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WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2020 4:02 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
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It is the Summer of 1993.
Inside the secret base of the evil terrorist organization, Murder Corps. The mutant and former Teen Squad member, Wildshot as managed to pernitrate the base's security.
He old friend and teammate, Pulsar was captured by the terrorist, while she was on a mission to thwart one of their plots.
Wildshot has committed the base's layout to memory and has to travel down three levels to reach the detention area. There's no way she'll get there without being sighted.
That means a disguise is in order.
It doesn't that Teressa very long to find a female trooper with her similar build. That trooper is 27 year old Corporal Nikki Johnson.
Sneaking up behind Nikki, a low level energy bolt, fired from Wildshot's right hand makes quick work of the beautiful enemy trooper. Nikki lets out a loud sigh as she hits the floor, unconscious.
Wildshot drags Nikki by her ankles into a nearby Janitor's closet.
In no time flat, Wildshot has Nikki stripped out of her uniform, then quickly dresses herself in the stolen outfit.
Exiting the closet, now fully disguised...Wildshot smiles and winks at Nikki, who's laying on the floor, peacefully sleeping, only wearing her white bra, white panties and matching socks.
It takes Wildshot about twenty minutes to traverse the multiple levels finally reaching the detention block.
She takes out the Trooper guarding Pulsar's cell with an energy bolt and opens the cell door.
Jus then, three levels up... Bill and Rhonda her a faint moan coming from the Janitor's closet and when they open the closet door they're both surprised to find Niki, stripped to her underwear, half conscious, trying to climb off the floor.
Once fully awake, Nikki explains how she must've been ambushed by an intruder and that person stole her uniform.
With Wildshot and Pulsar... the lights start blinking bright red and the alarm beings to ring.
"INTRUDER ALERT! INTRUDER ALERT!" a voice over the P.A system yells.
The two super heroines know they're in trouble.
As a small legion of enemy troops surrounds the two heroes with their weapons trained on them.
Wildshot produces a small "Site To Site" Transporter device and tells Pulsar this was to be used as a last resort, because it only has enough power for a short range "Jump".
Wildshot pushes the button on the device and just as the troopers open fire Wildshot and Pulsar disappear in the flash of a transporter beam.

Re: WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2020 12:47 pm
by meditions142
Great story Darth. Wildshot should have been more careful and bound and gagged Nikki to prevent her making and noise and being found.

Also, like the added touch of the trooper outside the cell being taken out with an energy bolt. Hopefully it was another sexy female trooper like Nikki. I can picture the scene. The female guard stands by the cell at attention. She never sees Wildshot sneaking up. She is suddenly hit by an energy bolt, lets out a brief cry and falls to the floor unconscious.

Re: WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2020 6:41 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
meditions142 wrote:Great story Darth. Wildshot should have been more careful and bound and gagged Nikki to prevent her making and noise and being found.

Also, like the added touch of the trooper outside the cell being taken out with an energy bolt. Hopefully it was another sexy female trooper like Nikki. I can picture the scene. The female guard stands by the cell at attention. She never sees Wildshot sneaking up. She is suddenly hit by an energy bolt, lets out a brief cry and falls to the floor unconscious.
Again, thanks for the kind review of my stuff, "M". But no, the guard outside Pulsar's cell was just some dude. I didn't want the story to seem like The Murder Corporation hire mostly women. It's not the case.

Re: WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 7:29 am
by Trackman281
Brilliant work here Darth. I like the way you included a scene of where Nikki actually gets discovered and she has to go through an embarrassing talk of how she ended up like that. :)

This was a brilliant little story alongside a fantastic picture. Amazing job again. :D

Re: WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 3:31 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
Trackman281 wrote:Brilliant work here Darth. I like the way you included a scene of where Nikki actually gets discovered and she has to go through an embarrassing talk of how she ended up like that. :)

This was a brilliant little story alongside a fantastic picture. Amazing job again. :D
Thanks, Trackman.
You'll have to become a USB Story Critic. You can review all the USB writers/artist and rate their work. ES can give you your own section and call it something like "Trackman's Critics Corner". LOL!
This drawing was just a single page I found in an old folder marked "1993". It had Wildshot's name and the picture's dialogue written on the back in pencil. I made the story up along with Nikki's name just as I was posting the drawing at DeviantArt.
I'm "Remastering" some old stuff and working on a lot of really old comics I found that I finished years ago, but never got around scanning and posting. So a least they're somethings to look forward to.

Re: WILDSHOT 1993: MURDER COPRS.

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 3:40 pm
by Trackman281
HAHAHAHA. :lol: Aaahhh sorry Darth, but I just couldn't be a critic, we have a load of extremely talented USB artist's and story writers here on this forum and I just enjoy viewing and reading everybody's work, besides I'm too nice to be a critic. :D