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Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 1:56 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:53 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:50 pm
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:18 pm

Indeed you showcases Kallista's skills perfectly. Her attack is top notch. She is fast but precise enough to hit just the right pressure points to immobilize Judith between the pain and having the wind knocked out of her. Then a precise chop to a pressure point in her neck and Judith is out cold.

Judith is a perfect "dumb guard". She is suspicious of Kallista but still gets close enough to her that Kallista can take her out.

She breaks the first rule of guards everywhere, don't get too close to the infiltrator. Fortunately for our heroines, they never learn do they?


I will expand Kallista's skills, to include chokeholds, nerve pinches and maybe even the classic crotch grab. :D

Wow. Very much looking forward to seeing Kallisata perhaps sneak up behind some cute sentry girl and putting her out with a nerve pinch. And a crotch grab, hmm, sound intriguing.

I was thinking of doing that for Kallista's next outing, her first real mission in Haxony. For the crotch grab, I was thinking Kallista seduces a guard, then grabs her vagina hard. The poor girl doubles up in arousal before Kallista follows through with a neck pinch, side throat chop or a swift right hook.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 2:37 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:56 pm

I was thinking of doing that for Kallista's next outing, her first real mission in Haxony. For the crotch grab, I was thinking Kallista seduces a guard, then grabs her vagina hard. The poor girl doubles up in arousal before Kallista follows through with a neck pinch, side throat chop or a swift right hook.
Oh, that sounds rather sexy I must say. And of course if Kallista's got the woman all aroused we of course know what will happen if she pinches her Vagus Nerve!

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 2:42 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:37 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:56 pm

I was thinking of doing that for Kallista's next outing, her first real mission in Haxony. For the crotch grab, I was thinking Kallista seduces a guard, then grabs her vagina hard. The poor girl doubles up in arousal before Kallista follows through with a neck pinch, side throat chop or a swift right hook.
Oh, that sounds rather sexy I must say. And of course if Kallista's got the woman all aroused we of course know what will happen if she pinches her Vagus Nerve!


One big Orgasm eruption, just like vesuvius. It will be epic and really sexy.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 2:48 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:42 pm
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:37 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 1:56 pm

I was thinking of doing that for Kallista's next outing, her first real mission in Haxony. For the crotch grab, I was thinking Kallista seduces a guard, then grabs her vagina hard. The poor girl doubles up in arousal before Kallista follows through with a neck pinch, side throat chop or a swift right hook.
Oh, that sounds rather sexy I must say. And of course if Kallista's got the woman all aroused we of course know what will happen if she pinches her Vagus Nerve!


One big Orgasm eruption, just like vesuvius. It will be epic and really sexy.
Very much looking forward to it.

You know what I love the most about the worlds you create? In them if you are a cute albeit not very bright sentry girl the chances of you making it to the end of your shift conscious and in your uniform are pretty small!!

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 2:59 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:48 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:42 pm
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:37 pm

Oh, that sounds rather sexy I must say. And of course if Kallista's got the woman all aroused we of course know what will happen if she pinches her Vagus Nerve!


One big Orgasm eruption, just like vesuvius. It will be epic and really sexy.
Very much looking forward to it.

You know what I love the most about the worlds you create? In them if you are a cute albeit not very bright sentry girl the chances of you making it to the end of your shift conscious and in your uniform are pretty small!!
Thanks, mate. :D

I would say very very small. :lol: I imagine their are many nervous sentries in Haxony who will soon be looking over their shoulders, but still will end up asleep, out of uniform, and probably unemployed afterwards. ;)


It really sucks to be a cute but dumb sentry girl in either the shadowverse or bloodverse. But there will be no shortage of either.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 4:15 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:59 pm
It really sucks to be a cute but dumb sentry girl in either the shadowverse or bloodverse. But there will be no shortage of either.
It does indeed suck to be the cute dumb sentry girl in those worlds. However, look at it this way, with luck it will be the SI team or Kalistta who come across them. At least they will leave the women they neutralize alive. Of course they will be knocked out, stripped and possibly played with. But it could be worse. We know there are some out there who would not be so willing to let them live.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 4:29 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 4:15 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 2:59 pm
It really sucks to be a cute but dumb sentry girl in either the shadowverse or bloodverse. But there will be no shortage of either.
It does indeed suck to be the cute dumb sentry girl in those worlds. However, look at it this way, with luck it will be the SI team or Kalistta who come across them. At least they will leave the women they neutralize alive. Of course they will be knocked out, stripped and possibly played with. But it could be worse. We know there are some out there who would not be so willing to let them live.

I can think of a few examples, Lexi, Chloe.

I actually plan to write a whole series with 94, where she finds her wayward clone sisters. This time she will be doing things a little differently. No more killing.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 6:23 pm
by meditions142
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu May 18, 2023 1:01 pm

There is something really sexy about the thought of a woman slumped over anything, that is really sexy. Whether it's the crate corporal Vallena slumped over after she was darted or when Kallista threw Judith over the desk, to strip her all the more quicker.

I realized I had not actually commented on this but was looking back at the story an wanted to mention it. It was indeed very sexy the way Kalissta laid Judith on the desk to make stripping her easier. Love the imagery of Kallista lifted Judith's upper body up to take off her uniform shirt off. Love the way Kallista takes a moment to admire Judith's bra (and tits) and then just casually lets her fall back to the desk and gets to work stripping off her pants. Really sexy stripping scene.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Mon May 22, 2023 8:17 pm
by Stormtrooper1990
meditions142 wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 6:23 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu May 18, 2023 1:01 pm

There is something really sexy about the thought of a woman slumped over anything, that is really sexy. Whether it's the crate corporal Vallena slumped over after she was darted or when Kallista threw Judith over the desk, to strip her all the more quicker.

I realized I had not actually commented on this but was looking back at the story an wanted to mention it. It was indeed very sexy the way Kalissta laid Judith on the desk to make stripping her easier. Love the imagery of Kallista lifted Judith's upper body up to take off her uniform shirt off. Love the way Kallista takes a moment to admire Judith's bra (and tits) and then just casually lets her fall back to the desk and gets to work stripping off her pants. Really sexy stripping scene.
Thanks meditions, it was the first time I introduced a table in a stripping scene, there was of course the beds in "Love Conquers all" but I wanted introduce a new direction and there is nothing sexier about an unconscious woman being stripped by another woman while she is laying over a table.

It also showcases Kallista as a bright intelligent thief who improvised and thinks on her feet. And I love improvisation in my characters.

Re: Raven's Flight:- Chapter 1 Cóup dé Etát

Posted: Tue May 23, 2023 9:31 am
by Void99
The idea of an unconscious woman slumped over a desk, or picked up and bent over it..... that's my numero one fantasy.
Especially when the female villain has the opportunity to get behind her and give her ass some gropey attention. Nice and slowly. Hands inside her knickers and softly squeeze those cheeks.

Yep that's on my mind A LOT. Obsessively so. In fact I keep thinking about 2 female work colleagues at my current workplace in such a scenario. I shouldn't say that really. But it's a thought I can't get out my head.