I'm actually really pleased you carried on this ARC of yours, it's definitely one of my favourites.
I am happy to see that it picks up a little bit later so we can see a bit of the aftermath of what transpired before and I'm pleased to see of what became of Ceres in the end of it all.
Another thing as well, I've always found the idea that characters do genuinely have ambitions and plans for when the missions come to an end, it adds a very welcomed layer of character development, which you seemed to have perfected here.
Aaahh I see Mary was recreating one of my favourite USB scenes of all time with the train attendant, fantastic work on that scene, I loved it.
Klenia and Shayna are one of my favourite couple from your storied universe, they just fit well and compliment each others strengths, it really is great to see and I think you've written them perfectly.
Nothing like a little bit of twin magic, the takedowns from Deborah and Abigail were nicely done, I've always had a soft spot for cocktail waitress so I'm pleased these were your uniforms of choice for the twins to steal, amazing work.
The scene afterwards with Judith and the unfortunate party guest was a nice scene too, it's almost like a what if scenario as in this what Cinderella might have done should the fairy god mother not have given her a dress to begin with. It was a very well written scene and I think you wrote extremely well.
As always I see you know my weakness and that's my love for Asian women, so featuring a few Asian women as members of an orchestra to be mugged by Cynthia, Yuna and Presa is an instant win for me. Thank you very much for this scene, it's definitely my favourite mugging of this chapter.
I can't remember the name of the manga but was the scene with the nurses Nicole and Stephanie based off it, I'm sorry I can't remember the name of it which doesn't help. It's still a fantastic scene, just curious because you got my memory working.
I know I keep saying this, but honestly Klenia and Syahna really were the star of this show in all of this, watching their relationship blossom over the course of this ARC has been an absolute delight to read through and I think you've done a fantastic job with it, you've definitely got me hoping that we will see them again at some point.
Well here we are, I've just finished reading through the epilogue, amazing touch by the way showing us with what all the characters did after everything was all said and done.
This has been one of thee best stories ARC's I've ever read, you captured every moment perfectly and it has been an absolute thrill reading through every chapter, you made like both the good and the bad characters for different reasons. Please don't say goodbye to these characters for ever, all they need is some rest and relaxation and hopefully one day we will see them again even if it's just a small cameo appearance somewhere down the line. Your stories have been an inspiration for some of my scenes so I can not thank you enough, your one of my favourite writers on this board and I certainly can not wait to see what else you might cook up in the future. Many thanks for this truly awesome universe and brining it to life.
