Tirepanted - As you know I accept any tips, hints or criticism as that helps me improve and make the next chapters more enjoyable, because at the end of the day while Yes I love writing stories, but if nobody enjoys them then it can just feel strange if you know what I mean.
Funny you should say that though as that is one thing I even feel I need to work on as I sit there sometimes and think "hhhmmm, that doesn't look right." But I apparently still keep it anyway haha.
Rufusluciusivan - Soph is also potentially lashing out, she's still young, this was her first real encounter with an adversary that made her feel, well let's be honest weak and helpless, she's probably very angry and in someway her mind is probably struggling greatly to come to make reality of it all, so it's forcing to think irrationally, their world can be a big and unforgiving place and unfortunately Soph has had to find this out at a very early stage in her life, plus it wouldn't surprise me if she blamed Tina for not killing Kuebiko during their first encounter because then the second encounter would of never happened.......But Tina didn't, the second encounter did happen and I have feeling Soph probably knows that Kuebiko (while now captured) is still alive after all that, so that's probably forced Soph's mind to jump to these rapid conclusions so quickly.
You'll see more of Soph VERY soon.
