A Night at the Museum Epilogue Pt2:- Escaping London.

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FemaleSpy wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:52 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:43 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:33 pm

Tail? Good idea, like film Species
Exactly like species. I plan on doing some Species one shots in the future too. :D
Yep, not bad idea, and change film scene with hooker ;D ;)
I good redux the cocoon scene in 1, replace the conductor with a college girl.

And a much more attractive victim in the car park.

The bathroom scene in 1? What if Sil, kills the woman with her tail. Steals her clothes,and everything else since they are much better at snaring her male victim.

How about species two, when Eve escapes from the lab. She kills a random woman for her clothes

Species 3, a Cocoon scene for Sara but add a female victim and a Cocoon scene for Amelia.

Species Awakening, alternative Cocoon scene for Miranda and an extended version when she steals that singers dress.
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Re: A Night at the Museum Epilogue Pt2:- Escaping London.

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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:00 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:52 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:43 pm

Exactly like species. I plan on doing some Species one shots in the future too. :D
Yep, not bad idea, and change film scene with hooker ;D ;)
I good redux the cocoon scene in 1, replace the conductor with a college girl.

And a much more attractive victim in the car park.

The bathroom scene in 1? What if Sil, kills the woman with her tail. Steals her clothes,and everything else since they are much better at snaring her male victim.

How about species two, when Eve escapes from the lab. She kills a random woman for her clothes

Species 3, a Coccon scene for Sara but add a female victim and a Coocon scene for Amelia.

Species Awakening, alternative Coccon scene for Miranda and an extended version when she steals that singers dress.
Hm, so creative, good
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FemaleSpy wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:01 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:00 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:52 pm

Yep, not bad idea, and change film scene with hooker ;D ;)
I good redux the cocoon scene in 1, replace the conductor with a college girl.

And a much more attractive victim in the car park.

The bathroom scene in 1? What if Sil, kills the woman with her tail. Steals her clothes,and everything else since they are much better at snaring her male victim.

How about species two, when Eve escapes from the lab. She kills a random woman for her clothes

Species 3, a Coccon scene for Sara but add a female victim and a Coocon scene for Amelia.

Species Awakening, alternative Coccon scene for Miranda and an extended version when she steals that singers dress.
Hm, so creative, good
Thanks mate, Species was one of those films that first inspired my imagination, about USB. I always thought in the bathroom, don't rip her spine out just use your tail, take her clothes.

Well, when I write this up, a lot of pretty girls will end up naked. :D
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:32 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:21 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:09 pm

Cool I was thinking writing a story with two aliens. One is a shape shifting prisoner, who escapes to earth. She is lethal, and uses her tail with a needle at the tip, to take DNA and memories from a subject. Sticking it through the tear duct in the eye.( T-1000)

The other is a female alien cop, who is non-:lethal and uses Vulcan style neck pinches. She can alter her physical appearance through touch, but still needs to steal clothes. She had been tracking the prisoner for a long term, finally capturing her. But when the prison ship loses power over Earth, the prisoner escapes to earth and the cop follows her. The prison ship breaks up in earth's atmosphere.

When they fall to earth, they will acquire disguises and identities and resume their rivalry. The alien cop, swears to bring the prisoner in one way or the other.
Use a "needle" to make a hole in the victim's forehead or between the eyebrows to take DNA and memories.
Then it was reported in the news that a series of bodies with the same method of death were found. The police suspected that it was a serial murder.
Actually, that sounds like a much better idea, thanks PC.

The prisoner, could strip the girl she's replacing while she is propped up being probed. Allows for more efficient stripping. When the alien is finished, she simply retracts her tail, concealing it. She then dresses in the woman's clothes, underwear and accessories.
tail not cool
I think tongue is better
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pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:07 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:32 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:21 pm

Use a "needle" to make a hole in the victim's forehead or between the eyebrows to take DNA and memories.
Then it was reported in the news that a series of bodies with the same method of death were found. The police suspected that it was a serial murder.
Actually, that sounds like a much better idea, thanks PC.

The prisoner, could strip the girl she's replacing while she is propped up being probed. Allows for more efficient stripping. When the alien is finished, she simply retracts her tail, concealing it. She then dresses in the woman's clothes, underwear and accessories.
tail not cool
I think tongue is better
Just like Species, when I watched that scene in Species Awakening with the singer, I always imagined Miranda after threatening the girl, just sticks her tongue down her throat or through the back of her head. Strips her naked, stashes the corpse into a wardrobe.

Tongue might work, just bores into the brain takes DNA and memories that way. I don't want it to be too graphic.


Tail or tongue? Decisions Decisions.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:16 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:07 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 4:32 pm

Actually, that sounds like a much better idea, thanks PC.

The prisoner, could strip the girl she's replacing while she is propped up being probed. Allows for more efficient stripping. When the alien is finished, she simply retracts her tail, concealing it. She then dresses in the woman's clothes, underwear and accessories.
tail not cool
I think tongue is better
Just like Species, when I watched that scene in Species Awakening with the singer, I always imagined Miranda after threatening the girl, just sticks her tongue down her throat or through the back of her head. Strips her naked, stashes the corpse into a wardrobe.

Tongue might work, just bores into the brain takes DNA and memories that way. I don't want it to be too graphic.


Tail or tongue? Decisions Decisions.
tongue
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pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:21 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:16 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:07 pm

tail not cool
I think tongue is better
Just like Species, when I watched that scene in Species Awakening with the singer, I always imagined Miranda after threatening the girl, just sticks her tongue down her throat or through the back of her head. Strips her naked, stashes the corpse into a wardrobe.

Tongue might work, just bores into the brain takes DNA and memories that way. I don't want it to be too graphic.


Tail or tongue? Decisions Decisions.
tongue
So, I could say the tongues tip, as anticoagulants that prevent bleeding. So it's clinical and clean. Shall I make the tongue prehensile. Can still strip the victim while she is pinned.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:27 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:21 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:16 pm

Just like Species, when I watched that scene in Species Awakening with the singer, I always imagined Miranda after threatening the girl, just sticks her tongue down her throat or through the back of her head. Strips her naked, stashes the corpse into a wardrobe.

Tongue might work, just bores into the brain takes DNA and memories that way. I don't want it to be too graphic.


Tail or tongue? Decisions Decisions.
tongue
So, I could say the tongues tip, as anticoagulants that prevent bleeding. So it's clinical and clean. Shall I make the tongue prehensile. Can still strip the victim while she is pinned.
That's like a frog. I don't think it's good.

Just suck brains from the victim's mouth

Or temples and forehead.

Like the mouthparts of some insects
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pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:34 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:27 pm
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:21 pm

tongue
So, I could say the tongues tip, as anticoagulants that prevent bleeding. So it's clinical and clean. Shall I make the tongue prehensile. Can still strip the victim while she is pinned.
That's like a frog. I don't think it's good.

Just suck brains from the victim's mouth

Or temples and forehead.

Like the mouthparts of some insects
I could stay with the tongue, make it prehensile but she sticks it between the victim's eyes. Obtains DNA and memories, like a computer data transfer. Causes the brain to shivel up. The prisoner, can strip the victim while this is happening and dress in her clothing as well.
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Start at 02:50
https://www.bilibili.com/bangumi/play/ep290037

For reference only
I don't like the victim being sucked dry like a mummy
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