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Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:18 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
He certainly can dream ;)

I'am not a fan of excessive violence myself, or gore.

For my lethal stories it's just a quick takedown then the stripping, nothing else.

Same goes for non lethal, a shock round, nerve pinch with the shock glove or the gas grenades.

In one of my upcoming stories for Miranda and Nadja(Vesper), will feature a chokeout and neck chop on guards. Since they will be forced to improvise, and won't have their gear.

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:28 pm
by meditions142
simon4242 wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:08 pm what i do like about your stories is there is no needless violence no excessive force used to knock out or kill
I definitely agree with you on that Simon4242. That is what I love about the knockout methods Stormtrooper1990 uses. Whether the shock bullets, gas grenades or shock glove the force is really not excessive.

That is also why I love the effects the methods have on the women so much. Nothing excessive is done to the woman but yet the effect on her is powerful. Like the glove. I love the idea of simply pinching a woman on her neck yet having such an effect on her. With a simple pinch, the woman basically has her central nervous system turned off and she falls into a deep, deep and long lasting sleep.

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:32 pm
by esercito sconfitto
straight to the point, Stormtrooper, would you kindly provide us with a sort of "casting call" for this original character of you, 94? at this moment it is badly needed 8-) thanks in advance

( yes, I know there is a description of her features in the very first tale of yours, but I want to know something different )

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:47 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
I really how the SI as evolved from a shadowy private enterprise with dubious morals to a sort of peacekeeping role, sort of like the Inquisition in Dragonage. I have come to call the world of the SI and 94 the Shadowverse.

In fact I was writing a virgin novel, about a secretive all female group of assassins, who actually used to be vampire hunters. It was a kind of dark modern fantasy. It did feature some USB scenes, and I did want to make it a core feature. The SI emerged from that. The first USB scene I wrote in the novel was where my main character, Alison Archer, after she kills her target, steals the uniform of an FBI swat girl, lethally, to exfil the area but her disguise fails.

In all my future stories, post SI will feature this hallmark, whether lethal or otherwise. No excessive violence.

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:51 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
esercito sconfitto wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2023 5:32 pm straight to the point, Stormtrooper, would you kindly provide us with a sort of "casting call" for this original character of you, 94? at this moment it is badly needed 8-) thanks in advance

( yes, I know there is a description of her features in the very first tale of yours, but I want to know something different )
No worries, esercito

If I was to pick an actress for the role of 94, then I would choose Daisy Ridley. She as been out of work since Star Wars and a role of a genetically engineered, cloned assassin would do wonders for her. Plus I have this fantasy of her, knocking out a female Stormtrooper or Officer and stealing her clothes. :D

Would you also like a casting call on the SI girls too? And Fairchild.

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 9:09 pm
by Void99
Well a casting call for the Officer victims would require going back to 1996 and plucking these 3 candidates out!
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Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 9:50 pm
by simon4242
so how much of the novel have you written and could you put the usb scenes on here as excerpts

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 11:35 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
Void99 wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2023 9:09 pm Well a casting call for the Officer victims would require going back to 1996 and plucking these 3 candidates out!
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The officer's from 'Shadows reunited.' Excellent choice, Void99

Lt Francine Rènard, the middle actress. ( Kym Valentine)

Lt Carrie Reynolds( Now the logistics and support officer for Group 6), the blonde actress ( Eliza Szonert)

Lt Holly Kaminski ( With her hair dyed red, Natalie Imbruglia)

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2023 11:40 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
simon4242 wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2023 9:50 pm so how much of the novel have you written and could you put the usb scenes on here as excerpts
I only got a third of the way, through and it as been on a decade hiatus. But I have it on my Microsoft word.

I could definitely post the excepts on the USB, when I have a spare moment.

I even have a vampire character that steals the clothes from a hunter that tries to kill her.

I might pick it up again, seeing that writing on the USB as reignited my imagination.

Re: Colorado Blues:- A 94 story

Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2023 12:48 am
by simon4242
yes to both please lol