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Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:35 pm
by simon4242
take it from me give it a go

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:39 pm
by FemaleSpy
simon4242 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:35 pm take it from me give it a go
I'm trying, but only what I can - girl with some profession / affiliation and human killer or no, so that's very L for writer, I'm ready help or advice, but that's really enough :roll:

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:41 pm
by simon4242
well do a draft and i will take a look just PM me

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:43 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
FemaleSpy wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:34 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:14 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 8:56 pm

Well, this reminds me of a famous amerime conflict, so in this case, I will be in place of Iroh, so keep the part of the story that will satisfy everyone, enjoy reading:
:shock: :?
Leila smiled, the girl had a wonderful slender athletic figure, she was just her size. Assessing the environment around, Layla moved to kill or knock, that's new place, so need some improvisation.

Harriet Kendall was 20 and in her second year of archeology at Oxford University. She saved up money for several months to go on the journey of a lifetime to Egypt, the land of the pharaohs, a dream come true. Not to mention, research credits will go a long way towards securing her final year of study. As she walked towards the small rock, she thought what a pity her friend Sammy couldn't make the trip. Harriet laughed inwardly, at home she was busy feeding the cat while Harriet strolled through history. If she sat down on a rock, she was too distracted, lighting a cigarette, to notice the shadow and rustle behind her, or feel the blow that hit her bare head. Harriet didn't have time to scream when she felt one jolt that reached her head and knocked her down instantly. Leila smiled when she noticed that the thrown stone had fulfilled its function and hit right on target, the girl was still conscious, but it was extremely difficult for her to understand or move, so when Leila came up and hit her on the back of the head with the first thick stick that came across , she definitely couldn’t imagine what happened and struck her, after Leila was convinced of the unconscious state of the victim, she thought “For insulting the lady, she deserved great cruelty and punishment, but I can’t hesitate, I need to help the goddess, I’m her only inheritance, and this bitch will lie here naked under the scorching desert sun for exactly as long as she deserves", after which she took and dragged her body over the largest rock, which, fortunately, was not far from the excavation site. :geek: :ugeek:
An excellent paraphrasing my friend, do you think of taking up writing yourself?
I'm bad writing, don't have enough fantasy for this, especially creation character, so better be adviser ;)
No worries mate, I really valued your support for night at the museum. Thanks again :D

I even added a red head just for you ;)

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:51 pm
by FemaleSpy
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:43 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:34 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:14 pm

An excellent paraphrasing my friend, do you think of taking up writing yourself?
I'm bad writing, don't have enough fantasy for this, especially creation character, so better be adviser ;)
No worries mate, I really valued your support for night at the museum. Thanks again :D

I even added a red head just for you ;)
Yep, thanks you, mate ;) :D 🤝🤜🤛

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:52 pm
by FemaleSpy
simon4242 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:41 pm well do a draft and i will take a look just PM me
Nah, love balance, when have ready writers, not need do some parody for big site, so thanks you, but finish here.... :geek: :ugeek:

Re: The Tomb of Anck-su-namun

Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 12:03 am
by Stormtrooper1990
FemaleSpy wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:51 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:43 pm
FemaleSpy wrote: Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:34 pm

I'm bad writing, don't have enough fantasy for this, especially creation character, so better be adviser ;)
No worries mate, I really valued your support for night at the museum. Thanks again :D

I even added a red head just for you ;)
Yep, thanks you, mate ;) :D 🤝🤜🤛
You are very much welcome 😁 fistbump