Chronicles of Earth-USB: Charlotte

[rufusluciusivan]

Thanks. I liked the idea of coming up with something different from usual. It's indeed just some of my characters chilling - uniform thieves watching "mainstream" uniform stealing scenes, and poking fun at them. Gives a glimpse of them "off the clock", so to speak.

Charlotte is a true USB. She only watches the shows for the uniform steals.

I also really liked that even though you touched on the great idea of the frustration of off screen scenes you still showed the show developing to show more and more as things developed.

What is also fun is you still give us great uniform stealing scenes. For example, the scene with with two officers in the storage room. Perfect scene with two low ranking ordinary women going about their duties unaware they are being stalked. Then the, as you call it, "cartoonish off-screen punch noises and grunts". Great scene.

Then also loved the scene with the Crimson Guard Sentries. Love the idea of concealing the drone that then pops out and fires stun blasts. Great description: "The Imperial Guards groan, and have a few spasms. Their senses are immediately overflown. Then they fall onto the floor with heavy thuds. Unconscious."

And then we get other great scenes with the scenes getting more and more shown each time.

I was fun to poke fun at the flaws of mainstream scene - and also it was a way to blow off some steam.

Glad you enjoyed the scene with the officers in the storage room. I really liked the imagery of this scene, especially since the blond one uses the design of the cute blonde mugged in the Doctor Aphras comicbook... and of whom no aftermath is ever shown. Though I have to confess I merely re-used the scene featured in the Chapter 19 of the main saga - this spin-off is basically a bonus expansion of this one scene. You could say I loved this scene so much I wanted to feature it a second time.

I was indeed careful to feature a few scenes with stun blasts - a staple of Star Wars non-lethal takedowns.