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Tina didn’t say a word on the ride back home, she didn’t even make a sound. Once the chopper had landed back home, Tina didn’t waste a second in jumping off and making her way down the ramp. “Yep, here we go again.” She thought to herself upon seeing a clone trooper waiting for her at the bottom of the ramp. “CI-1138 I’m pleased to say your mission was a success and you’ve been given another notch on your record. Now your twenty four rest period has started, during which your file will be put into sleep mode and will be reactivated after the twenty four hour rest period is over.”The trooper explained. Tina just nodded, it was the same speech over and over again after each mission, she knew it was protocol and everything but she felt like she was stuck on a merry go round and at times she even felt she could pin point what was going to be said and at what time due to the fact she has just heard it all so many times over. Though with that Tina cocked her head slightly so she could see what her fellow infiltrator was doing. She watched as CI-1262 removed all the items of interest from the backpack that Tina had slung at her back in Thailand and was gently placing them on a tray ready to be sent straight to the non-clones up top, afterwards she tossed the now empty backpack straight down a rubbish shoot and casually walked away. Tina just shook her head slowly so no one would notice, even though she couldn’t see CI-1262’s face Tina knew that she didn’t feel any remorse of what she had done back on that rooftop, to her, a jobs a job and it is just like she said, good clones follow orders. With that Tina scoffed and walked back to her room.
Two days later and we join Tina sitting on top of a balcony, just minding her own business with her feet dangling over the edge, she was watching a platoon of her sisters getting their morning assignments. She had a bag of grapes with her and every now and then she was flicking them up into the air and trying to catch them in her mouth. “Oh yes, get your orders girls and move out, represent the company, ccchhhaarrggee, haha.” Tina joked away to herself while chewing a grape she just caught, in truth Tina was bored and just trying to find ways to amuse to herself, thankfully though she wouldn’t be bored much longer as the communicator on her watch rang out, it was a message stating her file had been ordered for a mission as she was to report immediately to the commander of the 91st drop shock corps also known as the “silver widows”, Tina knew of this corps and actually had great respect for them for you see the silver widows had a high casualty rate because of their role in combat, before every mission troopers of the silver widows would be seated into their own individual drop pods which were then loaded onto dropships before takeoff, once they were in the air and over the battlefields there pods were released and they would plummet straight down into the battlefield. But they weren’t dropped onto the front lines or behind enemy lines, no. Instead they dropped straight into the middle of the enemy’s main forces or sometimes main command centres and just had come out of their pods guns blazing, there role was create as much chaos and destruction not to mention confusion amongst the enemy command structure while the attack forces worked their way in from the frontlines, it was a risky assignment as about a third of their ranks would usually get blown out the sky by AA batteries or gun placements even before they landed or a lot of times blasts would cause their pods to veer off course and they’d miss their intended drop destinations. With this though they were highly regarded as one of the most fiercest and hardened corps of them all from the rest of the clone armies.
Tina chucked her now empty bag into the rubbish and climbed down from the balcony before making her way to the commander’s office. Once she arrived though the first thing she noticed was the lack of troopers both outside and what seemed to be inside as well, she also noticed that the office door itself was wide open. “Hhhhmmmm, okay, I guess I’ll just wait outside then?” Tina said to herself before she heard a voice call out. “No, no it’s okay come in.”Tina tilted her head and frowned for a moment before shrugging and headed inside just to see only the commander herself was in the room and sitting with her feet up on the desk. This commander was wearing armour that had been drowned in chrome silver paint and she had modified her shoulder pads to have extremely sharp spikes attached to them, three on each pad to be specific. This commander had her hair short on one side but was really long on the other side what went down past her shoulders and almost to her elbows and of course her hair was sprayed chrome silver just like all the other commanders had done with their colours, her body as well was visibly a lot more muscular than the other commanders but Tina reckoned it was just because the silver widows got up close and personal in their attacks and the commander couldn’t afford the risk of being overpowered in a hand to hand fight.
“You must be CI-1138, well it’s nice to finally a clone with such an outstanding mission record such as yours.” This commander said while standing to greet Tina. “I’m CO-8826 by the way.”The commander added while offering her hand. “Nice to meet you ma’am.” Tina greeted as they shock hands. “So, you’re actually the first commander I’ve met that doesn’t seem to feel the need to have her soldiers surrounding her.” Tina said while secretly suggesting the other commanders showed signs of insecurity. CO-8826 smiled and sat back down before lifting up a tray which was holding two mugs and tea pot with steam coming out off the spout. “That’s because the rest of my girls are either sleeping or just enjoying the peace and quiet somewhere as we are all technically on our twenty four hour rest period.” CO-8826 replied while still smiling, she poured both the glasses full of a dark coloured tea with a strong but honey aroma. “Oh I’m sorry, I didn’t realise you were resting, I can contact someone and explain the situation if you like?” Tina wondered as she felt she was intruding on the commander’s peace and quiet. “Oh no, no don’t worry its fine, in fact I could do with the distraction. Tea? You know its Narcissus Wyui Oolong Tea; it’s supposedly one of the rarest teas in the world.” CO-8826 said as she slid the mug towards Tina. “Yeah why not, it does smell pretty good.” Tina said quite excitedly as she was never one to turn down an opportunity to try new food or drink. She picked up the mug and took a massive sip of the tea, it tasted delicious and the flavour lasted in the back of her mouth even when the tea itself went into her stomach.
“Okay let’s get started, now obviously with all my girls resting you’re going in purely solo, so no backup and no reinforcements which means if you get into a tight spot, you’re going to have to find a way of dealing with it on your own okay?” CO-8826 explained while unpacking a dossier on her desk. This was music to Tina’s ears and after what happened on her last mission this was just the thing she needed, this also meant that she could execute the mission however she sees fit and no one could tell her otherwise, with that knowledge Tina could another big gulp of her tea, “Oh I reckon I can manage.”She added. “Good, right then, the boards being getting calls from the investors claiming that they’re hearing whispers of after dark meetings in disclosed locations from fellow colleagues in their offices and they’re getting all paranoid, some think it’s another business trying to take root, some think it’s a beginning of a hostile takeover and others think it’s probably just an orgy gathering but you get the idea. You will be heading to London, England as this is where all of these little hush, hush gatherings are taking place but here’s where it gets a little tricky. You see we have next to no intel on well.......anything, the other solid intel we have got in this.”The commander pulls out a map of London and places it on the table before circling a big section around the London eye with a marker pen. “This area is where our comms team have accidently picked up people talking about, shall we say undisclosed meetings. So I’m going to give you an eavesdropping device, so you can listen in on everyone’s calls in the surrounding area, then I guess you take it from there.”The commander said while folding up the map and passing it over to Tina alongside an earpiece that looks like a clip on earring. Tina finishes her tea and places her empty mug on the table, “so that’s it? I just follow them and then what?” Tina added with a confused look. “Well, find out what’s really going on and if you deem it threat then you are to take necessary action, oh and before I forget that ear piece also acts as a two way communicator so while I won’t be joining you psychically, I’ll be here at my desk should you need me to do research on anything or anyone.” Tina looked up at CO-8826 and noticed her heavy blood shot eyes. “Are you sure commander I mean you looked tired and I think you should know.....I......don’t kill.” The commander rubbed her eyes and leaned back in her chair. “Okay if this was a big mission and you were fighting alongside the silver widows and I, then yeah we’d have a problem but in this instance, I don’t care at the moment, I’m too tired to really give a damn, you get results, you make the non-clones happy, thus that saves me a lot of aggro from suits trying to get their money’s worth from us, plus it is as I said, I like the distraction.” Tina knew that CO-8826 was telling the truth if this was any other assignment then she would of definitely kicked up a fuss about Tina’s non lethal ways, but it seems lady luck was on her side, well for now anyway. “Alright, then I’ll get geared up and be ready in ten ma’am.”Tina said while standing up and grabbing the map and clipping on her earpiece. On her way out though CO-8826 called out “Hey, don’t forget, we can talk to each other through that earpiece of yours so long as you have your finger pressed down on the centre of it, so all the while there no pressure on that thing, I can’t hear you and you sure as hell can’t hear me, you got it.” Tina’s face lit with joy, this was definitely going to work in her favour. “Yeah I got it.” She smiled. “Good, I’ll alert the pilot, you’ll be going in semi silver widow style, just minus the pod so bring a shoot.”The commander added before picking up a phone to make a call to one of the hangar bays. With that taken of Tina left the office and proceeded to get ready.
She was already wearing her trademark suit from when she was on the balcony so that was that part taken care of. She studied the map quickly then chucked it away, she didn’t need it. But what she did need was some tools, she attached a holster round her thigh and placed inside it, two syringes filled with an extra strong knock out substance which could take down even the most caffeine fuelled bodybuilders in mere seconds so it shouldn’t have any trouble taking down a couple of unwilling women for their outfits, while not lethal in any shape or form, it certainly was effective, this was another one of Tina’s little inventions so she could only use her little serum sparingly so not to cause suspicion from other clones when she’s out on assignments, other than that the only other thing she grabbed was a thick roll of fibre fix black tape, it’s made of double adhesive substance so certainly stronger than your average roll of duct tape. That’s Tina wanted and Tina knew that’s all she really needed, she grabbed a parachute from a holder alongside a pair of black goggles and an oxygen mask with ten minutes worth of oxygen in, just so she doesn’t lose consciousness in her rapid descent and made her way to the dropship. Once on board she gave the pilot a thumbs up and they were off. Some time passed on the flight but at long last she heard pilot come through on the comms. “We’re coming up on the drop point now, get set up.”With that Tina pulled her goggles over her eyes, made sure her parachute was secured and then tested her oxygen breather, the light turned green which meant oxygen was flowing through nicely, she then strapped it round her mouth and grabbed hold of the safety guard. Moments later the ship stopped and the doors opened revealing a lovely blue sky teaming above the clouds with the ship giving of an appearance as if it was resting on the clouds themselves. “You are green across the board, good luck down there, radio in for pick up and we’ll track you’re earpiece, so don’t lose it.”The pilot reinforced and with that Tina leapt out of the dropship in an eagle like shape and dived straight down, she just wanted to get started. Tina adjusted her body into a missile shape and nosedived straight into the clouds. Her oxygen tank was working perfectly and her goggles were holding their own too. She breached through the clouds clearing and with it, the tops of the buildings of London slowly came into view, once she was in range she pressed a button on her parachute and thankfully the shoot flew open without any issues, she gently glided the shoot onto one of the building’s roof and landed safely. Tina undone her parachute, threw off her goggles and pulled of her oxygen mask, she felt a little sore from the wind resistance and the temperature itself from her infiltrator suit but she hoped it would pass quickly, with that she got the edge of the building and waited.
Roughly three hours passed and Tina could hear everything from simple phone calls, to face time calls on people Ipads and everything else in between, she heard couples both arguing and planning for their future, she heard and tried to follow a yoga class from the instructors headset and even managed to get all the questions right in a radio quiz that her ear piece picked up. But she was starting to get a little anxious now as all this time had passed and she had nothing to show for it. “Maybe they’ve changed the location of where they meet, or maybe there’s nothing planned for tonight?” Tina wondered to herself, then just as she was staring at Big Ben’s clock, her ear piece picked up a phone call. “Yeah I’ll be there tonight, hell yeah they’ve got this amazing band tonight. Yeah I’ll buy a few rounds besides my mum’s out all night at some stupid secret meeting, I’m not allowed to know about so yeah we’ll pull an all nighter and get wrecked.” This female’s voice peeked Tina’s interest and she peered over the edge of the roof. Below was a 19 year old Goth girl on the phone to one of her friends. “I guess this is what I’m looking out for, but the daughter won’t know anything because it seems that the mother is the one in the know, I need to follow her though, get close and find out who she is then I can track down the mother.” Tina planned to herself. She followed this Goth girl across town sticking to the rooftops before she stopped outside a Gothic / heavy metal club. Outside the girl whom Tina was following met up with her friend. Another 19 year old Goth girl and they headed inside. Tina had to get inside but she doubted even her black skin tight suit could pass as Goth girl attire, then she spotted another female in gothic clothing going down an alleyway for a cigarette.
“Well it doesn’t take a rocket scientist to know what I’m about to do next. “Time for a little undercover action.” Tina smiled to herself. Down below her was a 20 year old Goth girl who had white skin, jet black lipstick, black long hair with red highlights in, she had heavy black eyeliner on, she had a nose stud and a lip piercing, she was very slim in figure and she was wearing a black sleeveless tank top with a creamy coloured hex circle in the middle of it, but the top had pieces of black fabric string draping down at the bottom, she had black shorts n with a grey studded belt going through it, she also had black spiked and studded wrists bands and a matching black studded collar going around her next. She was wearing individual black pull fish net stocking which went up all the way up her legs to her thighs but left the top part on show, she also black ribbons tied around the top parts of knees, to finish it all off she had knee high black leather boots with buckles going all down the sides. Tina slid down the drain pipe and hid behind a fence down the alley not too far from where this female Goth was finishing her cigarette. This female Goth took her last drag and stumped the cigarette butt out on the floor before turning to back into the club however as she walking back she just so happened to be going past the fenced area Tina was lying in wait. As soon as she was in range, Tina made her move she swiftly spun around the fence and grabbed the female Goth by her mouth “Hhhuumm.” The goth girl muttered as she felt Tina’s hand slide across her mouth, Tina quickly grabbed a syringe from her holster with her other hand and bit off the cap before quickly tilting the female Goth head to the right so expose her neck, Tina quickly injected her with her serum. “Um...Uh...Uuummm....”Was all the helpless Female Goth could mutter before she fell into a deep sleep. Without thinking Tina quickly realised that this female was very light, so Tina quickly picked up and slung the Goth girl over shoulders whole holding on to her legs, she quickly ran back behind the fenced off area with the Goth girl dangling over her shoulder. Tina laid her down gently out of sight from everyone and quickly searched her pockets, inside she found her wallet and in it thankfully was her ID card and some money, according the ID card her name “Macy”. Tina nodded in approval and slipped the ID card back into her wallet. Tina got to work on Macy. First she took off Macy’s wristband and put them away, she then unclipped her spiked collar and laid it next to the wrist bands. Next being careful not to rip it, she pulled Macy’s arms under the straps of her top before carefully pulling the top up and over her head, it’s also here we see that Macy has a belly button piercing and is wearing a blood red bra with a black skull and bones symbol on each of where her nipples would be. Tina sighed at this next bit as she had to undo each and every buckle on Macy’s boots before being able to slip them off with ease, she then removed the ribbons around Macy’s knees before she was able to roll off her fish net leggings, she rolled off the one on the left leg first before rolling off the right one, now that was done she unbuckled Macy’s grey studded belt and unzipped her black shorts before pulling them down Macy’s now bare and rather smooth legs and over bare feet before putting them on the pile. It’s also here we see Macy has matching blood red panties on with another black skull and cross bones symbol just over her pussy. “I guess they go with the colour of your hair, not bad.” Tina remarked on the colouring of Macy’s underwear. First things first Tina removed the tape she had and with multiple layer of tape wrapped Macy’s ankles together, then wrapped her thighs together, before rolling her over and wrapping her wrists together, this was followed by wrapping multiple layers of tapes around Macy’s waist and arms to keep in place before lastly putting three or four layers of tape across her mouth.
Tina quickly stripped out of her suit and got into Macy’s clothes, Tina struggled to breath for a minute when she put Macy’s spiked collar on but remembered that this was all part of the disguise so she just sucked it up and bared with it, she also felt that Macy’s shorts were a little tight for her and there wasn’t much room in her pockets as Macy’s wallet took up one whole pocket all to itself so unfortunately Tina had to ditch her holster too, she kept of her serum syringes in the other pocket but had to smash all the others to cover her tracks, she didn’t quite understand what the black ribbons that now tied around her knee caps were about, but she thought “Hey, when in Rome eh.” It wasn’t something Tina wanted to do but she had to hide Macy’s body, so she had little choice but to find an empty bin and place Macy in it. Luckily she found a completely empty one and dragged it behind a load of full bins to make it look like it was full too, before gently hiding Macy inside the bin and carefully putting the lid on properly so nobody tries to adjust it and accidently catches a glimpse of a very unconscious and very tightly bound Macy in her undies. As Tina made her way to the club entrance she wished the shirt was a little bit longer but the fabric threads were thankfully covering Tina’s stomach enough of where no one would notice her lack of belly button and question it. She looked at the board before going in and read that it was some band called “motionless in white” that were playing there today; Tina just shook her head in confusion and went into the club.
As Tina made her way into the club it was filled with neon blue lights, lots of dark areas and both gothic females and males as far as the eye could see. On the stage she saw what must be the band performing alongside a mosh pit of head banging. Tina remembered that the girl she was originally following had a black leather jacket, black tights, a black corset and black knee high boots with her hair dyed slime green. She looked around for a bit but couldn’t make heads or tails of anything so she decided to wait at the bar, the girl will come to Tina instead. Tina pushed through the crowd and found an empty stool at the bar, she sat down and called the bar maid over, the bar maid was also a female gothic type, roughly 22 years of age and was wearing a dark purple strapless dress with black high heels. “I ain’t seen you round here before, what can I get you?” She asked Tina. “I’ll take a green goblin, eerr small.” Tina pulled out Macy’s wallet and took some money out. After the bar maid bought Tina her drink she wanted to keep the conversation going much to Tina’s annoyance as she was trying to focus on where the girl is. “So what’s your story then?” The bar maid asked. “Oh you know, I’m on the hunt for my dark prince of pain to fuck me all night long until even the dead themselves rise and complain about the noise.”Tina said trying sound dark and Gothic. The Bar maid leaned in. “You know if you can’t find your prince, maybe you’d settle for queen of darkness tonight because with my tongue I’d make you orgasm so loud even vampire bats will screech with pleasure.” The bar maid replied while licking her lips. “Sorry but I’ve already seen who my unwilling victim is.” Tina said as she spotted the girl she was following come to the bar with her friend from earlier. With that the bar maid just rolled her eyes, sighed and went to serve another customer. Before Tina made her move she had a quick sip of her green goblin drink. “Aaahhh my good god that is strong, no I’m good.”Tina said with a strained face before getting up and slowly making her way towards the girl, she casually waited for this girl to turn and face the bar and when she did, Tina quickly swiped her ID card from her jacket pocket and went towards the toilets. Tina found an empty cubicle, went inside and locked the door, she pressed on her earpiece. “CI-1138 reporting in, I need assistance is locating a person of interest immediately.”Her ear piece crackled for a second before coming to life. “No problem CI-1138, but where are you, because that music is very loud!” CO-8826 responded. Tina flipped the girls ID card over. “Yeah sorry about that, just doing some improvising, anywhere I have a lead, I found a young woman by the name of Olivia Wilkins, but I need to know the name and the whereabouts of her mother according to this, Olivia lives in South East London and if it helps she seems quite fond of the band, motionless in white.” Tina added while struggling to hear through the music. “Okay.........Yes found her facebook page........Here’s the mother’s facebook page, right the mother’s name is Sarah Wilkins, it says she works at a computer company as an accountant, the companies name is Haze Co.”CO-8826 re-laid back to Tina. “Perfect, I’ll take it from here, over and out.” With that Tina let go of her ear piece. She made her way out of the toilets and back across the bar, quickly slipping Olivia’s ID back into her jacket before making her way out of the club. Once outside Tina scratched inside her ears to make them pop due to the loud music and decided to go hunting for Haze Co.
Tina walked through the streets of London whistling to herself while looking at all the building and then noticed people were staring at her, at first she was confused and look down at what she was wearing. “Ah yes the outfit, never see a cheerful Goth girl whistling through the streets. I’ll get a change of clothes when I find this damn office” Tina thought to herself. Luckily she didn’t have to wait much longer as she soon came across a tall skyscraper and right at the very top in fifty foot neon letting was the logo Haze Co. “Finally.”Tina breathed a sigh of relief but instead of making her way to the front receiption she tried to find a fire exit or a side door she could slip into quietly, as she was sure they wouldn’t just let a Goth Woman stroll in and ask to see someone. Tina hurried along both sides of the building but didn’t find anything as she got to the back of the building there was a an exit door but it was locked, thankfully the door opened as a janitor was chucking a load of rubbish away. Just as he went inside, Tina quickly grabbed the door before it shut completely accidently catching the door on her fingers, she grumbled in annoyance but at least she had a way in. Tina slipped the door open just enough for her to slip in then she pulled the door too, Tina walked along the hallway then quickly slid herself to a halt, almost slipping over entirely wearing those thick Goth boots. She was at the front office and nearly walked in front of the receptionists, she quickly slid herself backwards and watched as all the business and office employees came in and out of the building. Then Tina saw her opportunity. Alone woman in a business suit had entered and was heading Tina’s way. “Hide, hide, hide!” Tina frantically thought before darting straight into the janitors closet, Tina was both glad to see that not only was the janitors closet open but it was empty as the janitor must be doing his rounds on one of the upper floors.
The lady heading her way to Tina was exactly 30 years old, she was a white skinned woman with emerald green eyes, she had dyed blonde hair but her dark roots were starting to show through and her hair tied back into a bun. She was wearing a navy blue skirt and navy blue blazer, she had a pair of black pantyhose on and she was wearing a pair brown high heels, underneath her blazer she was wearing a light brown button up shirt and she had a light brown handbag with an extended strap over her left shoulder. Tina could just make out a silver name tag she was wearing around her neck with the name “Debbie” written on it. She was walking towards Tina with some speed she obviously late for a meeting. Tina got ready to strike when she stumbled in those damn boots and lent against the door a bit too hard, it was then she heard a crack come from her pocket and felt a liquid seep through the shorts......The syringe had broke. “No......No,no,no,not now, please not now......Oh damn it.”Tina said as she put in her hand in her pocket and discovered the remnants of the syringe. “Okay, think Tina, think.” Tina was running out of time and who knows when another lone female would walk past next or who knows when the janitor would return. Tina just closed her eyes and knew what she had to do. As soon as Debbie was about to walk past the janitors closet, Tina swung the door open and elbowed Debbie right in the jaw. “OH. OOWW.” Debbie reacted before falling to the floor. “Go, go, go, go, go, go” Tina whispered to herself, she grabbed Debbie’s ankles and pulled her rapidly into the Janitors closet and shut the door behind her. Inside Tina checked on Debbie, amazingly the speed at which Debbie was walking and the fact that Tina caught her with such a surprise with her elbow, Debbie was completely unconscious. Cautiously and holding her breath, Tina cracked open the door......All clear, no had heard or seen anything, Tina pulled the door shut again and turned her attention to Debbie. “Oh I am really sorry, err Debbie.” Tina said as she checked her name tag properly. “Wow look at you Tina old girl, it only seems like hours ago you partying at a club and now here you are about to enter a steady nine till five job, aahh they grow up so fast, hehe.” Tina chuckled away to herself before bending down to get to work on Debbie. Tina first took off Debbie’s hand bag and removed her name tag as it would just get in the way. Next Tina removed blazer and unbuttoned her light brown polo shirt before picking Debbie up by her bare back so Debbie’s arms would flop backwards which allowed her shirt and blazer to both just fall off of her, Tina next slipped off Debbie’s brown high heels before rolling her on her side to get at the back of her skirt, she unzipped the back of Debbie’s skirt and with a few tugs managed to pull it off Debbie’s legs. “I think you’re in denial a bit about your waist size Debbie my dear, don’t worry I’ll give it a whirl and see how it works with me.”Tina said being slightly boastful about having a thinner waistline that Debbie. Following this Tina pulled of Debbie’s black pantyhose being careful not to tear them or anything as that would raise a few eyebrows if she went out with massive tears in them. Tina was able to peel off the pantyhose from Debbie’s legs successfully and without even a scratch, she didn’t bother doing anything with Debbie’s hair as she didn’t feel as those she needed too. As Debbie lay there flat on her back we see that Debbie is wearing a sage green bra with a pair of dark purple panties. Tina quickly stripped out of her Goth outfit and thankfully she could most of this as her rope. She used the two thick ribbons around her knees as pieces of rope and quickly trussed up Debbie’s ankles and wrists before using the fish net stockings she was wearing along with ripping what she could of the top she was also wearing and made additional rope and tied up Debbie’s legs and forearms. For the gag Tina quickly grabbed a dry and a clean cloth from the janitor’s shelf and popped into Debbie’s mouth. Tina brushed her hands together for a job well done and quickly got changed into Debbie office suit, pantyhose and high heels. Tina poked her head round to make sure the coast was clear before emerging from janitor’s closet and closing the door one last time behind her. She quickly tweaked Debbie’s outfit and adjusted it at the sleeves so it fitted her better then quickly straightened out Debbie’s name tag before making her way round to reception.
Tina now masquerading as Debbie strolled right up the reception desk and put Debbie’s handbag on the table. “Good afternoon miss I’m here to see one Sarah Wilkins, I’m afraid you won’t be able to notify her of me being here as I’m here on a surprise visit from our Manchester branch to check on her work.” Tina instructed. “Hhhmmm yes ma’am, strange that my manager never notified me of this, I should probably clear it with them first.”The young female receptionist wondered. “EERR excuse me I’m late enough as it is, fighting through traffic getting here was absolutely horrendous now I’m sign myself in the guest book and you can clear it with your line manager when I’m on my way up okay.” Tina snapped. “Yes of course, sorry I won’t keep you any longer, she’s on floor 17, her names on the door and please have a nice day ma’am.” The receptionist nervously responded. “See that’s the more productive attitude this company need.” Tina tried to sound proud as she signed in Debbie’s name and badge number in the guest book before grabbing her handbag and going to the lifts. Tina rode the lift up to floor seventeen and went looking for Sarah’s office. Tina founds it moments later but Sarah was still in her office. Another idea came into Tina’s head. She knocked on Sarah’s door and went inside. “Eeerr can I help you?” Sarah enquired. “Yes so sorry to disturb but you are wanted at reception, apparently Debbie urgently wants to speak to you and her phone isn’t working and she’s about to leave, ssooo yeah sorry, just passing on the message.” Tina said while tucking Debbie’s name badge into her top. “What, that stupid woman can’t do anything by herself can she, uurrgghh right thank you eeerrrmmmm.......” Sarah said while grabbing her coat. “Tina......My name is Tina.”It felt great for her to say her name out load for once. “Well thank you Tina.”Sarah was a 40 year old white woman wearing a black trouser business suit with a basic white suit shirt and black high heels, she had a skinny body and brunette hair in a pony tail. Sarah grabbed her coat and left the office and in all the sudden confusion she didn’t log out of her computer, it went exactly how Tina had hoped. Tina sat down at Sarah’s computer and started searching for something, anything to make all this worthwhile, then she struck gold, she found some private emails, giving dates, times and location for certain gatherings. “Bingo.” Tina whispered and grabbed a pen and piece of paper and jotted down the meeting location, address and time that was due happen that night. To not look suspicious she went ahead and logged out of Sarah’s computer so then she’ll think she did it before she left and quickly hurried outside.
Outside Tina tripped again. “Right that’s it, NO MORE HIGH HEELS.” She angrily whispered, but it seems Tina’s luck was about to get better as a young blonde secretary came out of the lift wearing a set black tassel loafers. “That’ll do.” Tina said relieved. She walked over to the young lady secretary before she got into her office. “Excuse, I’m Debbie and I’m here from HR apparently the fire extinguishers on this floor haven’t been inspected for three years.”Tina said with force. “Oh really, well that doesn’t seem right but I’ll show you them all the same.” The Secretary said with a confused expression. As soon as they were out of sight and the secretary bent down to check the fire extinguishers inspection dates, Tina quickly gave her a nerve pinch right on her shoulder. “Uuuurrrnnnnn.” The secretary moaned before passing out on the floor. “Don’t worry you’ll be fine in about thirty but this is a snatch and run I’m afraid.” Tina said as she quickly grabbed and pulled of this secretary’s loafers before quickly replacing them with the high heels she was currently wearing. “Aaahhh that’s better, slightly bigger than my shoe size but that is so much more comfortable, thank you.” Tina said giving of a sigh of relief and comfort. Now with her a new shoes, Tina made her way off leaving the now shoeless secretary alone to sleep of her nerve pinch in an unused office.
Tina had to move quickly she hurried down the stairs as quickly as she could, she didn’t want to wait for the lift just in case Sarah was on her way back up again, when Tina reached the bottom she quickly made a bee line straight for the entrance, to Tina surprise Sarah was still at the main desk arguing with the receptionist claiming Debbie wanted to see her at reception but the receptionist was arguing that a different by the name of Debbie wanted to see her and was showing Sarah the guest book Tina had signed in Debbie’s name earlier. “Wow, I’ve caused a bit of trouble haven’t I, time I made my leave.” Tina said while trying to cover her face with the side of one her hands as she walks past them at a slight distance. Once outside Tina quickly flagged down a taxi and showed them the address, to persuade the taxi driver to drive out off the city Tina paid him every single penny that was in Debbie’s handbag which was more than enough to cover the charge. The drive took a lot longer than what Tina had anticipated and by the time they reached their destination the sun had almost gone down and night would soon emerge. “Are you sure this where you wanted be?” The Taxi driver asked. “Yeah thanks’, keep all the change, I won’t be needing it and I’m exactly where I need to be.” Tina responded. “Okay, but I hope you know what you’re doing.” The taxis driver stated before driving off. “Yeah, so do I.” Tina said to no one but herself. Tina trekked her way down a muddy country road and into a load of overgrown woodlands, upon getting a little bit further in she noticed a cave with two flame lit candles out the front.
Tina wearily approached the entrance of this cave, just inside she noticed there were a a stair case that spiralled downwards and was lit with additional flame candles all the way down. Cautiously and steadily Tina slowly but gradually made her way down as she got closer to the bottom she overheard what seemed like chanting of both males and female voices. When Tina reached the bottom of the spiral staircase in front of her was a long walled structured hallway with many candles lighting the way, Tina followed the sound of the chanting down the hallways and it was a good thing she did as she walked further down she realised that the hallways branched off into other directions that of lead anywhere, but for safety Tina just kept on following the sounds of the chanting. She eventually reached the end of the hallway and she couldn’t believe it, she was staring at a giant underground coliseum like arena, there were stands all full to the brink with people all wearing silky robes which covered all of their bodies and their faces and all the robes were all Egyptian blue in colour and had thick gold zippers what ran straight up the middle. Tina moved in for a closer look and realised that in front of the stands was a pit that had a giant bonfire in the middle and the flame was burning an angry shadow of orange. Tina still needed to get a closer view to get the full understanding of what was actually going on.
Tina moved in behind a load of barrels that were placed up right and in a pile and she noticed in front of her was a young 19 year old woman with light brown skin was standing just ever so out of the way of the other of where if she were disappear, no one would notice, now Tina didn’t know this but the nineteen year old woman with light brown skin with dark brown eyes and was named Shanice. Tina wondered how to replace her without getting caught before Tina had one very, VERY stupid idea......But it might work if she did it properly and out of sight. Shanice was joining all the other in harmony when she heard a whispering noise coming from behind her. “Ppppssssstt.......pppppsssstttttt......” Tina’s voice whispered out. Shanice turned her head and whispered back. “Hey is someone there?” Shanice tried to see but couldn’t because it was just too dark. “Hey, come here a minute I need your help, desperately.” Tina continued to whisper. “Who me?” Shanice responded but still whispering. “Yes, come here just for a second, but make sure no one see’s you.” With that Shanice slowly backed up away from the others and walked backwards towards the barrels unaware of what she was walking into. Shanice approached the stack of barrels and leaned in to hear what so secretive. “Sorry, but you fell right into my trap.” With that Tina quickly gave a swift and precise chop straight to the back of Shanice’s neck, Shanice quickly fell to the floor and Tina wasted no time dragging her right behind the barrels. Tina pulled back Shanice’s hood and we see Shanice had long black hair and by the looks of it she’d only recently had a perm. Tina unzipped her robe and stripped Shanice out of it only to then realise that Shanice was now lying there in her matching set of Egyptian blue coloured bra and panties. “Wow they’re not wearing anything else under these robes, strange but okay.” Tina pondered. Tina also helped herself to Shanice’s bright brown boots just in case anyone questioned her changed of footwear, revealing that Shanice had bright pink woolly socks on to. Tina had to think of how she was going to do this, so she removed her loafers and stripped out of the black pantyhose she was wearing and proceeded to lift Shanice’s feet up and tied both her hand and feet together in a hog like position, she then removed her blazer and made a thick gag out of it to properly keep Shanice out of the way. “I’m not removing anything else.” Tina stated to herself as she put on Shanice’s robes and boots before zipping it all up. Tina looked left and right before pulling her hood over her head and joining the others.
When Tina rejoined the others she just closely observed, it was a strange chant she didn’t recognise but it sounded very familiar, maybe Nordic, maybe from ancient Britannia? Either way she couldn’t quite work it out, Tina looked below and saw Sarah Wilkins just showing her up still trying to zip up her own set of robes. “I’m sorry I’m late, but you won’t believe the day I’ve had.” Sarah said struggling with the zipper. “Yes, yes but look we’ve already started, so just stand anywhere you can, you’re lucky you got here before she came out.” Another one of these apparent cultists or rather secretive members explained. While this was going on Tina smiled to herself, “Well at least I know I was correct.” She thought. Suddenly everyone stopped chanting and the room fell eerily silent. “Great now what?” Tina thought while trying to discreetly gaze around the room. A big double handled wooden door slowly opened and a female emerged.
This woman who emerged was a young woman with fair skin, pale blue eyes and long dark brown hair. While she was slender, she was also muscular and has a few light scars throughout her skin, her hair was tied in a high ponytail and was clumped together in plaits and locs coated in line and adorned with beads. She had face paint that was very intricate and featured a heavy red colour scheme along her entire face and neck, in addition to black markings of runes and other symbols that resemble tattoos. Her chin was painted a dark colour, giving it the appearance that running liquid is coming out of her mouth. She wore a simplified headpiece which was made of a curved piece of leather embroiled with the a sigil of infinite, her outfit was based around a more common depiction of armour though fashioned from multiple leather parts along her chest and shoulders that are held together by loops of metal, she also wore a thin strip of fabric around her right arm. Below she was wearing a combination of plaid and leather trousers and she wore knee high laced boots with light brown and grey fur sewn around the tops of her boots. Her true name was unknown but she had been dubbed “The Theron Guard” or just Theron for short.
The Theron guard demanded silence as she walked in to the room with a stern and angry look on her face, as she got to the raging bonfire in the centre, one of the members bowed to her and presented her a plate with blue powder on top, Theron grabbed a handful of the powder and flung it on the fire, this caused to explode in a burst of smoke and turned the colours of the flame into a strong Zaffre shade of blue. Tina then noticed that Theron started to breathe really angrily and fast and her stern look quickly turned into one of rage.
“Harigasti Teiwa Tawol Athodu Ek Erilaz Owlthuthewaz Niwaremariz Saawilagar Hateka Harja Ha Hu Hi He Ho He Hi Ha Hu!” Theron shouted at the top of her lungs. “Fehu Uruz Thurisaz Ansuz Raidho Kenaz Gebo Wunjo Hagal Naudhiz Isa Jera Eihwaz Perthro Algiz Sowelu Tiwaz Berkano Ehwaz Mannaz Laguz Ingwaz Dagaz Othala.” Tina noticed that the more this angry chant went on the more the theron’s veins in her arms were flexing and she noticed that her eyes were both twitching, it’s almost she was channelling a combination of both rage and mental instability. “Wuotani Ruoperath Gleiaugiz Eiurzi Au Is Urki Uiniz Ik, AAAAHHHHHHHH!” She screamed out before take a deep breath and relaxing. It was at this moment that another figure emerged from the top of the balcony sporting the same blue robes as the other’s, this figure pulled her hood down and revealed an Asian woman with black hair neatly combed and tied back, her left hand appears to be missing and instead a robotic hand was there instead.
“Ladies and gentlemen, I your rightful leader Chun-Hei (Korean for justice and grace) finally can live up to my name and deliver unto you what I promised, for we have a very special guest here tonight, may I present to you the one whom is the author to all our pain.” The lady now known as Chun-Hei announced before a spotlight shined right the way down on Tina. “How, did they know?” Tina wondered. Tina realised that everyone was looking at her, she turned to run but found herself staring at a line of about fifteen female guards all wearing blue fluorescent blue jackets, fluorescent blue miniskirts, black leather boots, fluorescent hats and they all had shotguns aimed straight at her. “Nah, I wouldn’t move if I were you.” One of them said with a smirk. “Come, bring our guest down here and let’s properly say hello.” Chun-Hei ordered. The guards escorted Tina at gunpoint down to the pit where the theron guard was also waiting with a semi smile on one side of her face. “At last, justice will be served to us all on a fine silver platter.” Chun-Hei announced. Tina looked around confused. “Wait, what did I do to you all, you don’t even know me?” Tina shouted out. “Huh? You mean you don’t remember? Last year in South Korea, you killed my husband in front of my eyes and when I tried to get to him you severed my hand so now I had no choice but to replace it with cybernetic monstrosity and that also means I can’t even at least wear the ring I swore I’d never remove of my late husband!” Chun-Hei shouted. “Then we will try a more recent one.” The theron guard herself announced. “Six months ago you took MY husband from me in our damn home, I now where this strand of fabric from the shirt he was wearing when you pulled the trigger from a distance like a coward as so where I go he’ll always be with me, and now he will bear witness as I get revenge for my one true soul mate.” Theron’s eyes grew red with rage again. The penny dropped, it wasn’t Tina doing this, and all of these unfortunate people had just been the victims of other clone infiltrators or had been caught in battles with other clone troopers. “LOOK, you have to believe me I didn’t do this to any of you it was.......Look it’s difficult to explain but it wasn’t me.”The crowd all booed at Tina. “Fine you need proof, go behind those barrels you’ll see one of your members in her underwear, it’s how I got this robe to begin with, she’s alive but knocked out.” Tina protested. “That can be easily explained, you just didn’t want to get blood on her robes.” Chun-Hei smiled. “Oh really, really, well if that were the case then why didn’t I just kill her after I took her robes, if I’m really that much of a cold blooded killer huh?” The crowd fell silent for a minute before the theron stepped in. “ENOUGH, she just doesn’t want to face the consequences for her action, Madame allow me to exact our well deserved justice.” Theron said with a wicked grin on her face. The crowd cheered the theron’s proposal. “Well, it seems the crowd has spoken. Do your thing.” Chun-Hei waved with her robotic hand.
The theron without another second delayed rushed Tina as fast as she could, though Tina managed to roll out of the way, but before she could recover, theron grabbed her from behind and attempted a bear like squeeze on her ribs. Tina quickly realised this and stuck her legs out so they were planted on the wall and with all of her might and leg muscles pushed back as hard as she could, they both fell backwards but theron still wouldn’t let go. Tina was started to feel light headed the grip was working, so as a desperation act she flew the back of her backwards after three well placed headshots to theron she relented and let go, both jumped to their feet at the same time and ended trading blows for a good seven seconds before Tina kicked up a load of dust from the ground at theron. Theron raised her arms up to block the incoming dust particles and it did worked but in that split second Tina managed to land a spinning kick right into theron’s ribs and it greatly took the wind out of her, Tina seizing the opportunity quickly followed this up with a running drop kick which connected right into the theron’s chest and she flew backwards before sliding on the ground. Tina knew she’d recover any moment so had to think quickly, she formed an escape plan. As the theron was getting her second wind, Tina ran straight at her, but instead of attacking she placed one foot on theron’s shoulder and used it as a stepping stone and propelled herself straight up and unto the stands above. This cause everyone to start panicking and running in terror or fear while the armed guards attempted to seize control of the situation. During this confusion Tina unzipped and threw Shanice’s robes into the air causing all the guards to momentarily look up by which Tina had already darted down one of the hallways. Down below theron had regained her composure and let out a truly horrific warrior’s war cry, needless to say the theron was officially pissed off.
Tina ran down as many corridors as she could before stopping to rest, she knew now that both the guards and the theron were looking for her, she had to come up with a plan to make them see that she isn’t what they think she is. Tina went into a room and discovered a few useful tools it looked a workshop of sorts. “Bingo.” Tina said relieved. “Don’t worry Madame we’ve split up into groups of four, trust me, we’ll find her.” One of the guard explained over the walkie talkie. “Good, bring her to me when you have her and if you find anything out of the ordinary, contact me immediately, over and out.” Chun-Hei ordered before ending the transmission. The guards have all split into groups of four and scouring the hallways and rooms were any sign of Tina. One group of four managed to find the workshop where Tina was hiding. They slowly opened the door and made their way inside, three of them had white skin with two of them having long blonde hair while the third one had a crude short hair cut with her hair dyed bubblegum pink, the fourth guard was a black skinned woman who had dyed her hair orange and braded it. The four guards all breathed slowly as they slowly walked through the workshop, the air was still and Tina could hear them all breathing, Tina waited in the shadows like a Lion waiting for the opportune moment to pounce on its prey. Then as if by instinct Tina knew when the best to strike was and she pulled a switch what killed the light. “Form up back to back.” The guard with the bubblegum pink hair whispered. All four guards huddle together and got ready to move as one. Tina had set up elaborate switches on the machines by only using pieces of string she found and pulled them at very specific moments to make different noises. This caused the four guards to get spooked and slowly make their way to final part of the trap, just as they were close; Tina pulled a switch which released a wooden chandelier and it came crashing down knocking all four guards out in one blow. Tina switched the light back on and saw all four guards sprawled out on the floor knocked out. “Perfect I only need one of your uniforms for a disguise but I need you all in your underwear for my message. Tina got to work and quickly stripped all four guards down to their bra and panties which surprisingly to Tina they all have fluorescent blue undies. “Guess it was part of the uniform, but I’ll be nice and let you keep them.” Tina said with a cocky grin. Tina quickly changed into one of the guards uniforms just in case another patrol came in at least then she might be able to fool them, then she quickly unhooked a bunch of chains they were hung on the wall and chained all the guards together in a circle before grabbing some spare clothes she found and using as gags for all of them.....Now for the important part. Tina pulled out a tin of jet black paint; she cracked it open and retrieved a paintbrush. “Sorry ladies but every artist needs a canvas.” Tina joked, she then bent down and painted all over the guards near naked bodies the same sentence all over them and it simply read “I’m no killer.” When the task was done Tina quickly adjusted the guard’s uniform she was now wearing and made her way outside.
Tina had only stepped about five steps out of the workshop when she heard heavy footsteps, she turned around just in time to see The theron shoulder tacker Tina right in her stomach and send her flying across the hallway. “Change your disguise as much as you like, I always smell a rat.” The theron said angrily before she grabbed Tina and proceeded to power bomb her through a door and into a storage room filled with the blue powder from earlier. While this was going on another patrol had discovered the lost patrol of four guard bound and gagged by Tina and one was contacting Chun-Hei. “Madame, it’s patrol three, you’re going to want to see this.” One of the guards suggested. Back with Tina she was trying to fend off the theron’s assault when she remembered what happened earlier when a small amount of this blue substance was used in fire, it caused a mini explosion and a load of smoke. With that in mind Tina managed to slip under the theron’s legs as she attempted to give a high kick to Tina’s jaw, but Tina managed to roll out the way and jumped out of the hole that was once a door. With this, Tina grabbed one of the lanterns that were hung up on the wall but just as she did the theron, in turn grabbed her from behind and used a German suplex on Tina, hitting in the floor. “Ouch, okay yep that one hurt.” Tina said rubbing the back of her head. “Okay enough of this, I’m done here.” Tina mumbled. With that as the theron turned around to meet Tina in more combat she froze, she realised Tina was standing amongst all the blue power with the lantern ready to smash it. “You do know what will happen if you do that right?” The theron asked. “Oh yeah I do and honestly you might want to start running.” Tina said with a sense of victory as she hurled the lantern in the air. Sensing the inevitable the theron made a dash and ran away followed by Tina not long afterwards. As Tina herself ran out the room the lantern smashed on the floor and ignited ever ounce of powder in the room. It took mere seconds for the reaction to happen, an explosion echoed down every hall and smoke began to pour out. Tina quickly ran back inside the workshop to free those unconscious guards she tied up. “No one dies on my watch.” She said but when she got in they were gone. “What? They couldn’t have woken up yet they knocked out for at least another two hours, and even then they wouldn’t have been able to get their chains or gags of? I guess this means another patrol found them.” Tina quickly deduced to herself. The ground around Tina started to shake and rumble, the explosion had made the cavern unstable and it was fallen part around Tina’s ears. Pushing all thought aside Tina ran as fast as she could or rather as fast those bulky leather boots would take her, but she seemed as if she was just going in circles, when she heard a voice call out. “Hurry the exit’s this way!” Tina noticed that it was a bunch of the robes member all running together. Tina knew that they must know this place better than her for obvious reasons so she followed them from a distance. To Tina’s delight they heading towards the long spiral staircase and started their ascension back to the surface.
Tina followed them back up to the surface but as soon as they reached it she broke left and made her exit deep into the night and deep into the woods before anyone noticed she got out too. After running for several miles she came across a pond and stopped, she clicked her earpiece. “This is CI-1138, call in the dropship I’m done here and yes before you asked the problem has been dealt with, no I did not kill and single person but they’re main base of operations has been reduced to rubble, we won’t be hearing anything from them for a while.” Tina relayed all the information back to the commander. “Fine work CI-1138, I’ll get your evac sent to you right way, just hold your position.” CO-8826 responded. “Copy that, over and out.” Tina responded before hanging up, she sat down on a rock and began to think to herself about the situation. For you see Tina fully understood where they were coming from as a few years ago the same thing happened to her, Tina had lost the only person that actually meant something to her and she remembered all the emotions she went through, the rage, the guilt and the want for revenge. But she wouldn’t let that become her and instead vowed to use his passing as a sign that killing was never the answer to anything and she was going to find a way to honour him every single day, even if it meant Tina would do this for the rest of her life. A few minutes later Tina noticed the light of the dropship scanning for her, she waved her left arm in the air to get the pilots attention, she was going home.
Back at the now destroyed cave entrance guards had the area secured and Chun-Hei staring at the stars above her. “Let me pursue her Madame, maybe if I’m lucky I can still track her down.” The theron stated. “No, there is no need, look behind you theron.” Chun-Hei responded. Theron turned around and saw both the bodies of all the four guards Tina had stripped and painted , one for a disguise of course as well as the body of Shanice all laid out in a row all still in their underwear and all still very unconscious. “There all alive? But this doesn’t add up, all of our reports claim that a woman meeting her exact description was a heartless and merciless killing machine so why did she do this? No, no none of this makes any sense at all I mean what are we missing” the theron asked while placing her hand on her chin in thought. Chun-Hei now looked down and stared Theron right in her eyes. “Funny, I was just about to say the same thing.” She responded.
THE END OF CHAPTER FOUR
Chapter 4: You Say Drone, I Say Clone. Its Potato Potahto
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Re: Chapter 4: You Say Drone, I Say Clone. Its Potato Potaht
I appreciated and enjoyed all the scenes
first of all, of course the Goth girl
then Shanice and the scene with all the guards
but I loved all the others
especially the loafers
by the way you are from London aren't you?
well I admit at some point the "suspension of disbelief" has become quite costly...
...a survivor support group ( for victims of the clones- but they believe they aren't clones but just ONE person), a revenge organisation...AND a cult?
Ok now don't stop keep writing
PS of course you are describing the outfits in detail... why don't you post links to the pics that inspired you?

first of all, of course the Goth girl

then Shanice and the scene with all the guards
but I loved all the others

especially the loafers

by the way you are from London aren't you?
well I admit at some point the "suspension of disbelief" has become quite costly...

...a survivor support group ( for victims of the clones- but they believe they aren't clones but just ONE person), a revenge organisation...AND a cult?
Ok now don't stop keep writing
PS of course you are describing the outfits in detail... why don't you post links to the pics that inspired you?
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Re: Chapter 4: You Say Drone, I Say Clone. Its Potato Potaht
Oh no no I mean yes I'm from England but I'm Not from London. I'm from the city of Guildford.
I've tried posting pictures to show you all my inspiration of characters but every time I try and post a picture it says the quotation has been met and flat out refuses to upload. Strange
Yeah not going to lie. I was really annoyed with how this chapter turned out towards the end and I was kicking myself a bit. But I'll live and learn and you'll see a vast improvement when I do the next chapter. Honestly.

I've tried posting pictures to show you all my inspiration of characters but every time I try and post a picture it says the quotation has been met and flat out refuses to upload. Strange
Yeah not going to lie. I was really annoyed with how this chapter turned out towards the end and I was kicking myself a bit. But I'll live and learn and you'll see a vast improvement when I do the next chapter. Honestly.

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In my opinion, it's not the fact that all these organizations exist that can break the suspension of disbelief sometimes - it's mostly the fact that they're discovered so quickly one after the other. Personally, I wasn't really bothered. I guess the well-detailed descriptions more than make up for me. I think that they are the strong point of your writing and that what make them work is a) the fact that you take the time to describe in details some things (such as the clothes) and b) the fact that you take the time to describe things that are often overlooked (for instance, you take the time to descrive what tools Tina has on herself at the beginning to bind her victims).
I guess that the scene with 'Debbie' is a reference to the clip from Alias? “Oh I am really sorry, err Debbie.”
I guess that the scene with 'Debbie' is a reference to the clip from Alias? “Oh I am really sorry, err Debbie.”
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I love the concept of cloning. Such a lot of potential. Good work!
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Okay as always I want to start by thanking you all so much for the kind and positive feedback, you're all awesome you really are.
rufusluciusivan - Please allow me to put all those fears to rest as in most of the upcoming chapters, it will be just Tina doing what she does best, Infiltrate, disguise, extract info then escape and there won't be any under linings or clone exposures. Indeed it is a little nod to my of my most favourite USB scenes.
Well I feel the more the character description you put in especially mainly villains and USB victims then the more you can visualize their existence and I deliberately described Theron in that much detail because I plan on using her again at some point. BUT NOT in the way you think, when she returns they'll be a purpose.
MR. Peaky Blinder - I've been scouring the internet for different uniforms and outfits specific to Indian women since that's where Tina's going next. I hope I can continue to surprise you with the uniforms and outfits in the next part as well.


rufusluciusivan - Please allow me to put all those fears to rest as in most of the upcoming chapters, it will be just Tina doing what she does best, Infiltrate, disguise, extract info then escape and there won't be any under linings or clone exposures. Indeed it is a little nod to my of my most favourite USB scenes.


MR. Peaky Blinder - I've been scouring the internet for different uniforms and outfits specific to Indian women since that's where Tina's going next. I hope I can continue to surprise you with the uniforms and outfits in the next part as well.

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Love this chapter. So much fun.
Definitely liked the Alias reference with Debbie.
I am really glad Tina knows how to do a nerve pinch as i really enjoy that as a method to knock someone out. I really liked the scene with the secretary. First off, I think it is really fun that the sole reason she has to take the woman out is that she wants her shoes. Also, love that Tina tricks blonde secretary into helping. Then she gets the woman out of site. The poor unsuspecting woman thinks all is normal and therefore has no concern about turning her back on Tina. Tina then can casual pinch the girl's neck and shoulder and knock her out no problem.
Pretty neat that Tina's pinch will knock the victim out for a half hour. Must be pretty powerful and Tina is obviously very good at it.
Hoping to see more nerve pinches in future chapters.
Thanks again. Really love these stories.
Definitely liked the Alias reference with Debbie.
I am really glad Tina knows how to do a nerve pinch as i really enjoy that as a method to knock someone out. I really liked the scene with the secretary. First off, I think it is really fun that the sole reason she has to take the woman out is that she wants her shoes. Also, love that Tina tricks blonde secretary into helping. Then she gets the woman out of site. The poor unsuspecting woman thinks all is normal and therefore has no concern about turning her back on Tina. Tina then can casual pinch the girl's neck and shoulder and knock her out no problem.
Pretty neat that Tina's pinch will knock the victim out for a half hour. Must be pretty powerful and Tina is obviously very good at it.
Hoping to see more nerve pinches in future chapters.
Thanks again. Really love these stories.