IT’S NOT OVER UNTIL THE CLONE SINGS
The dropship decloaks and flies to land at the main hangar, once the ship has docked safely the side doors open and with it Tina and her squad jump out, they are back home.
“Hey seems like you’re wanted.” CT-2224 nudges Tina and points to two rather sharply dressed non-clones wearing standard black business suits, one female and one male. Tina didn’t even bother responding and made her way over. Without even saying a word she first reached into her pocket and pulled out the USB stick she had just recovered.
“Ah excellent, thank you CI-1138, you get another notch one you’re record which means we can raise the price of your service and this little USB here will fetch us the asking price that we wanted from our client to begin with.....None negotiable.” The Female suit stated as she gingerly took the USB from Tina. “Okay you know the drill, twenty for hour rest period, eat sleep, relax then we’ll put your number back on the list for potential hiring.” The female suit instructed. “Yes of course.” Tina replied, knowing only that short and sweet answers is the best way to respond to the non-clone handlers. “Dismissed CI-1138.” The male suit said with a stern look on his face and the female suit put the USB into a protective bag and they faced to turn away. “By the way CI-1138, we know you like to use disguise when you’re on assignments but your back home now, so get changed.” The female added without even turning around. “Consider it done.” Tina replied and proceeded herself to walk away.
As Tina walked to her room she stopped occasionally to have a glance at all the other groups and companies that made up all of her so called sisters. Now even standard trooper armour was state of the art but the original armour set were basic in terms of design, the colouring of their armour was a light grey with a digital camo pattern which, bullet proof chest plates came a few varieties, standard chest plates for the basic troopers, slightly smaller one with less protection for the sharpshooters and some chest place came as a bulky pull over with non removable shoulder pads for the grenadiers. The clone trooper armour also covered the remainder of their bodies, they had armour plates, for their thighs, knee and shins but this still allowed room for their boots, they didn’t exactly have armour for their arms as this could reduce their functionality in the field so they had hard but firm pads sewn in to all of their standard long sleeve shirts to protect their elbows and forearms all with the standard issue grey digital camo design naturally, all the troopers wore fingerless gloves as this allowed them to handle weapons more fluently, their trousers weren’t any different either, yes they all had leg armour but it only covered the front and sides leaving the backs of their legs exposed so they all had standard combat but padding of their inner thigh and leg area. The troopers never wore helmets as they were all raised to believe that if they allowed themselves to get shot in the head at any point then they didn’t deserve anything less. The only difference was, is that all the regiments, companies and battalions all had very distinctive armour, this isn’t an accident as this is all the workings of their commanders or Clone Officers. Commanders were carefully selected from birth to be leaders, so to make the most efficient leaders, their genetics were not as heavily modified as the others which allowed them more freedom and to be more independent, this ranged from their combat tactics, views on the world and their leadership style. This also allowed the customise the looks of their soldiers armour designs, at times Tina thought the officers treated them as toys and just enjoyed playing dress up, but all the commanders swear it’s just so the non clone superiors know whom is more effective.
With that Tina made it back to her room, she got changed and chucked the outfit she acquired from her previous assignment in the bin and hit the showers, it was time for some well deserved rest.
4 days later, Tina was sitting on her bed when a notification pinged up on her laptop, she sat up and pulled her laptop to her, it was her next assignment but she was being temporarily assigned to a battalion and had to report to their officer immediately, with that Tina got changed into one of her homemade stealth suits, grabbed her bag and off she went. Tina made her way to the office where the commander was residing and proceeded to knock on the door. A trooper opened the door and looked her up at down. “It’s her ma’am.” The trooper claimed. “Well send her in.” A voice responded. The trooper stood aside and Tina walked in, as she walked in she saw four troopers, one at each corner of the room all staring at her. Tina noticed that all of their armour had been spray pained pure white but they had magenta pink tally marks all over them.
“Well, look at you, looking all dark and standing out.” The same female voice responded. Tina’s focus was bought back to the centre of the room where she saw the commander stand up from her desk, the commander, although looked like Tina just like all the others she had some very distinct differences, she had pink eyes. “Probably a defect.” Tina thought. The commander also had sprayed white armour but no tally marks, she had a magenta silk cape which draped down her right arm, she had long magenta dyed hair with matching magenta lipstick on.
“Allow me to introduce myself I’m CO-5052 and welcome to the majestic magentas, also known as the 441st scout battalion.” The commanders now know as CO-5052 revealed.
“Nice to meet you I’m.......” Tina started but was interrupted suddenly “HAHA, yes CI-1138, the only infiltrator with a solid one hundred percent mission success rating.” CO-5052 interrupted. Tina frowned after hearing this, “do the commander’s gossip?” Tina wondered. “I’m going to level with you seeing as how we dust off in the hour. Now the mission is simple, a politicians daughter has gotten mixed in a bad crows and now she finds herself hold up in a cell awaiting an illegal auction. This is the clever part, the auction is going to be held underneath a very high class theatre after its performance this evening. I’m sure you know what I’m going to say next, get in there, find your way to the auction, get the girl, come back to us, easy right.” CO-5052 explained while she rummaged underneath her desk. “Then why am I assigned to you for this?” Tina questioned. “Oh don’t worry about that, I know how you infiltrators love the whole lone wolf thing, yes we are going be coming you, but have no fear, when we land we will just be setting up a base of operations, however with saying that we’re also the insurance policy for this assignment so if it’s starts to go south, press the button and the majestic magenta’s will swoop down and put on our own majestic performance haha, if you know what I mean?” CO-5052 chuckled. “Which reminds here you go.” She carried on and gave Tina a chest plate that had been sprayed white and also gave her a magenta permanent marker pen. “See put that on and everytime you get a kill, you put a tally mark on your armour.” She said with a delightful smile across her face.
“I don’t kill.” Tina said firmly. The troopers in the room started laughing before the commander raised her hand and they went silent. “Ladies please the room, I’d like to have a word with our guest.” The smile had now left the commanders face. The four troopers left the room but giggled as they left. “I’d heard rumours about you, an infiltrator who does things completely differently, you favour disguises over gadgets and takedowns rather than takeouts, if you catch my drift.” CO-5052 said with a stern face. “Yes, but my mission accomplishments speak more volume than anything, and I’m making our non clone counter parts a whole lot of money.” Tina responded while chucking the piece of armour back on the table with the pen. “Well that explains why you haven’t been.....re-educated.....hhmm, okay not going to lie, I can’t wait to see how this pans out.” CO-5052 responded. “You’ll be cheering for an encore.” Tina joked.......
Within two hours the majestic magentas had all geared up as well as Tina and they were well on their way to the assignment, the ships flew through the air at breakneck speed and they were close to the targets destination one ship broke away from the others and hovered close the Theatre. “You’re up infiltrator, we’ll be a couple of clicks on the opposite side of the theatre, you have your objective and you’re gear, radio us if you get into trouble.” CO-5052 explained through a hidden earpiece in Tina’s ear. “Don’t worry I got this, speak to you soon.” With that Tina opened the door and repelled down from the dropship, once her feet were on the ground the rope repelled back up and the dropship left to regroup with the others, Tina was finally on her own, now she could get into her element.
Using the shadows Tina observed the theatre, it was light up like a beautiful Christmas tree, spotlight lit the sky up from the roof tops and hordes of people crowded outside, Tina realised while all the men wore suits, all of the woman had all beautiful dressed from so many different designs, colours and patterns. “Time for Tina to be Tina.” She said to herself with a playful smile on her face. Tina made her way round to the front where rows of cars were awaiting to gain entrance, it didn’t take long for a car to pull up close to Tina with a lone female sitting in the driver’s seat. “Expensive ride, bet she has an expensive dress to go with it.” Tina remarked. Tina removed her backpack and clinched it in-between her arms and one swift motion dropped and rolled to the side of the car, stopping just before hitting it. She gingerly open the back door and waiting until the woman inside started checking her hair and makeup in the drop down mirror. Once that started Tina snuck into the back the car and pulled the door too, making sure it doesn’t click, Tina pulled out a combat knife from the side of her pack, she had no intention of using, hoping that mere sight alone of it will be enough.
With one hand Tina quickly put it over the woman’s mouth and quickly put the hand with the knife against the woman’s neck. The woman let out a surprised groan but Tina quickly shut her up “ssshhhh, keep your hands on the wheel and keeping staring at the road, I’m going to remove my hand from your mouth but the knife stays okay.”The woman nodded in fear. “Listen you have two options, either A. You swing the car round, turn off the lights, drive behind those bushes, then get into the back of the car here with me and strip down naked, afterwards you let me tie you up and spend the night in the boot of your car, or option B. I cut your neck open and rip the dress off you myself, the choice is yours really.” Tina explained while still ducking down. “A......let’s go with A....” The woman nervously said. “Good choice, what’s your name sweetie?” Asked Tina as the woman pulled the car behind a load of thick bushes. “Holly, my name is Holly.” She replied. “nice name, well Holly I need your clothes, your car and your invitation to this wonderful thatre performance you were going to be attending tonight. Tina explained as Holly tuned out of the engine and the lights. “Come here.” Tina whispered. Holly clambered into the back seat of the car. Holly had white skin with long blonde hair, which was tied up in a pony tail using a red ruby scrunchie. She was around 23 years old, she had slim body with C cup breasts, she was wearing a red Italian tailored dress with a single thick strap going over her left shoulder, the dress had a slit which went up the right side of her leg to be a bit of a tease to anyone looking on with lust or envy. She had fake eyelashes and professionally done make up, she had sapphire blue eyes and both her finger nails and toe nails were painted red to match her dress, she had gold clip on earrings which dangled slightly. She also wore red Romanesque style high heels on with straps around her ankles. “My invitation is in the glove box.” Holly said as she started removing her dress. “I also need, your earrings, your make up box and I’m going to need your panties too, I’m not wearing any.” Tina explained. Before Holly to respond she felt the tip of the knife against her again. “My underpants, sure thing, but this dress doesn’t require a bra.” Holly nervously responded. Holly unclipped and pulled off her high heels, once she removed her shoes, she pulled the scrunchie out of hair and let her blonde hair flow down her back, she then next undone her strap around her shoulder and carefully removed her dress, revealing she had a black and red thong on underneath. Tina could tell she was struggling getting naked in the back of car, but she was surprisingly enjoying watching her strip. Holly removed her thong and placed in on the seat before unclipping her earring and leaving them in her shoes, now that she was fully naked she sat back in the seat and held her hands above her head. “Now I need to hide you out of sight.” Tina continued, with one hand she unzipped her bag and pulled out a cloth and chloroform. “ you’re going to go to sleep for a bit okay, so when I put this around your mouth just breath okay.” Holly nodded in response. Tina put a generous amount of chloroform on the cloth and gently placed it over Holly’s mouth, she heard Holly breath in deeply and watched as her facial expression changed as the chloroform took effect, the hands fell limpo before her body and her eyes slowly closed, seconds later she leant back against the car window and went fast asleep. Tina then got out the other side of the car and opened the boot up, she then opened the door Holly was on and grabbed her as she fell, she picked up Holly’s naked body and placed her in the boot of her own car, she went to her back pack and pulled out a load of rope, she quickly hogtied holly in the boot and shoved the scrunchie in her mouth as a gag “my hairs not long enough for a scrunchie.” Tina said to a very bound and gagged Holly. With that Tina stripped out of her suit and placed it in the backpack and placed the backpack in the boot to keep it out of sight. She then put on Holly’s thong “wow, that’s certainly an interesting, erm experience.” Tina said to herself as the thongs strap went up her backside. She put on the dress just how Holly had it on before she strapped on the shoes and clipped on the earrings. She got into the driver’s seat and pulled open the mirror, in the glove box she found the invitation and the makeup box, quickly she applied the makeup, lipstick, foundation and nail polish before blowing them hoping they dry quickly. She popped the mirror back up, turned on the engine and proceeded to drive round and rejoin the queue.
Once she got round Tina insisted on parking the car herself just in case the valet had a look in the boot and saw got a lovely surprise. With the car parked Tina made her way into the theatre showing her invitation at the door. “Welcome Holly, you are in row C. Seat 25.” The doorman said. “Thank you very much.”Tina replied As Tina made her way down the entrance hall, she could feel all the whispers and eyes staring at her and she paraded the dress in front of everyone while sometimes give a flirty wink and smile to a few people she liked the looks of. After having her fun she went up the stairs leading the main hall and waited near one of the balconies.
Some time had passed but at long last everyone had taken the seats and the show had begun, Tina watched the show for a few minutes just to make sure everyone was seated before slipped away back out into the hall, the once filled guest hall was now completely empty, the only noise that could be heard was from the actors on stage in the next room. Every click on the high heels echoed throughout the theatre as Tina made her way around going from room to room hoping to find some clue as to where this auction. A good half hour had passed and the high heels Tina was wearing were really starting to irritate her, then just as she was about to give up she heard some voices up ahead, she followed the voices to a private room where two females were stalking talking, both females were wearing black miniskirts, black blazers with white button shirts underneath alongside a black tie neatly tucked into their shirts with the blazer just buttoned over them, they had black hair clips and black sunglasses on, below they both had black tights with black plimsoll shoes, they both had sub-machine guns straps that went around their shoulders for comfort. The only difference was one had black skin while the other had white skin but they both had black hair, both woman looked about 19 or 20, probably trying to get their foot into the security business.
“Area’s clear, everyone’s enjoying the performance.” Of them said. “Good, I’ll go let the others knows that the other patrols can start their rounds, you wait here,” The other one added. With that the white skinned woman left leaving the black skinned guard all on her own. “Time for a swift change of clothes.” Tina smiled.
The guard made sure no one was watching and put her gun down on the table before taking of her black glasses. “God I’m tired and the evening’s only just getting started, come on Lizzie, you wanted this gig, you need this gig.” The guard now known as Lizzie said to herself. Tina removed the high heels and proceeded the sneak up on her in her bare feet, just to prevent any noise. But just as Tina was in grabbing range, Lizzie took out a small mirror from her pocket to see the bags under eyes. “WHAT THE.....”Lizzie shouted. “Oh crap.” Tina responded. Thinking quickly Tina kicked the bag of Lizzie’s right leg and she feel to the floor, but Lizzie was clearly trained and as soon as she hit the floor she swung her left foot around trying to trip Tina up, but she jumped, Lizzie had missed. Lizzie quickly rolled and jumped to her feat, Tina took a swing with her left hand but Lizzie blocked with her right knuckle, she gave a quick kick with her knew which caught Tina right in the stomach, she fell to her knee and growled in annoyance. As Lizzie attempted to land another knee to the face, Tina quickly used both of her hands and smacked Lizzie’s leg away, thinking quickly she punched Lizzie’s other leg which staggered her and Lizzie fell forward, as she fell forward Tina quickly shot the back of her head up which smashed right into Lizzie’s jaw. Lizzie snapped backwards rapidly and landed on her back. Tina quickly grabbed the gun on the table, Lizzie herself now growled in anger however she looked up just in time to see Tina slam the butt of the gun down on her forehead, Lizzie was out.
Tina sat down on a chair and took a deep breath, she looked at the gun and slung it across the room. “So primitive.” She remarked. Tina looked around, no one had heard and she couldn’t hear any one calling out, she was sin the clear. Tina got to work, she un-done Lizzie plimsolls and pulled them off of her, she unzipped her miniskirt and viscously pulled it off of Lizzie. Then removed the black hair clip keeping Lizzie’s fringe out of her, next she undid the button on the blazer, she roughly pulled Lizzie up by her tie, keeping her sat up she also undone the buttons on her white shirts before removing them both at the same time, Tina then undone the tie and placed it on the floor, last but not least then grabbed and pulled off Lizzie’s tights. As Tina bent down she felt the back of the thong she was ride up her arse again. “Okay screw this, I shouldn’t be making a habit of this but this is getting annoying I’m taking your pants and I have to take your bra and the woman I replaced wasn’t wearing one.” Tina said angrily Lizzie was wearing a black bra and black panties, both her bra and panties had a little playful white knot, one on the centre of her bra and one at the top of panties. Tina removed Lizzie’s bra and panties letting her plump breasts jiggle in the process, she also realised that while had a clean shaven pussy there one was a streak of hair that went up from the clit, Tina guessed it so she didn’t seem like a whore. Tina took off the earrings and removed her dress, then much to relief she slipped the thong off of her, but just as she finished she heard a female voice.
“Yo, it’s been a while since anyone’s checked in over here, is everything cool?” The voice grew nearer. Tina was standing their completely naked with Lizzie’s naked body just at her feet. Then Tina had an idea, she didn’t like it, but it was the only thing she could think of quickly. She picked up Lizzie’s naked and unconscious body and held her against the wall, the door would open on Tina’s left so she put Lizzie’s head on her right shoulder, she quickly pressed her naked body against Lizzie’s and made sure their breasts nicely squeezed against each others. She wrapped Lizzie’s legs around her and placed one of Lizzie’s hands on her arse. Tina quickly shoved three of her fingers up Lizzie’s pussy before using her other hand shoved lizzie’s middle finger up her own pussy and awaited for the door knob to turn, before she quickly whispered in Lizzie’s ear, “I won’t be gentle.” Suddenly the door knob turned, and Tina prayed this would work. The door opened and a female guard wearing a uniform just the others walked in. “Hey I said have you haven’t reported.......oh....” The female guard replied. Tina used her three fingers and vigorously rubbed and shoved them in and out of Lizzie’s vagina, Tina moved her hips forwards and backwards to make it look like Lizzie was fingering her too. “God I love you..... Uurrgghh I’ve been craving your body against my mine all day........I’m gonna need a glass water because you’ve got me ssooo wet I’m getting thirsty.”Tina’s said sexually while kissing Lizzie’s neck all over. The she pretended to only just notice the other guard in the room. “Hey fuck off, my girlfriend and I here only get twenty minutes alone together and I want to make sure that by the time I’m finished with her, she won’t be able to walk properly for a week.” Tina said angrily. The third guard a young blonde with white skin quickly turned bright red with embarrassment. “I’m sorry I.....You make a great couple.” And quickly the guard left the room and slammed the door behind her. Once Tina thought the coast was clear she pulled away and let Lizzie’s naked body slide down the wall and onto the floor, Tina took a step back and tasted the fingers that were just up Lizzie’s pussy. “mmm, not bad, oh and by the way that wasn’t love if anything it was just a good strong fuck, got it!” Tina shouted, momentarily forgetting Lizzie was still out like a light. Tina shook her head and proceeded as planned. “Here I hope I don’t taste bad.” Tina laughed as she shoved the thong she was wearing into Lizzie’s mouth as a gag. Tina used the dress she was wearing and made quite a descent set of ropes, much to her surprise, she made sure bound Lizzie up nice and tight before dragging her body behind a sofa that was there for guests to use during intimation of the performances. Tina quickly got into Lizzie outfit before finally picking up her glasses and putting them on. “Back on track.” Tina thought.
Tina waited until a few other guard went passed and followed them in line until they reached a very wide staircase, she walked with them down and when they reached the bottom Tina saw a massive pit like area with a load of glass sound proof cages. Walking passed that, keeping in line with the other guards in front of her, she realised that there were selected private booths just waiting for the certain clients to take their seats for the grand finale after the performance upstairs. Carrying on Tina noticed the darker cells kept out of sight, inside were woman, lots of woman each assigned to their own individual cell. “HEY, you stare any longer, they’ll think you’re buying!” One of the guards in the group shouted at Tina. “Oh no, I just thought a lot of these girls look pretty I bet they’ll bring in big bucks huh?” Tina secretly enquired. “Nah, these one’s are just the appetisers, the main course we keep separate in that room over there.” The guard replied nodding at a room on the other side of the room, Tina smiled, she now knew where the girl was being held, the group Tina was following suddenly came into a massive meeting area with dozens of other females guards all wearing the same attire as Tina, one of the guards stood on a makeshift podium, she seemed to be a captain of sorts . “Okay ladies, start making preparations, we only have an hour before the show ends upstairs, then we need to discreetly contact our clients in person and bring them down here without anyone noticing.” The captain ordered. “Right you heard the captain, let’s move it!” Another one shouted, suddenly all of the guards were going to their designated areas, Tina took this opportunity and slipped away without anyone seeing. Moving from cover to cover she made her way to the room that was pointed out to her earlier, she opened the door and went inside. Inside there were four more luxurious cages, each with a woman locked in. “Okay Tina, just act like a guard and let’s find her.” Tina walked to the first cage. “Hey bitch, we need to know who you are the punters.” Tina ordered fooling them to believe that she really was working for the slave ring. “Please, my parents are lawyers, I can give you their number, cut a deal and..........” Tina stomped on the floor “NEXT!” She barked. “My mother’s in the Navy and my dad the air force, as soon as they find out you got me, you’ll be blown too......” Tina stomped again “NEXT!” The girl in cage three stood up. “My family are big in politics, my father hires private firms.” Tina stomped for a third time. “Hmm could be her, though just to be sure.” She looked at the girl in the fourth cage “You, what’s your story?” The fourth stood. “My parents are wealthy stock brokers.....”Tina raised her hand. “The third one.” She thought, “You, come with me.” Tina walked over to a control panel on the wall and released the door to cell three. The door opened and an eighteen year old stepped out, she has brunette hair, white skin, dark brown eyes and was only wearing a thin pinny dress with no shoes. “Let’s go!” Tina ordered. The girl followed Tina outside and Tina shut the door behind her, when outside Tina quickly grabbed her wrist and yanked her behind some boxes. “Okay, okay listen there’s not much time, I’m here to get you out of here, I know because it was you’re father who’s hired me.” Tina explained. “Ouch you could have just said before you nearly broke my wrist.” The girl said rubbing her wrist. “Yeah, didn’t think, sorry about that, right we can’t just walk you out of here, you need a change of clothes, I’ll go over a find a guard that’s got the same hair colour as you and roughly you’re height and build, I’ll bring over here, then we will both jump her, then you can get her clothes okay.” She further explained. “Right okay, it’s my favourite idea but it’s a good one. I’m Melinda by the way.” The girl explained. “Nice to meet you, wait here.” Tina replied. Melinda nodded and ducked further out of sight.
Tina came out of cover and walked around, thankfully with her still wearing those black glasses, it was easier for her to eye up the other guards. “Too big, too thin, she’s too small, ooh that one has nice tits, but that wouldn’t work, damn right size but wrong hair colour.” Tina’s mind was racing. When a guard suddenly came into her view with everything she was looking for. “Perfect.” She thought. “Hi there I’m Lizzie.” Tina said. “No way, I know a Lizzie, didn’t know we had two on the force, hi I’m Miranda.” The guard introduced herself, this guard had white skin, brunette hair and of course the exact same outfit as Tina had swiped from the real Lizzie earlier. “Oooohhhh yyeeaahhh.....The other Lizzie said this might happen if I bump into you, so anyway, captain wants us to get the politicians girl ready for viewing.” Tina said. “Wait what, it’s a bit early isn’t it, I mean the show above is only just finishing and then there’s the rag tags to model off first.” Miranda Questioned. “Yeah I’m totally with you, but the captain was like, go get it done and you know how it is.” Tina replied. “Huh, okay lead on.” Said Miranda.
They walked over the door before Tina stopped near the boxes, “Hey before we go in, can I show you something amazing behind these boxes, I think it’s a sneak peek of our next job.” Tina jokingly asked. “Okay, fine show me this so called amazing thing, but let’s make it quick, I know how cap can get.” Miranda signed. They went right behind the boxes out of sight. “I’m the amazing thing.” Tina said before using both her arms wrapped them around Miranda’s throat and violently pulled her to the floor, both woman landed with a thud but Tina managed to wrap her legs around Miranda’s waist while maintaining her grip around Miranda’s throat. She tried to grab Tina’s arms but suddenly, she could even move her arms either, what’s going on. Tina turned to see Melinda was hold Miranda’s arms and was sitting on her stomach to make the air leave faster. After a minute of useless struggling Miranda let out three or four light groans before passing out. “Is she dead?” Melinda asked. “Nah just sleeping, right strip her and get into her clothes quickly.” Tina said making sure the coast was still clear. “But, I’m not wearing a bra.” Melinda whispered. “Then take hers, she doesn’t exactly need it right now does she.” Tina rolled her eyes. Melinda proceeded to strip Miranda down to her matching set of yellow bra and panties with blue dots on them. She then unclipped and took Miranda’s bra for her own use. While she was changing into Miranda’s clothes, Tina took the pinny slip Melinda was wearing and with ease ripped it into strips and proceeded to tie up and gag Miranda, with her now bound and gagged Tina carefully lifted open one of the crates before she picked up Miranda’s unconscious body and put her in the crate. After she closed the lid hiding her she turned to see Melinda had know fully changed into Miranda’s clothes and was ready to roll. “Okay stay close and only speak if you have too.” Tina instructed, Melinda nodded and proceeded to put on the glasses.
They walked out of hiding and made their way back up stairs, once they reached the top the show was over and all the guests were in the main hall talking about the fantastic show they had just witnessed, Tina looked and realised the other guards were secretly giving out pass cards to the few guests that were members of the “clients”, the captain was talking about and walking them off to a private room. Tina manoeuvred her way through the crowds with Melinda staying as close as she could, they were inches away from the main door when Tina felt a hand grab hers. “Psst hey, where you going?” It was one of the guards. “Me and Miranda here are going to watch out front, to see if anything looks out of the ordinary, don’t worry we aren’t taking guns so it won’t look suspicious, besides you want this to go down without a hitch don’t you?” Tina informed. “Fine, just make it quick alright.” The guard replied. With that Tine and Melinda went outside the main door and quickly turned to the left before making their way across a dimly lit car park. “Quick, quick, it’s just up ahead.” Tina said. “What is, where are we going?” Melinda said trying to keep up. “Friends......” Tina said.
As they made there out off the car park and into the both secluded and private gardens of the theatre next door Melinda stopped. “Hey I feel funny.” Melinda said before falling to the floor. Tina rushed over and checked her pulse, she was alive. Tina rolled her over and saw a dart in her back. Suddenly out of the bushes members of majestic magenta appeared shortly followed by commander CO-5052.
“She’ll be fine, sorry can’t let her see our faces otherwise she might start asking why do we all look the same you know and you before you say anything, it’s just a strong sedative, she’ll be fine in a few hours although she might have a headache.” CO-5052 reassured. “Next time, how about a heads up, I thought she got shot and I really didn’t want to have to go through all this just to lose the job.” Tina replied angrily but at the same time relieved. Tina’s eyes widened. “Wait, I got to back in there, there’s a lot of other girls in there that NEED my assistance..........”
“Relax.....We got this.” CO-5052 butted in. “while you were in there having all the fun, my girls have been planting tracking chips and other devices onto the vehicles and we’ve been pulling up information on everyone in their tonight, included the guests, the casts themselves and hell even the chefs for the banquette. The once the job is done this little device with all the gathered info will be winging its way to a few friends of our clients. Don’t worry this time tomorrow it will be all over the news, but this little part with out will be conveniently overlooked.” The commander continued. “Okay great, so what now?” Tina wondered. “Simple we’ll take sleeping beauty here and drop her off at a designated drop point where her family will find her in a few hours, while you will go back with one our pilots, okay?” The commander smiled. “Are you sure you don’t want me to tag along?” Tina said making sure that her job wouldn’t be compromised. “Nah, go on, we got this besides it will give us something to do because while you’ve had all the fun we’ve been bored stiff out here, so go home, relax, your missions complete and yes, that’s another notch on this list and your one hundred percent rating is still secure.” CO-5052 winked. Tina smiled and nodded but in reality she just wanted to make sure Melinda got back safely. “So that’s what you do as well huh, I heard you like to disguise yourself as the enemy, you swipe that outfit from one of the guards?” CO-5052 asked. “Yeah, why?” Tina replied. “Nothing it just looks good on you, but chuck that outfit away as soon as you get back, less you get moaned at.”Tina couldn’t help but give the commander a half smile for her kind words, she turned and got on the dropship and sat down awaiting dust off, however just before she left CO-5052 called out. “Hey CI-1138, look I know all the others hate your whole non killing policy, judging by the way you work, you have something, so if you ever get tired of being in your group now and you feel being a bit more....Majestic in your life, come find me yeah.” The commander added before walking away. Tina didn’t say a word, instead she just sat that and watched as the majestic magenta's loaded the still unconscious Melinda into a different drop and make their leave moments before the dropship Tina herself was on, closed its doors and took to the skies. Tina thought about what CO-5052 said but also thought that it really didn’t matter which group she was part of, the missions wouldn’t change, she’d still be the lone wolf, the other troopers wouldn’t truly accept her, the only thing different would be the name of the group. Tina smiled and shook her head at the idea before sitting back and getting comfy.
END OF CHAPTER TWO.
Chapter 2: It's Not Over Until The Clone Sings
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Re: Chapter 2: It's Not Over Until The Clone Sings
Fun story so far, Trackman. Likable main character and some fun dialogue. I particularly like Tina's plan to grab a uniform for Melinda. It's always entertaining when new women are recruited into the USB club.
You mentioned that the "clone" characters were inspired by Star Wars. Can I assume that Tina's number, 1138, is a Star Wars reference as well? That number popped up a few times in the old movies, in reference to one of George Lucas' first films.

You mentioned that the "clone" characters were inspired by Star Wars. Can I assume that Tina's number, 1138, is a Star Wars reference as well? That number popped up a few times in the old movies, in reference to one of George Lucas' first films.
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Nice second chapter. Scenes were the victims are left nude aren't my favorite, but I really liked the scene with Holly in the car. Well-detailed, and the interactions with Tina were nice. I like the concept of forcing the victim to remove herself the clothes. Tina is as sympathetic as in chapter 1, perhaps even more. Hopefully she will be able to work for people who appreciate her more.
Though I may have found a few typo errors. For instance: "Tina said before using both her arms wrapped them around Miranda’s throat and violently pulled her to the floor, both woman landed with a thud but Tina managed to wrap her legs around Miranda’s waist while maintaining her grip around Melinda’s throat." -> Isn't it Miranda?
Though I may have found a few typo errors. For instance: "Tina said before using both her arms wrapped them around Miranda’s throat and violently pulled her to the floor, both woman landed with a thud but Tina managed to wrap her legs around Miranda’s waist while maintaining her grip around Melinda’s throat." -> Isn't it Miranda?
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first of all thank you both, I'm happy you are enjoying the series as I'm actually enjoying writing it as well.
Tirepanted3 - Just the whole cloning concept, the conception, the ideals and their true purpose that sort of thing. Their actual identities, motives, style and personalizes are all from my own design and I'm trying to make as many interesting characters as I can to keep it fresh. Aaahh you have a keen eye, yes Tina is a subtle nod to my favourite soldier in the clone wars series, 1138 is a republic commando by the name of "Boss", he is the leader of Delta Squad. But honestly apart from the similar names, that really is where all the similarities end. I really, really want Tina to be something unique and different, a lot of characters we see on films, tv shows, comics etc.....We only see what they're like on missions which it fantastic, but I thought maybe, just maybe, what happens when she's not on the field, could a character have retirement plans, maybe plans for the future, while they may enjoy going on missions and stealing uniforms for disguises can they keep it up forever?
rufusluciusivan - Yeah, that specific commander liked her, but only liked her for ability to get results as that is where it kind of ended as it one of those things of where you only like something like a phone for instance, you'll like it while it's working properly but if it were to break, well you know........ While yes commanders have the joy of having some independent will, they still have the same ideal chiseled into their mind set. Aaahh I knew that would happen I shouldn't of given theose two characters similar sounding names haha, I'll rectify that now, thank you.

Tirepanted3 - Just the whole cloning concept, the conception, the ideals and their true purpose that sort of thing. Their actual identities, motives, style and personalizes are all from my own design and I'm trying to make as many interesting characters as I can to keep it fresh. Aaahh you have a keen eye, yes Tina is a subtle nod to my favourite soldier in the clone wars series, 1138 is a republic commando by the name of "Boss", he is the leader of Delta Squad. But honestly apart from the similar names, that really is where all the similarities end. I really, really want Tina to be something unique and different, a lot of characters we see on films, tv shows, comics etc.....We only see what they're like on missions which it fantastic, but I thought maybe, just maybe, what happens when she's not on the field, could a character have retirement plans, maybe plans for the future, while they may enjoy going on missions and stealing uniforms for disguises can they keep it up forever?

rufusluciusivan - Yeah, that specific commander liked her, but only liked her for ability to get results as that is where it kind of ended as it one of those things of where you only like something like a phone for instance, you'll like it while it's working properly but if it were to break, well you know........ While yes commanders have the joy of having some independent will, they still have the same ideal chiseled into their mind set. Aaahh I knew that would happen I shouldn't of given theose two characters similar sounding names haha, I'll rectify that now, thank you.


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1) actually I can see the joy of writing
2) Other minor issues with names ...
3) the clones uniforms... you are describing them, I believe you have some model in mind, and I presume it's not from Star Wars
4) a wonderful new universe! and Tina wants to explore...
5) I admit, at first I was hoping a more "after the battle" scenario for the second installment
6) I loved some details, the "promising " attitude of Tina to enjoy the embarrassment of her victims
7) can I hope to see more scenes with stolen boots like in the first story?
8) thanks for sharing the stories!

2) Other minor issues with names ...
...of course it's Holly not TinaTina had white skin with long blonde hair, which was tied up in a pony tail using a red ruby scrunchie. She was around 23 years old, she had slim body with C cup breasts, she was wearing a red Italian tailored dress with a single thick strap going over her left shoulder, the dress had a slit which went up the right side of her leg to be a bit of a tease to anyone looking on with lust or envy.

3) the clones uniforms... you are describing them, I believe you have some model in mind, and I presume it's not from Star Wars
4) a wonderful new universe! and Tina wants to explore...

5) I admit, at first I was hoping a more "after the battle" scenario for the second installment
6) I loved some details, the "promising " attitude of Tina to enjoy the embarrassment of her victims
7) can I hope to see more scenes with stolen boots like in the first story?

8) thanks for sharing the stories!

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Esercito - yes they're armour needed to look like state of the art tech, but it needed to look grounded and believable, as these clone aren't flying through space they're purely here on earth. So I guess they're closely resembles the soldiers armour from The Arkham Knight Militia (from batman the arkham Knight) this is just the standard armour though as with the commanders have more free will they have a habit of making the soldiers under they're command look unique. Each groups / companies or battalions armour will look different pending on which commander they've been assigned too.
This is just the ordinary troopers, the grunts you could say. Other infiltrators and commando units think the commanders all slightly have an ego thanks to their increased independence
Tina is exploring as much as she can. She's going to be going to some different countries and continents in the next few issues. Of course she'll still be held back by her fellow clone sisters and her non clone creators. But she'll enjoy life as much as she can........ But they're still the question. Her name is Tina but how did that name come to be you ask? Well I have a big story planned for that, but I won't be ready to post that for sometime. We need a few more chapters and adventures with her first to get more connected to her as a character.
This is just the ordinary troopers, the grunts you could say. Other infiltrators and commando units think the commanders all slightly have an ego thanks to their increased independence
Tina is exploring as much as she can. She's going to be going to some different countries and continents in the next few issues. Of course she'll still be held back by her fellow clone sisters and her non clone creators. But she'll enjoy life as much as she can........ But they're still the question. Her name is Tina but how did that name come to be you ask? Well I have a big story planned for that, but I won't be ready to post that for sometime. We need a few more chapters and adventures with her first to get more connected to her as a character.
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Hi Trackman,
I had actually read the stories out of order and just got done this one. Man, they are all fantastic.
First off, the method Tina used to trick Lizzie's co-worker was fantastic.
I think my favorite scene was the take out of guard Miranda. I love Tina walking around searching for one of the female guards that fits the bill with the right body shape and hair color. Poor Miranda has the misfortune of being the "winner". Tina lures out of sight and attacks. Even though Tina has the upper hand Miranda tries to fight back and might have a chance but Melinda joins in to prevent her from freeing herself from the attack. Soon enough Miranda is off to dreamland. I love the touch of young Melinda questioning if Miranda is dead clearly not having experience in this kind of thing.
It is also fun that Melinda needs Miranda's bra and the Miranda's unconscious body, only in wearing her panties, is unceremoniously dumped in crate for hiding.
I had actually read the stories out of order and just got done this one. Man, they are all fantastic.
First off, the method Tina used to trick Lizzie's co-worker was fantastic.
I think my favorite scene was the take out of guard Miranda. I love Tina walking around searching for one of the female guards that fits the bill with the right body shape and hair color. Poor Miranda has the misfortune of being the "winner". Tina lures out of sight and attacks. Even though Tina has the upper hand Miranda tries to fight back and might have a chance but Melinda joins in to prevent her from freeing herself from the attack. Soon enough Miranda is off to dreamland. I love the touch of young Melinda questioning if Miranda is dead clearly not having experience in this kind of thing.
It is also fun that Melinda needs Miranda's bra and the Miranda's unconscious body, only in wearing her panties, is unceremoniously dumped in crate for hiding.