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Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:15 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 2:36 pm
Rest assured, Kremm will be on hand to assist Ellana when she eventually will dedicate an entire chapter to the MiB itself. There will be plenty of opportunity for him to Neck Pinch a few MiB staffers and guards.
Despite Kremm not knowing anything about human anatomy, he is going off the baseline for other female's (Zenobians included ) from other races and applying what he already knows. Broadly speaking, human females and Zenobian females are similar but with different skin colour(different shades of pink) and a hair colours ranging from blue to purple. And with thanks to Ellana's book, the Zenobians will have all the knowledge they need on human anatomy, particularly on human females...
Very, very much looking forward to see the future adventures!
Kremm is such a fun character for me. The women he targets never stand a chance. He is so stealthy that he sneaks up on them without them ever knowing he is there. The first time his target knows he is there is when he grabs her. And of course by then it is too late for the poor woman. She has no hope of escaping his clutches. He then just puts his thumb and finger on her neck and pinches and she is out for at least four hours. The poor woman will wake up naked and horny (assuming Ellana assumed her identity) and with a sore neck.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:37 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:15 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 2:36 pm
Rest assured, Kremm will be on hand to assist Ellana when she eventually will dedicate an entire chapter to the MiB itself. There will be plenty of opportunity for him to Neck Pinch a few MiB staffers and guards.
Despite Kremm not knowing anything about human anatomy, he is going off the baseline for other female's (Zenobians included ) from other races and applying what he already knows. Broadly speaking, human females and Zenobian females are similar but with different skin colour(different shades of pink) and a hair colours ranging from blue to purple. And with thanks to Ellana's book, the Zenobians will have all the knowledge they need on human anatomy, particularly on human females...
Very, very much looking forward to see the future adventures!
Kremm is such a fun character for me. The women he targets never stand a chance. He is so stealthy that he sneaks up on them without them ever knowing he is there. The first time his target knows he is there is when he grabs her. And of course by then it is too late for the poor woman. She has no hope of escaping his clutches. He then just puts his thumb and finger on her neck and pinches and she is out for at least four hours. The poor woman will wake up naked and horny (assuming Ellana assumed her identity) and with a sore neck.
That's very good to hear, I look forward to writing them. There will plenty of places that Ellana will hear about or see on an advertisement and think "That's where I'am going next." I won't spoil anything but Ellana wants to experience Human culture first before she infiltrates some very high level government buildings. (For the interests of science and her own curiosity of course. )
I definitely agree. Kremm was a pleasure to create with Arc, and we wanted Ellana to have a skilled male bodyguard who is hopelessly in love with her, and loyal but Ellana doesn't reciprocate of course. The most fun aspect of him is his capacity for stealth. That despite his height and heavy armour he can sneak up on an unsuspecting woman, give her a little pinch and deliver her to Ellana so she can do the rest. I think the woman would be that horny, that she may blot out the pain for a while or feel some very odd sensations when she wakes up, at the very least.
Still Kremm will still feature in the story, since Ellana does recognise that she probably wouldn't have been able to complete her mission without him.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:07 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:37 pm
The most fun aspect of him is his capacity for stealth. That despite his height and heavy armour he can sneak up on an unsuspecting woman, give her a little pinch and deliver her to Ellana so she can do the rest. I think the woman would be that horny, that she may blot out the pain for a while or feel some very odd sensations when she wakes up, at the very least.
Indeed that is what makes him so fun. He quietly sneaks up on up on an unsuspecting woman and gives her a little pinch. She never saw it coming.
The woman is then quickly put out of commission. She is instantly neutralized and can be used by Ellana.
I loved the way you described him coming up behind Samantha. "Ellana nodded to him, as he smiled clamping an armoured hand around the girl's mouth drawing her up." He has crept up on Samantha so stealthy that he and Ellana even have time for a silent exchange before he strikes. It is fun to image too that Samantha will wake a bit horny and have some odd sensations.
His stealth is so fun. I am sure the guards he attacked never knew he was there either until they were grabbed and felt a sharp pain in their necks.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:24 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:07 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:37 pm
The most fun aspect of him is his capacity for stealth. That despite his height and heavy armour he can sneak up on an unsuspecting woman, give her a little pinch and deliver her to Ellana so she can do the rest. I think the woman would be that horny, that she may blot out the pain for a while or feel some very odd sensations when she wakes up, at the very least.
Indeed that is what makes him so fun. He quietly sneaks up on up on an unsuspecting woman and gives her a little pinch. She never saw it coming.
The woman is then quickly put out of commission. She is instantly neutralized and can be used by Ellana.
I loved the way you described him coming up behind Samantha. "Ellana nodded to him, as he smiled clamping an armoured hand around the girl's mouth drawing her up." He has crept up on Samantha so stealthy that he and Ellana even have time for a silent exchange before he strikes. It is fun to image too that Samantha will wake a bit horny and have some odd sensations.
His stealth is so fun. I am sure the guards he attacked never knew he was there either until they were grabbed and felt a sharp pain in their necks.
It's fun to imagine those guards, standing there with their fancy alien guns in kevlar guarding Ellana. They hear a sound behind them, its nothing. They turn around and then feel a slight pain on their neck and boom, naptime! Kremm's standing over them with a smile on his face.
That was a fun scene to write for me too. Ellana is impressed with Kremm's ninja skills, that she acknowledges him before he puts the pinch on poor Samantha. You can picture both women waking up in that vent, Samantha very naked and very sore jumps on the guard and both very confused decide to go with it and make out then and there. Since they are both in a very stressful situation and their superiors won't be happy.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:56 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:24 pm
It's fun to imagine those guards, standing there with their fancy alien guns in kevlar guarding Ellana. They hear a sound behind them, its nothing. They turn around and then feel a slight pain on their neck and boom, naptime! Kremm's standing over them with a smile on his face.
That was a fun scene to write for me too. Ellana is impressed with Kremm's ninja skills, that she acknowledges him before he puts the pinch on poor Samantha. You can picture both women waking up in that vent, Samantha very naked and very sore jumps on the guard and both very confused decide to go with it and make out then and there. Since they are both in a very stressful situation and their superiors won't be happy.
Love that description of what happened to the guards. "They hear a sound behind them, its nothing. They turn around and then feel a slight pain on their neck and boom, naptime! Kremm's standing over them with a smile on his face." Such a perfect sentry take down. They were armed but no match for Kremm.
I also like "Ellana is impressed with Kremm's ninja skills, that she acknowledges him before he puts the pinch on poor Samantha." She is so impressed by Kremm that she doesn't even spare a thought about what poor Samantha is about to go through.
And love to imagine that little season with Samantha and guard. You can imagine that even if they were both straight given Samantha's arousal and the situation they have found themselves in, they really can't resist.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 5:22 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:56 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 4:24 pm
It's fun to imagine those guards, standing there with their fancy alien guns in kevlar guarding Ellana. They hear a sound behind them, its nothing. They turn around and then feel a slight pain on their neck and boom, naptime! Kremm's standing over them with a smile on his face.
That was a fun scene to write for me too. Ellana is impressed with Kremm's ninja skills, that she acknowledges him before he puts the pinch on poor Samantha. You can picture both women waking up in that vent, Samantha very naked and very sore jumps on the guard and both very confused decide to go with it and make out then and there. Since they are both in a very stressful situation and their superiors won't be happy.
Love that description of what happened to the guards. "They hear a sound behind them, its nothing. They turn around and then feel a slight pain on their neck and boom, naptime! Kremm's standing over them with a smile on his face." Such a perfect sentry take down. They were armed but no match for Kremm.
I also like "Ellana is impressed with Kremm's ninja skills, that she acknowledges him before he puts the pinch on poor Samantha." She is so impressed by Kremm that she doesn't even spare a thought about what poor Samantha is about to go through.
And love to imagine that little season with Samantha and guard. You can imagine that even if they were both straight given Samantha's arousal and the situation they have found themselves in, they really can't resist.
Despite the alien technology the MiB, its no match for Kremm and his ninja skill.
Ellana was checking Samantha out while she was working near her cell, thinking of ways to grab her and take her form. So when Kremm appears behind her, and puts on the Nerve Pinch, Ellana enjoys the moment. She may find human women and their lives fascinating but she as no qualms about knocking them out and assuming their forms, although its rare to see her use physical force. For her isn't just scientific curiosity but she enjoys her work and being many different people. Even if she completely misunderstands a lot of the time.
Exactly. The aphrodisiac in Ellana's saliva removes all inhibitions, so Samantha acts on them immediately with no resistance. As for the guard she may have been straight but will probably be left wondering if she could be bi after such an encounter. They both have to work off that stress somehow...

Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 7:18 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 5:22 pm
Ellana was checking Samantha out while she was working near her cell, thinking of ways to grab her and take her form. So when Kremm appears behind her, and puts on the Nerve Pinch, Ellana enjoys the moment. She may find human women and their lives fascinating but she as no qualms about knocking them out and assuming their forms, although its rare to see her use physical force. For her isn't just scientific curiosity but she enjoys her work and being many different people. Even if she completely misunderstands a lot of the time.
I do like the fact Ellana actually enjoys watching Samantha receiving the pinch and being put to sleep. You have let us know in the story that Samantha is very pretty and also that Ellana found her attractive and checked out her breasts and butt once she was naked.
Interesting too that "she may find human women and their lives fascinating but she as no qualms about knocking them out and assuming their forms". You have to wonder that while she finds human women fascinating, she nonetheless sees them as inferior to Zenobians. Therefore, in a way, they are like lab subjects to her. She certainly doesn't want them killed or seriously injure them. However, she doesn't care enough to be concerned when Kremm uses his nerve pinch on them (even though it does cause them a brief moment of pain) or tosses their bodies to the ground, or when she uses her anesthetic on them to knock them out. She also doesn't mind leaving them naked and also, as we learn she will do in the future, she doesn't mind putting them in such a deep sleep that they will remain in suspended animation for potentially days.
Re: Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity:- Chapter 4 On Human Mass Culture(Based on a Concept by Arc)
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 10:30 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 7:18 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 5:22 pm
Ellana was checking Samantha out while she was working near her cell, thinking of ways to grab her and take her form. So when Kremm appears behind her, and puts on the Nerve Pinch, Ellana enjoys the moment. She may find human women and their lives fascinating but she as no qualms about knocking them out and assuming their forms, although its rare to see her use physical force. For her isn't just scientific curiosity but she enjoys her work and being many different people. Even if she completely misunderstands a lot of the time.
I do like the fact Ellana actually enjoys watching Samantha receiving the pinch and being put to sleep. You have let us know in the story that Samantha is very pretty and also that Ellana found her attractive and checked out her breasts and butt once she was naked.
Interesting too that "she may find human women and their lives fascinating but she as no qualms about knocking them out and assuming their forms". You have to wonder that while she finds human women fascinating, she nonetheless sees them as inferior to Zenobians. Therefore, in a way, they are like lab subjects to her. She certainly doesn't want them killed or seriously injure them. However, she doesn't care enough to be concerned when Kremm uses his nerve pinch on them (even though it does cause them a brief moment of pain) or tosses their bodies to the ground, or when she uses her anesthetic on them to knock them out. She also doesn't mind leaving them naked and also, as we learn she will do in the future, she doesn't mind putting them in such a deep sleep that they will remain in suspended animation for potentially days.
It's a feature of Ellana's character that she is attracted to human women, and does often take the time to admire their naked bodies. Especially in the cases of Samantha and Carmen. And she does derive pleasure from either rendering them unconscious or from watching Kremm. Whether the attraction is sexual in nature or art appreciation, is an aspect of her character that we will develop later in the series.
Indeed, Ellana like all extraterrestrials does compare humanity unfavourably with the Zenobians to begin with. When Ellana see's a suitable woman to replace, she is of course curious about them and she finds them attractive(which are generally her preferred type of victim) but ultimately they are specimens, identities that she needs to steal to complete her work. While she may be good natured and abhors violence towards the women, Ellana does operate with a sense of detachment. She must do because her work, her lives mission is more important then the general welfare of those she replaces. Ellana wishes no harm on anyone, but will do what's necessary. It comes with the territory of being a scientist, she has to remain objective and professional. Although, when she meets Nikki and their relationship develops Ellana might her opinions might change. (Not too drastically, mind you)