Re: Chapter 8: Keep Your Friends Close But Clones Closer
Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 5:16 pm
Rufusluciousvan - I'm glad you liked it. 
The non clones or the suits will always lack subtlety because they don't know any better, they do view the clones as just a product so they genuinely have no idea how to conduct themselves around them and that's why they're horrible.
I'll do my best to get the dialogue more fleshed out in the next chapter, so I know that's one thing I can definitely fix.
Yeah I wanted to give Tina a bit of a break with CT-2224 haha but she still has her other fellow infiltrator who doesn't exactly like her either. Their all genuinely playing there part leading up to a big chapter I'll eventually do. I'm dropping subtle hints every now and then with both the villains and the supporting characters as to what roles they'll play when everything aligns and it all comes full circle.
P. S have no fear Rufusluciousvan, the next chapter will feature Tina stealing a lot of uniforms to use as disguises and I hope that everyone will be satisfied.
The non clones or the suits will always lack subtlety because they don't know any better, they do view the clones as just a product so they genuinely have no idea how to conduct themselves around them and that's why they're horrible.
I'll do my best to get the dialogue more fleshed out in the next chapter, so I know that's one thing I can definitely fix.
Yeah I wanted to give Tina a bit of a break with CT-2224 haha but she still has her other fellow infiltrator who doesn't exactly like her either. Their all genuinely playing there part leading up to a big chapter I'll eventually do. I'm dropping subtle hints every now and then with both the villains and the supporting characters as to what roles they'll play when everything aligns and it all comes full circle.
P. S have no fear Rufusluciousvan, the next chapter will feature Tina stealing a lot of uniforms to use as disguises and I hope that everyone will be satisfied.