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Re: The Ballard of Siobhan Donnelly:- Escape to Freedom
Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2023 7:34 pm
by rufusluciusivan
Cool short story. Also, first time a novice is mugged for her clothes, I think.
Re: The Ballard of Siobhan Donnelly:- Escape to Freedom
Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2023 9:21 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
Thanks Rufus
Novice Mary was originally going to be a full blown nun, but I didn't want to annoy Esercito so she became a novice.
I really enjoyed writing this prequel, and becoming a trailblazer. Let's hope it's the start of a trend. Novices make good targets for infiltrators
Thank you for reading and liking my story. I appreciate it.
Re: The Ballard of Siobhan Donnelly:- Escape to Freedom
Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2023 11:24 am
by tirepanted3
I like the contrast of Siobhan mugging the standard "good girl" (the novice in the church) and then the stereotypical "bad girl" (the punk blonde in the alley). Fun story.
Re: The Ballard of Siobhan Donnelly:- Escape to Freedom
Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2023 12:09 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
tirepanted3 wrote: Mon Apr 17, 2023 11:24 am
I like the contrast of Siobhan mugging the standard "good girl" (the novice in the church) and then the stereotypical "bad girl" (the punk blonde in the alley). Fun story.
Thanks tirepanted3 I'am glad you enjoyed it.
Although Novice Mary was going to take advantage of the younger Siobahn, after all she hadn't took her vows yet. That makes her a very naughty novice. It just didn't turn out the way she expected