Trackman, I think the "title reference" Rufusluciusivan was referring to was the fact that I had also used the "Sisters in Arms" title a few months ago.
In any case, this was another fun and entertaining chapter. A lot of the comments I would make have already been made by RLI, but I'll say that I really am enjoying the different gadgets - they add a sense of cartoon humor and spontaneity to the USB scenes. The highlights for this chapter were Mag's takedown of Elisabeth with the wrist-rope, and Marie's use of the drugged lip balm to take down Chailai. Both funny setups with amusing payoffs.
One gadget I'm not such a fan of is the cloaking/invisibility device. It just feels a little too advanced to be believable, and more importantly, the fact that the characters can turn invisible in some ways negates the entire purpose of uniform stealing. Perhaps I'm overthinking it, but this was just something I noticed. A small issue, in any event.
I'm impressed by how long and detailed the chapter is; I rarely have the effort to post such lengthy chapters in one go. Partly that is for aesthetic reasons; I like to keep my chapters confined to one post each. But I'm impressed how much you're able to write, and so fast - it really encourages me to pick up the pace with my own work.
In any case, another fun and well-written chapter, juggling a lot of different characters and scenarios. Nicely done.
