Re: Cold War Stories:- Chasing a Phantom Part 3:-Breaking the Chains
Posted: Sun Feb 02, 2025 10:10 am
meditions142 wrote: Sun Feb 02, 2025 9:10 amIndeed, both scenes were amazingly sexy. First off, love that Emese was in a slip. You could say that was a bit conservative and not revealing. However, with the image of her nipples showing through and the description of the scene ("'Time to put them to sleep, doc."' The doctor smiled pulling out two syringes as two Invisibles each grabbed the women") it is damn sexy. Then followed by: "The young scantily clad soldier panicked trying to rear back eyes wide in terror, but the men held her in place."Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Sat Feb 01, 2025 12:25 pm
I mean both Emese and the unnamed cutie where my favourite of victim; brunette, cute and both ordinary girls doing their jobs. You have Emese who's so panicky that she has to be knocked out first before being sedated and so out of her depth. And the mental image of her being carried away wearing only a slip is so sexy!
And with the unnamed guard just sitting their half undressed, unaware that she's just seconds away from being knocked out and stripped in a location she should feel safe, is also a powerful erotic image. There is something titillating about picturing an half naked woman getting dressed and still showing off her sexy little body, before she is sent to sleepyland. And the fact she ends up nude and tied up makes everything all the more sweeter. You can picture the look of on the woman's face who discovers her as the guard tumbles naked out the locker.
Then the knockout too: "Emese's words slurred into a low rattle as she was lowered to the ground unconscious in the arms of her attacker. Flicking the sleeping girl's carotid, Mónika knelt next to her plunging the sedative into her slender neck pressing gently on the plunger. The pretty soldier shuddered for a moment as the drugs found their way into her brain before letting out a low breath. "Sweet dreams, pretty." Mónika said gently caressing her cheek pocketing the empty syringe and rising to her feet." Just a sexy scene And to top it off, we get a scene of her being dragged off.
Then the guard scene. The way you describe her she is obviously very pretty with a great body. And the image of her in nothing but her bra and panties and the shirt she is still buttoning up is very, very sexy! The idea of the being stalked by Reka while she remains unaware is amazing.
This has been an amazing series. A lot of pretty Hungarian women have been sent to Sleepyland and I am good with that!
Thanks, and I completely agree. This is why I love writing stories set in say the 50s or 40s, slips are such an underrated but sexy undergarment for pretty girls like Emese being the grandfather of the modern camisole, which is another of our favourites. She probably was going for that conservative look but couldn't hide that sexy peaking of her nipples through the thin fabric. And it's sexy indeed to picture the cutie panicking being held in place by two men while Mónika prepares her needle.
Indeed, I wanted to make the scene has realistic but sexy has possible. With Emese panicking about her fate giving Mónika and by extension Célia no choice but to have her put to sleep to stop her from hurting herself. I know we often talk about our love of nerve pinches but there is something sexy about using the sleeper hold to knock out a USB victim, particularly that you can picture the woman slowly succumbing to the press and that adds so much more to any non lethal USB scene. And you know me I love sexy draggings off, particularly in this case under the shoulder with the feet touching the ground. So Hot!
Yeah, I had a lot of fun writing Réka's escape. And I had to do it justice by making the last victim ( who still remains unnamed) arguably the prettiest of the lot. I absolutely agree that there is something undeniably sexy about a pretty girl getting dressed in her uniform wearing nothing but her shirt and undies, showcasing her great tight little body. Going back to our early discussions, the build up is just as important as the takeout and what we call the fun part. And the scene of Réka stalking the pretty guard who's to busy getting dressed, in what should be a safe area for her, to notice she's in immediate danger is in my opinion one of the best scenes I've written and I'am so proud that it turned out so well. Next to the toilet ambush, the locker room ambush is my second favourite trope in USB.
Thank you very much, my friend. I'am glad you enjoyed the series and I appreciate your support. And fear not! This won't be the last we see of Célia and the girls of Joszó Platoon, there will be plenty of pretty Hungarian girls (and some Brits, Austrians and Americans) that will be sent to sleepyland and losing their clothes to come!