Re: No Sport
Posted: Wed May 06, 2020 9:08 am
well, it's... unexpected. Me too, I was waiting for a longer chapter, but I can see why it stopped early
At some point, this short tale has become a sort of 'manifesto' about what is a proper Uniform Stealing scenario, elaborated through the speeches of Shayna and Klenia, and nurse Aeris; defining what is acceptable etc.
the starting point is the final realisation that a uniform stealing scenario is a violent one, what sometimes is unclear to many readers or/and members, even at our board.It requires an aggressive attitude, even in people ( characters) denying that. Think of Klenia...
mr rufusluciusivan , all this was definitely something to think about:)
of course your characters and protagonists haven't the "sporty and athletic" attitude of Tirepanted's, they insist about morality etc and they are all the times shocked by the fact of being trapped in a Uniform Stealing story...
At some point, this short tale has become a sort of 'manifesto' about what is a proper Uniform Stealing scenario, elaborated through the speeches of Shayna and Klenia, and nurse Aeris; defining what is acceptable etc.
the starting point is the final realisation that a uniform stealing scenario is a violent one, what sometimes is unclear to many readers or/and members, even at our board.It requires an aggressive attitude, even in people ( characters) denying that. Think of Klenia...
mr rufusluciusivan , all this was definitely something to think about:)
of course your characters and protagonists haven't the "sporty and athletic" attitude of Tirepanted's, they insist about morality etc and they are all the times shocked by the fact of being trapped in a Uniform Stealing story...