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Chapter 1: Beware The Faces Of The Clones.

Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2020 4:54 pm
by Trackman281
BEWARE THE FACES OF THE CLONES

Location: CLASSIFIED.
Terrain: Woodland
Mission Briefing: An unknown individual has hired a PMC to obtain a load of sensitive data that certain individuals were prefer to remain under lock and key, now surprisingly they actually managed to snag it, so this is where you come in, we’ve tracked the data to what appears to be a well hidden base amongst a luscious forest, we’ll be dropping you a few clicks from one of the lesser known entry points, make a quick but discrete camp when you arrive and then continue on foot. What’s on that data is absolutely none of your concern, just follow your orders and radio in for extraction, we will have a squad standing by to provide backup should the situation call for it.
Primary Objective: Obtain valuable information from a hidden PMC base of operations.

It’s the dead of night; the sky is jet black as not even the stars themselves have made an appearance. The air is still and calm and crickets can be heard all throughout. A figure stalks the night, this figure realises that they are where they need to be and ascends a nearby tree. Just before reaching the top though the figure stops and perches itself on a thick and stable branch just as a silent ringtone goes off.

“1138, confirm you at the designated checkpoint, over.” A female voice is heard.

“This is 1138, confirming position and I am beginning my assignment.” The figure now known as 1138 responds.

“Copy that, maintain radio silent from here on and remember, stay on mission.” The female on the other side of the radio responds.

“Not even a good luck huh, got to love expendability.” 1138 sighs. 1138 sits up and smiles........

“Hi, my name is CI-1138.......no my birth given designation number is CI-1138 my name is Tina and I.....I’m a clone. That’s right a clone, not born but made. Allow me to explain.........”

“We were made or born as they would say in an installation facility on an island not known on any charts or maps and yes I said WE, but more on that in a moment. We weren’t born with names just ID designation units, in this case mine was CI-1138, we have been bred for one solemn purpose and that is to simply handle operations around the world that governments keep on a strictly need to know basis, so no second chances, no accountability and yep you guessed it, we are expendable, greatly expendable. Who our origin was? Hell even we’re not sure, all we know is that our genetic template came from a woman who was carefully selected for her combat experience, mission success rating and her ability to be heartless and not let a stupid thing like emotions get in the way, something I apparently missed as that’s how I ended up with the name Tina, but that is another story for another time. The CI at the beginning of my name stands for Clone Infiltrator, I was birth and bred to be just that an infiltrator unit, and I’m different from all my other sisters. My sisters are designated CT’s (Clone Troopers) and they definitely have the blood lust of our woman of origin. They don’t exactly consider me one of them as I don’t kill, I knock out, I don’t run in guns blazing, I stealth and observe, something that my sisters remind me of everyday. Oh and the most important thing amongst us clones. No names, no independent thinking, no free will, never question orders and remember the mission is thee be all to end all. That’s why I only respond to 1138 but I assure you my name is TINA and that’s how it will always be. Well in my eyes.”

Tina see’s a light suddenly appear from the ground a few inches away from the tree she’s resting on. The light shines straight up the tree and straight onto Tina. It is here that we see that Tina is a woman, appears 28 in age, who has olive skin, hazel brown eyes, slim body, specifically trained and toned for squeezing in and out of tight spaces. She had medium length black hair which just reached the bottom of her neck, her hair couldn’t be to long lest it became a hazard for getting trapped in unforeseen things. Tina was wearing a dark blue skin tight suit, couldn’t be a black suit as sometimes that leaves an outline of the person in the night, so dark blue it was.

Tina went flat and grabbed the branch and held onto it with both her arms and legs, just as a koala or a sloth would and she gazed down at the light coming from the ground. Below her the light was coming from an underground hatch that had just been opened and along with this, three female guards climbed out and assumed a triangle formation.

“Sensors picked up an anomaly just outside this hatch, probably just a badger looking for their dinner, but command says we need to check it our regardless.” One of the guards explained.

“Yes Ma’am.” The other two guards replied before fanning out to comb the area.

“Tina old girl, time to go to work.” Tina said to herself. The guards seem to be wearing dark green trousers with a dark t-shirt to accompany it, they were black boots with silver laces, hand black leather fingerless gloves on with some black knee pads and black elbow pads to go alongside their uniforms. All the guards seems to have MP5 sub machine guns with a set of night vision goggles each which were giving a subtle green glow as they searched through the bushes.

Tina prowled the tops of the trees studied the guards patrol pattern, then she realised one of the guards had tanned skin, not that much darker than her own.

“Lady luck, you’re making this too easy.” Tina whispered and smirked to herself.

Tina knew speed was essential and so as soon as she knew that this guard was just out of sight from the other two Tina instinctively jumped. Tina plummeted straight from the tree and straight onto the guards back taking her down to the floor in a matter of seconds.

“WWAAHH.” Was the only thing the guard could muster before Tina punched her right on the side of her head sending her off to dream land. Tina looked around and realised the other two guards have heard their colleagues quick shriek before being taken out. With that Tina smiled to herself, she had it all under control. She grabbed the guard under her arms and dragged her a little bit deeper into the woods and further out of sight. Again timing was everything so Tina quickly pulled the guards night vision goggles off her head and put them next to her. Next she removed the guard’s gloves off as well as her elbow pads. Tina then sat the guard up and pulled the guards shirt over head and off her body, letting the guard just fall back down flat on her back afterwards. Tina then quickly un-laced the guards boots and un-fastened her knee pads before removing them, Tina then quickly un zipped the guards trousers and pulled them off her rapidly, she looked down and realised that this guard was 25 years old, she had a body gym enthusiasts would kill for, she had a couple of abs starting to peek through but that didn’t remove any of her good feminine looks at all. The guard had medium length brunette hair and judging by her skin tone, Tina thought she must have been from Brazil. Tina stripped out of her suit and went to put on the guards cloths only to then realise that she was not wearing any underwear and it might be breezy down there, which in turn might cause for awkward nipple moments on Tina’s behalf, she looked down at saw the guard was a matching set of sage green bra and knickers.

“Look, I don’t like this anymore than you would, but I need your underwear.” Tina whispered to the still unconscious guard. Tina quickly removed the guard bra and panties revealing the guard clean shaven pussy prompting Tina to smile that her hunch of the guard being Brazilian was correct. She then quickly put on the guards underwear followed by her uniform and set to work securing the guard. Tina’s suit was made a thin tear able fabric (Tina’s own secret design) for situations like this. She ripped her suit into strips and tied up the guard’s ankles, wrists, thighs and arms before using a couple more strips to use as both a gag and a blindfold. With the naked guard now secured, Tina quickly hid her behind a thick tree before hearing a voice.

“Juliana, you’re awfully quiet over there, everything okay?” It took Tina a few seconds to realise that Juliana was the guard she just replaced and it was her they were talking too. “yeah, YEAH! I’m all clear over here, I saw a raccoon burrowing around, guess we found what triggered the sensors.” Tina lied trying to impersonate the Juliana’s voice. “Fall back then, can’t be outside any longer than we need to be, just in case we’re noticed.” One of the guards replied. “Right, forming on you.” Tina replied.

Tina now disguised regrouped with the other two guards and they went back down the hatch, Tina went last and sealed the hatch tight on her way down.

“I’m going to go make a report to give the control team on what that minor situation was.” One of the guards said. “NO! No, no, please allow me, you girls look tired.” Tina suggested, plus she wanted to use this as an excuse to slip away without any suspicion. “Whoa, Juliana when did you become so thoughtful to the rest of us huh?” The same guard replied while removing her goggles and securing her weapon. “What, can’t a girl do something nice once every blue moon?” Tina replied trying to sell it. “Meh, suit yourself, hey Sue wanna go and see Rebecca and the others at the cantina” The guard said quickly turning her attention to the third guard who was apparently named Sue. “Yeah, what the hell haven’t exactly got much else to do now. See you later Juliana” Sue said to the disguised Tina before making her leave.

Tina picked up a comms log and pretended to fill it out until the other two guards were out sight before slinging it back down on the table. “Won’t be needing these.” Tina said as she removed her goggles and flung them into a bin before disabling the weapon that once belonged to Juliana and placed it back on the gun rack. “Love to see the face of the next guard who tries to use that.” Tina laughed before making her way down the corridor. She passed numerous other guards as well technicians and lab assistants and to Tina’s surprised they were all female. Tina gave the occasional nod to other guards and salutes to the ones she knew were a higher rank the guard she was impersonating. After several minutes of aimlessly wandering around Tina found what she was looking for, the main data storage room. She quickly stood by the side of the door as if she was on guard duty then as soon as the coast was clear she darted inside.

“Bingo.” Tina thought as inside was an extremely elaborate computer system just filled with all the juicy knowledge and data that Tina’s superiors were dying to get their hands on. Tina hunted high and low for a back up disc or anything she could use and just went she thought about calling in her sisters for a more “up front” data extraction, Tina found a USB stick in one of the bottom draws of a cabinet. Tina quickly put in the stick and started to download anything and everything, she wasn’t a hundred percent sure if it was all important or not so she was copying it all just to be safe when the door opened. Tina quickly minimised the downloading screen as a young lab technician walked in.

This female lab technician was roughly 25-27 years old. Quite pale white skin with long ginger hair and freckles just on the tip of her nose. She had emerald green eyes which were being slightly covered by her reading glasses. She was wearing a blue dress which revealed the lower half of her knees, she had black high heels on and a white lab coat which the ID tag reading “Samantha”. Samantha was flipping through her clipboard of files when she looked up and saw Tina standing there saluting her.

“Well I appreciate the fact saluted me when I saw you soldier, but is there any particular reason you are in here and not out there with the others?” Samantha questioned.

“Eerr, yes ma’am just bought down a report from head office that requires your signature of approval.” Tina said making it up as she went along. “ookkaayyy, ssooo where is the report then?” Samantha questioned. “oh, oh it’s right here ma’am sorry I left it on the table so I didn’t see anything that a lowly soldier like me shouldn’t see ma’am.” Tina said still winging it. “Ah well good job soldier, god I wish more of your colleagues took their ranks and role more responsibly as you did.” Samantha said with a smile as she made her way over to the table. “Okay so where is this report?” Samantha asked once more.

“Well ma’am I just needed you to get close enough for me to punch you in the head.” Tina quickly added. “Ah I see well that makes. WHAT.......”But just as Samantha realised what Tina said, Tina gave a swift uppercut with her left hand catching Samantha right in the middle of her jaw, Samantha fell back hard accidently banging the back of heard on the desk on the way, although she wouldn’t of felt it as Samantha was knocked out already from the uppercut. Tina cracked the bones in her left hand “Thank you for the time ma’am, but I’ll take it from here.” Tina joked. Tina grabbed Samantha by her ankles and dragged to a more secluded and rather dark part of the room where she was sure no would notice on first glance should anyone come in. “Damn, I thought you were wearing stocking but you just have really smooth legs.” Tina said to herself as she dragged Samantha into the dark corner. “Wish it was this easy to get a promotion from where I’m from.” Tina thought to herself.

“Well Samantha, I like the looks of both you’re life and rank, so mind I borrow it for a while, which reminds me, sorry my dear but I’m going to need that outfit you’re wearing.” Naturally Samantha couldn’t reply as she was out like a light. Tina rolled her eyes and smiled, she enjoyed this really. Tina pulled off Samantha’s lab coat and carefully removed Samantha’s glasses. Next she quickly slipped off Samantha’s high heels. She then rolled Samantha on her side and unzipped the back of her dress, Samantha let out a little groan as Tina rolled her over, but nothing she worried about. As she removed Samantha’s dress it revealed that Samantha wasn’t as fit as Juliana was from early , probably from where her job would involve sitting at a desk all day while Juliana’s was constantly on patrol all day, but Tina still did admire the way that Samantha kept herself sharp. “Plus you need love handles, something to hang onto.” Tina jokingly thought to herself. Samantha was wearing an Aqua blue silk fabric set of bra and panties which Tina immediately took notice of. “The first woman I stripped here was wearing making underwear to go with her outfit too, hhmm I wonder if this is what all woman do, or is the luxury of choice?” Tina said to herself, but what would Tina know of “luxury of choice” as that represents independent thinking as her Non-clone superiors or breeders as they got referred to, would have that one little bit. Snapping back out of her thought bubble Tina quickly stripped out of her guard attire and got dressed into Samantha’s clothing. She changed into Samantha’s dress, coat and put on her glasses, her eyes needed to adjust for a moment as the glasses were prescribed for Samantha’s eyes, not hers. Tina put on the black high heels and immediately stumbled. Being a trained infiltrator she was never trained in the likes of high heels so she walked around the room for a bit allowing herself a quick on the job practise of walking in high heels. “Going to have to be enough.” Tina thought as she quickly threw the old guards uniform into a bit and grabbed some spares cables and duck tape from a nearby draw. She tied up Samantha’s arms and legs with the cable and rolled a few layers of duck tape over her mouth as a gag. Tina quickly punched Samantha one more time to make sure she stayed knocked out as hiding her properly was going to be a challenge, Tina switched off all the light just for that little bit extra of covering Samantha’s unconscious body just in time for the computer to bleep, the download was complete.

Straightening herself out in Samantha’s clothes she carefully walked over to the computer and removed the USB stick before placing into one of the coat pockets, she picked up the clipboard that Samantha was holding and make her way out of the room. Tina got a load of different reactions this time by guards saluting her and holding open doors for her. Tina secretly enjoyed it “now I know how all my CO (Clone Officers) feels when they walk past us back home.” Tina pondered to herself. Tina quickly, or well as quickly as she could walking in high heels made her way to what seemed like an exit when she heard a voice behind her.

“Excuse me ma’am, but why are you going out without an armed security detail?” Tina turned around to see a confused guard standing behind her. “Did you seriously just question me soldier?” Tina asked trying to sell it as best she could. “Oh, oh Doctor Sinclair, I’m sorry I didn’t know it was you, I’ve never met you before so I just didn’t know.” The guard said while quickly bowing her head in shame. “eerrmmm Sinclair? No I’m Samantha” Tina said quickly correcting the guard. “Yes ma’am you’re Doctor Samantha Sinclair are you not?” The guard said while keeping her head down. “Y-yeah I am and don’t you forget it.” Tina said trying to impersonate Samantha. “Now I’m going out for my own personal research vital to our organisation and I certainly don’t want to be baby followed by a bunch of noisy grunts, have I made myself clear?” Tina ordered. “But ma’am, protocol dictates........”

“I SAID HAVE I MADE MYSELF CLEAR!” Tina interrupted. “Yes ma’am, sorry ma’am” the guard responded. “Before I go what’s your name soldier?” She asked. “It’s Rebecca, Lance Corporal Rebecca.” The guard now known as Rebecca replied. This worked perfectly for Tina. “Aaahh I know you’re friend Sue, I’m sure you wouldn’t want her to suffer a punishment for your stupidity now do you.” Tina lied, hoping she was the same Rebecca that the guards were talking about from earlier. “No, ma’am not at all and if there’s anything you need before you go I’m at your service.” Thankfully Rebecca replied much to Tina’s relief. Suddenly Tina stumbled in the high heels she was wearing then remembered the woodland terrain outside. “Rebecca before I go, I need your boots.” Tina smiled. Rebecca look surprised but didn’t want to be any more trouble than she thought she was in so quickly unzipped her boots and passed them to Tina. Tina quickly changed into them and chucked the high heels on the floor leaving Samantha confused and slightly embarrassed standing there too attention but in her bare feet. “Now we will discuss this again, open the door for me.” Tina ordered. “Yes of course, right away.” Rebecca opened the door and off Tina went.

When she was out of sight Tina took off Samantha’s glasses as they were giving her a headache and threw them away. Tina returned to where she had made camp prior and got out her radio. “This CI-1138 package is secure and request immediate evac at my position.” Tina said. “Copy that CI-1138 stand by.” A female responded. Moments later a troop transport hovered down and a squad of four females that looked exactly like Tina emerged, although they were waiting full battle armour and were a lot more formal than Tina, of course Clone Troopers or CT’s for short.

“CI-1138, what the hell are you wearing?” One of them asked. “Shut up CT-2224, the mission is complete and I have the information.” Tina replied taking the USB stick out of her pocket and giving it to the trooper. “Let me guess, you didn’t get a single kill did you, I bet you didn’t even kill that woman you took that outfit from did you?” CT-2224 responded. “Killing wins battles, Intel wins wars sister dear.” Tina responded spitefully.

“Don’t you dare call me that CI-1138, all my sisters stand by my side fighting in the trenches, shoulder to shoulder, not running around playing dress up, you know what CI-1138, we may all be of the same genetic coding, but you are no sister of mine.” CT-2224 said angrily.

“You’re right......I’m better.” Tina said smiling. Although she was smiling on the outside, on the inside Tina hated not getting along with her sisters, they were raised to believe that the only ones they could count on was each other and all clones were born to fight and the clones were the only friend and family each other ever had or ever will have as they certainly couldn’t rely on their non clone creators for love as they were just business investments to their non clone superiors.

Tina held back any emotion and got on the transport with the others and soon the transport was on its way back home. For Tina it was mission accomplished.

END OF CHAPTER ONE

Re: Chapter 1: Beware The Faces Of The Clones.

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2020 8:26 pm
by rufusluciusivan
I'm happy to see that you started your story project. It looks promising. Your descriptions of the strippings are very good because they give plenty of details. Good job with introducing the main character. You took the time to detail her emotions and motivations, and it makes her very identifiable and sympathetic. The kind of character we want to follow.

The premise of the story reminds me a little of some of Shabazik's works on Deviantart (like Shiks). I'm curious to know: are they an insipiration or is this a coincidence?

Re: Chapter 1: Beware The Faces Of The Clones.

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2020 9:21 pm
by Trackman281
Hi and thanks for the nice review. I posted chapter 2 on here earlier today, I'm doing to do them as one long continuation of each other. I've tried to improve and show the more expansive world in chapter 2. So I hope you enjoy that as much as you've enjoyed this.

No, no actually my biggest inspiration came from the clone troopers from the star wars franchise both Canon and legends. I'm a big fan of the clone wars series and honestly I found the concept interesting. They were bree for being a soldier and nothing else. Even their creators (the kaminoans) revered them as nothing but a product to sell and if they deemed the clones to have too much independence they liquified them. Obviously a lot of clones had mixed feelings towards things like war and just wanted free will. I just thought it was something I could implement into a series as long a gave a good balance of character development, world building and of course the USB scenes themselves.

Re: Chapter 1: Beware The Faces Of The Clones.

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2020 7:18 am
by rufusluciusivan
Trackman281 wrote:I just thought it was something I could implement into a series as long a gave a good balance of character development, world building and of course the USB scenes themselves.
This really is (according to me) the best kind of stories. I'll be curious to see where this is going.

Re: Chapter 1: Beware The Faces Of The Clones.

Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2020 12:29 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
Sorry, Trackman, I just only got around to reading this first part finally.
I really enjoyed very much.
The dialogue isn't half bad at all. You make it very interesting. I especially enjoy Tina's little comments, when she steals a woman's outfit.
Keeping dialogue fresh and interesting is something I've always had a big problem with in my comics and stories.
I was more of an artist my whole life, who enjoys drawing comics and telling stories.
Comic up with story lines and ideas wasn't very hard for me, it was the details of the dialogue that was the real issue.
I do look forward to exploring the rest of the story you've written.
Again, great job!