Consortium's End:- A 94 story

[simon4242]

hit a nerve did i lol you are happy to receive only plaudits lol and i have given plaudits

[meditions142]

I wanted to comment on this story as well because, as I commented on Colorado Blue, you have one of those great set ups where a women remains unsuspecting and walks right into the intruder's trap.

The scene with the blonde maid is just so perfect. It is the perfect set up with the woman walking off to a scheduled area to make a call. She ends up right in front of 94 but remains oblivious to her presence. The girl has the misfortune of being close in size to 94.

I then love the imagery of a hand covering the maid's mouth and her being dragged off behind the bushes.

As noted before, as more of the fan of the non-lethal take out, personally would have preferred 94 just knocking the woman out. But, hey, 94 does it her way. It does add an sinister and interesting aspect to her character. She has not sympathy even for innocent characters.

[Stormtrooper1990]

It's largely down to her conditioning, 94 was created to be the ultimate assassin. During her development, 94 was coded to be ruthless and to show no pity or remorse.

Cross created her to be a weapon, 94 can seduce and even love but can feel no empathy.

But in Colorado blues, there are brief flashes, she cannot stand torture or wanton cruelty.

[meditions142]

Well you certainly have done a great job creating her character!

[Stormtrooper1990]

Thank you meditations

Out of all my characters, 94 is perhaps the most compelling to write. She is ruthless, methodical and a little sadistic but she can love and show flashes of emotion. And with the revelation that Miranda is her sister( at the genetic level) as brought a little change in her.

While I will admit that I do have a preference for lethal scenes( depending on the context), there is something special about writing the SI stories especially the takedowns, USB and Miranda and Nadja's(Vesper) relationship.