esercito sconfitto wrote: Sun Apr 09, 2023 12:16 pm
Stormtrooper1990, hope you don't mind if I keep coming back here, staring at the dumpster with the six waitresses
maybe I have been impressed by a tale of another author, but I want to propose you an idea about the next tale of yours...why don't you start from the epilogue? I mean, from the discovery scene
just start from the news about a dumpster routinely emptied by the cleaning service- or from the story as told by a cleaning team guy, with the description of the many underwear -clad girls , tied up and gagged, stashed in there
and some of them just run away ...day after day the dumpster is filled with pretty girls half naked... eventually it becomes clear that there is a USB gang in town...
best regards!
Hi esercito
No, not at all. It's a sight that I keep on revisting and it always brings a smile to my face.
As a writer, I tend to start at the USB scene and work outwards then it's the ending. I usually write the start of the story last, if that makes any sense. Then write the epilogue last, to had a little extra seasoning.
I'am not really a fan of bondage, I prefer to have my victims dosed up or stunned with SI technology, for 8 to 12 hours then dumped in a handy locker or dumpster. It's highly unrealistic for a gang of professional thieves to be lugging around rope or whatever to restrain their victims, especially if they are running on the clock. Bondage also implies that the thieves care about their victims on a human level, I prefer to have a theme of detachment in my stories. They don't won't to kill the women, just strip them, have a little fun with them and ultimately dump them, as soon as they fulfilled our thieves purposes. If there is to be bondage, then improvising is better and more realistic. But it won't be feature in my non-lethal stories going forward.
I know that sounds a little controversial, especially to bondage fans out there but it's one writers opinion.
Your idea sounds interesting, esercito. Thank you for your input.
For know carry on enjoying those, 6 underwear clad unconscious waitresses in the dumpster. I know I do
