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Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 12:31 am
by Stormtrooper1990
simon4242 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 12:22 am
fair enuff if they are one shots or two shots but if a serial readers like a good girl winning at the end lol
Or a grey girl, more complex more compelling.
Most of the horror stories will be one or two shots, but If they prove popular then I will have to write more.
I had no idea when I first starting writing the SI that it would grow to be so popular. But I enjoyed every minute I spent writing it.
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 12:36 am
by simon4242
yep it was great writing.......
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 7:35 am
by esercito sconfitto
Stormtrooper, straight to the point, did you ever consider a comedian ( and YES, of course, non lethal ) story?
a lot of uniform stealing with no ( or very limited ) disguise purpose? a mass scene, a lot of mass scenes?
pleeeeeeease say yes
wow maybe I have found the writer to complete the "Grabber Park Estate Saga " started by Dave Dorc

Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 7:42 am
by Stormtrooper1990
esercito sconfitto wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 7:35 am
Stormtrooper, straight to the point, did you ever consider a comedian ( and YES, of course, non lethal ) story?
a lot of uniform stealing with no ( or very limited ) disguise purpose? a mass scene, a lot of mass scenes?
pleeeeeeease say yes
wow maybe I have found the writer to complete the "Grabber Park Estate Saga " started by Dave Dorc
I do like my mass scenes, and I enjoy humour. Very dark humour that is
Although I prefer stealing clothes/uniforms as a disguise or for something for a 3000 year old mummy to wear after she as had the longest naked lie in.
I will think about it, it's something to consider.

Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 7:57 am
by esercito sconfitto
are you familiar with the stories by Dave Dorc? many of them are centered on the "Grabber Park Estate" ( pay attention, the action takes place back in 2010... Bojo, not Sadiq for Mayor
https://www.uniformstealingboard.com/viewforum.php?f=39
well I made some attempts to resume the saga ( be indulgent with my style of drawing)
https://www.uniformstealingboard.com/vi ... 166&t=1261
all the stories end with pretty girls hugging trees in the Park
and what we need is a writer from UK and lot of dark humour - and loads of pretty WPCs

Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:25 am
by pc305435632
"A Night at the Museum"
Seeing this title, I thought it would be a story about killing security and stealing valuables.
"Museum", a special place, can provide two creative ways to hide corpses.
1.Tuck the corpse in the armor which displayed in a long gallery.
2.Put plaster on the corpse to make it look like a statue.
The next day, tourists will walk around them until they smell incontinence.
The description of the hidden corpse in your works is very simple. I have always believed that "hiding the corpse" is an important part of the story of "uniform steal". Whether it is a picture work or a written work.
PS:I think "Avada Kedavra" is more cool
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:32 am
by Stormtrooper1990
I will give a read, I would be open to the idea. Perhaps a series reboot. From the ground up.
Mind you esercito, this is the UK. Finding any cop, especially a pretty WPC, is like finding a hen with teeth. But that's the beauty with my stories, they will all be pretty and will be seen.
We have a saying in the UK, you are more likely to see a unicorn then a cop.
Hope is not all lost, we do have a lot of pretty PCSO's ( police community support officers) they have the judicial powers of a turnip, but make effective uniform stealing targets, as they are completely clueless.
You would be more likely to find those in Grabber Park, then actual WPC's. They would be hiding in the station, out of fear.
I could give the series a more edgier darkly comic angle, with the Grabber girls using their disguises to run heists, stealing money from the rich and giving to the poor in true Robin Hood style. And generally destroy labours hold on the city of London.
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:40 am
by Stormtrooper1990
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:25 am
"A Night at the Museum"
Seeing this title, I thought it would be a story about killing security and stealing valuables.
"Museum", a special place, can provide two creative ways to hide corpses.
1.Tuck the corpse in the armor which displayed in a long gallery.
2.Put plaster on the corpse to make it look like a statue.
The next day, tourists will walk around them until they smell incontinence.
The description of the hidden corpse in your works is very simple. I have always believed that "hiding the corpse" is an important part of the story of "uniform steal". Whether it is a picture work or a written work.
PS:I think "Avada Kedavra" is more cool
I drew inspiration, from the Mummy 2 when Imhoteps followers commandeered the museum to raise him. I just threw in some USB and boom.
As for the magic, as my ancient egyptian is a little bit rusty I just went with a descriptive effect of the spell.
The killing curse, I know it well. A fellow Potter fan,
I always like my titles, to have a little ring of Irony or dark humour. The first thing that draws anyone into a story, is the title. So you have to make it good.
I too believe that hiding the body is a crucial point of any USB story, the art of disguise is an act of stealth in and of itself, so it is only natural to observe the proper custom. It is also pretty sexy.
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 9:00 am
by pc305435632
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:40 am
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:25 am
"A Night at the Museum"
Seeing this title, I thought it would be a story about killing security and stealing valuables.
"Museum", a special place, can provide two creative ways to hide corpses.
1.Tuck the corpse in the armor which displayed in a long gallery.
2.Put plaster on the corpse to make it look like a statue.
The next day, tourists will walk around them until they smell incontinence.
The description of the hidden corpse in your works is very simple. I have always believed that "hiding the corpse" is an important part of the story of "uniform steal". Whether it is a picture work or a written work.
PS:I think "Avada Kedavra" is more cool
I drew inspiration, from the Mummy 2 when Imhoteps followers commandeered the museum to raise him. I just threw in some USB and boom.
As for the magic, as my ancient egyptian is a little bit rusty I just went with a descriptive effect of the spell.
The killing curse, I know it well. A fellow Potter fan,
I always like my titles, to have a little ring of Irony or dark humour. The first thing that draws anyone into a story, is the title. So you have to make it good.
I too believe that hiding the body is a crucial point of any USB story, the art of disguise is an act of stealth in and of itself, so it is only natural to observe the proper custom. It is also pretty sexy.
I think this "soul sucking" setting is the same as the "vampire" setting.
How about strangling the victim with bandages instead?(Of course, this method is suitable for archaeologists in ancient tombs, and there is no atmosphere in museums.)
Start at 25:00
https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1EK411q7bE/
Re: A Night at the Museum
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 9:13 am
by Stormtrooper1990
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 9:00 am
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:40 am
pc305435632 wrote: Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:25 am
"A Night at the Museum"
Seeing this title, I thought it would be a story about killing security and stealing valuables.
"Museum", a special place, can provide two creative ways to hide corpses.
1.Tuck the corpse in the armor which displayed in a long gallery.
2.Put plaster on the corpse to make it look like a statue.
The next day, tourists will walk around them until they smell incontinence.
The description of the hidden corpse in your works is very simple. I have always believed that "hiding the corpse" is an important part of the story of "uniform steal". Whether it is a picture work or a written work.
PS:I think "Avada Kedavra" is more cool
I drew inspiration, from the Mummy 2 when Imhoteps followers commandeered the museum to raise him. I just threw in some USB and boom.
As for the magic, as my ancient egyptian is a little bit rusty I just went with a descriptive effect of the spell.
The killing curse, I know it well. A fellow Potter fan,
I always like my titles, to have a little ring of Irony or dark humour. The first thing that draws anyone into a story, is the title. So you have to make it good.
I too believe that hiding the body is a crucial point of any USB story, the art of disguise is an act of stealth in and of itself, so it is only natural to observe the proper custom. It is also pretty sexy.
I think this "soul sucking" setting is the same as the "vampire" setting.
How about strangling the victim with bandages instead?(Of course, this method is suitable for archaeologists in ancient tombs, and there is no atmosphere in museums.)
Start at 25:00
https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1EK411q7bE/
That could work, but the mummy will need to reconstitute her orginal form to strip the dead archaeologist of her clothes.