Re: Red Rock II Chapter 4:- Turning Point (A USB Story by Rufusluciusivan and Stormtrooper1990)
Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2025 1:49 pm
I'm glad you liked it.meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:33 pm Wow, what a fantastic chapter you two have put together here!
You were not kidding when you said Sylvié was going to get more into the action. And loved how she actually is getting turned on by watching Sand knock women out and also by stripping unconscious women.
The scene with Josephine, Alice and Jenny is so great. Love that the poor women's fate was sealed due to the other guards talking too much. Then such a fun scene. Love the idea of making Alice sneeze to give Sand the time to grab Josephine.
And such a great scene with Josephine. A quick grab and pull her over the boxes and then two punches to the temple to knock her out before she can even try and fight back. Then love the image of Sylvié and Sand kissing while brunette's unconscious body lays at their feet.
Then great scene with Alice. Taking advantage of her being a bit horny and then tricking her with the stolen uniform. And yet another wonderful scene of them kissing over the unconscious body.
Then we also get Jenny taken out with some flirtation as well.
The take out of the two more superior guards was great. Wonderful "Plan B" when the original plan did not work and great skillful double take out. And great scene of Nancy and Sand hiding the two women's unconscious bodies before changing into their clothes.
Interesting the Nancy seems to prefer hitting women in the head with her gun to knock them out. A bit rough but does get the job done.
The scene with the maid was probably my favorite. Love the idea the woman taking a break and even dozing off having not idea she is being stalked and will forced into a more sound sleep. Love the description "The woman was dozing, her back turned on the predator who was stalking her."
Then great attack. Sand wraps and arm around her mid-section and covers her mouth to muffle her cry and then yanks here into the bushes. Then wrapping her legs around the woman body to immobilize her and a sleeperhold to cut the blood flow to the woman's brain and put her to sleep. Again great description "One tight sleeper-hold properly put the dozing woman to sleep."
Then a very sexy description “Uuuhhh…” the maid moaned softly, before her body slumped into Sand’s grip like a ragdoll."
I also liked how much Sylvié got aroused by Sand's attack. Great comment: "Sylvié found the sight of her lover in complete control, with the cute maid futilely squirming and wriggling her body, quite arousing."
Then a great bit of dialogue:
“I hope you weren’t too hard on the poor thing.” Smiling, Sand finished pulling off the booties before grabbing the apron’s knot and untying it. “Don’t worry. It’s impressive-looking, but almost painless.”“Good. Let her enjoy her beauty rest – not that she needs it.”
And I really liked the scene with Sylvié dragging the unconscious maid further out of sight and the wonderful discussion:
"Sylvié dragged the unconscious underwear-clad maid further in-between the flower bushes to conceal her.
“It’s a bit of a shame you didn’t want her underwear… It’d look stunning on you…”
“I prefer to buy mine.” Sylvié adjusted her apron and bonnet. “Besides, I’m convinced she planned for someone to see those undergarments. Call it a hunch, but a girl rarely looks after her haircut and undergarments like she did for no reason.”
She and Sand left the maid behind, and exited the bushes."
I do wonder what the pretty young woman's plans were?
I definitely think that while all scenes were great the maid scene was my favorite.

As I said, if you liked Jenny, Alice, and Josephine, then you're in for a treat. Expect more of them!
Let's all share one minute of silence for that poor overseer left trussed up in a haystack, who didn't get any respect in the story, and is still not getting any respect outside of it.Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 11, 2025 12:57 pm
I completely agree with you Rufus, between the three stoogettes, the ponchos' and the maid takeout, I couldn't really pick a clear favourite scene of mine so let's just say all of themI remember coming up with the three stoogettes takedown as a clear reference to Desperados III gameplay; complete with sight lines and the careful timing. Which is further reflected in the poncho takeout scene.
