Spacesuit, Vol. 6: A Woman Scorned

[simon4242]

self doubts or not bridget maybe needs a bit more of a jolt as does bobbi and chandra , i would love to see more discovery scenes and rescues or even a final rundown on the fates of the poor innocent mugged victims ......cheers lol

[simon4242]

ps harper needs some real karma lol

[tirepanted3]

Saker: Thanks! I know Bobbi's character can be a bit controversial, but it's been an interesting challenge to develop her over the course of the series to the woman she is now. Despite the multitude of other characters, I still think of Bobbi and Felicia as the emotional center of the series, and their polarized developments - Felicia becoming less enamored with uniform stealing, Bobbi growing more excited by it - has been great fun to write.

Simon4242: I won't spoil future developments, but there will be some karma meted out before the end - nearly every woman in the series engages in USB tactics, but some of them are more deserving of getting justice than others. As for discovery scenes, I only try to include them when I can work them into the story (i.e. they don't interfere with the running plotline); however, the next chapter just may include at least one discovery scene.

[simon4242]

so its safe to say that despite not showing it in your stories all of the innocent victims will be discovered lol i still think of agent cole and the poor motorist hidden in alcoves in the spy in sunglasses lol

[tirepanted3]

Yes, unless explicitly stated otherwise it's safe to assume that the USB victims are all eventually found and freed. (That's how people are so aware in the series that uniform stealing is a rising issue.) Even the women whom Janet mugged and stowed in caves in Spy in Sunglasses will be found when they moan for help loudly enough.

[simon4242]

i think you stories are marvellous the only thing that doesnt sit right with me is the sex trafficking, out of all your great stories the sex traffickers are the ones that do deserve to be seen to be brought to justice however light heated your stories are ....

[simon4242]

it would be nice if you wrote a story featuring the downfall of Miranda ....lol

[tirepanted3]

Thanks! Yes, the trafficking stuff has been controversial, which is why I have tried not to feature it much these last few years. (There was a little of it in the “Sports Team” story, but I tried to leave it open-ended.) I probably won’t be including that stuff in future stories, certainly not among characters meant to be seen as heroes.

[simon4242]

thats cool but you could write miranda in getting her just desserts lol

[meditions142]

Thanks for continuing this great story. Fun new chapter.

I actually think my favorite scene was the usherette scene. Obviously, it was a great way to set up the interaction between Jenna and Harper and built the drama between them. I also really like the way the scene plays out.

First off, you don't find out what was done to knock the three of them out so you can use your imagination. Of course, with the comments about Harper's methods used on the ballerina it may have been a bit rough with the poor usherettes. Also, whatever was done to them it seems long lasting as Harper and Evelyn had time to strip two of them and then wait for Jenna and the women were still out.

I also love the image of the scene when the door of the van opens and we see all three unconscious women with two already in nothing but their bra and panties and tied up and one still in her uniform and not yet tied up.

Just really like the scene.

I also really liked the scene with the factory worker. First off, I really like scenes where the victim is tricked and lured over near the tree lines or bushes. Also love the quick pull her out of sight and knock her out move. Loved how it was described:

"'Don't worry, dear, there are no animals in trouble," Bobbi whispered. "Except for you, of course...'

A judo chop behind the girl's left ear was all it took. The factory worker gurgled, and fell unconscious.

That was almost too easy, Bobbi mused."

Well done Bobbi!