You referring to the antagonist of this chapter as "the rider" leads me to believe that you didn't have a chance to talk to her and find out her name?
Maybe next playthrough you will strike up a conversation with her)
This is something id like to do in this genre which is very uncommon: give the victims personalities and make them real characters, even for one scene. Its all too common to have the uniform stealing victims be just mooks and nobodies, without even a name. I feel like giving them characteristics makes the whole story more intimate.
The pictures are heavily filtered photos with details changed and drawn over by me. The overall shapes are not mine but many details and additions are done by me in a drawing tool.
Save system is impossible in this free version of inklewriter sadly.
One workaround is to give the reader the code of the story. Its possible to import the story code in your account and edit it as if you were the writer.
After that its possible to read and rewind to any previous decision, bnot just the first paragraph. Although ALL the options will be visible, even ones that you are not qualified for by conditions (they will be in red by still visible)
Thank you for typo catch, gonna fix it
.) I've corrected it, but just in case I'll say it again here: In her first description the rider is described with ash brown hair, and after she's dragged into the cell, she's described with black hair. (I said brown at first, which made the sentnece a little weird. 
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