SI:-S2 Ep 4 To Free a Nightingale

[simon4242]

dont forget the return of morales lol

[Stormtrooper1990]

ezactly i like to know what happens to our non lethal victims after lol thank you

I think the best example is Siobhan and Annabeth, they suffered from memory loss, temporary paralysis after their shock glove treatment.

[meditions142]

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I think the best example is Siobhan and Annabeth, they suffered from memory loss, temporary paralysis after their shock glove treatment.
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And of course being unconscious for 12 hours too.

I definitely like the way you introduced the shock glove with Reynolds explaining how it works. The concept that the glove (and the bullet too) basically shut down the woman's CNS, paralyzes her and uses the residual charge to trick her brain into keeping her asleep is really an interesting concept.

[Stormtrooper1990]

dont forget the return of morales lol

How can I forget, technically another shadowverse story. I will write that up, it will be a two part story. Pt1 will cover their escape, mugging their rescuers, dismissal from the federal police. It will also feature Morales and Rodriguez confessing their feelings for each other.( They have history together, spanning back to thier school days) and a new job offer, from the SI.

Part 2 will cover their induction, and a mission to even the score with Alvarez. Which leads to Morales and Rodriguez earning at least some satisfaction and a new life together with the SI.

[simon4242]

thank you dont forget the phone call to the emts for the lovely hitchhikers lol

[Stormtrooper1990]

I think the best example is Siobhan and Annabeth, they suffered from memory loss, temporary paralysis after their shock glove treatment.
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And of course being unconscious for 12 hours too.

I definitely like the way you introduced the shock glove with Reynolds explaining how it works. The concept that the glove (and the bullet too) basically shut down the woman's CNS, paralyzes her and uses the residual charge to trick her brain into keeping her asleep is really an interesting concept.
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Thank you, the brain is essentially an organic computer and like any computer can be fooled. It's where I got the idea. Imagine if shock weapons were real, it removes the necessity for Law enforcement to carry lethal firearms.

I know I once stated my preference for lethal scenes, but I forgot to add that it depends on the context. If you are writing a story about a Vampire, Alien, terminator or Assassin(94) than lethal is the way to go. But with characters like Miranda, Nadja, Kelly and group 6, non lethal is the way to go. Like everything in life, balance is key.

And I do get a buzz when writing Miranda and Nadja's handiwork.

So I would say that I like both lethal and Non-lethal, USB in general.

[Stormtrooper1990]

thank you dont forget the phone call to the emts for the lovely hitchhikers lol

I actually have that scene in mind. Morales and Rodriguez are not cops anymore but they still have their sense of doing what is right.

The story will feature just Morales and Rodriguez, their team abandons them in protest for Morales leading them into an ambush.

Not to worry, they will get a new team. In SI black.

[simon4242]

marvellous

[meditions142]

The Brunette guard's name Corporal Holly Davies, I think she may have been feeling a little fear, followed by the embarrassment of having mini orgasm before unconsciousness

I felt a little bad for 94, she went to some trouble to rescue them but it turns out they really didn't need rescuing

I was rereading the story and realized something. Holly was actually a lucky girl despite being tricked and knocked out by Vesper. Had she still been on duty standing guard in the hall when 94 came along, 94 could have gotten in close proximate to her using the uniform she took from the other sentry. And we know what would have happened to Holly then,

[Stormtrooper1990]

Yeah, I don't think Holly realised that she was only minutes from death. In a way Vesper did her a favour.

Another sign on how far Vesper as come, before she met Miranda, she would have killed both Victoria and Holly without much pity.

I' am proud of how she as grown from remorseless assassin to USB heroine, alongside her loving soon to be wife, Miranda.