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Stormtrooper1990
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Bar winner

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Another of Soundmans masterworks given the stormtrooper treatment.

An assassin steals a barmaid's outfit.

https://www.deviantart.com/ryuki131/art ... -784284188

It's a two part story, the action starts at the bottom, and part 2 is at the top.
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Agent Vesper, of the Shadow Initiative, was assigned to assassinate US Senator Frank Buchanan. The corrupt US senator originally had an harmonious relationship with the Initiative, he provided intelligence on the inner workings of US politics, in return the Initiative assisted him with furthering his ambitions for the White House through bribery, internet smear campaigns and making his political enemies disappear through scandal. By now the relationship turned sour, and Buchanan grew greedy, threatening to expose the Initiatives worldwide operations, and the life's of its operatives. Operatives like Vesper. Due to her skillset; disguise, infiltration and knowledge of toxins, thanks to her time with the Mossad , Vesper was the first choice. But she would have done the op even if she wasn't asked, for her this was personal. Vesper had concocted two poisons for the mission. The first was a fast acting neurotoxin, made with a blend of puffer fish venom blended with tree front venom, for extra lethality. It could kill in 5 seconds, and was perfect for infiltration, where time was of the essence and you needed the uniform of the subject undamaged by struggle. The second was a slower acting toxin derived from Deadly Nightshade, to make it look like the Senator had died from natural causes. The last thing the Initiative needed was a suspicious death to draw attention. The best thing about these poisons is that Vesper had engineered them to be undetectable in post mortem tox-screens.


Using intel provided by Buchanan's now reassigned handler, Vesper located the senators favourite bar, an up market dive with the name the 'Pursuit of Happyness'. A cursory look inside told Vesper that the place was deserted, manned only by a single lonely barmaid. The operative couldn't believe her luck, she quietly entered, locking the door behind her and flipping the sign over the door to closed while the girl was distracted with her phone. She sat down at the nearest table, readying the syringe with the fast acting neurotoxin. She glanced over to the barmaid, she was pretty with long raven black hair over her shoulders, with bright blue eyes framed with dark eyeliner and full lips covered with ruby red lipstick. She was young, Vesper put her age at college age, 20-21, probably working part time to pay her way through university. But is was her uniform that interested Vesper, with the frilly white top exposing her neckline, lace fishnet tights and dark green fur lined long skirt and laced booties. All topped off with a gothic style choker about her neck, she looked more like a 19th century courtesan out of a Mills and Boone novel. Well no time like the present, she needed that outfit garish or no.


She got up cleared her throat, and spoke without a trace of her Israeli accent. " Excuse me miss, I think lost my wedding ring in here earlier can you help me find it." She lied. The barmaid put her phone on the counter "Of course, sweetie." She come over in a misguided decision to help. "Thanks ever so much. My husband will kill me if I lost it" Vesper floated with her fake US accent. Waiting till the barmaid had her back to her, and was sufficiently distracted by the false leads, Vesper pounced on the clueless barmaid like a tigeress ambushing her prey. With one motion, Vesper covered the girl's mouth with her right hand and plunged the syringe loaded with neurotoxin into the barmaids carotid artery with her left, taking care not to damage the choker or the girl's uniform. The barmaid died with a soft sigh, as the poison entered her brain and within 5 seconds she was dead.


Vesper considered this a clean death. She felt nothing for the barmaid, she was a means to an end. She dragged her over to the bar and slumped her over the counter face down and began to strip the dead woman. It took Vesper, 5 minutes to strip the barmaids lifeless corpse, which revealed that she was wearing violet coloured matching lace underwear. She then stripped her own clothes and changed into the former barmaids, she was relieved that on the whole the ensemble fit her well and was light and comfortable. As an afterthought she used the girl's makeup in her bag, and applied a little blush, eyeliner and lipstick. After looking herself in the bars mirror, she was satisfied she now looked the part. She carried the girl's underwear clad body to the backroom, concealing it inside an empty liquor crate. She looked at the clock, 8:55pm it read. The senator liked to come to the bar, for his 09:00 whisky. She unlocked the door, flipped the sign to open and went behind the bar. She prepared the second vial, ready to serve the pompous prick a drink with a real kick.


At 09:00, a black sedan pulled up outside the bar, two secret service agents got out, one covered the street, while the driver proceeded to the rear of the car and opened the rear driver's side door. Senator Frank Buchanan stepped out off the car, a small, rotund and bald Southerner. Vesper smiled her best fake smile, as the senator entered the bar, his secret service detail stayed outside guarding the door. Confident that Vesper was no threat to their charge. Amateurs. "Well a good evening to you little lady. Are you new here? Where's the sweet Melissa?" Vesper knew he was referring to the former barmaid, dead in a box in her underwear in the backroom. " She called in sick today, l'am covering for her, my name's Judy." Vesper lied with the sweetest voice, using the exposed neck line of the stolen blouse to great effect. " Well no matter, you look just as fine as she. Ms Judy." He replied leering at her cleavage, making no effort to disguise his lechery. He parked his fat behind on the small bar stool. "So let me guess, you a Jack Daniels man right?" Vesper playing the part of barmaid well, the senator threw out his arms " A good guess little lady. A Jack on the rocks if you be so kind. How did you know?" Vesper shrugged as she poured the laced whisky like a pro. " Melissa told me, she also told me that you were a fine Southern gentleman." Vesper was amazed at her creativity, she laughed a sugary laugh thatnmade her sick. " Well that sounds like her. Put it there, sweetness."She served the deadly drink and the senator downed it in one.


They continued in this vein for a couple of hours with Buchanan downing 3 more Jacks, till closing. The senator got up from the school, and wobbled slightly. " Well it as been a pleasure, sweet Judy. Please give my regards to the lovely Melissa, when you see her." Vesper continued to play the dutiful barmaid, even helping the Secret Service Agents to manhandle the drunk oaf into his car. She bid them good night. " You can tell her yourself, asshole." She said as the car sped away into the night. She entered the bar, and closed the place up, then she walked into the backroom, searched through her belongings and pulled out her phone. She dialled " This is Operative Vesper, 389574. Mission complete, the Senator will be dead by morning." She walked over to the crate containing the half naked corpse of Melissa. She looked down at her handiwork "I need a clean up crew at my location, civilian. Break the suicide kit for this one. Roger, will expect the crew in 10 minutes. Thank you. Vesper out."
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aha I knew you had this " Vesper " in mind before joining USB :)
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Yeah, she was born from this picture. It's actually one if my favourites of soundmans. You see that the dead barmaids head is hidden, you have no idea what she looked like. So I thought that sexy infiltrator, who just took her out and stripped her, deserves a name and a story. So did the barmaid, if a little briefly.
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Re: Bar winner

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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Fri Feb 03, 2023 11:45 am Yeah, she was born from this picture. It's actually one if my favourites of soundmans. You see that the dead barmaids head is hidden, you have no idea what she looked like. So I thought that sexy infiltrator, who just took her out and stripped her, deserves a name and a story. So did the barmaid, if a little briefly.
Great story and characters. I hope Vesper continues like that..
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Re: Bar winner

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paveldr wrote: Tue May 23, 2023 8:35 am
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Fri Feb 03, 2023 11:45 am Yeah, she was born from this picture. It's actually one if my favourites of soundmans. You see that the dead barmaids head is hidden, you have no idea what she looked like. So I thought that sexy infiltrator, who just took her out and stripped her, deserves a name and a story. So did the barmaid, if a little briefly.
Great story and characters. I hope Vesper continues like that..

Hi Paveldr, thanks for reading my story.


Vesper (Nadja Gadot) is one of my favourite characters, who has a very interesting if harrowing backstory. You can find out a little more about her in her SI Personel File. She also features in the two part tale "Party Crasher"

She is also a central character alongside her wife Miranda and the other characters from these stories Mira and Lupa, in my SI serials which is in its 3rd season.
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Re: Bar winner

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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Tue May 23, 2023 8:57 am Vesper (Nadja Gadot) is one of my favourite characters, who has a very interesting if harrowing backstory. You can find out a little more about her in her SI Personel File. She also features in the two part tale "Party Crasher"

She is also a central character alongside her wife Miranda and the other characters from these stories Mira and Lupa, in my SI serials which is in its 3rd season.
I'm not very expected of the board software. If I browse this subforum I cannot see the post ordered by original post time, but they are ordered with the last reply, so everything is shuffled :(

Btw, has ever happened that one of the operative had to eliminate more uniform holder before finding the right size? that would be so wicked.
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paveldr wrote: Tue May 23, 2023 1:27 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Tue May 23, 2023 8:57 am Vesper (Nadja Gadot) is one of my favourite characters, who has a very interesting if harrowing backstory. You can find out a little more about her in her SI Personel File. She also features in the two part tale "Party Crasher"

She is also a central character alongside her wife Miranda and the other characters from these stories Mira and Lupa, in my SI serials which is in its 3rd season.
I'm not very expected of the board software. If I browse this subforum I cannot see the post ordered by original post time, but they are ordered with the last reply, so everything is shuffled :(

Btw, has ever happened that one of the operative had to eliminate more uniform holder before finding the right size? that would be so wicked.
The forum is quite old in that regard and as far as I know there is no way to make improvements. Discord is better in that way. It is also easier to post pics on discord than on the forum


I generally go for one uniform fits the infiltrator or sometimes multiple disguises or a group. As it takes me 6 hours or more to write one story, I cannot really stretch it out.
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