The Merry Women:- The Wall Street Bank Job

[Stormtrooper1990]

I agree. The dumpster is a classic too.

I know I don't feature bondage in my stories and that won't change. I like the idea of using sedatives or high tech means of rendering the women unconscious for very long periods of them as it removes the need for bondage, and enforces the theme of detachment in my stories. I never been much of a fan of bondage, even though it features in three of my stories. If there is to be bondage, then I prefer it to be improvised, it is more realistic that way. The idea for skilled operators to lug around rope to tie someone up is unrealistic. And not an essential part of my US experience. But I hope the humour and diversity makes up for the lack of bondage.

Well, I thought I'd address the elephant in the room once, and be done with it.

Plus, there are already so many stories featuring bondage elsewhere on the board - in that context your stories bring more diversity.

I find it interesting to discuss and compare the different expectations we each have as readers. Personally, more than realism, I look for plausibility / internal consistency. The story can feature unrealistic elements (like bondage in the context of an infiltration or over-the-top comicbook-style characters), but as long as the universe is internally coherent, I accept it. I guess it's one of the reasons why I chose to have my stories take place in constructed fictional universes. I think it makes it easier to accept the unrealistic elements - like some sort of tacit agreement between the reader and the writer.

Thanks Rufus, it's nice to see a fellow dumpster fan

As they say variety is the spice of life. For my SI stories I have always aimed for consistency across the board. I started with lethal but shifted to non-lethal, but I was never afraid to throw in a little diversity. For instance in "To Free a Nightingale" Miranda(Nightingale) and Nadja(Vesper) escaped from Darkwatch custody by overpowering their guards, stealing their uniforms and leaving tied up naked in chairs, because they didn't have their gear with them. That to me is a scene, where you can apply bondage as it is improvised and necessary. I

The Blood series was my first entirely fictional universe, where I introduced the idea of mind control and it proved popular. I may decide to revisit Darala with entirely new characters

As a reader I tend to prefer strong characters, a strong setting and like you said consistency. I tend not to like implausible or silly scenarios, for me I relate more to gritty harsh realism and the complete detachment of my characters towards their victims. I also like my heroines to be morally grey, as whiter than white heroes are boring. Humour is also a key factor in my stories as is romance, as it adds spice and charisma to my MCs. I also like a mixture of lethal and non-lethal depending on the context of the story.


With my later projects I will seek to maintain this high standard of diversity that I have already achieved so far.

I appreciate your support

[meditions142]

The Blood series was my first entirely fictional universe, where I introduced the idea of mind control and it proved popular. I may decide to revisit Darala with entirely new characters

I tend not to like implausible or silly scenarios, for me I relate more to gritty harsh realism and the complete detachment of my characters towards their victims.

I do agree with you wanting to keep things plausible at least. Obviously it is all fiction but plausible is important even if crosses over into clearly not reality. You were able to use the mind control in the fictional universe of Blood because you could add Vampires.

Given that the mind control idea was so well received I was thinking you could add a little touch I have used in my stories. We know SI has powerful technology. Perhaps they could develop a drug to be used in their darts that works kind of like truth serum or a hypnotic. For example, Miranda and Nadja could be tasked with sneaking into facility. They will need things like the door code, the locations of patrols, etc.

They could spot a loan sentry and shoot her with one of these special darts. The woman will immediately fall into a still conscious but heavily drugged state. The powerful drug will mean the woman will be powerless to resist answering the questions from Miranda and Nadja. And the truth serum aspects of the drug will mean she will not be able to put together a lie.

I have a feeling given her condition she may not be able to strip herself so they will just tell her not to resist while they strip her. A scene with them stripping a conscious woman could be fun.

With the information in hand and the woman's uniform in their possession, they need to put her to sleep. They could do this with the regular sedative or, of course, they could use the good old shock glove on her.

The drug wouldn't be quite as powerful as Anna's mind control but instead the idea of technology being what produces the effect on the women it is used on.

[Stormtrooper1990]

The Blood series was my first entirely fictional universe, where I introduced the idea of mind control and it proved popular. I may decide to revisit Darala with entirely new characters

I tend not to like implausible or silly scenarios, for me I relate more to gritty harsh realism and the complete detachment of my characters towards their victims.

I do agree with you wanting to keep things plausible at least. Obviously it is all fiction but plausible is important even if crosses over into clearly not reality. You were able to use the mind control in the fictional universe of Blood because you could add Vampires.

Given that the mind control idea was so well received I was thinking you could add a little touch I have used in my stories. We know SI has powerful technology. Perhaps they could develop a drug to be used in their darts that works kind of like truth serum or a hypnotic. For example, Miranda and Nadja could be tasked with sneaking into facility. They will need things like the door code, the locations of patrols, etc.

They could spot a loan sentry and shoot her with one of these special darts. The woman will immediately fall into a still conscious but heavily drugged state. The powerful drug will mean the woman will be powerless to resist answering the questions from Miranda and Nadja. And the truth serum aspects of the drug will mean she will not be able to put together a lie.

I have a feeling given her condition she may not be able to strip herself so they will just tell her not to resist while they strip her. A scene with them stripping a conscious woman could be fun.

With the information in hand and the woman's uniform in their possession, they need to put her to sleep. They could do this with the regular sedative or, of course, they could use the good old shock glove on her.

The drug wouldn't be quite as powerful as Anna's mind control but instead the idea of technology being what produces the effect on the women it is used on.

That sounds like an interesting idea I made a reference in my story that I'am writing now, that the SI as some new tech that they wish to try out in the Ukraine. I have a story in mind in where this new drug idea would work really well. The stripping the woman while conscious sounds a fun idea, I can just picture Miranda and Nadja stripping a woman, checking her out while they strip her naked. Then they do rock paper scissors to who gets to take her identity, then casually use the shock glove on her.

I could call it the Veritas serum.

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[Stormtrooper1990]

That looks pretty cool,

I wonder how long it took the player to do that.

You could also do that on desperadoes 3.

Thanks panpan

[meditions142]

The stripping the woman while conscious sounds a fun idea, I can just picture Miranda and Nadja stripping a woman, checking her out while they strip her naked.

Given what we saw in the recent story with both Miranda and Nadja getting a quite turned on by the whole thing we could even image both of them getting a little frisky with the woman while she is still conscious. You could even image that despite her being in a drugged them doing some things to give the women a little pleasure. Of course not for too long. They need to give her the glove pinch and move on.

[Stormtrooper1990]

The stripping the woman while conscious sounds a fun idea, I can just picture Miranda and Nadja stripping a woman, checking her out while they strip her naked.

Given what we saw in the recent story with both Miranda and Nadja getting a quite turned on by the whole thing we could even image both of them getting a little frisky with the woman while she is still conscious. You could even image that despite her being in a drugged them doing some things to give the women a little pleasure. Of course not for too long. They need to give her the glove pinch and move on.

I was thinking of doing that, as they are very sexually dynamic and they do love to mix a little business with pleasure

Since in the next mission it will be just the two of them. They can have a little more freedom when Tanya and Chang are not present. Maybe a little foreplay, nothing too explicit and not for long. They have a mission to complete after all.

[meditions142]

The stripping the woman while conscious sounds a fun idea, I can just picture Miranda and Nadja stripping a woman, checking her out while they strip her naked.

Given what we saw in the recent story with both Miranda and Nadja getting a quite turned on by the whole thing we could even image both of them getting a little frisky with the woman while she is still conscious. You could even image that despite her being in a drugged them doing some things to give the women a little pleasure. Of course not for too long. They need to give her the glove pinch and move on.

I was thinking of doing that, as they are very sexually dynamic and they do love to mix a little business with pleasure

Since in the next mission it will be just the two of them. They can have a little more freedom when Tanya and Chang are not present. Maybe a little foreplay, nothing too explicit and not for long. They have a mission to complete after all.

And of course if they get the woman a bit turned on just imagine how that could increase the one side effect of the shock glove!

[Stormtrooper1990]

Given what we saw in the recent story with both Miranda and Nadja getting a quite turned on by the whole thing we could even image both of them getting a little frisky with the woman while she is still conscious. You could even image that despite her being in a drugged them doing some things to give the women a little pleasure. Of course not for too long. They need to give her the glove pinch and move on.

I was thinking of doing that, as they are very sexually dynamic and they do love to mix a little business with pleasure

Since in the next mission it will be just the two of them. They can have a little more freedom when Tanya and Chang are not present. Maybe a little foreplay, nothing too explicit and not for long. They have a mission to complete after all.

And of course if they get the woman a bit turned on just imagine how that could increase the one side effect of the shock glove!

I never thought about that, she would probably make a much louder cry so they would have to muffle her while applying the shock glove.

I was thinking that Miranda and Nadja ambush a couple of Russian naval cadets while in they are staying in an Hotel in Sevastopol. Maybe disguised as maids to start off with.

They render one unconscious with the shock glove, then dart gun the other with Veritas. They question her about how to disable a Russian Missile Cruiser, among other things. They then strip her, get a little frisky. Then shock glove her. Miranda puts on her uniform and takes her identity, while she watches Nadja strip the other one.

[meditions142]

I was thinking of doing that, as they are very sexually dynamic and they do love to mix a little business with pleasure

Since in the next mission it will be just the two of them. They can have a little more freedom when Tanya and Chang are not present. Maybe a little foreplay, nothing too explicit and not for long. They have a mission to complete after all.

And of course if they get the woman a bit turned on just imagine how that could increase the one side effect of the shock glove!
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Sounds great. Obviously, a couple maids would need to get put to sleep too.