Spacesuit, Vol. 6: A Woman Scorned

[simon4242]

bobbi and harper do need to be taught a lesson though ......too much cockiness lo

[tirepanted3]

Meditions: Yes, the usherette scene was an important one to develop the tension between Harper and Jenna. I decided it would be better to have the actual knockout be offscreen, in part to leave it to the imagination, but also to play the scene out through Jenna's eyes(since she was absent from the mugging and even briefly thinks the uniforms were acquired legitimately, before she opens the van).

The factory worker scene was among the trickier scenes to write, since I wanted to focus both on Bobbi's resourcefulness and callousness, to show that she's both a highly skilled USB and something of a cruel person. Using the woman's love of animals against her was a way of doing that. Glad you enjoyed.

Simon4242: There will be lessons taught to some people who deserve them... Stay tuned...

[simon4242]

yeah its interesting how you have plotted a gradual change in felicia and bobbi characters and hopefully this will result ultimately in bobbi and harper receiving some tough karma cheers

[simon4242]

have u ever thought of doing a scene where one of your main characters tries to subdue an innocent victim and the victim kicks their butt ,imagine if the ballerina secretly had martial artist training lol

[tirepanted3]

I've done a couple of scenes in the past where the potential USB victim turns out to be an expert USB herself, leading to the mugger getting the tables turned on her in some level. But usually this is done for story purposes, leading to the two characters forming some sort of alliance. USBs getting outmaneuvered by potential victims is tougher to work in without interrupting the flow of the story, since that sort of scenario would probably end with the muggers getting caught and arrested.

[meditions142]

, in part to leave it to the imagination,

And it is fun to image!

In my version, even though we know Harper actually enjoys getting a little rough, given they were in a parking lot they would need to be quick and quiet so another employee doesn't come along and see what is happening. Therefore, in my version, Harper and Evelyn would hide and wait for a woman of the right size to be walking from the parking area into the building. Then one of them would shoot the unsuspecting girl with a tranq dart and the other would quickly emerge from her hiding place and catch her before she hit the ground so there wouldn't be unnecessary noise and there would be no risk of getting the uniform dirty. The unconscious girl would then be dragged off and dumped in the van.

This would be a nice quick and quiet method and would also explain why the three women were still unconscious when Jenna arrived. I am sure they would use a drug that would put the girls into a nice, long, deep sleep. The three sleeping beauties will not be waking up any time soon.

[simon4242]

for story purposes why not that would add a bit of unpredictability for once it would be nice to see the worm turn so to speak lol

[simon4242]

and they wouldnt be captured or arrested for too long as im sure they would be broken out,just would be cool to see one of the more innocent victims be underestimated and kick butt be it a delivery person /gas station attendant/ballerina/secretary/nurse even one of the guards !!!!!!!lol

[tirepanted3]

Meditions: I think that's definitely a plausible scenario. Harper is more likely to be rough with her victims when she's on her own, while Evelyn would probably adopt a more professional attitude and use more indirect methods (like darts or chloroform) to subdue them.

Simon4242: I definitely like to subvert expectations with the USB scenes; just also have to make sure they fit within the larger story and don't interrupt the flow too much. Turning the main characters into wanted criminals would probably limit their options going forward, at least at this juncture. But it's an interesting idea.

[simon4242]

yeah it would add a bit more risk and would switch up some of the tropes and repetition ,i enjoy your stories immensely but nothing wrong with some of our innocents subverting expectations lol especially towards the characters who are overly violent or callous towards their victims