Bad school

lesther2011
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darth chlorophorm 2
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Great premise, Lesther.
The captured Protagonist rescued by her friend, who tranquilizes the beautiful guards by shooting them in the Bum. Totally awesome!
As always, I love the militarized Schoolgirl uniforms. Such a neat idea. The Pleaded Skirts, Knee Socks, button down Blouses, Neck Ties, Headsets & Thigh Holsters. A winning combination.
As always...Thank you very much.
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As usual I totally agree with Darth on how perfect this is.

I love the concept. The intruder is caught. The commander orders the two lovely young guards to escort her to be held and interrogated.

The two girls escort the prisoner thinking with her unarmed they have no concerns. Suddenly, they each feel a sting in their butt. Before they can understand what has happened, they lose consciousness and fall to the ground.

I also like the fact it seems the intruder didn't expect the rescue. I love how she is initially confused before kneeling down to check on the unconscious women. She almost seems surprised to see her rescuer.

So great.
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