Re: Chapter 42.5: The Noblest and Most Ancient House of All
Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2021 8:58 pm
A very great opening act, although this shouldn't be a surprise that Knipperen found an escape this quickly, as that's just what she does.
And of course, I see another returning character with "Jessica", it seems that she still can't escape the predicaments of being found outlaw star style. It's something that we really know Jessica for now, although I do feel sorry for her, and of course Mabel is certainly proving to be a worthy adversary, I can't wait to see what's next.
I loved Enola's scene, it is true that she really wasn't having much luck this day was she, although between being bitten on the backside by a dog or getting stripped of her uniform, I wonder which part she'll curse most. Plus I loved her underwear lettering too, nicely done.
Seriously. I'm absolutely LOVING Tina's scene here in this story of yours. I really do love the way your really pushing the boat out and really highlighting "Soph's batch" of infiltrators, because yes you're right. Despite the fact that they are younger that the average clone troopers, they naturally do hold higher ranks than them, purely because. YES, you are right, they were trained to be more like "Angel" when she was "Demon", that's why Angel / Demon, had it so easy at the company, she was the perfect combination of a soldier and an infiltrator in Anna's eyes, so naturally Soph's Batch would be trained like this too, as Anna just wants the perfect soldier / infiltrator combo. Plus it makes sense that they would out rank the basic clone troopers, given their expertise. Honestly, a massive, MASSIVE well done on this. I really am loving this!
Now once again we have another fantastic scene with Tina and Irene afterwards. Seriously, I've said it before but stuff it I'll say it again. I really like scene's of dialogue between these two. It's just great......They are both leaders, they both have conflicting views, but! They both have these strong personalities that really both clash AND mix well simultaneously. I just love the way they both continuously try to read each other or guess each other's motive, yet neither of them can quite work out what the other one is thinking, it's such a great dynamic, and honestly these scene's will be some of the parts that I remember most in this story, and I really will too.
Nice little way at the beginning of this next, just to show that Blink is fully aware of her sister's absence, I now just wonder how long it will take before she finds out Knipperen has also been captured.
Of course Libido would immediately try and see if she can get into Blink's panties, because it's the world's worst kept secret that Libido fancies the pants off of Blink (both literally and figuratively).
I loved the little scene here with Midori, Amai and Stasis. Heck yeah, let those puns rolls hard and fast people!
HOLY HOT HAM AND CHEESE!!!!!!!..............DAMN! I was not expecting this!
..........So Agria and Cleo are part of the team as well are they? Plus they also know Felicity AND they even have history with Blink and Knipperen!.........Okay, okay, this is awesome! Honestly, nice work, I genuinely wasn't expecting this! What an awesome surprise! Oh man, this is going to lead to some AMAZING scenes, I can't wait!
Wow! Okay to round it off, I really like the way that we are seeing Mag, truly show off her leadership skills here, I mean after all, we know that apart from Tina (obviously), Mag would naturally be the one who is the most capable of formulating a plan and gathering help, now we all know how Mag can be sometimes, but she's quick to revert back to her military training and she's able to adapt to the situation and form a perfect plan......DAMN......This chapter is just full of surprises isn't it. Did I say I'm loving this yet?......I did?......Well screw it, I'm saying it again......I'm truly loving this chapter, plus seeing all these characters come together like this is honestly something I didn't think I'd ever see!
On a quick side note, I notice that Felicity get's quite a bit of screen time in you're crossover stories, shall I use her more in the future for you?
Haha, okay wow, that scene with Cleo, Mag and Blink was great. I've really missed Cleo's personality, the way she talks, the way she moves, the way her personality almost contradicts how she is underneath. I love Cleo I really do, she really is something special and I've loved her over the years, so this is just amazing to me! Plus I loved how you highlighted Blink's love for her sister, and naturally Mag supporting Blink as of course, Mag knows full well about her sisters unquestionably. Plus it was sweet to see Libido try and protect her woman....Even though Blink isn't interested......But it's still both sweet and funny to see.
I.....I......I think I'm going to faint. That lovable and amazing green haired pothead we all know and love is from a prestigious family, with nobility and honour......Midori.......THAT Midori.......Geez, it seems that Stasis isn't the only one is shock by this revelation too......Okay, now I'm really, REALLY curious......Will Irene or anyone actually recognise Midori? Damn I can't wait!
I also really liked the little ending to this scene, because yes you are correct. Stasis' puns and little jokes are never always at random, because as it's been proven time and time again, she's actually quite intelligent, Stasis just likes to give of the impression that she's a clown who doesn't take things seriously, but seriously, let's look at Stasis' past.....She's actually quite the clever little genius when she wants to be, and I think you've done a fantastic scene in secretly revealing this in this scene. A massive well done.
Hahahaha, wow this next scene is amazing! Okay for starters, a massive congratulations as it's official "FEDEX" Has now officially been added to the USB book of history, but don't worry everyone else like Hermes or DPD.....You're time will come!
I loved the sense of awkwardness between Tina and Enola here too, although it really did give this entire scene a nice comedic touch and a nice sense of life, this was great, and FEDEX itself is going to be lost for words when they not only find one of their employees bound, gagged and half naked, but they also find a completely different delivery woman bound, gagged and in her undies too.
A nice way to suddenly throw a 180 at us with this next scene. This makes sense that Tina would naturally set Enola free so she can drive her, Florrie and Amity to safety as Tina genuinely has no way to contact the authorities about their ware bouts and she can't risk them being captured or worse. Now some people might raise an eyebrow to this, but to those who genuinely know Tina and know who she is and what she stands for then THIS is exactly how Tina would be and THIS is exactly the sort of thing Tina would do....Honestly, I think you've done an outstanding job with Tina's personality and characteristics in this scene and it was both a refreshing surprise AND I think you've captured Tina's personality absolutely perfectly once more. Fantastic work!
Very clever!
Nice touch with Tina being craft with the USB stick, it was nice to see that Tina had a plan all along, although this is Tina we're talking about, so this shouldn't come as a surprise at all, plus that little comment at the end about Tina just wanting to protect her sisters.....Yes......That is Tina through and through, brilliant work!
Okay I love the plan that our team of infiltrators (Avengers) have conducted, okay........This is where the fun begins!
Haha, I must admit, I quite enjoyed this little scene between Soph and Gillian. Don't worry Soph, you'll get the hang of it one day......But I don't think Soph will worry too much about that, as we all know that Soph prefers to let her fists do the talking.
I loved the entire scene with Anastasia, Myrtle and her two bodyguards, I loved the build up, of Anastasia imagining all the doors that this union with the Eudokia family would open, only for her to get hit with a big dose of reality, I loved the takedown and hhhmmm. Do I get the feeling that a certain couple of familiar motorbike cops have been replaced for a third time in their career.
Whoa! Not only was I right, but that entire scene with Chrissie and Ramirez was sexy as hell! Now I think we know full well that it was Libido who tied up these two beauties in that position, but damn, you went all in with this scene, it was super hot and very sexy and I absolutely loved it! Indeed, it seems that Libido, Heartfelt's cupid has struck again.....Match made!
I really like the dialogue scenes between Mag and Agria, I remember their conflicting personalities during your non canon crossover story "protecting one's lifestyle", so I'm actually very pleased to see it follow over into this cross over too, Mag and Agria are both professionals in their own rights, so it's really cool to see these two interact with each other like this.
I also really like the scene with Libido and Stasis talking to Mag about what par they are supposed to play in the infiltration. I can see what Mag is doing here, Mag is trying to protect Libido and Stasis, because they are her sisters and she loves them both with all her heart, I can actually fully see what Mag is doing and I honestly can't wait to see just how this all unfolds and plays out, I'm very curious that's for sure, Mag is doing things for the right reasons, and really want to know what happens next if I'm being honest here, I really do!
And of course we finish up with Ellie making a well deserved cameo appearence.......But wait, why did it say "Blink" has tried to escape her special cell, that's Knipperen, right?
WOW! What an outstanding next part to this amazing story. Honestly, you revealed some surprises here that I genuinely just had no idea about and I absolutely loved it! There were just so many continuity nods, so many references, quite a few Easter eggs and of course, plenty of lore to dive into. In other words, it had everything that an absolute story lover like me could want, I think it was absolutely fantastic. Naturally of course, the USB scenes themselves were incredibly well written and absolutely brimming with originality and creativity and I rally enjoyed them! Honestly, you're ability to continuously dig into all the lore and history from both our respective worlds, just never ceases to amaze me. I really do hope you know just how much respect I have for you and you're constant attention to detail, because lets face it, even the most smallest of detail can have major implications, so I really do love it all.
A truly, TRULY fantastic new addition and I think you captured everyone's and I do mean EVERYONE'S personalities and characteristics perfectly, especially Tina's, Mag's and Blink's. You absolutely nailed all three of these ladies personalities in this chapter and you did them all the world of justice, and I just simply can not thank you enough for this!
Amazing job again!



I loved Enola's scene, it is true that she really wasn't having much luck this day was she, although between being bitten on the backside by a dog or getting stripped of her uniform, I wonder which part she'll curse most. Plus I loved her underwear lettering too, nicely done.

Seriously. I'm absolutely LOVING Tina's scene here in this story of yours. I really do love the way your really pushing the boat out and really highlighting "Soph's batch" of infiltrators, because yes you're right. Despite the fact that they are younger that the average clone troopers, they naturally do hold higher ranks than them, purely because. YES, you are right, they were trained to be more like "Angel" when she was "Demon", that's why Angel / Demon, had it so easy at the company, she was the perfect combination of a soldier and an infiltrator in Anna's eyes, so naturally Soph's Batch would be trained like this too, as Anna just wants the perfect soldier / infiltrator combo. Plus it makes sense that they would out rank the basic clone troopers, given their expertise. Honestly, a massive, MASSIVE well done on this. I really am loving this!

Now once again we have another fantastic scene with Tina and Irene afterwards. Seriously, I've said it before but stuff it I'll say it again. I really like scene's of dialogue between these two. It's just great......They are both leaders, they both have conflicting views, but! They both have these strong personalities that really both clash AND mix well simultaneously. I just love the way they both continuously try to read each other or guess each other's motive, yet neither of them can quite work out what the other one is thinking, it's such a great dynamic, and honestly these scene's will be some of the parts that I remember most in this story, and I really will too.

Nice little way at the beginning of this next, just to show that Blink is fully aware of her sister's absence, I now just wonder how long it will take before she finds out Knipperen has also been captured.

Of course Libido would immediately try and see if she can get into Blink's panties, because it's the world's worst kept secret that Libido fancies the pants off of Blink (both literally and figuratively).

I loved the little scene here with Midori, Amai and Stasis. Heck yeah, let those puns rolls hard and fast people!

HOLY HOT HAM AND CHEESE!!!!!!!..............DAMN! I was not expecting this!



Wow! Okay to round it off, I really like the way that we are seeing Mag, truly show off her leadership skills here, I mean after all, we know that apart from Tina (obviously), Mag would naturally be the one who is the most capable of formulating a plan and gathering help, now we all know how Mag can be sometimes, but she's quick to revert back to her military training and she's able to adapt to the situation and form a perfect plan......DAMN......This chapter is just full of surprises isn't it. Did I say I'm loving this yet?......I did?......Well screw it, I'm saying it again......I'm truly loving this chapter, plus seeing all these characters come together like this is honestly something I didn't think I'd ever see!

On a quick side note, I notice that Felicity get's quite a bit of screen time in you're crossover stories, shall I use her more in the future for you?
Haha, okay wow, that scene with Cleo, Mag and Blink was great. I've really missed Cleo's personality, the way she talks, the way she moves, the way her personality almost contradicts how she is underneath. I love Cleo I really do, she really is something special and I've loved her over the years, so this is just amazing to me! Plus I loved how you highlighted Blink's love for her sister, and naturally Mag supporting Blink as of course, Mag knows full well about her sisters unquestionably. Plus it was sweet to see Libido try and protect her woman....Even though Blink isn't interested......But it's still both sweet and funny to see.

I.....I......I think I'm going to faint. That lovable and amazing green haired pothead we all know and love is from a prestigious family, with nobility and honour......Midori.......THAT Midori.......Geez, it seems that Stasis isn't the only one is shock by this revelation too......Okay, now I'm really, REALLY curious......Will Irene or anyone actually recognise Midori? Damn I can't wait!


I also really liked the little ending to this scene, because yes you are correct. Stasis' puns and little jokes are never always at random, because as it's been proven time and time again, she's actually quite intelligent, Stasis just likes to give of the impression that she's a clown who doesn't take things seriously, but seriously, let's look at Stasis' past.....She's actually quite the clever little genius when she wants to be, and I think you've done a fantastic scene in secretly revealing this in this scene. A massive well done.


Hahahaha, wow this next scene is amazing! Okay for starters, a massive congratulations as it's official "FEDEX" Has now officially been added to the USB book of history, but don't worry everyone else like Hermes or DPD.....You're time will come!


I loved the sense of awkwardness between Tina and Enola here too, although it really did give this entire scene a nice comedic touch and a nice sense of life, this was great, and FEDEX itself is going to be lost for words when they not only find one of their employees bound, gagged and half naked, but they also find a completely different delivery woman bound, gagged and in her undies too.

A nice way to suddenly throw a 180 at us with this next scene. This makes sense that Tina would naturally set Enola free so she can drive her, Florrie and Amity to safety as Tina genuinely has no way to contact the authorities about their ware bouts and she can't risk them being captured or worse. Now some people might raise an eyebrow to this, but to those who genuinely know Tina and know who she is and what she stands for then THIS is exactly how Tina would be and THIS is exactly the sort of thing Tina would do....Honestly, I think you've done an outstanding job with Tina's personality and characteristics in this scene and it was both a refreshing surprise AND I think you've captured Tina's personality absolutely perfectly once more. Fantastic work!

Very clever!


Okay I love the plan that our team of infiltrators (Avengers) have conducted, okay........This is where the fun begins!

Haha, I must admit, I quite enjoyed this little scene between Soph and Gillian. Don't worry Soph, you'll get the hang of it one day......But I don't think Soph will worry too much about that, as we all know that Soph prefers to let her fists do the talking.


I loved the entire scene with Anastasia, Myrtle and her two bodyguards, I loved the build up, of Anastasia imagining all the doors that this union with the Eudokia family would open, only for her to get hit with a big dose of reality, I loved the takedown and hhhmmm. Do I get the feeling that a certain couple of familiar motorbike cops have been replaced for a third time in their career.



Whoa! Not only was I right, but that entire scene with Chrissie and Ramirez was sexy as hell! Now I think we know full well that it was Libido who tied up these two beauties in that position, but damn, you went all in with this scene, it was super hot and very sexy and I absolutely loved it! Indeed, it seems that Libido, Heartfelt's cupid has struck again.....Match made!


I really like the dialogue scenes between Mag and Agria, I remember their conflicting personalities during your non canon crossover story "protecting one's lifestyle", so I'm actually very pleased to see it follow over into this cross over too, Mag and Agria are both professionals in their own rights, so it's really cool to see these two interact with each other like this.


I also really like the scene with Libido and Stasis talking to Mag about what par they are supposed to play in the infiltration. I can see what Mag is doing here, Mag is trying to protect Libido and Stasis, because they are her sisters and she loves them both with all her heart, I can actually fully see what Mag is doing and I honestly can't wait to see just how this all unfolds and plays out, I'm very curious that's for sure, Mag is doing things for the right reasons, and really want to know what happens next if I'm being honest here, I really do!

And of course we finish up with Ellie making a well deserved cameo appearence.......But wait, why did it say "Blink" has tried to escape her special cell, that's Knipperen, right?

WOW! What an outstanding next part to this amazing story. Honestly, you revealed some surprises here that I genuinely just had no idea about and I absolutely loved it! There were just so many continuity nods, so many references, quite a few Easter eggs and of course, plenty of lore to dive into. In other words, it had everything that an absolute story lover like me could want, I think it was absolutely fantastic. Naturally of course, the USB scenes themselves were incredibly well written and absolutely brimming with originality and creativity and I rally enjoyed them! Honestly, you're ability to continuously dig into all the lore and history from both our respective worlds, just never ceases to amaze me. I really do hope you know just how much respect I have for you and you're constant attention to detail, because lets face it, even the most smallest of detail can have major implications, so I really do love it all.

A truly, TRULY fantastic new addition and I think you captured everyone's and I do mean EVERYONE'S personalities and characteristics perfectly, especially Tina's, Mag's and Blink's. You absolutely nailed all three of these ladies personalities in this chapter and you did them all the world of justice, and I just simply can not thank you enough for this!

Amazing job again!

