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Re: Check Point (2017)
Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2024 9:53 pm
by Trackman281
Damn, the victim was very, VERY sexy. Would have loved to see her half naked body sprawled out somewhere as her infiltrator dons her sexy cowgirl outfit, but hey ho nevermind.
Brilliant find Darth dude!

Re: Check Point (2017)
Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2024 11:45 pm
by darth chlorophorm 2
That'd be awesome of you could scribe a "What If?" Libby/Escort story.
Waiting isn't a problem for me, you would be doing all the hard work.
As for the escort's high heels: It might be as simple as her shoes just didn't fit Libby.
What are the chances everything the escort was wearing would fit Libby.
Re: Check Point (2017)
Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2024 11:55 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
darth chlorophorm 2 wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2024 11:45 pm
That'd be awesome of you could scribe a "What If?" Libby/Escort story.
Waiting isn't a problem for me, you would be doing all the hard work.
As for the escort's high heels: It might be as simple as her shoes just didn't fit Libby.
What are the chances everything the escort was wearing would fit Libby.
Okay, that's good to hear Darth I will add it to the list. I would make it lethal since that's how I interpret the scene, based on what I have seen of Libby as a character. Would that be okay?
That's a good point, I hadn't considered something so simple. Plus, she needed to conceal her knife somewhere since the escorts clothes while sexy don't hide much. Had she taken the escorts platforms, she wouldn't have anywhere to put her knife.
Re: Check Point (2017)
Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2024 6:43 am
by darth chlorophorm 2
Making the story "lethal" is up to you, seeing how you're the author.
My only request: If possible, please don't make the escort's death be bloody or extremely violent.
That would be a turn off for me.
May I suggest Libby use a garrote or a lethal chokehold. Maybe even a lethal karate chop to the throat. That's a quick and quiet way to take out the young beauty.
Those are my thoughts.
Re: Check Point (2017)
Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2024 7:02 am
by Stormtrooper1990
darth chlorophorm 2 wrote: Mon Jul 01, 2024 6:43 am
Making the story "lethal" is up to you, seeing how you're the author.
My only request: If possible, please don't make the escort's death be bloody or extremely violent.
That would be a turn off for me.
May I suggest Libby use a garrote or a lethal chokehold. Maybe even a lethal karate chop to the throat. That's a quick and quiet way to take out the young beauty.
Those are my thoughts.
Thats not a problem, it wasn't on my mind to make the escorts death bloody or gruesome. I'am not particularly a fan of bloody takedowns myself, so the cleaner and quieter the better. Those are really good suggestions, particularly the lethal chokehold or lethal karate chop. I will keep them in mind. Thanks for the input, I will see what I can do.