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ASTRO GUARDIANS '92: AN AUDIO ADVENTURE

Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2021 5:23 am
by darth chlorophorm 2
I'm trying something new for a change.
This is an Audio Adventure, rather than a written story.
I wasn't sure where to post this, because we don't have a section for this kind of story.
The Astro Guardians are a team of super-powered young woman from Earth.
The focus of this tale is on Flatline. A murdered woman, who, after resurrected by magic, becomes a supernatural hero.
I hope you all enjoy this. If you do, let me know if I should do more Audio Adventure.
The file is in MP3 Format.
https://www.mediafire.com/file/05ktgb9h ... 1.mp3/file

Re: ASTRO GUARDIANS '92: AN AUDIO ADVENTURE

Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2021 1:13 pm
by meditions142
That is definitely a cool twist Darth. Would like to see it continued.

The audio story is a very cool twist on your usual stories (although I still love you stories with pictures too).

If I could add one thing it would be a bit more description of the uniform victim's appear (hair color, etc.). Since we don't have a picture that could be a nice touch.

Re: ASTRO GUARDIANS '92: AN AUDIO ADVENTURE

Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2021 8:37 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
You've got a good point about being more descriptive about the details of the characters and their looks and clothing.
I actually found my PC has Immersive Reader. It's a lot better than the way I recorded this story.
It speaks more clearly, easer to understand and just sounds better all together.
I will record my next Adventure with that.

Re: ASTRO GUARDIANS '92: AN AUDIO ADVENTURE

Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2021 9:48 pm
by esercito sconfitto
...but we want to hear YOUR voice! :)

Re: ASTRO GUARDIANS '92: AN AUDIO ADVENTURE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2021 1:03 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
esercito sconfitto wrote: Tue Dec 28, 2021 9:48 pm ...but we want to hear YOUR voice! :)
If I record these adventures myself, I'll do my very best Darth Vader impression.
"Esercito, I am your father!"