Party Crasher Pt1

pc305435632
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

Post by pc305435632 »

good,I like the lethal one .
It is a good idea to use deadly substance like use chloroform,
Suffocate the victim directly with poison cloth.
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/90266757
But can that really work? Is there such poison? I've never seen it.


by the way , I think it is better to draw blood from the neck instead of the buttock,
https://www.deviantart.com/panpanchench ... -702337388
or draw substance from the head.
https://www.deviantart.com/panpanchench ... -707225029
Blue-Cynthia
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

Post by Blue-Cynthia »

I’m fine with either lethal or non-lethal depending on how it’s done.

Also, typically it does depend on the character type. A “good” guy would probably prefer non-lethal, a “bad” guy would prefer lethal.

Here we have an agent whose mission is to assassinate someone who is evil, but using unscrupulous means to accomplish that goal making them fall into an antihero grey.

I think a good detail would be to add Vesper’s reasoning/justification for killing innocent people to accomplish her mission.

Anyway, nice start to your story.
Stormtrooper1990
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

Post by Stormtrooper1990 »

Thanks guys, for your comments. I did base the poison rag take down on the assassination of Kim- Jong nam at Kuala Lumpur Airport. In that case, he had VX nerve gas rubbed in his face by two girls who were unwitting assassins. It took him a minute to die. Vesper doesn't have VX but she concocts her own unique mixtures.

I plan, to delve more into Vespers past, with each story. To explain her history with the Mossad, why she was thrown out, how she came to the attention of the secretive Intiative, and why she is so cold blooded. And her relationship with her fellow assassins in Team 6.

I will write Part 2 up tonight, and begin Lupa's story soon. Watch this space :D
micpop2
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

Post by micpop2 »

I love the lethal approach and ignore the haters - everyone is doing what he wants to do and our genre is so scarce that any dose is good, so keep up the great work (for me, please continue the lethal approach) and h8rs gona h8 :twisted:
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Thanks for your support micpop, I appreciate it. I intend to carry on with the lethal approach. Although I understand that I won't please everyone, it will not put me off.
simon4242
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

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micpop just because some of us dont like the lethal approach dont make us haters so wind your neck in you little keyboard warrior lol
pc305435632
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

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simon4242 wrote: Tue Jan 31, 2023 1:11 am ok but somewhere along the way this site is turning into more of a kill and replace rather than a mugging for uniform site and some of the pixi stuff ..... :o maybe some karma meted out at the end for vesper lol
ridiculous,A clear case of the pot calling the kettle black
Want to be a "noble person"?
Then why not give up the hobby of "Uniform Stealing"?
Women do not like to be stripped of their uniforms.
It is illegal to threaten, stun, bind women same like kill them.
esercito sconfitto
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

Post by esercito sconfitto »

wow a brawl! :D



It's been years since the last one! :)
Stormtrooper1990
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

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All over the new guy.

I feel a little bit honoured :D.
simon4242
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Re: Party Crasher Pt1

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pc305435632 probably gets his rocks off on the killing of the victims ,now thats ridiculous and somewhat sad ,as for a brawl lol he would have to get his mums permission to go out after his 5 pm curfew
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