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Re: Pakal

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2021 7:14 pm
by Trackman281
Indeed, let us take a moment to feel sorry for them and then realise just how awesome that entire scenario is. Although I did feel sorry for the poor guard who just wanted a quick drink with her mates hahaha. :D :lol:

Well I'm happy that you were able to hold back the urges of revealing everything so soon, as NOW seemed like the perfect moment, it really gave the story that wow factor, that really made me go, "damn that's an amazing twist, I love it". :D

Whether it be more Pakal or more Vigilante, I'm hooked on both of your series, so please upload whatever one you want, because I'll be ready. 8-)

Re: Pakal

Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2021 11:37 am
by esercito sconfitto
Rufusluciusivan, I feel so bad for delaying my comments ... but you know we live in a frantic era :?

but there is a question I have to pose about the most intense and emotional momewnt , the 'flashback' with Yuka and Tsuki trying to escape the crowd of villagers that have just burnt their house ...the question is about sources and references: did you take inspiration from Marvel's Magneto? his daughter Anya perished in a fire almost in the same way, causing Herr Erik Magnus Lehnsherr to become the vindictive and avenging "Magneto" one of the most insane and tormented characters in the Marvel universe

the whole episode is beautiful , a great piece to read, dramatic and amusing; my compliments to you

Re: Pakal

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2021 8:56 am
by rufusluciusivan
esercito sconfitto wrote: Thu Feb 11, 2021 11:37 am Rufusluciusivan, I feel so bad for delaying my comments ... but you know we live in a frantic era :?

but there is a question I have to pose about the most intense and emotional momewnt , the 'flashback' with Yuka and Tsuki trying to escape the crowd of villagers that have just burnt their house ...the question is about sources and references: did you take inspiration from Marvel's Magneto? his daughter Anya perished in a fire almost in the same way, causing Herr Erik Magnus Lehnsherr to become the vindictive and avenging "Magneto" one of the most insane and tormented characters in the Marvel universe

the whole episode is beautiful , a great piece to read, dramatic and amusing; my compliments to you
You shouldn't apologize for commenting later. ;) I share your feeling: lately, I find little time and energy to read and comment myself. Thanks for your kind words.

To answer your question: No, I didn't take inspiration from Magneto. I don't read comics, so I didn't even know about that specific story.

Re: Pakal

Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2021 10:03 pm
by rufusluciusivan
Finally! This part proved to be so much more complex to write than expected... (Besides, it's longer than usual I think...) There'll be a little more lore/story than usual at some moments, as I needed it to get to the situation I wanted, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it. ;)

Chapter 4: The Shapeshifter and the New Horizons




Chapter 4: Part 1

**************

Most of the accesses to the main trails of the Yr Widdfa in the Vassal Kingdoms were guarded by an order of knights called the Order of Siblings of the House of Saint Merida of Emain Macha. Commonly called the 'Order of the Thorn' for short. In the Vassal Kingdoms, the Order of the Thorn was something akin to a State within a State. It was transcending boundaries, and owned lands in almost all of the Vassal Kingdoms, mostly along the Yr Widdfa.

The Order of the Thorn was known for its knights who were among the best fighters of the kingdoms, its strong distrust towards magic, and its immeasurable rapacity and greed. Its first grandmasters built commanderies on the roads leading to the main mines of the mountains, which allowed the Order to collect toll fees in exchange of the right of passage to access the mines. In a short time, the knight order built a colossal fortune, which they used to buy lands across all the Vassal Kingdoms, in order to get even more money through agriculture and trade.

And the cycle was continuing to this day...

**************

Carlott was a squire.

However, she didn't enter the Order of the Thorn by choice. It was more like her parents entrusted her to them when she was a child. In exchange, her folks received a small sum of money.

While the elite knights were recruited among the nobility, the Order needed a lot of manpower. Peasants to cultivate their fields. Miners to work in their mines. Servants to tend their commanderies and cook for their soldiers. Craftsmen and blacksmiths. Administrators. Foot soldiers to back up their knights.

Among more classic ways of recruiting people, the Order of the Thorn was also offering to take in and to raise children of poor families, giving the parents a chance to be rid of one mouth to feed while insuring that their offspring would still have a roof over their head. The children and teenagers taken in by the Order received an education, and would work for it once they grew up. Their exact job depended on the skills they displayed during their education.

The most promising ones were even given a chance to become squires.

Ultimately, during her entire life, Carlott never had a choice in the matter.

Still, her life could have been worst. The Order of the Thorn had taken her in. They were her family now. And, if she kept on working hard, she would one day be allowed to become a low-ranked knight, helping the Order extort always more money and lands. Sure, it wasn't a glorious dream, but it was one that would allow her to eat three times per day.

Carlott had short neck-long roughly cut straw-coloured hair and blue eyes. Her skin was white and her facial features were sharp and rough, a testimony of her peasant background. She was a tall young woman with broad shoulders and thick thighs, who therefore looked older than she truly was.

She was wearing the outfit that most squires were wearing when performing their everyday duties: a brownish red tabard with a big hood worn over a long-sleeved padded beige tunic (that was perfect to protect from the wooden weapons they used during training) and over beige padded trousers. She was walking in thick calf-long leather boots. A black leather belt was tied around her waist.

Today, Carlott was the one who had to clean the stables and take care of the horses that weren't used for the patrol. The squire whistled while she was putting hay into the horses' mangers. Among all the things squires had to do, taking care of the horses was her favorite. It reminded her of her parents' farm. Eleanor will probably arrive any minute now, asking me to spar with her... Carlott sighed. Eleanor was her friend, but Carlott didn't share her enthusiasm for everything that was related to war.

Suddenly, she heard the whistling of a blade.

Carlott frowned. “Eleanor? Is that you?” she asked.

The squire turned to face the person who was making the noise.

Everything happened too fast for her.

Carlott barely had the time to notice the shiny metallic glimmer of two blades thrown in her direction.

The next second, the collar of her tabard was pinned to a nearby wooden beam by two throwing knives, restraining her movements.

Dumbfounded, Carlott stared at the woman with a tanned skin who had thrown the knives. She had brown eyes, dark brown hair tied into a thick high braid that was reaching up to her collarbone, an oval face with a sharp chin, and a tall soft nose

“Wh... What?” the squire stuttered.

The woman winked and put a finger on her lips. Then, she grabbed a blowpipe.

Carlott reflexively tried to move, but the fabric of her tabard was sturdy and she couldn't tear it easily. The knives were embedded deep enough to pin her to the beam. She was immobilized during the few seconds she would have needed to dodge.

The woman blew a small dart into a precise spot of Carlott's body, between the throat and the left shoulder.

The squire still had a hard time understanding what was going on. Her mouth was suddenly feeling dry and she couldn't help but blink.

“What?” she said a second time.

Her vision became blurry and her mind became foggy. Her eyelids were feeling so heavy all of the sudden... Carlott let out a long sight. Her head fell forward. Her eyelids closed, and her breathing became slow and regular.

Carlott fell into a deep sleep. Her body went limp, but remained pinned by the collar to the wooden beam.

**************

Azeneth removed her knives to release Carlott's unconscious body, holding her as she was about to fall. Very satisfied of herself, the metis was smiling.

“Will you one day stop trying to always outbid yourself? You're showing off again.” Jinora commented.

Azeneth took down the unconscious squire. Carlott was deeply asleep. “Showing off is the point.” the metis commented with a bright smile.

She dragged the young woman in a corner of the stable.

“Anyway. We should hurry up. I wouldn't want to be caught with my pants down by another knight.”

She unclipped the squire's belt.

**************

Eleanor was a squire.

For as long as she could remember, she had wanted to enter the Order of the Thorn. Her parents were wealthy nobles who had a lot of ties with the Order. Their younger daughter grew up hearing the tales of these elite fighters of the kingdoms. Besides, as the younger sibling, she wasn't going to inherit the familiy domain and title. Therefore, joining the Order was a perfect way to secure her future without having to resort to marriage.

While talent was a selection criteria when recruiting future knights, money and social status were just as important. The Order was in constant search of wealth and influence. Accepting sons and daughters of rich powerful noble families, in exchange of a fee of course, was granting It both.

Some of these rich new recruits didn't have any talent besides their money, and were therefore stuck working as clerks or high-ranked administrators. The ones that had potential, like Eleanor, were trained to become knights.

The young woman now only needed to work hard and, in a few years, she would become a full-fledged knight, defending the Order's prerogatives in all the kingdoms.

Eleanor had braided neck-long light chestnut hair and hazel eyes. She was a tall slim white-skinned young woman. Her facial features were soft and thin, a testimony of her noble background, but she had the strong callous hands of someone who practiced a lot with her sword and the well-toned legs of someone who rode a lot.

She was wearing the same squire outfit as Carlott, though on her belt she was also currently carrying her sword.

Eleanor entered the stables. Carlott should be done now. She needed a sparring partner. She wanted to try the new technique that instructor Beatrix showed them.

The squire was about to call her friend, but the spectacle she witnessed prevented her from speaking.

Carlott wasn't alone. In fact, she wasn't even conscious anymore. She was lying in a corner of the stable, with half of her clothes lying in a small bundle nearby.

Next to her, there were two women, who were probably the ones who took Carlott out. They were removing her clothes. Two intruders! Two enemies!

Eleanor's blood boiled. Her friend was in danger. Sure, Carlott was a commoner, but she was first-and-foremost a fellow squire.

Eleanor drew her trusty sword. One of the women, who had a high braid cut, had spotted her, but the squire didn't care. She was going to fight her head-on, like a real woman!

“Tallyho!” the squire shouted.

She charged.

The woman with the high braid frowned.

Then, she nonchanlantly dodged the squire's assault. In the same swift motion, she grabbed Eleanor's arm, and twisted it in her back, forcing the young woman to drop her sword.

It was a little humiliating.

“Unhand me, you peasant!” Eleanor indignantly barked.

Another woman, with copper-coloured skin, clamped an odorous piece of cloth over Eleanor's mouth and nose, and pressed it against her face.

“Mpphhh?! Mpphhh! MMMMHHHH!” she indignantly shouted.

However, the indignant muffled shouts soon became indignant muffled groans, then indignant muffled mumbles.

And then silence, with only a soft peaceful breathing. Though Eleanor was still frowning in her sleep, therefore it was an indignant soft peaceful breathing.

**************

Azeneth dragged the unconscious Eleanor and laid her next to her friend.

“Tallyho? What kind of strange war cry is that?” Azeneth couldn't help but comment.

“Don't question it. It's a cultural thing.” Jinora answered.

“You're right.”

The metis looked at the two young women and grimaced.

“Actually, I'm feeling a little bad. I mean, there's no glory in defeating young inexperienced knights-in-training...”

“You can take solace in the fact that she was insulting you. She called you a peasant.” Jinora said.

“You know what? It actually kind of works.” The metis shrugged. “Though I won't blame her too much for that either. I'd insult people too if I was mugged.”

“We'll leave them on the haystacks.” Jinora proposed. “At least, they will be a little more comfortable and warmer than on the floor.”

“Good idea.”

The two intruders removed the squires' clothes one by one. Carlott was already half-stripped before the interruption. They only needed to remove her boots and trousers. Then, they unclipped Eleanor's belt, pulled her tabard over her head before doing the same with her tunic. Finally, they took off the boots and shimmied down the trousers. Carlott and Eleanor were wearing white long-johns and socks as undergarments.

Azeneth grabbed a few ropes in the stable. She and Jinora used them to restrain the two young women. While they made sure that the squires couldn't free themselves, they didn't use complicated bondage techniques. Hog-tying them would have been overkill, and mean. They merely bound the two squires' hands behind their back, their shoulders, their thighs, and their calves.

Thick brownish red scarves were hung on a few hooks. They were probably put on by riders to protect their lower faces from the cold. They also proved to be perfect gags. A first one was shoved into the mouth, and another was tied over the mouth to secure it.

Azeneth and Jinora dragged the two squires, and hid them in a corner of the stable, lying next to each other on some haystacks. They covered their bodies with hay to conceal them, though they didn't put it on their faces and noses to allow them to breathe fine without inhaling strands of hay.

Finally, the two friends took off the travelling merchants' clothes they were currently wearing, and disguised themselves with Carlott's and Eleanor's discarded squire clothes. While their victims were younger than them, the average inhabitant of Danann was taller than the average inhabitant of the southern realms. Therefore, the clothes were a decent fit.

They used the large hoods of the tabards to conceal their faces, hiding their dark skins, which were a clear giveaway that they weren't from the Vassal Kingdoms.

"I just hope that the others are also doing fine..." Jinora commented. She was a little nervous.

"Don't fret. Yuka could fool them with her eyes closed. and Yisüi's made a lot of progress during her trainings." Azeneth reassured her friend.

**************

In the main courtyard of the commandery, Yisüi was confidently leading the horses dragging the wooden cart carrying barrels. Given how shy and meek she could be when interacting with people, Yuka was still a little surprised to see how at ease the blonde was feeling with these creatures. The shapeshifter was walking nearby, and Coulter was sulking while seated on the cart.

Yuka certainly wasn't as comfortable as Yisüi when dealing with horses... In general, shapeshifters rarely got along very well with horses, dogs, and other domestic animals.

“Yisü', you're very good at it.” the shapeshifter couldn't help but comment, using Azeneth's nickname for the blonde.

Yisüi blushed a little. “I come from a people of riders.” she explained. “Even in sedentary coastal settlements such as my village, we have a strong affinity with horses.” The blonde stroked the side of one of the horses and smiled. “You know, being able to interact with horses again... It feels a little like home.”

Yuka didn't answer. She was feeling a little bad for the blonde. Yisüi wasn't showing it, but it was clear that she missed her home. While she had genuinely befriended Yuka, Azeneth and Jinora, and while of course her life with them was better than the life as a slave she used to live, the shapeshifter also knew that they were partly the reason why Yisüi couldn't go home. After all, while they rescued her from her execution, they also didn't give her much choice when it came to stay with them or leave, as they couldn't transport her to Gengis easily.

I'll have to think of something.

“Anyway.” she changed the subject. “We won't be able to thank these merchants enough for providing us with a cart and a set of clothes to enter this commandery...”

Indeed, Yuka and her friends were currently wearing clothes that weren't theirs. They were clad in thick but comfortable travelling clothes, the kind that was used by merchants for instance: brown hooded leather cloaks to protect themselves from the wind and the rain, grey woolen tunics with a brown leather belt tied around the waist, brown comfortable trousers, thick leather boots, and brown wide-brimmed hats to protect themselves from the rain.

The six real merchants, and true owners of the clothes, were currently taking a long (and unwanted) nap inside some of the barrels on the cart. Barrels in which Yuka and her friends took the time to saw off some holes to allow their inoccupant to breathe fine. Each woman was stripped down to her underclothes. They were all wearing the same kind of underwear: sturdy grey undertunics and matching knee-long underpants tied around the waist with a string. Once again, clothes suited for travels. While Yuka and her friends only needed five sets of clothes, they had to strip the sixth woman as well because they needed extra makeshift ropes and gags: they they fell short of Coulter's sticky ribbons after binding the fifth woman.

Indeed, the first five merchants, two auburn-haired women and three brunettes, were restrained with the ribbons crafted by the mage-woman. The devices were wrapped around the women's calves and thighs, and were pinning their arms to their sides. A light piece of cloth soaked with sleeping potion was clamped over their mouth and nose, and sticky ribbons were wrapped around the lower face to keep the small rag pressed against their mouth and nose, making sure they would keep on breathing the narcotic fumes. The sixth merchant was a blond-haired fair-skinned pudgy woman, who was bound and gagged with strips of her own clothes. A veil soaked with sleeping potion was tied over her mouth and nose.

Each of the six women was seated inside a barrel, with her knees pressed against her chest. The fit was rather tight, but outside of a few cramps – and a bruised ego – they wouldn't be harmed.

Yuka, Azeneth, Jinora, Yisüi, and Coulter ambushed the six merchants while they were on their way to the commandery. Between Yuka's shapeshifter touch and Azeneth's fighting capacities, the women didn't stand a chance. The road they were taking was devoid of brigands, and besides no band of thieves would be foolish enough to steal goods belonging to the Order of the Thorn. Therefore, the merchants didn't hire guards. They were armed with daggers and thick staves, the kind of blunt weapons that could bash a skull, but they weren't professional fighters.

Yuka's and her friends' guise proved to be the perfect excuse to enter the commandery, in which they would find the disguises needed to pass the blockade on the road leading to the mountains. The Order of the Thorn was watching the access to the Yr Widdfa the five companions needed to use, and while the knights weren't exactly fond of the Mages, they still had to obey their orders to look for Yuka, Coulter, and the others.

Azeneth and Jinora were already 'borrowing' the clothes of the squires in the stable. Yuka, Coulter, and Yisüi were supposed to deal with the knights guarding the main courtyard, and to relieve them of their clothes. They knew that, today, the commandery was mostly empty. A good chunk of the knights were patrolling outside and wouldn't be back until the evening.

It was the perfect occasion to strike.

**************

Beatrix was a tall, slender, and curvy woman with collarbone-long chestnut brown hair, a white skin, and brown eyes. She wore a silver eye patch over her right eye, as she was wounded during a past skirmish. Her arms were muscular and her legs were well-toned.

Beatrix was a veteran of several campaigns, even though she was only in her thirties. She joined the Order when she was still a kid, and rose through its ranks until she was knighted.

The veteran was now an instructor, in charge of two promising squires. One day, she would probably succeed to the master of her commandery.

Beatrix was clad in the clothes that knights of the Order of the Thorn were wearing when on-duty, but not in combat. Indeed, knights weren't wearing their plate armours outside of ranged battles. Performing day-to-day tasks while wearing heavy metal protections was impossible. Therefore, Beatrix was wearing brown calf-long boots, black trousers, a beige padded tunic, a light chainmail designed to offer good protection without being too heavy, and a light grey tabard with a hood. A black swan surrounded by four stylized scarlet red roses was adorning the front of the tabard. A black belt was tied around her waist, and her sword was strapped onto it.

Ulrike and Katherine entered her office. They were two fellow knights, albeit at a lower rank in the hierarchy of the commandery. They were, however, wearing the same clothes as Beatrix. The only difference was that there were only two sylized red roses on their tabards. “Captain. The merchants have arrived.”

Beatrix sighed. Dealing with the Order's paperwork certainly was the most boring part of her duties. Beatrix was an instructor first-and-foremost. She should be training her new recruits instead of handling boring administrative tasks. However, the instructor was also a high-ranked knight. As a consequence, she had to help administrate the commandery. And since many of the other knights were currently on patrol, she had to take their workload.

A part of her wished there was some action...

"I'm coming."

**************

Yuka raised her head when she heard a door.

The knight in charge of the watch of the courtyard exited from her office the main building to meet up with the 'merchants'.

“Greetings.” she said. “My name is Beatrix. My two women and I will supervise the unloading of your merchandises.”

She looked right and left. Coulter's or Yisüi's physical appearances didn't shock her. Charioteers and Gengis weren't an unnusual sight among merchants in the Vassal Kingdoms. However, she noticed Azeneth's and Jinora's absence.

“Where are your two other friends?” the leader of the trio of knights asked Yuka.

“They went to... uhm...” Yuka pretended to be a little embarassed. “... relieve themselves.”

Beatrix's face didn't betray any emotion. “I see.” She made a gesture of the hand. Her two knights deployed. “I'm going to have to ask you to follow me and sign some papers. Ulrike and Katherine will search your cargo.”

Yuka hid her reaction of fear.

Yusüi and Coulter were the two people whom she was afraid to leave on their own during an infiltration. Yisüi was still a novice infiltrator, and Coulter... Well, she was Coulter. Hard-headed and unpredictable.

The shapeshifter mentally shook her head. No. We've trained Yisüi ever since we rescued her. She thinks that she's ready. And Azeneth also says that she's ready. I have to trust their judgement. As for Coulter... Well, the redhead wasn't stupid. She knew that the success of the mission was more important than to spite someone. Besides, Yuka had made some progress with her.

The shapeshifter was going to trust them.

"I'll follow you." she said with her most charming and polite smile.

**************

Yisüi hid her nervosity when she saw Yuka enter with Beatrix in the main building.

“I'll check a few of these barrels.” the first knight, Katherine, politely informed she and Coulter. The woman had a fair skin, short ponytailed blond hair, and grey eyes. She was rather bulky, with a square jaw, a bulbous nose and thick arms. She was smiling. For her, it was nothing but a routine check.

“Suit yourself.” Yisüi said. Just like Jinora and Yuka, she spoke Danann's language, as her parents used to trade here sometimes.

Coulter groaned something.

“By Saint Merida! I've never met a merchant as unpleasant as your friend...” the second knight, Ulrike, commented while inspecting the underside of the cart. She was thinner than her partner, with brown hair tied into a small ponytail and hazel green eyes. Her skin was white. She had sunken cheeks, sharp facial features, and a thin pointy nose.

Yisüi made an apologetic nervous smile. The woman was joking, but the blonde couldn't help but worry that she was going to expose them.

Stay calm. You're playing the part of an innocent merchant. They have no reason to be wary of you. She was going to prove to Yuka, Jinora and Azeneth that they were right to trust her!

While pretending to rummage through her belongings in her haversack, the blonde was pouring a generous dose of sleeping potion on a rag.

On the cart, Coulter was still sulking. She was hating every second of this infiltration with a passion.

Katherine opened one of the barrels.

She saw the deeply-asleep bound-and-gagged auburn-haired merchant woman only dressed in her underclothes who was stashed inside. Her smile faded. She tried to warn her partner:

“Ulri-”

Coulter made a gesture of the hand.

The blond knight's warning cry was cut short, and turned into a weak grunt of pain. Katherine bent double, breathless, as if she had received a punch in the stomach. She gasped.

That's true... Coulter is wearing the concealing catalyst that allows her to use minor spells without being noticed by the Mages... Yisüi remembered, while seeing the necklace around Coulter's neck.

Ulrike was still bent forward to make sure that no hidden cargo was hung under the cart. “You're saying something, Katherine?” the brown-haired knight asked, unaware of the predicament of her friend.

Yisüi knew that it was her cue.

She clamped the rag soaked with sleeping potion over the knight's face while the later was still bent forward, and was therefore at a disadventageous position.

Ulrike tried to rise up. However, Yisüi wrapped her other arm around her waist and arms, then pressed with all the weight of her body. Bent forward, the brown-haired knight was already unbalanced. She fell forward, with Yisüi lying on her back and using her entire bodymass to immobilize her. On her stomach, the knight tried to struggle. She let out cries for help, unfortunately muffled by the thick rag, and flailed her legs, the only part of her body that weren't pinned to the ground by Yisüi. However, the brunette could only uselessly kick the ground. Yisüi held tight. She was using her victim's kicks on the ground as points of reference.

The kicks weakened. Ulrike's legs were feeling heavier and heavier.

Then, the kicks stopped. Yisüi kept the rag pressed against the brown-haired knight's face a few more instants, until she was sure that the woman was truly deeply asleep.

She stood up.

On the cart, Katherine was also lying unconscious next to Coulter, though Yisüi couldn't tell if the redhead used the sleeping potion or another spell. And she certainly wasn't going to dare to ask her. Magic was a touchy subject to tackle with the redhead.

“Let's... Let's hide them in the cart quickly...” Yisüi said. “Yuka and Beatrix can come back any moment.”

Coulter groaned something.

**************

Beatrix showed Yuka a few sheets of paper, that the shapeshifter signed with a forged signature.

“You seem to be low on men today...” Yuka innocently remarked. Internally, she could only beg the gods that Yisüi and Coulter were doing fine.

“Most of our knights are patrolling outside.” Beatrix explained. “They are looking for a group of fugitives. The rest are watching the walls of the commandery. To take care of things in the courtyard, there are only the three of us.”

Perfect. I just hope that Yisüi didn't get into any trouble...

“Everything is in order.” Beatrix said once Yuka had finished signing the papers. “I think that Ulrike and Katherine are also probably done. We can regroup with them and your colleagues.”

Yuka hid her nervosity. “Of course.”

They exited the building. The shapeshifter felt relieved when she saw Yisüi and Coulter seated on the cart. Ulrike and Katherine were nowhere in sight.

This time, Yuka hid a sigh of relief.

Her friends had succeeded.

Beatrix wasn't sharing her happiness though. She frowned when she noticed that her two knights had seemingly vanished.

“Where are Ulrike and Katherine?” she asked.

The only answer she received was a swift hit of the edge of the hand on the neck, courtesy of Yuka. Since the latter's hand was imbued with the shapeshifter's power, Beatrix was knocked out instantly. The shapeshifter caught her mid-fall, and dragged her. She put her on the cart, with Ulrike and Katherine who were concealed between the barrels.

Yisüi led the horses of the cart in front of the stables and tied their lead to a post, therefore parking the cart out of the way. And out of sight.

She and Yuka methodically stripped the three knights. Coulter was sulking in her corner. While she had no choice but help them knock out one knight, something that was already making her feel sour, she refused to help them strip someone.

Under their outer clothes, Beatrix, Ulrike, and Katherine were wearing similar beige undertunics and matching underpants.

Yuka and Yisüi bound the three knights with ropes that were on the cart. They didn't bother with complex knots: they only tied the wrists and the ankles. The tightness of the barrels was going to restrain their movements fine. They gagged them with rags.

During the process, Yuka appreciated Yisüi's progress. The blonde's training during their travels on boat truly paid off...

Finally, they loaded each half-naked woman into an empty barrel in which they had previously sawed off a few small holes to allow air to enter. Most of the knights of the commandery were on patrol, and the ones that were the most likely to come near the stables were actually stashed inside the barrels. Therefore, Beatrix and her women, as well as the real merchants, wouldn't be found before a few hours. By that point, Yuka and her friends would already be far in the mountains.

Yuka smiled when she saw Jinora and Azeneth exit the stables, wearing squires' outfits.

“Things went well?”

Azeneth winked. “Without a hitch.”

Coulter muttered something under her breath.

“Use your magic to change your face's appearance instead of complaining, then get dressed.” Yuka intervened. "We don't have all day." She and Yisüi also started to disguise themselves.

**************

They took a few horses. They would use them to ride on the main mountain road until they would be near the secret path indicated by the tome they stole in Ce-Tochtli's palace. Then, they would release the horses to allow them to return to their masters.

“Now remember, we are a group of knights sent by another commandery, and we're here to take our two squires to a trip to the mountains in order to train them.” Yuka said to her friends as they were approaching the guards watching the access of the road leading to the mountains. “Let me do the talking.”

**************

And the talking was enough to fool the guards, along with the clothes of course.

Their trip in the mountains proved to be uneventful. Maybe the Order of the Thorn tried to search for them. Or maybe they just decided to consider that the latest event was nothing but a bad dream, and swept it under the rug. After all, nobody was truly hurt. (Except in their self-esteem.)

Yuka and her friends kepts their disguises as long as they were on the main road, then hid them behind some rocks to put on warm mountain clothes that were more suited for their trek when they left it.

Thanks to the translation of Ce-Tochtli's book made by Rashid's scholars, they were able to find lost mountain trails allowing them to roam the Yr Widdfa while avoiding the main paths. Each woman was carrying a bag of supplies, and they were all wearing warm clothes.

Yuka proved to be good at mountain survival. She knew about the dangers of the fissures and the strong wind. She knew how to climb. She knew how to make a fire that wouldn't be spotted from a distance.

After a week of mountain climbing, they were now nearing their destination – at least according to the tome's informations.

Huddled together around a fire, the five companions were discussing their next course of action.

Jinora was boiling water. She gave everyone a cup of infusion. They all eagerly accepted, and used the beverage to warm themselves up.

Azeneth was seated near Jinora. With a smile, she briefly squeezed her friend's shoulder. Jinora smiled lightly.

Yuka and Yisüi were sitting in front of them. Coulter was remaining aloof in a corner of the fire.

“Well, you can certainly say that our adventures are making us see more of the world...” Azeneth finally intervened. “Pakal's different provinces. Ghazan. Danann. We discover new places, new customs, new people...”

“... new outfits.” Yuka added as a joke.

Azeneth, Yisüi, and Jinora chuckled.

"What can I say if the women are always eager to help us by lending their clothes..." Azeneth said.

Her three friends laughed.

Coulter scoffed and rolled her eyes in annoyance, but they ignored her.

Jinora took a sip of her infusion, then said: “You know, I never would have thought I'd climb a mountain one day. When I was young, I thought I'd live my entire life in the city of Millhaco.” She looked around her. “The stars are beautiful and the air feels so pure here... When we're sitting together, I almost forget that we're on a mission. I just enjoy being with you.”

Jinora was usually quiet and reserved. She was rarely sharing her emotions so openly. Yuka and Azeneth appreciated her comment at its fair value. Yisüi smiled. Coulter drank her infusion in silence.

"The pleasure is shared." Yuka said. "After all, Az' and I wouldn't go very far without someone more down-to-earth and reasonable to keep us in check." She added, as a joke: "Especially Az'. I mean, she's good with her knives and her fists, but she needs someone to point her the right direction where she has to throw them."

The metis smiled and shrugged. "Some people think, other people act."

Jinora intervened. "Maybe we shouldn't become complacent so soon. We haven't found the artifacts yet."

Azeneth rolled her eyes. "Mood ruiner..." she teased her friend.

“Though she's not entirely wrong." Yuka said "I've spotted a spring nearby. Tomorrow, we'll fill up our gourds before we go.”

“You know so many things about mountain survival, Yuka.” Yisüi commented. “It's impressive, and-” She stopped talking when she noticed Yuka's expression had changed.

There was a moment of silence.

“Even with the maps we found, Tsuki and I had to spend several months in the Yr Widdfa before we found the Black Star.” Yuka finally confessed. “That's how I learned.”

Another moment of silence.

“I think we're getting close to our goal.” Coulter suddenly intervened.

Her interventions were so rare during group meetings that it took everyone by surprise. A part of Yuka briefly wondered if she had done it on purpose to change the subject, and prevent the shapeshifter from having to talk about her past again, bailing her out from an awkward situation.

“There's something emitting a magical aura nearby.” the red-haired mage-woman added. “I think I will be able to locate it now that we're close enough.”

“Now, that's good news!” Azeneth exclaimed. “It's only a matter of days before we reach our goal, at most!”

She happily shook Jinora's shoulder who, while she was more reserved, was also smiling.

Yuka noticed that Yisüi was still looking embarassed.

“You know, Yisü'... We've never been so close to Gengis. Wouldn't you want to go home? Maybe we could find a way after we've found the artifacts...”

Yisüi raised her head. “Truly?”

Yuka smiled. At least, she had managed to lift her friend's spirit... “If you want to. I'm sure we can find a boat.”

The blonde hesitated. “I won't deny that I miss home... But when I return, I'd like to go there with you.” She blushed a little, then added: “You're my friends. You've taught me many things. How to defend myself. How to read. You've helped me assert myself. I want to show you my home.”

Azeneth chuckled. Yuka punched her lightly and playfully in the shoulder. Jinora simply smiled.

Coulter remained impassible.

**************

Tsuki was bored.

So bored...

This expedition was so monotonous. Only riding from city to city, from village to village. All day. Plus, she didn't like horses.

To occupy her mind, she remembered the time she had with the sailor...

The tall sailor had looked tough, but she was mewling rather pitifully in her gag, with a pleading expression. She was stuff-gagged with a thick rag, and the shapeshifter added a cleave-gag and a cloth-gag over the mouth just for fun. Tsuki had used so many ropes to bind the ashen-blond sailor that it looked like she was cocooned in brown ropes from the collarbone to the toes. At first, after knocking her out with her touch, the shapeshifter merely bound her victim's ankles and wrists. Then she found it funnier to wrap ropes around her feet, calves, thighs, and upper-arms. Then, she found other coils of rope and cose to add them as well. And, one thing leading to another... At least, the ropes were protecting the sailor's modesty: As underwear, she was wearing a light grey chemise so thin that Tsuki had been able to see her nipples, and tight faded blue underdrawers that left little to the imaginations.

Some other sailors, and Safiye, were probably suspecting what was going on in this part of the hold, but none dared interrupt the unhinged shapeshifter.

Tsuki blindfolded the woman, trying to see if she could still find some enjoyment, but binding this specific woman wasn't funny anymore.

The shapeshifter lost interest in the slightly wriggling cocooned woman, who was letting out muffled cries.

Tsuki was a little disappointed. She thought that she'd enjoy herself longer. Indeed, the woman had an exotic appearance: ashen blond hair, green eyes, and a light skin. She had been hired by the Mages from beyond the ocean. However, now that she had aquired her appearance, the shapeshifter had lost all interest in the sailor.

No matter how many women she mugged, she always craved for more. She was never satisfied. Never satiated.

Even taking the sailor's clothes in order to wear them, to do things Yuka's way, merely brought her a brief moment pleasure. One that was quicly gone away.

Only finding the Black Star would quell her thirst.

However, until that Frabjous day, there would always be another woman...


The shapeshifter had set her sights on someone else.

The soldier was a tall muscular almost manish-looking woman, with a rough copper-coloured skin, braided coarse black hair, dark eyes, and two nose rings.

Tsuki wanted to take her appearance. Ever since she had her fun with the sailor woman, she hadn't been able to steal someone's appearance, as the Mages wouldn't have approved her antics. However, they were now in the Vassal Kingdoms, far away from their gaze...

Safiye was warily looking at her partner, but the shapeshifter didn't care. Safiye wasn't going to say anything. Probably. And even if she did, it would only make things more interesting. Tsuki craved for constant changing and constant amusement, not for staying in her comfort zone. Though Safiye wouldn't probably say anything. After all, if a soldier disappeared during a halt, who would care? The success of the mission was more important. Everyone would simply believe that she was a deserter.

The Mages sent Safiye and Tsuki to the Vassal Kingdoms for a special mission. To try to find Yuka and her new friends.

They were escorted by a small contingent of elite soldiers of the Empire, led by a captain who was as boring as he was competent.

As part of their little squad, there was also an initiate called Itzel, a former novice recently promoted, who was communicating their progress to the Mages with her powers. She was a tanned young woman who had brown eyes and ebony black hair tied up into a high braid. Itzel had a score to settle with Azeneth, one of Yuka's companions, who ambushed and humiliated her while she still was a novice.

To guide them, a knight called Astrid offered her services in the port city of Dun Merida.She had mid-back-long blond hair styled in a braid down her back, with fringes that covered her forehead. Her eyes were light blue and her skin was light. She was of average size, with a fit body and a round face. She was wearing a metallic chaimail over a white tunic. Over the chainmail, she was wearing a red and golden tabard adorned with a black tower in the middle. She was also wearing gloves reinforced with metal, a thick brown large leather belt around her waist to carry the sheaths of her weapons, metallic leg-protections over a black hose, shoes reinforced with metal, and some kind of armored skirt. She had a metal-studded kransen that went across her forehead. She was armed with an impressive-looking double-edged battle axe and a dagger, and was carrying her metallic helmet in a bag slumped over her shoulder. Yuka actually mugged Astrid shortly after she disembarked, forcing the knight-errant to spend a good chunk of her family's money to buy a new gear. She wanted to help them catch the 'dangerous criminals'.

Tsuki was finding her ingenuousness hilarious.

Currently, their little group was on their way to the Yr Widdfa. Mages had informants everywhere in the Vassal Kingdoms, who were communicating with them in real time through magic means. And one of them heard the rumour that an entire commadery of the Order of the Thorn had been mugged...

**************

With Coulter's powers, they managed to locate the entry of the ruins they were looking for.

"So... This is what the architecture from before the death of the gods looks like?" Azeneth commented. "It's a little... dull."

The passageways and caverns weren't natural. Their walls were smooth, as if someone had patiently polished them, and black.

Coulter used her magic to light up their path. The other four women were walking behind her.

The five women carefully walked across the underground corridors and caverns, wary for hidden traps. There were none though. In fact, they were empty.

"I'm starting to fear that we've done this journey for nothing..." Yuka commented. "I hope not!"

However, she would soon regret those words...

They arrived in a circular cavern.

Yisüi let out a small exclamation of surprise.

"Look!"

Contrary to the other parts of the ruins, this room wasn't empty.

In the middle of the room, a jade green slightly glowing sphere was on a pedestal. Around it, there were big mirrors made of silver and glass. In the back of the room, on mrarble tables, there were stones vaguely looking like catalysts.

Yuka exchanged a perplexed look with her friends.

"What's this?"

The mirrors were indeed strange. They were showing images of them, but they weren't showing reflections. The images of them were looking different than them, with other clothes. Sometimes, with other people.

There was a strange atmosphere in this room.

"I have a bad feeling about this place..." Yisüi commented, not trying to hide her fear.

Jinora was nervously rubbing her hands. "Me too."

Azeneth nodded and stayed close to them.

Coulter warily approached the images shown in the mirrors.

“Why aren't they showing our reflections? What are they for?”

“Don't ask me! You're the magic expert!” Yuka exclaimed.

The red-haired mage-woman observed the devices.

“I guess they are showing... potentialities.” Coulter finally said. “They show what our lives would look like today, if we had chosen different paths in the past...”

Out of curiosity, Yuka tried to look at one of the mirrors showing an image of her. There was an image of Tsuki and Hinata standing with her, Azeneth, Jinora, Rashid and Yisüi – and Coulter in a corner. Tsuki and Hinata part of their team fighting against the Mages. Looking happy and, in Tsuki's case, sane. This scene was what could have happened had Yuka managed to save Hinata from the burning house. A potentiality where she therefore never tried to foolishly harness the power of the Black Star while bringing Tsuki with her...

Yuka looked away. She couldn't bare witnessing that potentiality.

Azeneth was looking at another mirror, one showing her father. She was unusually glum. Jinora and Yisüi were comforting her.

Yuka looked at the sphere on the pedestal in the middle of the room.

“Coulter. Do you think we can touch the sphere?” the shapeshifter asked.

She was still carrying an inhibitor given to her by Rashid. She was wondering if it would work on an artifact...

No answer.

“Coulter?”

The red-haired mage-woman was looking at a mirror. In it, there was another version of her. A Coulter who was dressed with Pakal clothes. Her red hair were braided. She looked like a merchant or the assistant of a merchant. Next to her, there was an older woman with coarse black hair. Also a merchant, and some kind of mentor for the redehead.

Guess this is a potentiality where Coulter chose to stay with Eztli. Yuka thought.

The shapeshifter was however surprised by the expression she saw on Coulter's face. The red-haired mage-woman was looking at her double in the mirror with envy. A deep envy that she could barely conceal.

“Coulter...?”

The redhead was broken out of her trance.

“Don't you dare look at that mirror!” she angrily shouted.

Coulter quickly approached the shapeshifter and pushed her away.

“Hey! No need to get physical!” Yuka retorted.

“I said don't look!”

“Uh... Girls...” Jinora suddenly intervened. “I think we have a huge problem...”

The sphere on its pedestal had started glowing, as if it was reacting to Coulter's anger and powers.

Frightened, Yisüi took a step back. Azeneth moved to protect she and Jinora.

Yuka turned to the mage-woman.

“Coulter! Stop it!”

But Coulter was taken by surprise. She couldn't unleash her power in time.

The light spread.

“I... I can't!”

The light engulfed them all.

Re: Pakal

Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2021 10:04 pm
by rufusluciusivan
Be careful! I had to separate the post into two parts due to its legth; therefore make sure to read the previous post before this one.


























**************

Yuka blinked.

Where am I?

One second earlier, she was in the ruins of the Yr Widdfa, near that weird sphere and its mirrors.

And now... She was in here.

A cold stone underground. One that looked like a castle's underground. Gothic, damp, and dark.

These weren't the ruins anymore, but it wasn't a place she recognized either.

Coulter said that the mirrors were showing other potentialities... Am in another world? Or is it only an illusion casted by the artifact?

Yuka heard a few voices.

Other people?

“... heard noise... suspicious magical activity...”

“... good idea... alone?”

Two figures were approaching.

Yuka had no choice but try her luck.

“Uhm... Hello? I come in peace!” she called.

The two figures stopped walking.

“Junia!” one of them exclaimed.

The second figure brandished a mace and shouted a brief spell.

There was a flash of blinding white light.

Yuka didn't even have the time to understand what was happening. She was knocked out instantly.

**************

Ow... My head...

Yuka's entire world was black. She was having a hard time regaining her consciousness.

Is this what humans feel like when I use the touch on them?

How much time had passed? Where were her friends? She felt as if hours had passed...

The shapeshifter was hearing people talking nearby.

“She doesn't look like a spawn of the Dungeon... Are you sure about you?” a first female voice asked.

“One can never be too cautious. Just make sure that William doesn't hear about her before I'm done. Or else he will insist on doing a questioning to 'give her a fair chance'.” a second female voice retorted.

“Still...”

“You saw just like me that she was carrying a magic artifact on her."

Are they talking about the inhibitor Rashid gave me?

Yuka opened her eyes and groaned.

The shapeshifter thus noticed that she was tied spread-eagle to a thick wooden operating table with leather restraints.

“What the-?!” she exclaimed.

She was in a room looking like the laboratory of a scholar. Two persons were nearby.

“Paracelsus, she's waking up!” the first said.

“Don't fret. She's been restrained.”

The first person was a woman, dressed as some kind of priestess or vestal, with layers of clothes, gloves and a hood covering her entire body save for her face.

The second person, called Paracelsus apparently, was wearing an ankle-long dark brown overcoat with a hood and a grey bird-like beak mask, a dark brown tunic, black gloves, dark brown trousers with a large belt tied around the waist, and brown boots. Because of the layers of loose-fitting clothing, the beak mask and the hood, it was hard to guess their gender just by their physique – but the plague doctor's voice was clearly female.

“Junia, go check how the others are doing outside.” Paracelsus said. “I will try to find out this one's secrets...”

The priestess nodded, apparently eager to leave the laboratory.

Yuka looked at Paracelsus. The beak mask was a little unnerving, as she couldn't see the woman's face.

“Where are my friends?!” she asked her.

Paracelsus titled her head quizically. “Your friends? I don't know. You were alone when we found you.”

So it means they haven't been captured. Are they also in this potentiality? Or have they been sent into another? Azeneth, Jinora, and Yisüi were close to each other. With some luck, they have been able to remain together. Is this even real? Am I dreaming?

However, if this was real and they truly were sent into other potentialities, then their situation was dire. Yuka had no idea how to regroup with them.

One problem at a time. First, I have to find a way to free myself.

Yuka turned her attention towards Paracelsus again. The plague doctor was grabbing a few instruments. Among them, there clearly were various little knives used for dissection. The shapeshifter gulped.

Trying to start a conversation was a little awkward when one was tied to an operating table. Yuka still tried.

“So... You're a scholar, right?”

“More like a doctor actually.” Paracelsus answered.

“And this is your laboratory? It seems a little... stress-inducing.”

“What better laboratory than the blood-soaked battlefield?”

Great. She sounds as crazy as Tsuki.

Still, Yuka tried to continue the conversation. “So, you think that I'm a monster sent by this... Dungeon or something?”

“Yes. The Darkest Dungeon. The place where the cult of the Black Star of Death has gathered.”

The Black Star? Is it another potentiality? One where something went horribly wrong with Her?

“And you're planning on dissecting me to check if I truly am one of this Star's spawns?” Yuka asked.

“Yes.”

There was an awkward pause.

“Uhm... Perhaps could you consider... interrogating me before you open me up?”

“We tried that with the previous prisoner, but she turned out to be a monster. She managed to kill Alhazred before we could cut her head. I will not make the same mistake with you.” Paracelsus calmly explained while rummaging through unfriendly-looking tools. She was turning her back to Yuka.

Well, looks like there's no discussion with those people. Yuka shrugged internally. At least I tried... Now, let's try to free myself. I certainly don't want to be disscected!

Yuka shapeshifted, making her a lot thinner by adopting the appearance of a younger woman. Her limbs became thin enough to slip through the leather restraints.

Paracelsus was contemplating wether she should take a small saw or not. “I can assure you that you won't feel a thing. I am a trained doctor.” she said with her back still turned.

Yuka took back her default appeance, and grabbed one of the small dissection knives on the table next to the bed on which she used to be tied.

Before the plague doctor could realize that her 'patient' was free, Yuka filled the distance between Paracelsus and her.

Since the woman was wearing an outfit that was covering her entire body, face included, Yuka couldn't touch her bare skin. Therefore, she couldn't use her powers to knock her out. The shapeshifter decided that a good old-fashioned threat would have to do the trick.

She grabbed Paracelsus's left arm and twisted it behind the plague doctor's back. She pressed the knife between the woman's mask and cloak's collar, threatening to slit her throat.

“I'd rather not try my luck, even under the hands of a trained doctor.” Yuka coldly commented.

She couldn't see Paracelsus's face, but her undignified nervous gurgles were proof enough that the woman was feeling fear and surprise.

“I suppose you were planning to put me to sleep with something before the dissection began. Where is it?”

With a shaky hand, Paracelsus pointed at a bottle and a rag on the small table next to the operating table.

“Well, well, would you look at that? A classic.” Yuka commented. “We will walk towards it. You will take the bottle and the rag, remove that ugly mask, and take a few good breaths of this nice potion.”

Paracelsus clearly wasn't the kind of person used to hand-to-hand violence. She obeyed Yuka's instructions.

The plague doctor poured the sleeping potion on the rag and took off her mask. She hesitated.

Yuka slightly stang her with the knife to motivate her.

Paracelsus dropped her mask on the floor and clamped the rag over her own mouth and nose. She breathed deeply several times. When the plague doctor started to stagger, feeling dizzy because of the fumes, Yuka immediately clamped a hand over Paracelsus's hand that was holding the rag, to make sure that she would continue breathing the narcotic potion.

“By the way, I won't slit your throat, so I hope that this will be seen as a token of good faith.” Yuka harshly whispered to the woman who was quickly dozing off.

Once Paracelsus was off to slumberland, Yuka laid her on the stone floor. She looked at the woman's figure concealing clothes.

I guess that they won't let me just walk away if they think I'm an enemy.

Grousing under her breath against the stupid paranoia of these people, the shapeshifter patiently removed each layer of clothes that was covering the plague doctor's body. Given their quantity, it took her quite some time, but luckily Junia didn't come back.

For a woman disturbingly interested in dissection, Paracelsus was strangely cute. Her straight shoulder-long black hair were down, and she had a flawless white skin as well as a cute round face and perky breasts. As undergarments, she was wearing a white short-sleeved light linen tunic, grey thigh-long underpants and dirty white socks.

Yuka dragged the motionless body of the deeply asleep woman and restrained the plague doctor on the operation table, using the leather restraints to bind her spread-eagle the same way she was tied. She cut a few strips of her mountain clothes she was wearing with a dissection knife and shoved them into Paracelsus' mouth to stuff-gag her. Finally, she covered her with a sheet to conceal her.

Yuka was still grousing under her breath when she put on the clothes of the plague doctor. Even though it wasn't necessary since her entire body was concealed, she changed shape to take Paracelsus's appearance, as it would allow her to speak with the woman's voice in case she needed to.

Yuka put on the beak mask and the hood. It was time for her to discover where her friends were.

On her way, she grabbed Rashid's inhibitor, that was on a nearby table. She certainly wasn't going to leave behind the precious device meant to neutralize a Mage's powers!

**************

The stone fort was looking as gothic and scary as its underground.

Once in the courtyard, Yuka understood why nobody came to check on Paracelsus. People were running right and left, screaming and raising the alarm. Apparently, they were under attack.

Yuka was trying to lay low. For her, it was strange to NOT be responsible of the alarm being sounded...

Not good. How am I supposed to leave this place to look for the others if it's under attack?

She came across a conversation between two defenders.

“Go fetch the artifact!” a woman ordered to an armoured knight. “William wants it on the walls!”

The woman was tall and athletic, with grey eyes and red hair tied into a ponytail and shaved on the sides. On her face and her arms, there were blue war paints. Suddenly, she noticed Yuka.

“Paracelsus! Come quickly! You won't believe what William found!”

The hellion grabbed Yuka's arm, and led her to the walls. It allowed the shapeshifter to have a good view of the army approaching the small fort. She gagged. The army wasn't composed of humans, but of creatures.

They were disgusting-looking. Degenerate monstrous-looking bipedal pigs armed with crude metallic weapons.

And in the distance, Yuka could see a huge ruined castle surrounded by dark purple fog. Around it, the sky looked red and the lands were ashen grey.

What is wrong with this place?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS POTENTIALITY?!

Suddenly, there was a loud noise. Yuka jumped in surprise. From the wall facing the arriving army, arrows of light and fire rained down on the creatures.

The shapeshifter recognized this sort of magic. Sun magic.

Apparently, the sun magic was the creatures' weakness. Merely standing near was enough to make their bodies melt gruesomly. Therefore, each arrow of light was destroying its target, and all the creatures surrounding it. The sight and smell of the melting flesh were disgusting. A few minutes were enough to send the creatures fleeing.

Yuka couldn't care less. She had recognized the figure of the woman raining down death and fire on the attackers. She had a mane of curly red hair and a bronze-coloured skin.

Yuka let the hellion lead her towards Coulter.

I can't believe it! I let her out of my sight during, like what, a few hours? And when I find her again, she's busy playing around with her magic instead of looking for our friends!

Still, the full display of Coulter's raw power was, as always, terrifying. It was a grim reminder of why only the lands that were able to effectively counter sun magic resisted Pakal's conquests. Indeed, while Coulter was unnaturally powerful, a few elite Mages were able to rain down the same destruction as her. And a hundred of Mages working together could raze entire cities with ease.

The mage-woman was accompanied by a bearded man who, given his outfit and attitude, was probably a former lawman. A dog was waiting at his feet.

Under her mask, Yuka grimaced. Shapeshifters and dogs didn't get along very well. Still, she ignored the animal and approached Coulter, hoping that Paracelsus' scent on the clothes would fool the mutt.

Outside the fort, the surviving pig-men were retreating. The red-haired woman kept on blasting them to kingdom come with an ecstatic smile.

“Coulter!” Yuka shouted, willingly using her own voice and not Paracelsus'.

The redhead turned. “Yuka?!” She frowned when she saw her clothes and beak mask. “What's with the dumb outfit?”

Dumb outfit? The nerves!

“Coulter! What is the meaning of this?!” Yuka retorted while throwing away the beak mask.

“Paracelsus. You know that woman?” the lawman asked.

Yuka ignored him. “Care to explain to me why, instead of looking for our friends, I see you prancing around with your powers?!”

“What? These people asked me for help!” Coulter retorted while pointing at the fort.

“They asked you for help- This is so unfair! Me, they tried to dissect me!”

“You're not Paracelsus?!” the lawman exclaimed.

“Quiet!” Coulter barked at him. “Well, is it my fault if they saw me use my powers? Apparently, sun magic is the mark of the good guys here, not shapeshifting!”

“And why exactly did you follow them?”

“They told me about the artifact they were using as a weapon. And you know what? Its description sounded an awful like the sphere who sent us here in the first place!”

Yuka's parience had run out by this point. “Now, that's a coincidence!” she shouted. “Are you sure you're not making that up? I bet you were just looking for an excuse to blow things up!”

“We've been given the confirmation that there may be other worlds, and a dumb coincidence is your biggest concern?!” Coulter retorted. “I'm not sure if this world is even real! Perhaps everything happening right now is only in our heads! Or perhaps the crystal can't transport us far away from it even if it sends us in other potentialities! And besides... What if I took advantage of the situation to use my powers? You're able to use yours all the time, while for me it's the first time in my life when I can use them without fear of the Sun Mages!”

“Right now, my biggest concern is finding our friends!” Yuka verbally counterattacked. “Not taking part in the great battle against the heart of all evil and an army of pig-men!”

“And why do you think I agreed to help them? In exchange, they gave me the right to use their artifact!”

The lawman and the hellion exchanged a glance, but wisely kept quiet. They were understanding that another story was unfolding under their eyes, and that it was best to not interfere.

“Our friends wouldn't be in danger if you had managed to block the artifact's powers!” Yuka screamed.

Suddenly, an armoured knight arrived. He was carrying a jade green glowing sphere.

“I have the artifact!” he exclaimed.

However, Yuka and Coulter were too busy being at each other's throat to notice him.

“So it's my fault now?! Maybe I wouldn't have been taken by surprise if you hadn't sticked your big nose in my personal life AGAIN!” Coulter retorted.

“Oh! Excuse me for trying to help you!”

They also didn't notice that the crystal started to glow...

“Help me?! You-”

The light engulfed them.

**************

Yuka blinked.

“What the-?!”

One second, she was on the walls of the fort, arguing with Coulter.

Now, she was standing in the empty alleyway of a familiar city. An alleyway of Chichen Itza.

However, this time, Coulter had stayed with her.

The two women shared an awkward look. They were alone. No sign of the lawman, the hellion, or the knight. In fact, had Yuka not still been wearing Paracelsus' plague doctor outfit, she would have been tempted to think that the latest turn of event was a weird dream.

There was a moment of silence.

Their sudden transportation had at least one upside. They were so surprised that they stopped arguing.

“Where are we now?” Yuka asked.

Coulter frowned. “Looks like Chichen Itza... But at the same time it looks... slightly different.”

“Well, at least there aren't dissection-happy doctors and disgusting pig-men.” Yuka commented.

The shapeshifter however had a strange sensation when looking at the buildings. The architecture was familiar, the noise of the town sounded the same as well... but at the same time she couldn't shake off the feeling that this wasn't her Chichen Itza.

She hesitated, then finally said: “Maybe we should explore a little?”

Coulter nodded in silence.

Yuka bit her lower lip. “Coulter... We won't be able to break free of this artifact if we keep on jumping at each other's throat...”

“You want to make a truce?” the redhead asked.

Yuka nodded. “I apologogize for having yelled at you. It's not your fault, as much as it's not mine. I'm just worried for Azeneth, Jinora, and Yisüi...”

Coulter grumbled something and avoided looking at her in the eyes. “Fine... Let's work together then...” She used the hood of her mountain clothes to conceal her face. Yuka did the same with the one of Paracelsus' outfit.

**************

It was indeed Chichen Itza.

The capital city of Pakal was as crowded and busy as they remembered, to the point that they were starting to wonder if they truly still were in an other potentiality in spite of their weird feeling.

“Maybe we're already back in our own world...” Yuka commented.

She shouldn't have said that...

The two women kept walking across the streets, until they arrived in a vast square. Yuka and Coulter noticed the monument at the same time.

Their jaws dropped.

“No way!” they exclaimed.

At the center of the square, there was a huge statue of a woman. She was wearing the mantle, the jewels, and the crown of quetzal feathers of the Emperors.

Yuka and Coulter weren't able to take their eyes off the face of the statue.

She looked like Coulter!

It took them several minutes to process the information.

“What's going on?!” the original Coulter exclaimed.

They heard a noise in the distance.

“A procession?”

**************

It indeed was a procession. Slaves were dragging a platform, shaped to look like a small stepped pyramid, and mounted on wheels. At the top of the mobile stepped pyramid, there was a throne.

And sitting on the throne... was a woman Yuka would never have thought to see at this place.

The herald in front of the procession was shouting.

“She is the Rising Sun of the Empire! She is the East and the West! People of Chichen Itza, salute your Empress!”

The crowd was chanting her name.

“Coulter! Coulter! Coulter! Coulter!”

Yuka and Coulter couldn't take their eyes off the spectacle.

Indeed, the Empress was Coulter's spitting image: same bronzed skin, same amber eyes, same red hair. She was wearing the imperial golden mantle adorned with jade stones, over a precious sunny yellow huipil with a pattern of black stylized suns, adorned with silver threads and with jade beads, a crimson skirt held with a golden sash, and gold-plated sandals. Around her neck, she was wearing a medallion made of jade that was representing a sylized sun, and around her wrists there were long jade bracelets with carved suns. On her head, there was the gold crown adorned with iridescent green and bright red quetzal feathers. Her hair were tightly braided and adorned with jade beads.

Empress Coulter was saluting the crowd. She was looking imperious and imperial, as well as perfectly comfortable with being revered as a demi-goddess by the crowd.

Yuka and Main-Coulter couldn't take their eyes off her, and kept gazing at the back of her procession even long after she was out of their sight.

“Something... Something went very... very wrong in this potentiality...” Yuka finally said.

Coulter nodded wordlessly.

**************

Yuka left Coulter in a small tavern, instructing her to lay low and NOT draw anyone's attention under any circumstance, then went to gather some informations.

The shapeshifter decided that she needed a more innocuous appearance if she wanted to ask questions. Indeed, she was still wearing the plague doctor's clotes (save for the beak mask), and she was looking out of place. (Plus, the clothes were way too hot for Pakal's weather...) The guise of a foreign merchant or traveller, on the other hand, would be perfect...

First, Yuka located an isolated guard. If she wanted to lure a woman in an isolated part of the town, having an appearance and clothes giving her authority was going to be a plus.

The guard had short braided coarse black hair, dark brown eyes, and a copper-coloured skin. Her braid was adorned with red stone beads. She was tall and slightly portly. She was wearing a knee-long ample red tunic, with a matching cloth headband, a leather belt tied around the waist, and leather protections strapped around her forearms and calves as well as leather sandals. She was armed with a polearm, a small club, and an obsidian dagger.

Yuka easily lured her in an empty alleyway by pretending that she had seen a suspicious activity inside. This specific guard clearly wasn't the brightest of the bunch, and she followed the shapeshifter in the alleyway without questioning her story.

After a brief brawl, and a swift undressing, Yuka was leaving the alleyway. The shapeshifter was wearing a new set of clothes, and was now looking like the guard's twin sister.

Inside the alleyway, hidden in a dark corner, an unconscious guard was lying. She was left only clad in a brown loincloth. A white strap of cloth was wrapped a few times around her breasts and her back to cover them. Her hands were bound behind her back with straps of Paracelsus' cloak, tunic and trousers. Her ankles were tied with the same makeshift bonds. She was stuff-gagged with a thick piece of cloth. A second was tied over her mouth.

With her freshly stolen appearance and uniform, Yuka went to the port district. She wandered in the streets until she found a perfect candidate.

She spotted a lone woman wearing foreign clothes, either a freshly disembarked merchant taking a break or a visiting traveller. The foreign woman had a light skin with a slight tan. Her blond hair were almost red, and her eyes were green-blue. She was wearing a sky blue long-sleeved one-piece travel dress with white cuffs and collar. A white sash was tied around her waist. She was walking in brown travelling shoes. A translucent light green shawl was wrapped around her shoulders.

She was looking in awe. A clear sign that it was her first time in Chichen Itza.

Easy picking...

Yuka approached her.

“Madam. You have to follow me.”

“Wh-What? Why?”

“A group of foreign assassins are trying to harm our Empress. I need to interrogate you to make sure that you're not one of them.”

Intimidated by the guard outfit, the woman complied. She followed Yuka in an alleyway.

A short scuffle punctuated by a few muffled shouts for help that were silenced by a hand clamped over the mouth and ten minutes later, a satisfied Yuka returned in the main streets of the port district. She was now wearing a sky blue long-sleeved one-piece travel dress with white cuffs and collar, a white sash, brown travelling shoes, and a translucent light green shawl. Her hair were now reddish blond, her skin was slightly tanned, and her eyes were green-blue.

The real traveller was hidden bound-and-gagged in a corner of the alleyway. As underwear, she was wearing a pink light underdress. A light blue ribbon was tied around her waist. Yuka had cut the guard's red tunic into makeshift bonds, then bound and gagged her.

Now playing the part of the slightly dumb traveller, Yuka was free to question people around her.

She noticed a few soldiers patrolling the streets. They apparently were looking for someone.

“What's happening?” Yuka asked them.

“A ruffian assaulted a guard!” the officer commanding the patrol answered. “She dared strip and humiliate her! We'll catch her and give her a lesson she will never forget!”

“Well, I hope you will catch this devious fiend.” Yuka answered without breaking out off character and betraying any emotion. “I wish you the best of luck.”

**************

Once she was satisfied with the informations she gathered, Yuka regrouped with Coulter in the small tavern. She was relieved to see that the red-haired mage-woman didn't draw anyone's attention and didn't even set someone on fire yet.

“From what I could gather, it seems that we are in a potentiality. A potentiality in which the Mages chose to take you under their wing instead of trying to kill you.”

“So they turned me into their puppet empress?” the mage-woman asked.

“Well... No. You seem to be their equal partner. Their leader even.”

Coulter blinked.

“That's... That's disgusting!” she barked. “How could I... How could I even think of allying myself with them?”

“No matter what the reasons of your counterpart were, one thing is certain: Power went to her head. Now, the Mages are her marionette government. In fact, she had Ce-Acatl and several other high-ranked Mages executed for treason precisely because they tried to turn her into a puppet empress.”

“Impossible! The Mages would never take her coup lying down...”

“They don't have a choice. To protect herself from assassins, the Empress created new catalysts. Ones that prevent anyone but her to use her powers. They are embedded in all the walls of the Grand Temple. No Mage can reach her there.”

Coulter raised a hand to interrupt Yuka.

“You know what? I couldn't care less about the political plottings of my counterpart.” the redhead said. “We need to leave this world and return to ours. I guess I can try to transport us in the mountains where the artifacts are. The Mages of this alternate reality have no reason to fear the Moon Child anymore. Now that I know the location of the place, it shouldn't be a problem to transport us there. Hopefully, the artifacts are in the same location.”

Yuka shook her head.

“We can't do that.”

“What? Why?”

“The Empress has gathered plenty of powerful magical artifacts in the Grand Temple. Artifacts from all around the world.”

“No...”

“And among them, there's a sphere they found in the Yr Widdfa...”

“Shit!”

“Maybe not.” Yuka remarked. “In fact, this is maybe a blessing in disguise. You could just transport us inside the Grand Temple.”

“Didn't you say that the catalysts prevent anyone but the Empress to use their powers in and around the building?”

“Yes, anyone BUT the Empress.”

“So?”

“Coulter. You are her and she is you. What works for her should work for you as well.”

The red-haired mage-woman opened her mouth to retort something, but didn't say anything. She thought for a moment.

“I guess it's worth a try... But how do you intend to neutralize the Empress if we come across her?”

Yuka showed her the inhibitor. “We still have this...”

Coulter gazed at the device designed to nullify a Mage's powers. Her disgust was palpable. “I suppose that she deserves it, if she allied herself with the Mages...” the Charioteer finally said. “Let's do it then. I want to leave this horrid potentiality as soon as possible.”

**************

The good thing was that Yuka's intuition turned out to be correct.

The bad thing was that they appeared directly in the middle of the Empress' bedroom while the latter was inside, seated on a chair and reading a book.

Alter-Coulter was sitting on a chair, reading a book. While her mantle and crown were hung on a gold rack, she was still looking regal in her clothes.

The Empress glared at them.

Yuka and Main-Coulter glared back at her.

There were a few seconds of awkward silence.

Then the Empress jumped on her feet. “Who dares?!” she exclaimed.

“Coulter! Stop her!”

Coulter invoked her powers while Yuka was running out of the way, trying to flank the Empress while putting herself out of range in order to not be hit in the crossfire.

The two Coulters unleashed their power.

The two waves of power collided with each other, crushing everything between them.

Main-Coulter casted a spell rather similar to the ones that the Mages used in Ce-Tochtli's palace to try to block her powers and neutralize her. It also had the side-effect of muting any noise in the room.

The Empress tried to fight back but, clearly, she wasn't used anymore to have to fight an opponent of her caliber. And she wasn't expecting someone to be able to use magic inside her palace either. Main-Coulter used the element of suprise to immediately take the upper hand.

The Empress lost balance and fell. Main-Coulter was using her power to pin her alter ego on the floor and block her arms and legs.

“How dare you?!” Alter-Coulter exclaimed. “Who are you, usurper?!”

“I'm you, but better. I'm you, but with self-respect.” Main-Coulter retorted.

The Empress wasn't able to move or to cast a spell anymore.

Yuka jumped her and quickly clipped the collar of the inhibitor around Alter-Coulter's neck. The crystal glowed and inhibited her powers.

“What?!” the Empress exclaimed. “What did you do to me?!”

“A little gift to make sure that you stay nice. Coulter, keep pinning her on the floor. I'll take her clothes for you. Then, we'll truss her up nice and tight, and find a nice place to stach her...”

“How dare you?! I am the Empress! I am the Rising Sun of the Empire! I refuse to be stripped and trussed up as if I was somMMMMMHHHH!”

Yuka shoved a thick rag she was carrying on her into Alter-Coulter's mouth and tightly knotted it behind her neck.

“Oh, just shut your trap!” the shapeshifter exclaimed.

“GRMMMHHH! MMMPHHH! GMMMPHHH!” the Empress groaned.

“I admit that it's incredibly satisfying.” the shapeshifter commented.

Main-Coulter shot a nasty look at her.

For good mesure, Yuka tied another thicker rag over Alter-Coulter's mouth to serve as a cloth gag besides the cleave-gag.

“Gmmmhhh! Mphhh! Mhhh!”

Yuka rolled her eyes. “Such a big mouth...”

The shapeshifter then removed the imperial garments and jewelries one by one, save for the jade beads in the braid as it would require too much time. The Empress' limbs were completely paralyzed by Coulter. She couldn't move a muscle. While she was conscious, her body was as motionless as if she was unconscious. Stripping her victim was a strange experience.

Once Alter-Coulter was down to her undergarments, a pristine white calf-long sleeveless underdress with gold trimmings, Yuka hesitated. A part of her really wanted to go all out and humiliate this shrew.

“Remove her undergarments and I will break your fingers.” Main-Coulter warned her.

“Fine.”

Yuka grabbed the cords of the bed's curtains. She used two of them to tightly bind the wrists and the ankles of the red-haired Empress. Deciding that it probably wouldn't be enough to restrain her, she also took the curtains themselves and cut them into strips. She wrapped and tightened them around Alter-Coulter's shoulders, around her arms below the breasts, around her thighs, and around her legs.

“That should hold her... You can release her now.”

The Empress immediately started to thrash about. Her body was jerking widely. They couldn't hear her thanks to the thick gag, but it was clear that she was swearing like a sailor.

Yuka smiled, admired the spectacle during a few seconds, then grabbed Alter-Coulter's bare left shoulder. Her palm glowed slightly. The Empress' eyes widened, then rolled back. She passed out with a muffled groan.

“Why didn't you do it earlier?” Coulter asked.

“It was funnier to watch her squirm a little.”

Coulter scoffed. She looked at her unconscious counterpart. “This feels so wrong...”

Mugging herself and stealing her own identity and clothes was indeed a surreal experience.

Among the furnitures of the Empress' bedroom, there was a huge wardrobe made in precious wood.

Yuka and Coulter carried the trussed up red-haired empress; the former was holding the shoulders and the latter was holding the legs. They stashed Alter-Coulter inside the wardrobe, then closed the door and blocked it with a chair. The thick frame of the wood would muffle their victim's attempts to be heard even after she woke up.

Coulter then reluctantly put on the Empress' sunny yellow huipil with a pattern of black stylized suns, silver threads and adorned with jade beads, her crimson skirt held with a golden sash, her gold-plated sandals, and her golden mantle adorned with jade stones (the latter which she took on the rack). Then, she put on the other imperial attributes: the jade medallion of the sun and the jade bracelets with carved suns.

Yuka helped her comb and braid her hair with jade beads that she stole in the Empress' jewelry box. Seated on the chair, Coulter remained tense the entire time. The redhead clearly wasn't used to have someone else taking care of her hair. The shapeshifter made sure to comb and to braid the hair gently. Of course, she didn't say it out loud, but Yuka was taking great pleasure in touching and handling the mage-woman's fluffy curly mane. A small part of her was even regretting that Coulter wasn't allowing her to do it under normal circumstances.

Finally, once she was done, Yuka put the imperial crown of gold and quetzal feathers on Coulter's head.

“Long live the Empress.” the shapeshifter joked.

Coulter shot her a nasty look.

“What about you?” she then asked Yuka. “You need other clothes if you want to walk the corridors of the palace.”

“Well, I don't think that anyone would find it strange if the Empress called one of her personal handmaidens, if you see what I mean.”

**************

The handmaiden was wearing a brightly-coloured red and blue huipil adorned around the collar with long black and white feathers. Gold were intertwined within the fibers of her clothes to showcase the luxury of her garments. To cover the lower part of her body, she was wearing a white sewn closed cueitl with golden edges. There were gold and jade bangles around her forearms, and she was wearing a gold choker, a gold nose ring, as well as earrings made of jade.

She had a curvaceous body, a soft flawless tanned copper-coloured skin, waist-long lustrous braided black hair adorned with red and blue stone beads, gorgeous almond-shaped hazel eyes, and an oval-shaped face.

“You called me, my Empress?” she asked.

“Yes. I need your assistance.” Coulter said, trying to imitate the imperious tone of her counterpart.

“What do you require?”

“I require-” Coulter interrupted herself, realizing that she had no idea what to ask.

The red-haired mage-woman wasn't exactly the best at lying...

Hidden in a corner of the room, in the handmaiden's blindspot, Yuka couldn't resist watching the redhead squirm a little.

“-I require something, of course.” Coulter improvised. “Hence why I called you. And it's something important of course. If not, I wouldn't have called you. It's... something... very... very... important.”

The handmaiden caught on to the trick.

“You... You are not my Empress!” she exclaimed.

Yuka jumped her from behind. With one hand she grabbed her wrist and twisted her arm behind her back. She clamped her other hand over the woman's mouth.

“Mhhhfff??!!”

Yuka's hands glowed.

The handmaiden passed out in her arms with a muffled moan.

The shapeshifter held the woman's limp unconscious body. Her figure blurred, until she now was the handmaiden's perfect lookalike.

“I will make you pay.” Coulter warned her.

The shapeshifter ignored her. She stripped the handmaiden of her outer garments and of all her jewels. Since she was alone, the process proved to be longer and more arduous than she expected. If only Azeneth, Jinora and Yisüi were there... Of course, Coulter didn't lift a finger to help her. Even when she was in a good mood, the redhead refused to take part in the infiltration and clothes stealing process of their missions. Since she had just provoked her, Yuka didn't even try to ask her for help. The shapeshifter didn't even need to turn to know that Coulter was currently smiling. Just let her have her immature revenge. After all, you also had your petty fun at her expense. Besides, she could understand Coulter's aversion towards infiltration. An infiltrator was responsible of the death of her clan; and, in terms of personality, Coulter was the kind of person who thrives in direct confrontation, not sneaky infiltration.

As underwear, the black-haired handmaiden was wearing a strap of golden cloth wrapped a few times around the breasts and the back, and a scarlet red loincloth.

The last remaining shreds of the imperial bed's curtains and the sheets were sacrificed to make a few more makeshift bonds. Yuka tied the handmaiden's limbs, wrists, and shoulders. She cleave-gagged her victim.

Finally, the handmaiden was stashed into the wardrobe. Her face had fallen forward and was resting on her Empress' breasts. Yuka had to say: the alternate version of Coulter was a lot more tolerable when she was bound, gagged and out cold. In fact, with her unconscious handmaiden leaning on her as if they were resting together, she even looked somewhat cute.

Yuka blocked once again the doors of the wardrobe with a chair, though she left it very slightly open to allow some air to enter. She wanted to humiliate the shrew, not sentence her to a potential suffocation. And she had nothing against her handmaiden.

“Wonder if they'll enjoy their position...” Yuka commented.

“What do you mean?” Coulter asked.

“Well, don't you find it strange that the Empress chooses to only have women at her direct service? There's no man around. From the informations I could gather, her consort is barely allowed to visit her from time to time to try to produce an heir.”

The shapeshifter looked at the red-haired mage-woman.

“I won't tell you.” Coulter barked.

“No fun.” Yuka complained.

Apparently, Coulter was regarding the conversation as over.

Yuka put on the handmaiden's dress.

**************

Just like in the mountains, Coulter used her powers to locate the sphere.

They arrived in front of a metallic door guarded by a soldier.

“Empress... Are you going in the artifacts' room?” the woman asked.

Coulter glared at her. “Am I not allowed to roam freely in my own palace?”

“No. Uh... I mean... Yes, of course! You are! But...”

“Keep standing guard and stop asking questions.” Coulter interrupted her.

The soldier rectified her position. “Yes!”

Coulter and Yuka entered the artifacts' room.

“Well, you got used to power very quickly...” Yuka commented.

“Shut up.”

**************

The artifacts' room deserved its name. It contained hundreds of catalysts and various magical devices from all the continent.

And in the middle, there was the crystal of the Yr Widdfa.

Yuka and Coulter warily approached it.

The mirrors were also there.

When she passed near it, Yuka couldn't help but glance at the mirror depicting Coulter as a merchant under Eztli's employ.

“You're still looking at it.” Coulter commented without even turning.

“Sorry. I simply don't know what happened-” Yuka started to say.

“I left her.” Coulter interrupted her.

“What?”

“You wanted to know what happened? I left her. That's it. Happy now?”

“But...”

Coulter was looking annoyed now. “What?! You were expecting a tragic tale? A meaningful heroic sacrifice? Well, there was none of it. I got into contact with people fighting against the Mages. Then I left Eztli's employ. That's it. She still has her shop in Millhaco. Her business is booming, actually.”

The shapeshifter frowned. Coulter's confession was actually raising more questions... Why would the redhead have left Eztli's employ if she seemed happy with her?

Then Yuka understood.

“You were happy with her.” she said out loud.

Coulter glared at her.

“That's why you left.” the shapeshifter insisted. “Because you were happy. Because you were tempted to take the life she was offering you. To become her apprentice for real, then to become a merchant. To have your own shop. Maybe to start a family. You left because you feared that you'd choose happiness instead of revenge.”

Coulter clenched her fists, and for a second Yuka was afraid that she was going to punch her.

“I'm a Charioteer!” the redhead exclaimed. “When someone hits me or mine, I retaliate threefold! My family would have wept in shame if I had chosen to grovel before the Mages like a coward! So shut your trap!”

Yuka looked at her with a sad expression. This time, she couldn't even find the strength to get angry. “Because you think they'd be happy to see what you are now? Bitter, hate-filled, alone, and unhappy?”

Her tirade apparently took Coulter by surprise, preventing the redhead from getting angrier.

“Why do you care anyway?” she finally retorted.

Yuka could have anwered: 'I don't know.', but deep down inside she was starting to understand her reasons. “I used to feel like you, after Hinata died. It cost me my best friend.” she confessed. “It didn't bring me any good. The fires of anger and revenge won't burn forever. And once they've finished consuming you, they leave nothing except ashes and regrets.”

Coulter bit her lower lip, completely unable to respond. She didn't even know how to react... The redhead opened her mouth to speak.

The sphere started to glow. Once again, it was reacting to Coulter's emotions. However, this time, the red-haired mage-woman was ready.

“Oh no you don't. Not this time!” the red-haired mage-woman angrily shouted.

Coulter unleashed her powers to contain the energy of the crystal.

“I want... to find Azeneth, Jinora, and Yisüi!” the redhead exclaimed.

A flash of light.

Coulter and Yuka disappeared with the crystal.

**************

Tsuki was slumbering.

Sleeping was always a strange experience, as a part of her mind was always connected to the Black Star. Therefore, a part of her mind was always awake. She was sleeping without fully sleeping. It was a sensation impossible to describe, even to herself.

The part of Tsuki that wasn't in a deep slumber was wondering if Safiye would try to slit her throat while she was vulnerable. The green-eyed spy hadn't been fooled by the convenient story of the soldier's desertion. Although she didn't give the shapeshifter up, she knew she was the culprit. There was the possibility that Safiye would take matters into her own hands. The woman had a huge instinct of self-preservation. She could decide that the best course of action to insure her survival would be to kill the unhinged shapeshifter before she became too dangerous. The perspective was thrilling Tsuki.

Safiye would probably never realize how much Tsuki loved being with her. The green-eyed spy was a greedy egoist who was contemplating betraying her partner at least once per day. And maybe one day she was going to decide that the risk was worth it... To Tsuki, this uncertainty was like an aphrodisiac drug.

The part of Tsuki that was asleep was dreaming.

“Alright! Where is she?! Where is that little rat?” the soldier asked.

“Over here. Inside this barn.”

The soldier kicked the door open. “Enemy of the Empire! Surrender yourself!”

She interrupted herself when she saw that nobody was inside.

Tsuki giggled and grabbed the muscular black-haired dark-eyed woman's neck. “Will you walk into my parlour? said a spider to a fly.” Her palm glowed.

The soldier gurgled, groaned, spasmed, and crumbled on the ground after one final moan. Tsuki grabbed her under the shoulders and dragged her inside the barn. She kicked the door closed.

The shapeshifter tossed a coin to decide if she'd strip the woman of her clothes or not. It was a new game she decided to try, curious to see if a part of chance would make things more interesting. The result indicated that she had to strip the woman.

Tsuki set to work. She removed the woman's travelling boots, her brown leather belt, her black travelling hooded cloak, her warm red trousers and matching padded knee-long tunic, leaving her in her faded red sleeveless undertunic and light brown underpants. She put on the clothes, and changed shape.

“Not bad... Not bad at all...” she said while looking at her muscles.

She grabbed a few coils of ropes, and had a lot of fun growing blades from her fingers to cut them. Then, she hogtied the soldier. Tsuki found a thick horse's bit, and found it funny to use it to gag the soldier. She blindfolded the woman with a scarf.

Then she waited for her victim to wake up.

The soldier proved to be a lot more satisfying than the sailor. She was feisty. She struggled. Tsuki was watching her from afar, curious to see how long she would take before giving up.

However, the shapeshifter got bored before the soldier got tired. She left the barn, reasoning that the woman was now going to be the problem of the peasant owning the place. She couldn't care less.

When she got bored of the soldier's appearance, she threw her outfit into the village's well, and took back her default appearance.

She climbed a wall and concentrated to grow some wings again. She was making them bigger and bigger with each try.

Tsuki was craving for the day she would finally be able to start training to fly...


Suddenly, Tsuki's dream was put to an end.

Come on!

“Tsuki. Check this out.” the Black Star whispered to her.

Tsuki received a vision.

Yuka and all her human friends. An artificial cavern. A powerful artifact that could bend the rules of this world... and of the others.

And a huge amount of energy that was attracting the attention of the Black Star...

Tsuki woke up.

Yuka!

Alone, she wasn't going to be able to reach them. But with the help of some magic to send her mind flying in the invisble world, then maybe...

Neither one nor two, she ran to Itzel and shook her to wake her up.

The initiate shouted: “Wh- What? Tsuki!”

“Itzel! I wanna try something neat! Get the juicy magic rolling!”

**************

And the first part is done. I think that you're starting to see a little where this is going. Now, it's time to have fun!

Also, with this part, I'd like to try something new. As you've probably figured out, the next part will be about our heroines crossing several potentialities and environments to try to return to theirs. Problem, they're using an unstable artifact that won't always work when they want, so it's easier said than done. Therefore, it gave me an idea to try to make the next part more interactive. I have a few ideas for some of the situations they will come across, but I thought that maybe you'd have some ideas too, so I decided to ask if there are situations or setting that you'd like to see featured. Preferably ones that can integrate themselves in a medieval-fantastic setting, and that don't need much of a set up. You can propose situations in a modern setting, but featuring them will probably be harder. I can't promise I'll be able to feature everything, especially if it involves modern settings, but it may prove to be interesting to try.

Re: Pakal

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2021 6:48 pm
by Trackman281
Mind if I be the first to review, this spectacular new chapter of yours. 8-)

Right of the bat, the order of the thorn sounds interesting, I'm liking it. :) I must admit I felt a little bit sorry for Carlott after hearing a bit of her background and then I got a little bit fearful when she got pinned to the wall, I thought "wow, life really hasn't given her break has it", but thankfully I was delighted to know that it was Azeneth who had only knocked her out, phew maybe Carlott can catch a break after all. :D

HAHA, even Eleanor's "tallyho", got a chuckle out of me. :lol: Overall that entire segment was amazing and beautifully written. :D

I like Yisüi, she has a sweet personality and a kind heart, just thought I'd throw that in there quickly. :) I enjoyed that entire scene with the six female merchants, very creative and overall a great read. :)

I think Beatrix is about to get wish for some action soon enough........... ;)

That entire scene featuring Coluter and Yisüi working together to take down Katherine and Ulrike, was, joyful as it was great seeing them two together in a scene, the takedowns were really good and if I'm being honest........it was kind of hot too. :D 8-)

I see Beatrix had no idea what hit, kudos to Yuka for taking down such a war veteran with ease. 8-) I liked Yuka's concern over Yisüi, her care and compassion about her friends is one of the things I really enjoy about her character, she really is one of the most sympathetic and one of the best characters you've ever written. :D

Plus I also like your attention to detail on the little things, well like the holes in the barrels so their unwilling uniform donors can breathe just fine, plus I can only imagine the look on those knights faces when they get discovered in their undies, by one of their fellow patrols. :D

P.S yeah I can imagine Beatrix self-esteem and ego, was definitely bruised by these events. :D ;)

Come on Coulter, lighten up a bit, these ladies need these moments of joy and laughter to help through the long cold nights hahaha, :lol:

I quite enjoyed that scene watching all these amazing characters bond and share some quality time together like that, it warmed my own heart (no pun intended). :D

I do love these characters Yisüi, Yuka, Azeneth, Jinora and hell even Coulter, they all bring this unique personality to the adventure and it is just great seeing them all. :D

That was a sweet moment with Yisüi, I hope they all do get to go and see Yisüi's home together one day, I'm routing for them I really am. :D

I was wondering how Tsuki was going to leave that sailor at the end of the last chapter. Well now we know. 8-)

Haha, you know you've got a true infiltrator / shapeshifter / USB master when they even want to replace and impersonate members of their own units. Tsuki really is awesome. :lol: :D

I sighed in grief for Yuka, during this mirror scene, she has suffered so much already and for the mirror to show what could have been compared o what actually is. I feel Yuka's pain, I really do. :D

I must admit, the entire mirror scene was superbly written and yeah do you know what......It genuinly made me a little bit misty eyed at one point, I genuinely want all these characters to come out of this safe and sound, so seeing the mirrors doing this to them has inadvertently, made me feel guilt as well, because it's reminded me of how much I just want them to succeed. :D

Moving on to the second part. 8-)

WOW, heck of a twist here, I'm trying to write this review as long as I can. But I'm addicted to this, now that Yuka has woken up in this seemingly new place, I just want to keep on reading, it's amazing, hold on, hold on, just let me read a little bit further down........

.......Okay I absolutely loved the entire scene with Yuka and Paracelsus, it was expertly written and I did like the way Yuka used the very table she was just a moment ago strapped into, to hide Paracelsus's unconscious body. Nicely done. :D ..........yes I am still going to give a hell of a long review, but as I say, I just want to read MORE and more, I NEED to know where Yuka's friends are and where Yuka actually is herself. Bare with me a minute, I just need to read a little bit more.............. :D

.......AAHHH my god, seriously this chapter is GREAT. She finally finds Coulter and now she's teleported somewhere else, wait was that even the original Coulter, I mean it seemed like it was. Good gravy this is fantastic. You've fully roped me in on this, I can't wait to see what happens next, I must know more. 8-) :D

Oh no, no it's cool, Coulter managed to stay with her this time and YES, this is the real Coulter, blooming heck, you've written such a gripping chapter here, I can feel my hands shaking with excitement. :D

Okay I officially loved that scene with Yuka and the dim witted guard who just wondered into the alley with her without giving a second thought haha, nicely done. :D :D

I also quite enjoyed the scene afterwards when Yuka mugged that merchant who blinded by the hustle and bustle of Chichen Itza. :D

Aaaahhh unknowingly talking to the person who just stripped your fellow guard of her uniform. Classic. 8-)

Hahaha, I loved the line “Remove her undergarments and I will break your fingers.” That Main-Coulter said to Yuka, it's as if she just knew that Yuka was enjoying every moment of this and wanted to go a little further. :D :lol:

The entire scene afterwards for me, was just one massive enjoyable experience, watching Yuka giggle to herself while the real coulter pretending to make up a lie as to why she needed a handmaiden was great. I love this, it's added a well needed touch of comedy after some of the shocks my system had earlier (all good one's of course). :D

With this scene, “It didn't bring me any good. The fires of anger and revenge won't burn forever. And once they've finished consuming you, they leave nothing except ashes and regrets.” Are you trying to bring me to tears haha, because as I say, these connections with these characters are so powerful, they every time they suffer, I feel as though we get hurt as well........It's beautiful, it's just pure perfection, your writing is just pure perfection, I absolutely love this series of yours, it's so powerful, so raw, it just hits you with happiness and emotion when you least expect. I LOVE IT, this is truly, TRULY one of your finest works. 8-) :D

Once again I loved Tsuki's scene, I knew she couldn't resist, I just knew that one of those guards was going mysteriously "desert" haha, although I must admit, I am please that Tsuki decided not to kill her. Oh and I loved her little Will you walk into my parlour? said a spider to a fly.” Line, it just screamed YES, this is exactly the sort of thing that Tsuki would say haha. It's absolutely brilliant. :D

Well now I'm at the end, I'm left almost speechless, this just has been TRULY, truly astonishing, I just absolutely loved it, well as you saw, I just wanted to carry on reading, I wanted to know more and more, I just couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. I just don't know how you do it........You create these chapters, that just make me want to see more and more, the energy, the emotions, the character development, the world, the lore......Just everything.......It is just perfect. :D :D

It's annoying because words in my reviews are not enough to express just how fantastic this series, I've loved this series from the very beginning and I just love it even more as time has gone by. I genuinely don't know how you've done it, I truly do bend the knee when it comes to your fantastic story writing. It is perfection. Please never stop writing. It's amazing. :D 8-) :D

P.S, I did see your comment at the end, I'll try and think of a few scenarios / idea's for different worlds / dimensions. I promise. :)

Re: Pakal

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2021 8:56 pm
by rufusluciusivan
Reading your comments always brings a smile to my face because they truly feel like a report of your feelings at the time. It's interesting to see what emotions the differents parts are bringing.

Glad you liked the first part with the merchanrts and the Order of the Thorn. I thought it was important to feature a little uniform stealing-action before the main plot of the chapter gets started. Plus, I wanted to show the full team in action. It's actually the first time we truly see them in action (in the previous interlude, most of the muggings took part offscreen).

Just like you do in your stories, I think it's important to highlight the bonds between the core main characters, hence Yuka's concern for Yisüi or the scene of them bonding over the fire, though of course Coulter couldn't help but ruin the moment. :lol: I really like these character's group dynamic, and writing their dialogues comes naturally. Even Coulter. Especially Coulter. A grump is the perfect (comedic) foil to crafty impish people such as Azeneth and Yuka.

I guess that from our perspective Tsuki is awesome. Though I confess that her scenes with the sailor and soldier are here to highlight her unpredictable dangerous nature. Even her allies aren't safe from her. Just like Yuka said: it's an addiction. Tsuki will always crave for more. She indeed quoted the Spider and the Fly (though I'm sure that I already saw the use of this quote somewhere in a fanfiction). She also quoted Lewis Caroll at one point - very appropriate given her personality.

A little Harry Potter inspiration with the mirrors. (Mirror or Erised much? ;) ) Though these ones just show random potentialities. Yuka certainly wasn't lucky when she picked one.

Narrating the transportation to another world was a real challenge because it involved several parts without uniform stealings, so I had to find the balance between giving enough details for it to feel realistic and not rushed, while also trying to not break the pace of uniform stealing scenes. (Outside of highlighting her character, Tsuki's reminiscence of the sailor was actually a way to feature a little uniform stealing-related scene in-between plot.) However, now that the basic principle has been set up, things should be smoother from here. Hopefully...

First time a plague doctor's outfit is mentioned. I really like the designs of these things.

The part in the alternate Chichen Itza was a lot easier to write, mostly because featuring the uniform stealings was a lot easier. Plus, Coulter and Yuka have a real nice dynamic. It's easy to write funny interactions between them, and just as easy to write serious interactions.

I saw your P.S. Well, you don't have to force yourself if you don't have ideas. ;) I figured out it would be the perfect moment to try this little interactive experience, but I already have a few ideas on my own so proposing ideas for scenarios / other dimensions is optional. (Though if you find some it would probably be best to put them in another comment, that way I'm sure I won't miss them.)

Re: Pakal

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2021 9:35 pm
by tirepanted3
Wow, I'm not sure I'll be able to follow up on Trackman's comment. :lol: But I'll try.

This was quite a long chapter, but certainly worth the wait. Some new turns to the story, and a good balance between plot development and USB scenes.

Admittedly, it's still not my favorite type of plot - especially since this chapter focuses more on the super-powered characters (Yuka, Coulter, and a little of Tsuki) at the expense of the ordinary humans. And the new development of the characters hopping between different worlds and potentialities adds to the supernatural feel, which can detract from the more human elements (which is where your stories excel).

But personal preferences aside... this is certainly an impressively written chapter. You have clearly spent a lot of time developing and layering the mythology into this series, and it really shows. It helps make "Pakal" feel like a detailed novel, or even a series. Well done.

Now, on to some specifics:

I like the development and background given to the squires - how Carlott and Eleanor, despite coming from very different backgrounds, have both ended up in the same career. Emphasizes the class system in the kingdom, and how both rich and poor women are made part of the fighting forces. Certainly interesting.

An enjoyable takedown in the opening as well - Azeneth using her knives to pin Carlott to the wall was excellent. Also enjoyed how the headstrong Eleanor was put indignantly to sleep. ;)

It's a small thing, but one of my favorite details from the story is how the merchants were mugged before the chapter started. When we meet Jinora and Azeneth at the start of the chapter, they're already working on their second disguise. Hard to keep up with these women. :lol:
A part of her wished there was some action...
Sounds like Beatrix hasn't heard the phrase "Be careful what you wish for." The scene with the three knights was great fun. Yisüi has really come into her own as a member of the team, and it's been great to watch.

The second part of the chapter was more fantastical than the first, which meant it was less realistic, but still interesting. A good scene with Paracelsus, particularly the moment when Yuka forces her to self-chloroform. And the following scenes set some mystery with the introduction of the "new" Coulter.

I feel sorry for the guard mugged by Yuka. Her uniform was only stolen so that Yuka could use it to steal another set of clothes, from the merchant woman. it must be humiliating to be a palace guard getting mugged just so your assailant can wear your uniform for a few minutes while she mugs someone else. :)

Doppelganger scenes are still not my cup of tea, but the one with the two Coulters was smartly handled - I like how Yuka enjoys humiliating the royal Coulter. The scene with the handmaiden was also quite enjoyable, perhaps my favorite part of the story's second half.

All in all, not my personal favorite type of chapter, but undeniably impressive and well-written. Keep up the good work. :)

As for ideas for other potentialities - I think there are some possibilities worth exploring. Given the importance of music in the Middle Ages, perhaps there could be a scene involving a town troubadour? (Or trobairitz, as I believe is the feminine term.) Or perhaps, on a more comedic note - if the characters are infiltrating a castle, maybe one of them will replace a female court jester? I can just imagine Coulter being forced to put on a jester outfit... some real humorous potential there. :D

Re: Pakal

Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2021 10:16 am
by rufusluciusivan
It indeed is one of the longest post I've made, at least I think.

Since the second part would feature heavy supernatural elemements and plot-related elements, I figured out that it was a good idea to start with the classic beginning of an infiltration story: a little lore, the introduction of the story with the point of view of her first victim, then the infiltration itself. Creating a little contrast between the two squires was a good way to create a mirror effect.

Having the merchants already mugged was a nice way to fasten the pace, but it also has its nice 'offscreen mugging perk'. My heroines can be hard to keep up with sometimes. :lol: As Kenshiro would have said: 'You are already mugged.'

Given your comments, you seem to have appreciated a lot of the details I had fun adding. (the contrasting backgrounds of the two squires, Azeneth using her knives to pin Carlott to the wall, Eleanor's indignant attitude, Beatrix tempting fate, the self-chloroform...) I'll admit, it put a smile on my face. ;)

The choice of a fantasy setting was made to be able to play around with supernatural powers and elements (magic, shapeshifting, visiting other worlds to meet your doppleganger...). I want to try to have different situations when it comes to uniform stealings compared to a classic realistic 'modern' setting. Personally, I think there are only so many scenarios, clothes, and bondage techniques you can use in a modern realistic setting; and between all the stories on the Board, most of them (if not all) have already been featured at least once. However, I understand that some people won't appreciate the premise as much as others. Pakal is definitively a more 'niche' story, but I like the idea of it proposing something slightly different from usual. Hopefully, the parts with Azeneth can balance out things a little. ;) If not, there'll still be the other stories! ;) Though the super-powered characters and supernatural elements will remain a focus of this series.

The part in the alternate Chichen Itza with the Empress and her handmaiden was the one I liked writing the most. They feature some of my favorite banters of the series. It was a scene I had in mind almost since the beginning of Pakal. The guard and the traveller were indeed unlucky (especially the guard), but I figured out that after the second part featuring little uniform stealings, a little mugging spree was essential. :lol:
It helps make "Pakal" feel like a detailed novel, or even a series. Well done.
Now, given the fact that my goal has always been to write plot-based uniform stealing stories that arguably could easily become more 'classic mainstream' stories with only a little tweakings, this is a compliment that goes straight to the heart. ;)

Re: Pakal

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2021 10:20 am
by Trackman281
I really want to elaborate a little more and give a little bit more detail as to why I like certain things. :)
I guess that from our perspective Tsuki is awesome. Though I confess that her scenes with the sailor and soldier are here to highlight her unpredictable dangerous nature. Even her allies aren't safe from her. Just like Yuka said: it's an addiction. Tsuki will always crave for more.
See that's the thing, I originally did just view Tsuki as this awesome individual, but then.........Then you revealed her tragic backstory with Yuka and it just opened a door of both sorrow and guilt, I thought Tsuki was awesome already, but now I genuinely love her character even more........I must admit this. I do worry for her life and her fate............. :)

I forgot to add as well, that I have a new found respect for Coulter too. Her scene's, her views.........The reality of what could have been, compared to what is.......Yeah, I genuinely do respect her and like her a lot more after this. :D

The fate and the conditions of the others Yisüi, Jinora and Azeneth, still has my heart racing a little bit, I guess it's the fear of the unknown isn't it. :D

I really will say this, I don't know how you've done it. But you've really made me care greatly for all these characters. I'm slightly envious of your abilities, but I can assure you I'm envious in all the GOOD ways. :D