Re: suggestions for my new story rookie infiltration
Posted: Thu May 05, 2022 12:12 pm
Of course, I'm just making my suggestion. how to design your work is your freedompc305435632 wrote: Thu May 05, 2022 11:50 amYou can put the plot of "finding the body" at the end of the story, and the protagonist is preparing to evacuate at this time.dummy76 wrote: Thu May 05, 2022 10:12 am that's actually a smart idea. but her colleagues patroling would certainly notice something wrong.
Designing the plot of "the body was found" means that we can describe the appearance of the body at this time.
for example, "piss-stained pants"
.I've always enjoy your story.