see what the infiltrator did to knock her out.

There is also the great scene in the Le Femme Nikita episode Toys in the Basement where the hero knocks a receptionist out with a nerve pinch. Sadly, it is a guy doing the knocking out and all he only takes is her access card not her clothing.

Your scene with Melissa was basically a perfect receptionist take out.

[Stormtrooper1990]

The fact that they were using SI technology, procured by the black market, the modified tranqs and sedatives that they used were experimental drugs stolen from an SI R&D lab by Gina's contacts.

So the tranq and sedatives were both SI technology. Then we know that Melissa and the waitresses will be in very deep sleep. I just hope that given the drugs were still experimental there will not be any bad side effects for Melissa and the waitresses.

Apart from the usual loss of memory, and dry mouth. They should make a complete recovery.

However, if the tech the Merry Women used is linked back to the SI they face some very awkward questions.
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Glad to hear the women will be okay albeit remember nothing of what happened to them.

And thanks again for doing the tribute to the Die Hard scene. I always thought that scene would have been awesome with a female receptionist and non-lethal.

I always like the idea of taking out the receptionist. I guess it is because she is the first person an infiltrator needs to get past.

I love the scene in the short film Razor Sharp where the infiltrator has taken out the receptionist and stolen part of her uniform. The only down side is we only see the unconscious receptionist tied up and partially stripped under the desk. We don't get to see what the infiltrator did to knock her out.

There is also the great scene in the Le Femme Nikita episode Toys in the Basement where the hero knocks a receptionist out with a nerve pinch. Sadly, it is a guy doing the knocking out and all he only takes is her access card not her clothing.

Your scene with Melissa was basically a perfect receptionist take out.
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Thanks again mate, me too. The idea that the poor receptionist is the first to loose her uniform is priceless

It was a pleasure to do the scene from Die Hard but with added non-lethal USB flavour.

The Nikita idea sounds interesting, switch to a female character, she takes out the receptionist with a nerve pinch, strips her of her uniform. Puts it on, she tosses the card to Nikita who needs to steal a uniform herself. Afterwards she injects the underwear clad receptionist with a sedative, rolls her under the desk, like Melissa.

[meditions142]

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The Nikita idea sounds interesting, switch to a female character, she takes out the receptionist with a nerve pinch, strips her of her uniform. Puts it on, she tosses the card to Nikita who needs to steal a uniform herself. Afterwards she injects the underwear clad receptionist with a sedative, rolls her under the desk, like Melissa.

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Here is the Nikita scene. Great scene. Just too bad it could have been better with a female and uniform steal.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8pFGpF-y5s

[Stormtrooper1990]

That scene as a lot of potential.


Picture the scene, Nikita and her female partner enters the office. Nikita and her accomplice walk up to the receptionist, they chat her up. Then Nikita nerve pinches the girl, she falls to the floor unconscious. Nikita tells her partner to strip the receptionist and take her place to keep an eye out for trouble. The partner strips the girl, ties her up and stashes her in the cabinet in the backroom Now dressed in the receptionists clothes, she scans Nikita through and takes her position.

When Nikita enters the next room, she encounters another young woman in a business suit. Before she calls for help, Nikita knocks her out, steals her clothes and access pass. She ties her up, stashes her in a cabinet. She then uses the pass and enters the restricted area. End scene.

[meditions142]

Hi Stormtropper

As you know, I like to go back and look at your older stories. When I do I always spot new things and often come up with more questions.

In this story you let us know the sedative the Merry Women used on the receptionist and waitresses was an SI experimental drug. We know that the drug works fast and will keep the women asleep for 10 hours. However, when I was re-reading the story I noticed something that made me curious.

When talking about Melissa being tranq darted you describe "She felt the sensation of a dart hitting her neck, the chemicals flowing through her bloodstream to her brain, as she fell sideways off her chair onto the carpeted floor, unconscious."

Then when discussing Nicki being given an injection by Ivana you describe "She felt the chemicals flow through her bloodstream, towards her brain as she lost consciousness and slumped into her attackers arms, unconscious."

Next you describe the take out of Gail with this "Gail's eyes widened as the Latina plunged a long needle into her neck, she could feel the chemicals enter her bloodstream and enter her brain."

In each of your descriptions (which are fantastic by the way) you specifically mention that the women can fell the chemical moving through their bodies and into their brains. So my question is this. What is the exact sensations the women are feeling?