I never was very happy with the old story and wanted to change it for a long time.
I wanted to add a little more to the tale and a explanation for the mission/infiltration.
Plus I wanted to mention a reason for that choice of victim as well. Not just some random innocent part guest.
I tweaked the drawing a bit too.
Anyhow enjoy the story folks.
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JADE '90: PARTY CRASHER
"A MASSACRE AFTERMATH STORY"
Early June, 1990...
The mansion of super villain Animus, located in Baron Port Florida.
Animus is Dak, the evil twin brother of Dead End.
The mansion is the scene of get together of many super villains, terrorist and key figures in the criminal underworld.
Just a few days ago Animus' female mercenaries captured members of The Loners, Harmony Starr, Taz & Captain Iron.
Jade is the only one who can rescue them. The other team members are away on another mission.
The young mutant teen waits until just after sunset to make her move.
The charge on the personal cloaking device doesn't last very long.
It will keep her invisible long enough to get past the exterior sentries and penetrate the mansion's security.
After that the cloak's battery will burn out and Jade will become visible.
So far, so good. She's gotten inside the house. The security guards outside didn't see a thing.
She's on the second floor and can hear the music from the party down stairs.
Her first order of business: Blend in. She needs a disguise and fast!
Should she go undercover as a member of the staff? A maid perhaps?
There are plenty of female servers working for the catering company.
That's a great way to get close to the guests.
No, that's no good.
She needs to be able to talk to the guests without suspicion.
Posing as a guest is her best bet.
Jade lurks around the upstairs for a few minutes.
Quickly, ducking from one bedroom to another.
Then BINGO! She happens upon a party goer named Robin.
Robin is a beautiful 34 year old redhead.
Jade recognized Robin from The Loners' computer criminal files.
Robin is actually a super villainess and wife of a know domestic terrorist.
The criminal files say Robin's Codename is The Harridan
She's responsible for the bombing of countless government buildings. .
This woman is without remorse and a stone cold killer.
Jade thinks to herself "I'm really gonna enjoy this."
Robin has had one too many Screwdrivers tonight and was very drunk.
She had to get sick and could barely stand up straight.
The redhead was kicking herself in the ass because she could never hold her liquor.
"How big is this fucking house?" Robin says to herself.
With her head spinning faster and stomach churning, she shouts out loud:
"Where is the mother fucking bathroom?!"
From behind, Jade's voice says: "Looks like you need some assistance."
Ronin confused: "Wha? Who is that?"
Jade's voice again: "Your Fairy Godmother, sweetheart!"
Suddenly, Jade's hand reaches out from the dark room grabbing Robin by her skirt.
She lifts the skirt up over Robin's waist, exposing her panties.
"Hey! Don't do that!" A drunk Robin wines.
"Cute skirt. Can I borrow it?!" Jade jokingly asks.
Jade then yanks Robin by her skirt into the room.
Robin is thrown on the floor and Jade jumps on top of her.
Being so incredibly drunk, Robin is easily subdued.
Robin yells: "Holy shit! I'm being kidnapped! Help me! Damn it, help!"
Fortunately for Jade, the music is so loud from the party downstairs, guests will never hear Robin's drunken cries.
Jade removes a miniature Stun Device from a pouch on her belt.
"Calm down, you drunk slut!" Jade shouts. "You're only going to sleep!"
A bright pink energy beam strikes Robin.
She lets out a very loud cry and is suddenly unconscious.
"Goodnight, bitch!" Jade exclaims.
"Now comes the fun part, dear."
Only minutes later...
Robin is almost completely stripped, with the exception of her panties and pantyhose.
Jade yanks down the sleeping girl's pantyhose...
"You look like the kind of girl who sleeps in the nude all the time." Giggles the mutant.
She has a smirk on her face and says: "So I guess this won't bother you one bit."
Once the pantyhose are off...
"Hum. Nice panties. Real pretty. They'll look way better on me."
She quickly pulls off the woman's underwear and lets out a loud "catty" snicker.
Not too much later...
Jade had dressed in the female terrorist's clothing...
"I've got to admit, I'm really pulling off this look!"
The teen mutant looks down at Robin, who is lying on the carpet, out cold and totally naked.
"Not so tough now, huh, BITCH?!"
Jade yells at the woman. The humiliation is the perfect comeuppance for a person of such cruelty.
"You don't look like a big, bad terrorist to me! More like a porn star, with those giant fake boobs!"
She realizes somebody could discover the unconscious woman at some point.
That would blow her cover and then she'd be toast.
Throwing Robin's limp sleeping body over her shoulder, our heroine begins her search...
"Here we go! A nice cozy closet for your slutty ass to relax in."
Throwing Robin's nude, limp body into a closet and she lands with a loud "THUD!".
"Man, it seems a little cramped. Actually looks damn uncomfortable. Well, tough shit!"
The young mutant slowly closes the door and locks it.
Robin's nude, sleeping body is enveloped in the black of the closet's interior.
Glancing at the diamond encrusted watch on her wrist.
"Usually the Stunner's effective for at least three hours tops. So I'm good until about eleven o'clock."
Jade produces her Holo-Imager and pushes buttons on its glowing neon keypad.
The advanced alien device emits a wave, conducting a detailed scan of Robin's sleeping form.
With a few more keystrokes, the Holo-Imager replicates Robin's facial features and hairstyle.
It then generates a photonic recreation of the villainess to conceal Jade's true identity.
Now with her "new" look, Jade is confident this plan will work.
"Robin" is ready to rejoin the party and makes her way downstairs.
Jade prays that none of the guests notices her voice is different from Robin's.
As the night passes and the party goes on...
Jade, sipping on a drink is thinking: "I've got to break away from these assholes. One of the secret passages that lead down to the underground complex has to be around here."
"Robin" casually dances her way past the other guest and right out of the room.
"Easy as pie." She thinks. "Those fuckers are drunk off their asses. They didn't even notice me slipping right by them."
She removes a mini-scanner from her purple sequined purse.
While tapping a series of buttons she says: "This gizmo will sniff out an entrance."
As Jade patiently watches the small glowing screen, the hi-tech device is analyzing every square inch of the room.
"Come on, do your stuff. It's got to be here."
Suddenly, the scanner lets out a loud "beep", signaling it has located a hidden doorway.
Excited, Jade exclaims: "Jackpot!"
Jade fiddles around with various objects in the room trying to open the doorway.
By pure dumb luck, she hits a framed painting on the wall with her elbow.
The portrait tilts sideways and a secret panel slides open revealing a hidden elevator.
"Awesome!" Jade exclaims. "Now we're getting somewhere."
Cautiously she steps into the elevator, then pushes a blue illuminated "down" arrow button on the metal mounted wall panel.
The door slides close and the elevator proceeds downward.
What will Jade find? Will she be able to rescue her friends?
Find out in the next exciting episode.
To be continued...
Rewritten & edited: 12/12/22
By Chris Campagna