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Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 7:04 am
by Stormtrooper1990
The Outskirts of the Van der Laar Estate, 5km West of Baton Rouge, Louisiana, Monday 9th November 1884, 10:00am


Nancy, Clinton, Sand, and Sylvié were standing next to their horses on a small hill. They could see the outskirts of the Van der Laar Estate in the distance.

“This is it. The journey was a bit rocky, but we’ve reached our destination.” Sylvié glanced at her three companions. “By the way. This time, I’m coming with you.”

Nancy briefly hesitated. “They won’t just let us in. We’ll have to… “convince” some of them to part with their outfits. And you’re not exactly trained for combat. No offense.”

“None taken. But infiltration also requires a bit of finesse and silver tongue… and that isn’t exactly the best quality of either of you.” She eyed them a bit playfully. “No offense.”

Nancy chuckled, and Sand smiled. “None taken.” they both answered.

Sylvié then became serious. “I won’t be a hindrance. You’d be surprised by the skills you learn when you’re a servant. I may not know how to fight, but I know how to cajole people with words. I know how to stand in a room, and still be invisible because nobody ever pays attention to the help. I’ll follow all your orders, and if it’s too dangerous I’ll listen when you tell me to stay behind. I want to help. I want to be part of this group, not a burden. Just… let me come with you.” she begged.

There was a short beat. Nancy and Sand exchanged a look, and pondered their options.

Sand nodded.

“Okay. You’re in.” Nancy chose.

Sylvié beamed. “Thank you.”

“But Sylvié… One more thing. It’s very important.” Nancy looked her in the eyes. “You don’t need to prove yourself or earn your place. You’re part of our group, and have been the moment we agreed to travel together. We’re all equals. We will give you orders during the mission, but only because we have more experience. Don’t ever believe you’re less than us. Your opinion is worth the same as mine or Sand’s or Clint’s.”

Sylvié lost her smile, but it was because she was genuinely touched. “I’m… not used to that. I’ve spent all my life being an inferior…” she confessed earnestly.

Sand wrapped a protective arm around her. “Then your new life begins now, sweet sunrise.”

Sylvié leaned against her lover, enjoying the warmth of her embrace. “Sunrise… I love that nickname… It truly is a new dawn for me...”

Nancy left them have their moment, and kissed Clinton on the cheek. “Hope you don’t mind watching the horses.”

He shrugged. “The Van der Laar estate is an all-women paradise. I’d stick out like a sore thumb. Just promise me you’ll be careful. I heard the rumors. Those girls are ready to fight tooth and nail to protect their safe haven. Last time outlaws tried to raid this place and kidnap some women, they cut off their balls and left them to bleed out. I don’t think they’ll be much more merciful with female intruders.”

“Got it.” Nancy took a step forward. “Let’s go girls. Hopefully, our journey ends here… with enough proof to buy DeBeers a nice trip to the nearest prison.”

10:25am

A group of guards were stationed at the front gate of the Van der Laar estate. Sadly, they were too numerous and in open view, so attacking them was too risky. Still, Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié remained hidden in a hollow nearby for a short while, listening to their conversation and trying to assess the estate’s defenses.

Soon, they were rewarded by a useful piece of information when an overseer wearing a bright red scarf came from the inside of the estate to have a chat with the guards.

“Hey! Have you seen the three newest recruits?” she asked.

One sentry snorted. “Alice, Josephine, and Jenny? Yeah! The blonde looks hornier than a jackrabbit, the brunette has this weird accent, and the redhead is a true circus freak with her knives.”

“Bunch of weirdos… Elizabeth is really hiring the first comers lately…” an other guard complained. “As long as you’re a woman and you look for a roof, she’ll take you in…”

“Thank God Victoria has the common sense to hire enough competent gunslingers to make up for it! Can you imagine if she wasn’t here? An estate full of women. All the horny outlaws of the country would come to raid us!”

“I’d like to see them try, after what we did to the last ones…” one sentry said with a harsh grin. “Those bastards won’t rape any more women...”

“Where are the three freaks anyway?” another sentry asked the overseer.

“I didn't want to have them around me. Told them to watch the old stable yard. You know, the one we don’t use anymore.”

The sentries shared a chuckle together.

Nancy, Sylvié, and Sand also shared a smile – though for a different reason.

“I propose we pay a visit to these new recruits, ask them if they can help us be hired…” Nancy said.

Sand glanced at the oblivious sentries still laughing together. “And these morons think they’re being smart… But who’s the dumbest? The novice or the professional who leaves the novice on their own?”

Van der Laar Estate Stable Yard, 10:32am

Coming to the small stable yard, taking cover behind a rickety outbuilding Nancy spied the three novice female gunhands who were supposed to watch the area.

One was a pretty and slim-looking green-eyed white-skinned brunette of average size, with her hair tied into a loose bun. She was wearing a white stetson, blue flannel shirt and black long skirt with matching booties. She was leaning nonchalantly against a row of crates, looking very bored. From the conversation she had heard, Nancy assumed she was Josephine.

Another, an attractive blue-eyed strawberry blonde with a curvaceous body and a short ponytail was standing guard near a barrel, but was also regularly throwing the brunette looks of longing. She was wearing a green shirt, brown stetson and jeans with matching chaps and cowboy boots. Nancy supposed she was Alice.

The last was an athletic-looking round-faced redhead with a fit body, a lot of freckles on the cheeks and nose, greenish brown eyes, and wild curly red hair which she had tied into a loose long ponytail. She was wearing a black hat, a red button up shirt, and black jeans with a matching waistcoat and boots. She was busy training at knife throwing while her two partners watched the area. Nancy assumed she was Jenny.

All girls were armed with Colt 1851 Revolvers. Nancy also noticed one peculiar detail: All three gunhands were wearing around the neck a white scarf with the crest of the Van der Laar estate stitched onto it – a stylized ‘V’ in golden yellow threads.

Nancy turned to Sand and Sylvié, the two lovebirds.

"Right, those girls must be the new recruits and they have the clothes we need, thoughts?"

“I notice there’s no shortage of ropes to accommodate for those three ladies…” Sand noted as she saw coils of them hanging nearby. “We just need a way to pick them off one by one. The blonde will be our main obstacle. She’s the only vigilant one. The redhead’s busy with her knives, and the brunette’s already bored out of her mind.”

“I could use my coin.”

“I also have this.” Sylvié showed them a couple of small vials.

“What’s this? Some kind of weapon?”

“Close. Eleanor’s favorite brand of perfume. Can make someone sneeze worse than hayfever.” Peering around the corner, Sylvié smiled while looking at the brown-haired sentry. "The brunette is my size, I can use my perfume vials to distract her admirer while my adorable Sand..." she paused squeezing her lover's hand "...pulls her over the crates and I take her clothes. Using my disguise, I can lure Blondie into an ambush so Sand can steal her clothes. Finally, the redhead I can chat up buying you, Nancy, the time you need to put her to sleep and strip her down."

Sand grinned, kissing her French lover on the cheek.

“And here I thought my Clinton came up with the best plans but Sylvié, that's just sweet. " Nancy clapped her hands together. "Let’s get to it."

Peeling off to the right, Sand and Sylvié came to the stack of crates the brunette was leaning against. Taking her position just below the unsuspecting guard, Sand gave the signal for Sylvié to toss her vial at the furthest blonde guard. Hearing Alice sneeze, Sand quickly grabbed the brunette, clamping a hand over mouth pulling her over the boxes. Letting out a surprised squeak, Josephine barely had time to react as the Navajo punched her twice in the temple. She slumped unconscious onto the ground with a muffled grunt.

After sharing a quick passionate kiss with her lover while the defeated gunhand was lying at their feet, Sylvié quickly stripped out of her clothes before Sand helped her undress the sleeping brunette. She pulled off the booties and skirt while Sand dealt with the flannel shirt.

"This is all very exhilarating! It feels good to be the one stealing the clothes for once." she whispered excitedly as she got dressed in her stolen clothes.

She copied the brunette’s bun – though she did it with her own hair pins.

The former maid left Sand to bind and gag the unconscious Josephine with stolen ropes and a few strips of Sylvié’s former outfit. The gunhand was left clad only in a cream white lace vest and blue lace knickers – as Sylvié didn’t want to strip her girls naked.

Sylvié used the stetson to obscure her facial features, and walked over to the blonde who looked both pleased and shy, since the object of her affection was walking over.

"Why hello, beautiful." Sylvié said, fluttering her eyelashes the blonde’s way. "I've seen the way you look at me. Do you like what you see?" She seductively smiled stroking the woman's forearm.

The blonde – Alice – blushed all shades of red. “Was… Was it so obvious? S- Sorry Jo'… I- I didn’t want to… be creepy… It’s just… I didn't have the guts to approach you… I- I didn’t think you liked… you know… girls…”

Even then, she didn’t dare look at (the fake) Josephine’s face. Of course, Sylvié wasn’t complaining – it was making her deception easier. But the blonde was so shy and self-conscious, Sylvié couldn’t help but find her adorable. Platonically, of course. “Oh, you’re so cute, chérie…” She figured out maybe she could do something to bring Alice closer to her crush, to make up for the fact she was about to get knocked out and stripped naked...

Alice bit her lower lip, and looked at her boots. She was shifting nervously on her feet. "Wow, that accent… You’re from France? I- I thought it was Quebec… That’s why the others called you Frenchie…?"

Sylvié caressed the blonde’s heart-shaped features. "I'll wager there is more you don't know about little old me. How about we go somewhere more private and I can show you, pretty thing?"

The girl smiled, her big blue eyes glimmering with hope. "Ohh, lead the way sweetheart."

Leading the unsuspecting girl to her doom right where Sand was waiting, Sylvié smiled.

"Right here behind these boxes?" the blonde said disappointed. "I thought you meant behind the s-mmmph!"

As soon as they reached the row of crates, Sand clamped a hand around her mouth pulling her around the corner. Snaking her arm around the blonde’s slender neck, Sand squeezed cutting off the blood flow to the woman's brain.

"Sorry ma cherie, but I like my women more exotic." Sylvié quipped as she felt her tits perk up at the slight of the struggling blonde's eyes rolling back into her skull while her Indian lover was putting her to sleep. “But maybe I can help you get to know the girl of your dreams…” The blonde let out a cute sigh and slumped unconscious into Sand’s arms.

Dropping the sleeping blonde, Sylvié and Sand passionately kissed over her unconscious body.

The lovers then worked together to strip their second victim – including her peach satin shorts and white undershirt.

“You sure you’re fine with that?” Sand asked.

Sylvié nodded. “I trust you.” She took a glance at the unconscious underwear-clad Josephine concealed and trussed up in the empty stable nearby, and only clad in her undies. “Besides, I’d wager she will find a way to make the most of her predicament...”

Sand was soon dressed in the blonde’s clothes, having tied up and gagged the former (and now naked) owner. Sylvié asked her to leave Alice slumped shoulder to shoulder with Josephine – and although she didn’t see the point, she still complied. The blonde’s buoyant full breasts with dark pink puffy areolas and full womanhood topped with a triangle of blonde fuzz were on display.

With their disguises in place, the couple approached the redhead who was still busy throwing knives on a target. She was so engrossed by her practice, she hadn’t even noticed yet her two partners were gone.

Sharing a glance with Nancy who was discreetly approaching nearby, Sylvié and Sand baited the trap.

Sylvié cleared her throat. "What a fine morning it is, no?"

The redhead – Jenny – turned, and frowned. "Hello. Uh… Have we met? Where are Josephine and Alice?”

“We’ve spotted them behind those crates.” Sylvié winked. “They’re not wearing much clothes anymore if you catch my drift.”

“Not surprising. I’ve seen how Alice was looking at Jo’. Didn’t think she’d have the guts though. Good for her I guess.” the redhead said with a shrug. “Are you new hires too? Looks like they sent you here with us. Even gave you similar clothes. Must be some kind of hazing ritual…"

Sylvié nodded. "Oui, oui. I'm from the beautiful country of France and my friend here is from Mexico." Sand flashed her a smile.

Jenny nodded. "Sounds exotic. I've never been to France, what's it like?"

Sylvié looked the woman up and down, suggestively. "Well, it certainly doesn't have many pretty redheads like you around."

Jenny’s round freckled face blushed the same shade as her hair. "Really? Oh you, you're too swe-ugh!!" She cried as Nancy struck her on the back of the head with her revolver, and fell onto the ground with a dull thud.

"Well, well Sylvié. Aren't you full of surprises! Nice work!" Nancy winked, impressed, as she knelt by the redhead, rolling the unconscious girl onto her back before unbuttoning her blouse.

Giggling, Sylvié hugged Sand. "Glad to be of service, ma cherie "

While Nancy pulled off the redhead’s hat, waistcoat, shirt, boots, belt and trousers, the lovebirds fetched two more coils of ropes. They proposed to bind and gag the woman while Nancy got dressed in her new disguise.

Of course, the process was greatly turning them on. Sylvié gagged the girl with strips of clothes, Sand bound the redhead’s ankles with ropes, and then Sylvié didn’t resist the temptation to pull her lover into one passionate kiss. They hadn’t even finished binding the wrists…

As she finished putting on the shirt and waistcoat, Nancy rolled her eyes indulgently. She realized they wouldn’t stop making out immediately. Therefore, once she was in disguise, she finished binding Jenny’s wrists with rope, grabbed the gunhand under the shoulders, and dragged the scantily-clad bound and gagged woman – now dressed only in a blue chemise and matching underdrawers – behind the crates. She dropped Jenny in the empty stable next to Alice and Josephine, and closed it to conceal the trio. Then she came back dusting her hands.

By that time, Sylvié and Sand had finished making out.

"Well my sweet Clinton couldn't have planned that better himself, ladies." Nancy said. "Let's do this. We have an estate to visit."

They all wrapped two small coils of ropes around a shoulder, reasoning that nobody would question a trio of gunhands carrying some ropes – and they expected these would be of use.

Van der Laar Estate Grounds, 10:46am

Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié were playing the part of the patrolling sentries, walking in plain sight in-between the fields and the warehouses with their hands on their Colts. They were however careful to make sure nobody got a good look at their faces, discreetly using their hats and scarves to obscure their faces. The workers in the fields and other sentries were too busy to talk to them – or even do more than give them a passing glance.

The estate was as Brett had described. Vast, prosperous, and filled to the brim with women. The workers were women, the overseers were women, even all the guards were women. Happy-looking women, who took joy in being allowed to earn their own salaries, dress like men if they wished so, and live an independent lifestyle.

Nancy admitted to herself she was a bit admiring of the idea. A shame this place was most likely used to hide illegal activities, at least Brett suspected it, but she knew most of these girls were in the dark about that. Hopefully, she could expose Victoria and DeBeers without having to dismantle this safe haven...

Sand was, as always, a bit more practical. She was quick to notice an odd detail about the guards. While there wasn’t a clear-cut uniform, she clearly deduced there was a strict hierarchy.

Workers talking with sentries wearing white scarves were acting informal – not disrespectful, but clearly speaking familiarly. On the other hand, they’d speak differently with the girls who wore black or red scarves, treating them like their supervisors.

“There seems to be some sort of dress code.” Sand discreetly mentioned another trio of women who were patrolling in open view, walking with an aura of confidence and authority. “Those guards look more important than the three we mugged, and they’re not wearing the same scarves.”

Nancy nodded, having come to the same conclusion. “I’d wager the white scarves mean we’re the lowest rank. People who aren’t allowed in the important parts like the main manor without a good reason.” She smiled. “I believe it’s time for a promotion.”

Sand assessed the three patrolling women. The first was a Mexican with a passing resemblance to her, the second was a slim redhead like Nancy, and the third was a cute brunette who looked a bit like Sylvié.

Nancy shook her head. “Not these ones. They’re too exposed. A bit of a shame, they’d have been perfect fits, but we need to find a place that’s a bit more discreet.”

**************

There was a river and small lake in the estate, they were used to water many fields. The biggest ones were used to grow cotton. A few sentries were scattered around to watch them.

Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié found something of interest at the southern edge of the cotton fields, near a wooden shed and a small wooden gantry.

The two sentries were wearing red ponchos and black Stetson hats. One was standing near the shed. She was a slim blonde, most likely with some Northern European ancestry – white skin, icy blue eyes, and light blond hair. The other one was standing on the gantry. She was of Mexican ancestry, with her sepia skin tone, coarse black hair tied into a long braid, dark brown eyes, and oval-shaped head. They were armed with rifles.

The blond “poncho” wore dark blue jeans, a beige fringe top rodeo shirt, and dark brown boots. The black-haired one was clad in brown trousers, a red guayabera shirt, and light brown boots. Around their necks, there were black scarves with the crest of the estate, to show they were high-ranked guards – albeit not as high as the overseers wearing red scarves.

Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié pretended to be busy with a nearby fence, and discreetly peered at their targets.

“These two are in each other’s line of sight. We can’t take one out as long as the other watches her.”

Sylvié nodded. “Let me try something.”

She walked to the blond one, emphasizing the movement of her hips. “Hey, good-looking-”

“No flirting while on duty.” the blond ‘poncho’ interrupted her, gently but firmly. “I’m sure you have some work to do, greenhorn. And if you don’t, I can find some.”

“On my way!”

Sylvié left as swiftly as she had come.

She returned to her two friends.

“Tough customer.”

“You can’t always win…” Nancy joked. She looked at Sand. “Let’s do it the old fashioned way.”

“Together?”

“Synchronized takeouts.”

“Got it.”

Sand used the cover of the cotton fields to approach the blond “poncho” without being noticed by the black-haired one. She was walking crouched down to hide in-between the plants.

At the same time, Nancy walked behind a fence, and then went under the gantry to approach the Mexican guard without being seen by the blonde.

Sand took position behind the small wooden shed on which the blond “poncho” was leaning.

Nancy threw her lucky coin. Intrigued by the sound, the Mexican girl turned her head. Nancy climbed onto the gantry, using the railing to not be seen by the blond guard, and swiftly flanked the black-haired ‘poncho’.

The two friends shared a quick nod.

Of course, the blond sentry noticed Nancy’s head suddenly peaking above the railing.

But it was too late now.

Nancy and Sand moved in perfect synchronization.

Sand wrapped snake-like arms around the blond sentry’s throat and neck and squeezed. The gunslinger tried to scream, but her cries of alarm were silenced by the sleeper-hold. She passed out. Sand dragged her out of sight in-between the shed and the cotton fields.

At the same time, from behind, Nancy clamped one hand onto the black-haired sentry’s mouth to muffle her shriek, and hit her with the cross of her revolver to knock her out. The sepia-skinned woman groaned, then her body went limp. She was out like a light.

Nancy and Sand laid the two unconscious bodies down, and crouched next to them to strip the gunslingers off their clothes.

With the black-haired Mexican sentry, Nancy stopped once the woman was down to her pair of white knickers with a floral motif, and light pink sleeveless top with white fringes.

Sand also took off the blonde’s peach colored satin half-chemise and matching drawers, exposing the woman's small but well rounded breasts with stiff pink rose petal areolas, full trimmed woman decorated with a strip of blonde fuzz and pert plum shaped buttocks to the Louisiana sun.

Nancy and Sand used their white neckscarfs as gags, knotting them behind the unconscious women’s heads. They didn’t bother to cut their former outfits into strips – they had carried ropes for this exact purpose. They bound each woman’s wrists and ankles.

Sand dragged the naked bound-and-gagged sentry inside the small shed she had been standing nearby, and stashed her there. Nancy dragged the Mexican “poncho”, and rolled her into some bushes under the gantry.

Then, they took off Alice’s and Jenny’s clothes to slip into the high-ranked guards' clothes and ponchos – and, most importantly, the black scarves. They concealed their current outfits in the cotton fields.

Once they were done, they regrouped with their third teammate.

Sylvié looked at Sand appreciatively. She playfully fidgeted with the neckscarf. “Black suits you better.”

Sand giggled.

“Van der Laar manor, here we come!” Nancy announced, while adjusting her poncho and scarf.

Van der Laar Estate, 10:58 am

The estate’s main mansion was your typical Southern manor. It probably used to belong to a slave owner. All the employees were now free women, but the architecture remained untouched.

The front court was a bit crowded, so Nancy opted to enter through the huge back garden. After observing the area, she was, however, not fully satisfied with their current disguises.

“We could use our outfits to enter the manor, but I think if we come across someone they would ask too many questions. Armed guards would need a reason to get in the building…”

Nancy scanned the gardens. When she spotted the lone maid taking a break on a bench under a grove of trees and enjoying the warm day, she smiled.

“Maids can come and leave the manor as they wish… And if one needs to do some heavy lifting, I’m sure she asks a few guards to help her…”

Sylvié sighed. “Talk about a tailor-made role… Okay. Leave that one to me.” She glanced at Sand. “And my sweet love.”

Nancy chuckled. “Okay. I’ll make sure the coast is clear.”

Sand took the lead, leading Sylvié behind the flower bushes of the garden. “Follow my steps.” She instructed her lover.

She walked crouched down, to make sure the bushes were concealing her presence. Sylvié followed her as best as she could.

They reached the bench in which the maid was sitting. She was a cute girl in her early twenties – probably around the same age as Sand and Sylvié themselves. Her curly auburn hair was tied into an elegant neck chignon. She was of average-size, with a cute heart-shaped face, a soft white skin, and a small pointy nose. The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her.

Sand timed her assault perfectly. She wrapped an arm under the woman’s breasts, clamped a hand onto her mouth, and pulled her into the bushes.

The auburn-haired maid’s gorgeous blue-green eyes briefly opened in fright.

“Mhhhttt?!”

Sand let herself fall into a seated position, dragging the girl with her, and wrapped her legs around the maid’s waist to immobilize her. One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep.

Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing.

“Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll.

The young Navajo rolled the limp unconscious body on the stomach, got back on her feet, and removed the maid’s bonnet and booties.

"Ah, Ma cherie! I do so love it when you are so business-like with our victims. It gets my French blood boiling!" Sylvié said as she kissed the young Navajo’s neck, before stripping off her own clothes, starting with the boots. “I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.”

Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”

“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.” Sylvié took off her white neckscarf. "Um, Sand my love?"

Sand looked up. "Yes, my sweet sunrise?" she asked, unbuttoning the maid’s dress at the same time.

"Just don't give me her underwear, I'm already wearing some."

Sand chuckled. "Now you sound like Nancy but anything for you." she teased.

“So obliging…” Sylvié giggled as she unclipped the belt of her trousers.

Sand pulled off the maid dress, leaving the auburn-haired young woman clad in a light pink knee-long underdress. This finely-crafted slip was adorned with white lace, and had shoulder straps. “You want her hair pins?”

Sylvié dropped her trousers, and walked out of them. “Let her keep them. She obviously put a lot of work in her haircut, and it looks good on her. Plus, I already have mine.”

As Sand grabbed the white neckscarf and ropes still tied on the belt of Sylvié’s discarded trousers, she also briefly caressed and groped the French girl’s butt, feeling her skin through her thin undergarments. Sylvié giggled, and kept unbuttoning her shirt.

Sand used the white neckscarf to gag the auburn-haired maid – the piece of cloth would be thick enough to silence her. She bound the girl’s wrists and legs with the ropes.

Having fully stripped to her underwear, Sylvié sighed when she grabbed the dress. “Uh… Servant outfit…”

“Feeling nostalgic?”

“Absolutely not! I’d rather die than change Eleanor’s chamber pot again!” Sylvié began putting on the maid dress. “Plus you have to act all obedient and meek…” She tied the apron and put on the bonnet, before slipping into the booties.

Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes. They shared a nod and a smile with Nancy, then headed to the main building.

Van der Laar Estate, First Floor, 11:06 am

The inside of the Van der Laar manor was luxurious, but surprisingly decorated with taste. Clearly this wasn’t the house of a pompous “nouveau riche” feeling the need to flaunt their wealth.

It was also quite empty. They heard a maid and a field worker in the kitchen discussing how “Harold left to tend to the outer fences.” and “You know what that means…”, but that was it. No guard, no small army of servants. Whoever lived here was only employing the barest minimum of staff.

Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié didn’t waste time with the ground floor. They immediately went to the bedrooms on the first floor.

In the main corridor, Nancy noticed a framed picture on a table. On the left, there was Victoria – looking as haughty and proud as ever in her bounty hunter clothes. On the right, a woman slightly younger and chubbier but with a family resemblance, clad in a humble-looking dress. In the middle, three children – one boy and two girls.

Strangely, there was no sign of the husband. In fact, many pictures featured the children and this unknown relative of Victoria.

Sylvié walked next to Nancy. “You’re alright?”

“I’m fine.”

Nancy turned the photo away. She didn’t want to think of Victoria’s family life.

Sand checked the nearby door. “This one leads to Victoria’s room.”

“Maybe we hit the jackpot…”

They entered a typical bedroom of a fancy manor – large two-persons bed, big wardrobe, small desk, trinkets and baubles. In a corner, there was a baby crib. The floor and furniture were however all covered by a layer of dust.

Sylvié was a bit confused. “Does she sleep on the couch when she visits or what?” She searched the desk, and quickly found out there was nothing here. Sand also did the same with the wardrobe, with the same result.

Nancy glared at the crib. Inside there were baby clothes, neatly folded and never worn. But also covered with dust.

“Let’s leave.” Nancy decided. “This room unnerves me.”

Once outside, she took one long breath. She couldn’t help but clutch her own belly – her own baby.

Sylvié exchanged a look with Sand, then asked: “You’re… sure you’re alright?”

“I’m fine, I said!” Her retort was snappier than she wished. “Sorry. It’s just… some thoughts.”

“Let’s check the office room.” Sand proposed.

Nancy nodded.

11:14am

When Nancy discreetly opened the door, she saw there was already someone in the office room, checking some account books and letters while standing next to the desk.

The woman was wearing a plain-looking dress, and her hair were tied into a functional neck chignon, but Nancy recognized that inimitable hair color – in-between dark blond and light brown.

She put her index on her lips, urging her friends to remain quiet. Her foe’s back was turned on her – she moved silently inside, followed by Sand and Sylvié.

Nancy grabbed the woman from behind, and clamped her hand on her mouth. A part of her wanted to slit Victoria's throat, and be done with it, and to hell with Brett’s words.

However, she stopped her hand when she noticed something odd. The woman shared Victoria's peculiar hair color, but her face was rounder, and she had the wide hips of a woman who had given birth to several children. Plus, her muffled cries were a clear giveaway she was not a battle-hardened gunslinger.

"You're not Victoria." Nancy whispered.

The woman nodded frantically.

"I'll take off my hand. Scream, and I will slit your throat."

Another nod.

Sand closed the door as a safety precaution. While Nancy interrogated the woman, Sylvié went to read the account books and letters on the desk.

"Who are you?"

"Her sister... Elizabeth... Please... My children are in the next room… I’ll tell you where the money is… Please..."

Nancy finally recognized her. The woman in the pictures. She softened her grip ever so slightly. "I'm not going to hurt you if you don't scream. And I certainly won't hurt them. I just want information. What's going on here? Where's Victoria?"

"Vicky owns the estate, but she doesn't care about running it. She put my husband in charge."

"This seems needlessly convoluted. Even for white folks." Sand intervened. She moved close enough to enter Elizabeth’s personal space – her behavior was clearly threatening. “You’re hiding something.”

“N- No…”

“Of course you are. You’re from the same seed as Victoria. Deceit is in your blood.”

Nancy frowned. She found that her friend was unusually aggressive – as if she was somehow taking things personally. “Sand?”

The Navajo didn’t hear her. “Maybe we should bring your children here. Maybe that would convince you to tell us the truth.”

“Sand! You’re out of line!” Nancy interrupted her.

Her friend was briefly taken aback.

“I’ll handle it.” Nancy added.

“… Okay.”

"Victoria killed her husband." Nancy then said to Elizabeth, remembering Brett’s information. "Why wouldn't she want his estate?"

The other woman gulped, eyed Sand with a frightened expression, then confessed: "She doesn't want his estate. She wants revenge. She wants to make sure his bloodline disappears and his ancestral lands go to someone else."

"Why?"

"Because Vaclav was... He was…"

"Was what?"

"He was the worst piece of shit that ever lived!" Elizabeth finally blurted with a hate-filled sneer. And for one second, Nancy could see a bit of Victoria in her. "He beat her! He beat her, and broke her nose! Called her sinful... One day, when I was visiting them alone, he... he grabbed the brand... the brand for livestock... in the chimney... and he... Oh God... I still remember the smell... We told our parents... They said she had to take it for the family... The minister said she had to submit to God's law... And the sheriff said... said... Vaclav was an upstanding citizen and Victoria should know her place..." She was beginning to get hysterical. It was clear she had had those feelings on her conscience for years without being able to express them to someone. “And when Vicky was pregnant, he- he- he- Oh God! He kicked her in the stomach… And the baby…”

"You really should just knock her out, Nancy." Sand commented as Elizabeth was getting even more hysterical,

Nancy hesitated for a moment. "Damn it Sand, I won't hit a moth- What the hell?! Sand!" She cried as Sand ended Elizabeth's hysterics with a sharp blow to her temple. The woman let out a surprised cry as she collapsed unconscious in Nancy’s arms.

“What? She barely felt anything." Sand shrugged. "You were going to do that anyway, right?"

Nancy gently laid Elizabeth onto the carpet, and checked her vitals. Outside of a bruise, she’d be fine. “I didn’t want it to come to that.”

“I’m pretty sure we don’t need her to search the desk.” Sand objected.

“That’s not the only reason.” Nancy looked her friend in the eyes. “What’s gotten into you all of a sudden? Judging someone you’ve never met? It’s not like you to make things so personal with a woman you barely know. Or to involve children.”

Sand briefly looked hesitant, as if she was only now realizing the full weight of her behavior. “I- She- Mother-”

“There’s nothing.” Sylvié intervened.

Sand and Nancy blinked.

“What?”

“There’s nothing illegal. All the incomes are legitimate.”

Nancy saw red. “Bastard! It’s another trick of his! He mounts this highly unusual and suspicious operation, only to keep it completely legal! Not only did we waste time, but now he’ll make us look like robbers!”

“Maybe this was not a complete waste of time…” Sylvié objected. She showed her a letter.

Nancy grabbed it. “Maximilian is hosting a huge gala at his… ‘Chateau’?” She rolled her eyes. “And… Oh! He sent Victoria the whole program. Well, well, well… It appears Maximilian is looking for a bride, so all the eligible girls of the State will travel to his estate... Looks like we have a second shot!” She memorized everything, then gave Sylvié the letter back. “Put it back where you’ve found it, make it look like we didn’t touch it.”

The French woman nodded.

Nancy looked at Sand. The Navajo was testing the strength of the curtains. “We should use those to bind and gag her. She’ll wake up soon.” She was once again being her pragmatic self – acting as if her previous outburst hadn’t happened.

Nancy chose to wait until the mission was over to have a talk with her friend. She contemplated the proposition. She didn’t find the idea appealing, but at the same time she couldn’t risk Elizabeth calling the guards – she wanted to avoid a bloodbath. Leaving her bound, gagged, and concealed in a cupboard was the best compromise.

Suddenly they heard the sound of footsteps and voices coming from beyond the door and getting closer.

"Shit! Sylvié, over here!" Nancy swore, taking Sand’s hand and darting into the nearest cupboard. Sylvié ran after her, and closed the door behind them. Just in time.

Victoria theatrically entered the room, with a group of the estate’s gunwomen escorting her.

“Hello Lizzie! Your favorite sister is here!” she exclaimed with wide open arms.

Nancy grabbed her gun, but muttered a curse to herself when she noticed Victoria was surrounded by three children – the oldest no more than ten or eleven – who all shared a strong family look with her and Elizabeth.

“You’re her only sister, Aunt Vicky.” the middle girl – a cute eight-year old who was holding the hand of her five-year-old sister – commented.

Victoria affectionately ruffled her hair. “That makes me the winner by default. I-”

Of course, Victoria cursed when she saw her unconscious sister lying on the floor.

“Blasted bitches! They came in here! Mary, take the girls and search the estate! I’ll protect the kids!”

“Got it boss.”

As they were leaving, Victoria stayed with Elizabeth and the children. She calmed the kids who had rushed to their mother with a few gentle words, then shook her sister to wake her up.

“What happened?!”

Elizabeth groaned and put a hand on her head. “No- Nothing… I fainted…”

Victoria grabbed her sister’s shoulders. “Don’t lie to me, Lizzie! Tell me where they are! I’ll blast their brains out!”

“Stop it…”

“Tell me!”

Elizabeth glared at her with a mixture of pain and defiance. “It’s YOUR FAULT, Vicky! YOURS! They came here because of you! They hurt me because of you! This is my life now because of YOU!”

“How- can you say it like it’s a bad life?! I gave you the most profitable estate in Louisiana! I gave you more money than you could ever dare hope for!”

“You gave me a cage! I was happy – just Harold, the kids, and I! And also you, had you wanted to stay with us! But you couldn’t understand that! That we could be poor and happy!”

“Poor AND happy? You could barely scrape a living! Was I just supposed to watch you be thrown into the streets once Harold couldn’t pay your rent?! Don’t you dare tell me the kids were better off with-”

The sisters stopped arguing when they noticed Elizabeth’s two young girls were beginning to sob.

Elizabeth hugged the kids to console them.

Victoria pinched the bridge of her nose. “Later… Not in front of the children… These bitches can be hiding anywhere… but they can’t have gone too far… They could even be...” Her eyes widened in understanding. She noticed the cupboard. “… in this very room…”

She was as fast at the draw as Nancy remembered. She grabbed her gun just as Nancy and Sand jumped out of the cupboard, their guns already at hand.

The children screamed. Elizabeth took all three of them in her arms and held them close to her. Victoria moved in front of her family to shield them with her body. She didn’t shoot however. She knew she wasn’t fast enough to defeat Nancy and Sand together, and she was afraid her family could get caught in the crossfire.

Nancy’s and Victoria’s eyes met.

The bounty hunter snarled, her gun aimed at Nancy’s forehead while both Nancy’s and Sand’s were aimed at hers. “So this is it? One final round?”

“In front of the children?” Nancy retorted. “I don’t think so. Drop your gun, and I promise we won’t shoot you. And next time we meet, we’ll pretend this never happened and we’ll kill each other as much as we like.”

Victoria’s right eye twitched.

Elizabeth lost it. “For the love of God Vicky, do it for them!” Her children were crying.

Victoria’s knuckles were white, and her hand shook ever so slightly. An ugly grimace twisted her lips, and in her eyes Nancy saw a mixture of hatred and defiance... But also fear – though not for herself. For the children. For her sister. Nancy remembered the many pictures in the estate – almost all were showing the kids and Elizabeth.

“Lizzie. Take the kids away from me.”

Then Victoria threw her gun away. Sand swiftly moved to kick it out of her reach.

“Satisfied?” Victoria glared defiantly at Nancy.

“In a way, yes.” Nancy answered in all honesty. Victoria was willing to sacrifice her life for her family – she’d give her that.

Nancy kept her gun in hand, but stopped aiming it directly at the bounty hunter. Victoria looked briefly dumbfounded by her choice to spare her, but she didn’t comment on that.

“But your master will be displeased.” Nancy added.

“I only ever had one master. I watched him choke in his own blood, on the very carpet you’re standing on.”

“Keep telling yourself that. You just have a leash of money now. Pretty it up however you like, Victoria. You're still the loyal lapdog feeding off scraps from Maximilian's table."

Victoria's eye twitched again.

"What's the matter, bitch? Cat got your tongue? Let's face it, at heart you’re just another outlaw – one with a fancier title is all. And you know what this means...?" She took out her sheriff's badge. "...that I will put you away or down just like any other outlaw." She gestured with her head to Elizabeth huddled with her children close. "They deserve better than you."

That made Victoria find her tongue. She opened her mouth. “You think a greenhorn like you can teach me life?! I-”

Sand punched her in the stomach with a mean hook before she could add anything, then she knocked her out by striking her on the back of the head with her revolver’s cross. Victoria fell onto the carpet with a dull thud. She was out cold.

Elizabeth squeaked. “Vicky!”

Nancy glared at her friend. “I hope this won’t become a habit.” she dryly commented.

“What? She would have called the guards on us. Besides, I didn’t shoot her.”

“You’re right. I wish I had thought of it first.”

“You used one hit too many.” Sylvié teased her playfully.

“Because she insulted you in Baton Rouge.”

Nancy turned towards Elizabeth.

The latter cowered again with her children, shielding them with her body. “The- The safe is behind the flower painting…”

Nancy holstered her gun to put her at ease. “Listen, we won’t hurt you or your children, nor do we want your money. And we’ll leave your sister like that. Just give us your key. We’ll lock you in the room, and be on our way. We don’t want to shoot the guards of the estate.”

Elizabeth handed it to her. “V- Vicky has a spare…”

Sand quickly searched the unconscious bounty hunter.

Nancy nodded. “Thank you. I’m sorry I threatened you… and my friend punched you. She can be very straight-to-the-point.”

Elizabeth was staring at her with a mixture of confusion and wariness. “Y- You truly are a sheriff?”

“You don’t seem much surprised.”

“I know… the kind of things Vicky does for DeBeers… I tried convincing her to stop but she… she never listens… She always wants more money… for her… for- for us… she never has enough… I tell her I don’t need all that, but she…” Elizabeth couldn’t finish her sentence.

Sand found the other set of keys. Nancy nodded at her, and walked to the door. She glanced at Elizabeth before she locked the door. “Take care of your sister. She doesn’t know how lucky she is to have you.”

Van der Laar Estate, Stables, 11:27am

Nancy, Sand, and Sylvié left the manor through the garden, and hurried to the stables of the estate. Nancy trusted Elizabeth wouldn’t try to go after them or call the guards – she suspected she’d stay with her children and her sister. But she knew Victoria would give chase after them the second she woke up and managed to break the door.

Luckily for them, the stables themselves weren’t guarded – they were in the middle of the estate. A few mounts were waiting, already saddled.

Sand glanced at Sylvié. “We could use those horses, but with your dress…”

“Maybe there are spare outfits in one stable?” Nancy proposed.

A female voice suddenly shouted in their backs. “Hey! What are you slackers doing here?!”

The newcomer was a gunslinger of the estate – a high-ranked one given her authoritative attitude. The woman was in her thirties, with a diamond-shaped face, black hair tied into a ponytail, an olive-colored tanned skin, and brown eyes. She was wearing sturdy brown boots, white trousers, a brown belt with a revolver holster, a plated red and black button up shirt, and a black-and-white waistcoat made of cow skin. A red scarf was tied around her neck.

They recognized the overseer they had observed at the gates. The one who had foolishly left Alice, Josephine, and Jenny on their own.

“Spare outfit found.” Sylvié commented with a small purr and a smile.

“I asked you a question! Who the hell are you guys? I have never seen you around!”

Nancy grabbed the overseer by the collar. “So nice of you to drop by.”

“Hey!”

The black-haired woman stopped talking when Nancy inserted the muzzle of her revolver in her mouth.

“Uh-uh?”

“Ah, much better.” She looked the woman in the eyes. “Now, let’s not make any hasty decisions or sudden moves. Wouldn’t want me to accidentally press the trigger?”

“Nuh-uh.” the overseer moaned.

“Good to see we’re both reasonable people. My friend here needs a change of outfit, and we’re in a bit of a hurry. We would be very grateful if you could just take your clothes off and give them to her.”

The nervous overseer was sweating. “Oh-khay…” she tried to say.

“So obliging…”

With shaky hands, the woman nervously removed her neckscarf, waistcoat, and shirt, kicked off her boots, unbelted her trousers, and dropped them onto the ground, stepping out of them. She was left clad in white underdrawers and a light grey chemise. The overseer was shaking slightly – she both feared for her life and feared she’d be asked to strip naked.

“Keep the rest.” Nancy said with a smile. “We haven’t thanked you properly by the way. It’s because of you we managed to sneak into the estate. Next time, maybe don’t leave the newbies on their own?”

The woman’s eyes widened.

Then Sand hit her on the back of the head with the cross of her revolver, knocking her out. Nancy caught the limp unconscious body, and laid her on the stomach. She and Sand grabbed two ropes on a hook in the stable to bind the overseer’s limbs, a thick scarf to gag her, and once the woman was restrained and silenced they dragged her in a nearby haystack to conceal her.

At the same time, Sylvié took off her servant outfit with a satisfied smile, and slipped into the overseer’s outfit.

“All set and ready to go.”

They each took one horse, and rode away.

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 7:07 am
by Stormtrooper1990
******* Epilogue *******

In a spare storage room of the Van der Laar Estate, Josephine and Alice were sitting on chairs – wrapped in blankets to protect their modesty. The mood was quite awkward. And not just because they had been found in a humiliating predicament and chewed out by the overseers for getting their outfits stolen – though that of course didn’t help.

No, the mood was awkward because both women were painfully aware the other one was either almost naked or completely naked under the blanket. Both women had also spent a couple of hours lying on each other with most (or all) of their clothes stolen (well, alongside with Jenny but she wasn't in the room at the moment). And both remembered their bare skins rubbing against each other as they were wriggling and trying to free themselves, or their moans for help in their gags which maybe at some point weren’t exactly moans for help anymore...

Josephine finally cleared out her throat. “Soooo… You fancy me…?”

Alice blushed all shades of red. “I- Was it so obvious?”

“I saw the looks you were giving me. And…” Josephine coughed awkwardly. “Your nipples were actually quite hard when we were tied together.”

Alice grimaced sheepishly. She didn’t look the brunette in the eyes. “Sorry… I guess there’s no point trying to deny it now… Just wish I had the guts to tell you directly… I won’t bother you anymore.”

“No no no!” Josephine moved her chair to get closer, and grabbed Alice’s hand. “Don’t feel shame! I know what it’s like…”

“You… do…?” Of course, the blonde’s face was now scarlet red.

The brunette nodded. "I have a type. I'm into blonde girls."

"B- Blonde... girls?"

“If there’s one good thing about being jumped by a bunch of intruders and stripped of your clothes… it’s that prudery feels a bit superfluous afterwards.” Josephine got closer, gently entering Alice’s personal space. “Because you wanna know a secret? From the second I had my eyes on you, I haven’t been able to take you off my mind. Call it a hunch.” She moved her lips next to Alice’s ear, and whispered: “Being bound with your naked body against mine… Our skins rubbing against each other… Feeling your nipples get hard because you were with me, hearing your moans... You have no idea how much it turned me on…”

Alice gulped nervously. “I wish Jenny hadn’t been with us. I’m pretty sure she tried to grope me, but I’m not into her.”

“Well, she’s not here now.” Josephine’s hand slowly made its way under Alice’s blanket. The blonde gasped when she felt it caress her thigh. "We have this room for ourselves..."

“Oh God… Please… don’t stop…” the other woman whispered, her mouth suddenly feeling very dry.

Josephine’s hand moved in-between Alice’s legs.

This time, the blonde shouted. “Oh God! YES!”

**************

“Girls! Girls!” Jenny burst into the room. “Heard there’ll be a punitive expedition! To go after the women who mugged us and-” The redhead interrupted herself when she noticed the blankets and Josephine’s underwear were scattered onto the floor. Said brunette and Alice were actually quite busy with their hands, lying on one of the discarded blankets. Jenny covered her eyes with her hands. “Oh dear! I didn’t see anything! I didn’t see anything!”

“Hey! Close- Close the door!” Josephine shouted in-between pants.

“Yeah! We’re not into a threesome!” a panting Alice added. “Scram!”

“God! For the last time, I was trying to loosen your ropes!” Jenny retorted, without taking her hands off her eyes.

“Give us five minutes-” Alice added.

“T-Ten.” Josephine interjected in-between pants.

“Ten minutes! And we’re gearing up for the hunt!”

**************

Victoria massaged her neck. She was still feeling sore. But she embraced the pain – pain was a great motivator, as her husband had discovered after he had pushed her too far.

“Mary. Gather as many girls as you can without putting the estate in danger.” she instructed her second-in-command.

“V- Vicky… I don’t think it’s a good idea…” Elizabeth intervened.

Victoria ignored her, and kept talking to the brown-haired gunslinger. “Make sure we have enough food and drink for two weeks of hunt.” She checked her pocket watch. “You have one hour.”

Mary saluted, and left.

“Vicky! For once, will you listen to me?”

“Lizzie. When Emily died, would you pretend you didn’t crave for more? You didn’t crave for the means to prevent that? You didn’t crave for MONEY?” Victoria’s voice was low.

Elizabeth bit her lower lip. “… Yes. Yes I did.” It had been a complicated birth – something that had taken her and Harold by surprise, since Samuel and Jane had been easy deliveries. Emily had been a frail baby, sadly taken out by sickness before she could reach her first year.

“When I read your letter that day… I realized my niece had been born and had died before I could even see her face…”

“It wasn’t your fault, Vicky! I- All the money you could’ve sent us wouldn’t have changed anything! Children die sometimes, Vicky... It’s horrible, but that’s how it is...”

“That’s how it is when you’re poor and weak! But I’m neither! And I certainly won’t let these little bitches get away with what they did to you! Or to me!”

“They spared us! They had us at their mercy, and they spared us!”

“They humiliated us! Bet they were very proud of themselves! Bet they’ll have a good fuck over how magnanimous they were! I’ll show them…”

“Vicky…”

“That’s how it works, Lizzie. That’s the real world. Ugly. Bitter. Cruel. When someone hurts you, you retaliate tenfold, to make sure they never dare lay a hand on you ever again. They spit at you? You cut out their tongue. They slap you? You cut off their hand! That’s how it works! I’ll-”

“For the love of God, Vicky, don’t go after them!” Elizabeth grabbed her sister’s arm. “Vicky! I have… I have a bad feeling… You won’t win this time!”

“Then it’s a win-win for you. Didn’t you say you hate being here? If I die, you get full ownership of the estate. You’ll be free to do whatever you please. Sell it, keep it… You’ll be free. Free and rich.” She removed her arm.

“I don’t want the estate Vicky. I want you.”

But Victoria wasn’t listening. Her mind was filled with old memories of a young wife, face and body bruised, tying a knot to hang herself after she had lost her baby because of one beating too many, and stopping at the last second when she noticed poisonous plants were growing at the bottom of the tree.

“I’ll show those little bitches… No one makes me weak… No one!”

**************

It had been a long day thought Nancy as she leaned against Clinton near the campfire, in a hollow next to a hill and with the horses tied to a tree nearby. The two of them had some privacy. Sand and Sylvié were off patrolling the area.

The adrenaline of the heist was wearing off. Now, Nancy was forced to sort out her thoughts and feelings on the revelations she had learned.

While they hadn't found anything of DeBeers’ illegal actions, they did more of Victoria from the mouth of her sister, who seemed in Nancy's eyes to be the more reasonable of the two siblings. Then the other revelation about Victoria's mistreatment at the hands of her husband…

Elizabeth hadn’t had much time to say everything, but Nancy was smart enough to put two and two together. She was a mother. She had seen how Victoria was sometimes clutching her stomach – no, not her stomach. Her womb. She had seen how the bounty huntress had become petty and vitriolic after Clinton had begged her to spare Nancy’s life for their unborn baby’s sake.

“Uncle Brett feared I’d learn something like that, but he didn’t have it in him to reveal her secret. And I don’t blame him. That’s not a thing I’d do to my worst enemy.”

"I knew Victoria had been married at some point and it wasn't the best of relationships but I never thought he had-” Clinton stopped himself, unable to say the word. “She sure kept that quiet." he then mused. “It feels strange… Ever since she refused to help me bust McClaine, I’ve hated her… I never thought I’d one day feel pity for her.” He chuckled sadly. “She’d hate it, you know?”

"You should have seen the bedroom, Clint. She hasn't moved on. The crib is still there. The baby clothes too, all neatly folded – as if the baby is supposed to come tomorrow.”

Clinton grimaced. “Her husband died a decade ago…”

The implication was not pleasant. “A decade spent stewing in her own bitterness.” Nancy found herself clutching her stomach. She hated how it made her look just like Victoria. “Clint. How do you think I’d act if someone killed our baby?”

He pulled her closer to him. “That’s an awful thought to have…”

“I think I wouldn’t be satisfied with just killing them. I’d hurt them. Hurt them with everything I have. And then I’d find a way to hurt them beyond death.”

She stared into Clinton's eyes.

“That’s what she does. She acts like this cheap stage performer to make sure she’s always the center of attention… And people see this improper woman who dresses like a man, fights like a man, spits like a man, swears like a man... She drags his name down in the mud... She keeps hoarding more and more money to make sure she’s always at the top of the food chain... Always the exact opposite of what he wanted her to be… of what he tried to shape her into... She takes control of his estate, and puts it in the hands of her family... It’s like she’s killing him a second time, day after day, over and over again.”

“I know you wouldn’t act like-”

“Don’t pretend you’ll know how I’d act! I don’t even know!” Nancy broke off of his embrace, and snapped at him. “You’re not carrying the baby. You don’t feel them grow inside you. But she knows it! And now I know too, and I’m afraid because I actually understand where she comes from…”

“You’re right. I don’t know you wouldn’t. I TRUST you wouldn’t. I trust YOU.”

Nancy’s anger died down as soon as it had flared. “I…” She put her head on his shoulder. “I’m sorry I snapped at you. Your trust means so much to me… What did I do to ensnare such a gentleman?”

“You’ve been yourself. Plain and simple.”

“You know it sounds crazy to say this but a part of me actually understands Victoria and what she went through."

Clinton kissed her tenderly on the forehead. "I wouldn't say that's crazy, Nance. It shows your compassion, another reason why I fell in love with you."

Nancy giggled, returning the kiss on his lips. “I still want to punch her repeatedly in the face though." Her face then turned grave. "And when the chips are down and it's my life or hers, I won't hesitate." She sighed. “Uncle Brett was right to worry… I did find more than what I was looking for in the Van der Laar Estate… Unfortunately…”

However, she was Nancy O’Hara, née Cooper. She wouldn’t give up.

“We have a new goal. Chateau DeBeers. Hopefully, this time we’ll put an end to this bastard's schemes once and for all.”

She was interrupted by frantic footsteps. A visibly distressed Sylvié, big blue eyes wet with tears, rushed towards them.

Swapping nervous glances with each other, Nancy disentangled herself from Clinton.

"Oh Nancy, please you must help her!" cried the former maid, who had launched herself at Nancy with a hug.

"Whoa! Easy there Sylvié! What's the matter? Where's Sand?"

Sylvié pulled quickly out of the hug, her face blushing bright red. "I-I'm sorry mes amis. It's just since we've been back from the Van der Laar estate, S-Sand has been acting strangely… After our patrol, I tried to kiss her - but she pushed me away."

Nancy instinctively drew Sylvié back into a hug.

"And now she refuses to speak to me. Mon dieu, h-have I done something to hurt her?! Is it because of Baton Rouge?"

Nancy squeezed the French girl tight before kissing her forehead. "No, you haven't done anything wrong. Let me talk some sense into her."

Nodding, Sylvié pulled out and Nancy followed her.

They found Sand on the nearby hill, perched on top of a tree, sitting on a branch. She was staring into the night sky.

"Sand? Sand?!! What's the matter?” Nancy called. “Sylvié's quite beside herself!"

The young Navajo didn’t move a single muscle. Nancy was answered with silence, and was now worried, this was so unlike her. The redhead sighed, pinching her nose.

"Come on Sand, I would prefer to speak face to face, and knowing my state I will just chop down this tree if you don’t climb down."

This got a reaction out of Sand. She finally jumped down from the tree. However, she was clearly avoiding eye contact with her friend and her lover.

"...Do you both think I'm a good woman? An honorable woman?" Sand said quietly.

Both Nancy and Sylvié exchanged looks before answering.

"You are a brave, beautiful woman and my love, cherie. I love you with all my heart." The French former maid gently caressed Sand's cheek, eliciting an aroused gasp from her before taking her hand and squeezing it.

Leaning against the tree, Nancy nodded. "You've saved my life more times than I can count, Sand. You are the best woman I’ve ever known and I'm proud to call you my friend."

Sand shook her head looking at her feet. "I hit an honorable woman today… for the crime of defending her children. And… And I didn't feel anything… To me she was born from the same womb as crook nose… with the same evil in her heart…"

Sylvié gasped in shock but didn't take her hand away. "How can you say that, my love? Lady Elizabeth and her children are innocent. People aren’t born evil."

“There’s something else. After all the time we’ve spent together, I can’t believe you still hold on to the belief white people are just all born evil.” Nancy deduced. “Please tell us… What’s hurting you so much?”

Sand raised her head, breathing a choked breath full of regret. "I couldn't help but feel... envy. Elizabeth's children are lucky to be blessed by such a caring mother. I wish I could say the same..." Her voice cracked, tears streaming down her face Sylvié embraced her lover in a huge heartfelt hug, which Sand returned as she continued. “… same about… me…”

It took her a few minutes to recover. Nancy and Sylvié didn’t rush her.

"Then tonight I felt ashamed.” Sand finally spoke again. “How could I look the two women that I care for the most in the eye… if I judge Elizabeth wrongly for the sole crime of… being a better person than my mother…" She took a few long breaths, trying to put an end to her sobs.

Nancy hugged her from behind. “Don’t block out those feelings, Sand. Look them in the eyes. See them for what they are. See how ugly they are. Then let them go… You felt envy. It’s human to envy those who are better off. That doesn’t make you a bad person. Acting out on those feelings does. A good person isn’t flawless – a good person acknowledges their flaws, and refuses to let those flaws define them…”

“I acted on those feelings… I hit her… I threatened her kids…”

“And now you’re feeling remorse.” Nancy interrupted her. “A bad person wouldn’t feel remorse. So you went too far this time, but you still had enough control to not cross the line. The damage can still be fixed. In our line of work, we have to get our hands dirty. What’s important is that we never stray from our goal… making the world safer for the innocents.” She pulled Sand closer. “What’s important is that you use this incident to improve yourself. Reveling in misery can be a dangerous slope. With time, misery turns into bitterness. Bitterness turns into anger. And anger turns into cruelty. This was Victoria’s path.”

Sylvié nodded. "She's right. You've lived a hard life, and I don't begrudge your feelings, cherie. But know this, I will never hurt you or betray you my dear Sand. I’m yours..."

"And I'm yours too, my sweet maid.” Sand returned their embrace. “I will try and be better for both of you."

They stayed huddled together for a long time.

“Maybe coming to that estate was a mistake… but at least we can come out even stronger…” Nancy finally whispered.

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:08 pm
by rufusluciusivan
Some behind-the-scenes: Chapter 4 was (alongside with Chapter 6) the chapter on which I took the most pleasure working. Maybe it's because it's based on one of my favorite Desperados III mission, maybe it's because it features a cute maid and three of my favorite secondary characters, maybe because it displays Victoria's complex and vulnerable side and introduces Elizabeth, or probably it's because of all of the above.

Litlle side-note to everyone. Yes indeed, the chapters are all based on Desperados III missions - those of you who remember the game may see the similarities. Chapters 1 and 2 are the New Orleans missions. Chapter 3 is the Flagstone mission. And Chapter 4 is the second mission of the DLC, Magnus DeVitt's plantation (down to the maid ambushed in the gardens). And yes, Chapters 5, 6, and 7 are also inspired by Desperados III, but no spoilers.

In general, many of you people have probably noticed stormtrooper and I are trying to sneak in as much references to Desperados III as possible. Here, Sylvié's moveset reflects Kate O'Hara's moveset in the game (perfume and seduction), the same way Nancy's moveset (coin and knife) mirrors John Cooper's. There is also the joke that the poncho-clad sentry can't be convinced to leave her post by Sylvié's seduction trick while a "normal" guard like Alice can.

This chapter features two of my favorite USB scenes of the entire Red Rock II saga: the one with Alice, Jenny, and Josephine; and the one with the maid.
- Jenny, Alice, and Josephine - who were affectionately referred to as "the Three Stoogettes" during the writing process - are the classic case of damsels who were originally supposed to be one-shot characters, but ended up striking a chord, and became part of the recurring cast. They have great comedic potential. And the whole subplot of them being brought together (and greatly turned on) by the fact they're mugged and trussed up together is equally funny and sexy. Oh, and Jenny is always there to spoil their mood. Expect to see more of them!
- The cute maid was the other highlight for me. Her look, the hints we get at what she had planned from her undergarments and haircut, the way she's grabbed and pulled into the bushes, Sylvié's and Sand's dialogues... There's this private joke when we exchanged PMs that Sylvié guessed correctly, and the maid was indeed planning a romantic date with her lover after her shift... Said lover is the Mexican sentry Nancy mugged. Oops. :lol:

Chapter 4 was the chapter that cemented Sylvié as my favorite heroine. Here, she comes out of her shell and becomes a full-fledge uniform stealer and infiltrator. She also shows her playful side with all her banters, but also a bit of a nice caring side - she sets up things to give a nudge to Alice's and Josephine's relationship, doesn't want to ruin the maid's haircut or steal her expensive underwear... The detail Sylvié and Sand are greatly turned on by mugging, stripping, binding, and gagging girls was an idea of stormtrooper, and I think this makes their scenes quite sexy.

Chapter 4 also cemented the moment I became comfortable with writing Sand. Having Sylvié as her counterpoint unlocked everything - whether it's for humorous scenes, romantic scenes, or serious scenes, good-natured playful emotional Sylvié is the perfect foil to Sand's socially awkward stern and no-nonsense personality. Then stormtrooper added the connection to Sand's conflict with her mother and her Navajo legacy, and the road of Sand's character arc was paved! The epilogue of chapter 4, with Sylvié and Nancy lifting Sand's spirit during her crisis of faith, is a highlight of the characters interactions to me. Well, technically it comes after an other highlight - Clinton's and Nancy's conversation during which they discuss Victoria's backstory, but that one was a lot easier to write and come up with. Nancy's main arc revolves around her about to become a mother, so of course Victoria's story would resonate with her.

Victoria is meant to be a dark reflection of Nancy, I think it's pretty clear by now - similar and at the same time completely different. Both gifted gunslingers, both talented mistresses of disguise, both have suffered through terrible ordeals during their backstories. But one turned her trauma into a negative force, the other into a positive force. One is a greedy bounty hunter, the other is a honest sheriff. One likes to show off, the other is more down-to-earth. The mirror construction also shows with the story related to their respective pregnancies: One lost her child, the other is about to become a mother.

Plot-wise, the whole climax with Victoria and her sister Elizabeth is one of my favorite parts of the saga. Victoria is my favorite character - of course I'm biased, since she's my main contribution, but she's exactly the kind of villain I prefer: Menacing, but also tragic, three-dimentional and with plenty of layers. Beneath the façade of a smug woman with a larger-than-life attitude lies a nihilistic woman who's been broken by past traumas. Her backstory is meant to make her look both sympathetic and sinister. Sympathetic because her family means the world to her, and she'd quite literally face Hell and Death for them. Sympathetic also because she was shattered by traumatic events that would shatter anyone - being married to an abusive husband alone and with no support save from Elizabeth, losing her child, losing her niece... The story never mentions it explicitly, but technically stormtrooper and I consider Vaclav van der Laar something akin to a tertiary antagonist - alongside DeBeers and Victoria. He's been dead for a decade, but his legacy is still alive - he left behind a nihilistic woman who lashes out against the world in misplaced anger. Because indeed, Victoria's backstory is also meant to make her look threatening and sinister. It's pretty clear she's not exactly sane or well-balanced anymore. She never moved on from her past traumas, and let them define her every actions. She lost her niece because, in her eyes, she wasn't rich or strong enough. So she keeps her remaining family in a gilded cage, showering them with money, failing to see Elizabeth doesn't care about that - she only cares about Victoria. She was the victim of an abusive husband. Now she spends each day of her life settling the score with the spirit of a dead man, metaphorically "killing him a second time, day after day, over and over again", as Nancy puts it.

As ST's title mentions, Chapter 4 is quite literally the turning point in more ways than one. Most importantly, it's the moment the heroines score their first clear-cut victory and begin turning the tides. The dynamic of the plot will be changed afterwards and Victoria is now out for blood. Stay tuned for Chapter 5!

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:33 pm
by meditions142
Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!

You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.

The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.

And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.

Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.

Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.

The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.

Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.

The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."

Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."

Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."

I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."

Then a great bit of dialogue:

“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”

And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:

"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."

I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?

I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:37 pm
by meditions142
rufusluciusivan wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:08 pm
- The cute maid was the other highlight for me. Her look, the hints we get at what she had planned from her undergarments and haircut, the way she's grabbed and pulled into the bushes, Sylvié's and Sand's dialogues... There's this private joke when we exchanged PMs that Sylvié guessed correctly, and the maid was indeed planning a romantic date with her lover after her shift... Said lover is the Mexican sentry Nancy mugged. Oops. :lol:
I was just posted how much I enjoyed the maid scene. And wow you confirmed the date. Shame both women ended up knocked out and tied up!

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:57 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
rufusluciusivan wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:08 pm Some behind-the-scenes: Chapter 4 was (alongside with Chapter 6) the chapter on which I took the most pleasure working. Maybe it's because it's based on one of my favorite Desperados III mission, maybe it's because it features a cute maid and three of my favorite secondary characters, maybe because it displays Victoria's complex and vulnerable side and introduces Elizabeth, or probably it's because of all of the above.

Litlle side-note to everyone. Yes indeed, the chapters are all based on Desperados III missions - those of you who remember the game may see the similarities. Chapters 1 and 2 are the New Orleans missions. Chapter 3 is the Flagstone mission. And Chapter 4 is the second mission of the DLC, Magnus DeVitt's plantation (down to the maid ambushed in the gardens). And yes, Chapters 5, 6, and 7 are also inspired by Desperados III, but no spoilers.

In general, many of you people have probably noticed stormtrooper and I are trying to sneak in as much references to Desperados III as possible. Here, Sylvié's moveset reflects Kate O'Hara's moveset in the game (perfume and seduction), the same way Nancy's moveset (coin and knife) mirrors John Cooper's. There is also the joke that the poncho-clad sentry can't be convinced to leave her post by Sylvié's seduction trick while a "normal" guard like Alice can.

This chapter features two of my favorite USB scenes of the entire Red Rock II saga: the one with Alice, Jenny, and Josephine; and the one with the maid.
- Jenny, Alice, and Josephine - who were affectionately referred to as "the Three Stoogettes" during the writing process - are the classic case of damsels who were originally supposed to be one-shot characters, but ended up striking a chord, and became part of the recurring cast. They have great comedic potential. And the whole subplot of them being brought together (and greatly turned on) by the fact they're mugged and trussed up together is equally funny and sexy. Oh, and Jenny is always there to spoil their mood. Expect to see more of them!
- The cute maid was the other highlight for me. Her look, the hints we get at what she had planned from her undergarments and haircut, the way she's grabbed and pulled into the bushes, Sylvié's and Sand's dialogues... There's this private joke when we exchanged PMs that Sylvié guessed correctly, and the maid was indeed planning a romantic date with her lover after her shift... Said lover is the Mexican sentry Nancy mugged. Oops. :lol:

Chapter 4 was the chapter that cemented Sylvié as my favorite heroine. Here, she comes out of her shell and becomes a full-fledge uniform stealer and infiltrator. She also shows her playful side with all her banters, but also a bit of a nice caring side - she sets up things to give a nudge to Alice's and Josephine's relationship, doesn't want to ruin the maid's haircut or steal her expensive underwear... The detail Sylvié and Sand are greatly turned on by mugging, stripping, binding, and gagging girls was an idea of stormtrooper, and I think this makes their scenes quite sexy.

Chapter 4 also cemented the moment I became comfortable with writing Sand. Having Sylvié as her counterpoint unlocked everything - whether it's for humorous scenes, romantic scenes, or serious scenes, good-natured playful emotional Sylvié is the perfect foil to Sand's socially awkward stern and no-nonsense personality. Then stormtrooper added the connection to Sand's conflict with her mother and her Navajo legacy, and the road of Sand's character arc was paved! The epilogue of chapter 4, with Sylvié and Nancy lifting Sand's spirit during her crisis of faith, is a highlight of the characters interactions to me. Well, technically it comes after an other highlight - Clinton's and Nancy's conversation during which they discuss Victoria's backstory, but that one was a lot easier to write and come up with. Nancy's main arc revolves around her about to become a mother, so of course Victoria's story would resonate with her.

Victoria is meant to be a dark reflection of Nancy, I think it's pretty clear by now - similar and at the same time completely different. Both gifted gunslingers, both talented mistresses of disguise, both have suffered through terrible ordeals during their backstories. But one turned her trauma into a negative force, the other into a positive force. One is a greedy bounty hunter, the other is a honest sheriff. One likes to show off, the other is more down-to-earth. The mirror construction also shows with the story related to their respective pregnancies: One lost her child, the other is about to become a mother.

Plot-wise, the whole climax with Victoria and her sister Elizabeth is one of my favorite parts of the saga. Victoria is my favorite character - of course I'm biased, since she's my main contribution, but she's exactly the kind of villain I prefer: Menacing, but also tragic, three-dimentional and with plenty of layers. Beneath the façade of a smug woman with a larger-than-life attitude lies a nihilistic woman who's been broken by past traumas. Her backstory is meant to make her look both sympathetic and sinister. Sympathetic because her family means the world to her, and she'd quite literally face Hell and Death for them. Sympathetic also because she was shattered by traumatic events that would shatter anyone - being married to an abusive husband alone and with no support save from Elizabeth, losing her child, losing her niece... The story never mentions it explicitly, but technically stormtrooper and I consider Vaclav van der Laar something akin to a tertiary antagonist - alongside DeBeers and Victoria. He's been dead for a decade, but his legacy is still alive - he left behind a nihilistic woman who lashes out against the world in misplaced anger. Because indeed, Victoria's backstory is also meant to make her look threatening and sinister. It's pretty clear she's not exactly sane or well-balanced anymore. She never moved on from her past traumas, and let them define her every actions. She lost her niece because, in her eyes, she wasn't rich or strong enough. So she keeps her remaining family in a gilded cage, showering them with money, failing to see Elizabeth doesn't care about that - she only cares about Victoria. She was the victim of an abusive husband. Now she spends each day of her life settling the score with the spirit of a dead man, metaphorically "killing him a second time, day after day, over and over again", as Nancy puts it.

As ST's title mentions, Chapter 4 is quite literally the turning point in more ways than one. Most importantly, it's the moment the heroines score their first clear-cut victory and begin turning the tides. The dynamic of the plot will be changed afterwards and Victoria is now out for blood. Stay tuned for Chapter 5!

I completely agree with you Rufus, between the three stoogettes, the ponchos' and the maid takeout, I couldn't really pick a clear favourite scene of mine so let's just say all of them ;) I remember coming up with the three stoogettes takedown as a clear reference to Desperados III gameplay; complete with sight lines and the careful timing. Which is further reflected in the poncho takeout scene.


And I also enjoyed working on this particular chapter since like rufus I also enjoyed the Devitt plantation mission in the DLC, but I always took out the maid on the driveway instead for the sake of expedience and to get Kate disguised quicker.


On the subject of the movesets, I would say that Sand's moveset kind of mirrors Hector's but without Bianca the bear trap and rogueish charm. I would say that Sand had his nonsense approach to taking out NPCs.


Rufus couldn't have put things any better. I can testify to the fact that we enjoyed developing our characters and their individual arcs and themes just as much, if not more than the USB scenes themselves, and I'm proud of the work we've put into the three stoogettes ( who were just a hoot to write), and our beloved characters. It's fair to say that when Rufus first introduced Victoria, I didn't like her very much but has our work on the saga continued, I found myself developing a soft spot for her, and learned that like Rufus I also have a fondness for three dimensional flawed villians who are mirrors of the protagonist. And Rufus is quite right when he says Vaclav, despite being a decade dead, still casts a very long shadow over Victoria and is definitely a tertiary antagonist. I think we also agreed that Victoria and Sand also have a few things in common as well.


Like rufus I also have a soft spot for Sylvié, her fun loving and sarcastic personality is simply infectious. Like rufus said, she's that counterpoint to Sand's blunt and socially awkward exterior. And to me the epilogue scene where Sylvié and Nancy lift up Sand following that crisis of faith, cemented her place as the heart and soul of Team Nancy; yes you have Nancy the teams leader, Sand is the muscle, Clinton the brains bur Sylvié is the much needed glue that holds the team together. Plus she also distracts Sand...very intimately. :lol: My idea to have Sand and Sylvié get horny over their victims is a favourite trope of mine that you've may have seen in the SI stories. In fact you could say Sylvié and Sand mirror Miranda and Nadja in the series.


Indeed, Chapter 4 represents the moment when control shifts from Victoria to Nancy with the team now on the front foot. And where we see the first real foreshadowing of Victoria's downfall. See you at chapter 5!

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:18 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:33 pm Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!

You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.

The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.

And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.

Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.

Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.

The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.

Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.

The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."

Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."

Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."

I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."

Then a great bit of dialogue:

“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”

And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:

"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.

“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”

“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”

She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."

I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?

I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

Thanks meditions, we're both glad that you're enjoying the story so far!


Indeed, it was always our intention for Sylvié to become a fully fledged member of team Nancy. For us, as we've alluded to Sylvié is a character we enjoyed developing and this chapter marks a 'Turning Point' for her. Gone is the meek maid and her transformation into a USB heroine begins in earnest.


I remember when I sent the first draft of Alice, Josephine and Jenny ( aka the three stoogettes :D), I wrote it as a scene straight out of a Desperados 3 playthrough and rufus enjoyed it so much that very little has changed from that first draft. I enjoyed writing it so much.


The seduction of Alice and the synchronised takeout of the poncho guards, were again both Rufus and I's homage to classic Desperados III gameplay. With Sylvié utilising Kate O'Hara's moveset and Sand and Nancy teaming up in the 'Plan B' maneuver to take out the ponchos.


Yep, while Sand has taught Nancy the subtle art of the sleeperhold, Nancy isn't as confident in utilising it fully so she resorts to the good old fashioned, albeit rough, gun butt bash.


I have to say, that I agree completely that Rufus did an absolutely incredible job with the maid's takeout in the garden. It was a standout scene, much like Lottie's in Chapter 3, and also happens to be my favourite scene in this Chapter as well. The whole set up, take out of the maid, the stripping, dialogue and the two lovebirds making out was done to perfection.

From the both of us, we are really pleased that you enjoyed the story and the maid's takeout in particular. And thank you very much for reading.

Onward to Chapter 5! :D

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:27 pm
by rufusluciusivan
meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:37 pm
rufusluciusivan wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:08 pm
- The cute maid was the other highlight for me. Her look, the hints we get at what she had planned from her undergarments and haircut, the way she's grabbed and pulled into the bushes, Sylvié's and Sand's dialogues... There's this private joke when we exchanged PMs that Sylvié guessed correctly, and the maid was indeed planning a romantic date with her lover after her shift... Said lover is the Mexican sentry Nancy mugged. Oops. :lol:
I was just posted how much I enjoyed the maid scene. And wow you confirmed the date. Shame both women ended up knocked out and tied up!
Shame both women ended up knocked out and tied up in different places and NOT together. ;) :lol:

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:31 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
rufusluciusivan wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:27 pm
meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:37 pm
rufusluciusivan wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:08 pm
- The cute maid was the other highlight for me. Her look, the hints we get at what she had planned from her undergarments and haircut, the way she's grabbed and pulled into the bushes, Sylvié's and Sand's dialogues... There's this private joke when we exchanged PMs that Sylvié guessed correctly, and the maid was indeed planning a romantic date with her lover after her shift... Said lover is the Mexican sentry Nancy mugged. Oops. :lol:
I was just posted how much I enjoyed the maid scene. And wow you confirmed the date. Shame both women ended up knocked out and tied up!
Shame both women ended up knocked out and tied up in different places and NOT together. ;) :lol:

You called it Rufus :lol: . But at least Alice and Josephine were more luckier in that regard :oops: ;) Well, if it wasn't for a certain redheaded knife thrower called Jenny. :D

Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:38 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:18 pm

I have to say, that I agree completely that Rufus did an absolutely incredible job with the maid's takeout in the garden. It was a standout scene, much like Lottie's in Chapter 3, and also happens to be my favourite scene in this Chapter as well. The whole set up, take out of the maid, the stripping, dialogue and the two lovebirds making out was done to perfection.
Yea, what for me makes the scene so perfect is the idea of the pretty young maid just dozing off having no idea she is being watched.

Then the light hearted dialogue while they are stripping a woman they have just rendered unconscious.