This one is a really good story. I love the image of the sentry patrolling. She never sees Brawl and has no idea of the danger until the stun beam scores a direct hit on her.
And I definitely like the touch of Brawl switching the gun to "maximum stun setting". This obviously means the woman will be knocked deeply unconscious and will be out for a long time.
Also, while the stun beam knocks her out instantly she obvious briefly feels something as she cries out when hit.
I also like the bra you put her in. Not the most revealing but practical. It adds a nice touch of realism as you could image that is exactly what a female sentry would wear under her uniform.