The Nightingale and the Wasp

meditions142
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Feb 20, 2023 3:53 pm
I think Gina and Abi, will wake up tied up in the forest with massive headaches and the sensation of being very cold. Plus Gina didn't make her date.
Poor Gina! Not only does she end up knockout out and naked but she missed her date!

I really like to picture both girls naked and tied up together hidden out of sight.

Very much looking forward to more stories to come. There have to be a lot of other women out there that have to be knocked out, have their uniforms stolen and then there identity stolen.
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Definitely, the threat of the Consortium and the SEB may be over but the Darkwatch remain.

One story I have in mind will be based on the Mossad operation to capture Eichmann, but given the SI treatment.

There will also be more civilian disguises, including paramedics, waitresses and stewardesses. Then in later stories, Darkwatch disguises.

The plan is to finish off Agent 94's season one arc, then start S2 of the SI.
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Very much looking forward to it.

Also while you will be having civilian disguises I hope there will be room for at least a few guards/sentries!
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Most definitely, the Darkwatch have their own soldiers, support staff and scientists.

Not to mention, assassins.

So plenty of sentries for our intrepid operatives, to knock out, strip and steal their identities
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down with darkwatch lol
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When I commented before I also forgot to mention how much I liked the dialogue.

I loved Vesper saying "I will take this one, she's practically my size." and then Nightingale saying "Looks like I'am going blonde."

And then Vesper saying "Mira, Lupa. Get these two tied up, and out of sight."

I love dialogue like that. It creates the idea that in the end to Vesper and Nightingale, Gina and Abi were just tools to accomplish their mission.
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Cheers, mate. I appreciate the compliment

I think that Miranda,( Nightingale) and Nadja(Vesper) also love their work, as much they love each other.

I really like to add small snippets of dark humour to really develop the characters and their relationships, to bring them to life.

They may specialise in non-lethal but do show a professional detachment to their victims that part of their job.
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but i do believe if they were stealing uniforms from civilians etc they wouldnt be as detached as they are non-combatants lol
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The fact is they are stealing the clothes from another woman for disguise purposes, they would have to view their victims with a certain degree of detachment. If they didn't then they wouldn't be able to their jobs.

It doesn't matter whether they are civilians or hostiles.

Like mediations said, at end of the day Gina and Abi are just tools to our heroes.
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be nice to our paramedics they do a wonderful job anyone else is fair game lol
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