UNFINISHED SCRIPTS "CAMPY COMICS"

[darth chlorophorm 2]

I decided to start this little Sub-Section, because these aren't really full stories.
They were actually scripts or outlines meant to be comics that I never got around to drawing for whatever reason.
Let me know if you like them & are interested in reading more. I've got a TON of these things laying around. Some dating back 30 years.
First off: A lost script from the "Cosmic Catfight 1991" Saga.
This wasn't originally written back in '91, when Assault & Grudge were just Hayley & Mazey. I did this many years later "Retconning" Atomic Boy & The Vixen Corps. into the tale.

ASSAULT & ATOMIC BOY '91: (A COSMIC CATFIGHT TALE)
Page #1
Panel #1
Outside shot of Vixen Corps. HQ building
Manhattan...Headquarters of Vixen Corps.
Page #2
Panel #1
The two teens over hear two female officers talking. (Maggie & Naomi)
One says to the other how she missed lunch:
Then, Assault & Atomic Boy leap out and attack the female security officers:
Atomic Boy flying over Hayley:
Atomic Boy:
"Coming through, ladies!"
Maggie:
"Naomi! Get help!"
Assault:
"Too late for that, sweetie!"
Assault:
"So, you missed lunch, eh? How about a Knuckle Sandwich?!"
Hayley knocks out Maggie with a single sock to the jaw:
Page #3
Panel #1
Atomic Boy flying in the air:
Female Trooper:
"HOLY SHIT! MAGGIE!"
He shoots a woman warrior with an energy beam, knocking her out:
Atomic Boy:
"She's out, bitch! And you're next!"
Page #4
Panel #1
As Hayley pulls off a unconscious woman's shirt:
Assault:
"Yeah...you'll do, honey..."
Atomic Boy:
"Eh, what are you doing?"
Assault:
"Stripping her. What does it look like?"
Atomic Boy:
"Obviously. But why are you undressing her?"
Assault:
"Don't get any funny ideas, munchkin!" "Her outfit will come in handy." "Pervert!"
Page #5
Panel #1
Hayley’s now disguised in the stolen uniform:
Atomic Boy:
“You know what? This seemed like a dumbass plan, but it just might work.”
“I think you can pull this whole thing off.”
Hayley:
“So glad you approve.”
Panel #2
Both female warriors are on the floor unconscious:
One woman is stripped to her underwear:
Atomic Boy:
“Hopefully these assholes stay out for a long while.”
Hayley:
“Yeah...hopefully.” “Sweet dreams, bitches!”
As the two make their exit...
Atomic boy has a sudden urge to look back at two sleeping women.
He can't help himself as his eyes quickly glance over Maggie's bra and panty clad body.
After all, he's just a teenage boy and they are two incredibly beautiful women. It's only natural...

[meditions142]

That is a really fun script Darth. Thanks for posting.

I particular love to picture Naomi being so shocked by the quick attack that all she can do is call out to already knocked out Maggie. She never even defends herself before she is hit with an energy beam knocking her out. And I love Atomic Boys' comment "She's out, bitch! And you're next!" as he shoots her with the energy beam.

And the touch of Atomic Boy taking one last look at the two sleeping beauties is really fun.

Thanks again for posting.

[darth chlorophorm 2]

That is a really fun script Darth. Thanks for posting.

I particular love to picture Naomi being so shocked by the quick attack that all she can do is call out to already knocked out Maggie. She never even defends herself before she is hit with an energy beam knocking her out. And I love Atomic Boys' comment "She's out, bitch! And you're next!" as he shoots her with the energy beam.

And the touch of Atomic Boy taking one last look at the two sleeping beauties is really fun.

Thanks again for posting.

Thanks for your comments, MR. M. I'm happy you like the script.
I actually drew a couple of pages to this story many years back.
My intention is to complete the penciled drawings digitally with MS Paint.
Here's a "Practice" page I did. It just so happens to be the page where Hayley & Atom Boy attack poor security officer, Maggie.
Enjoy.
https://www.deviantart.com/darthchlorop ... -893234525

[meditions142]

Thanks for posting the picture Darth!

Hayley certainly gave lovely Maggie a nasty punch. Hopefully she didn't hurt her too badly!

[darth chlorophorm 2]

Thanks for posting the picture Darth!

Hayley certainly gave lovely Maggie a nasty punch. Hopefully she didn't hurt her too badly!

No worries, my friend. Maggie will be just find. Maggie's only concern is will Hayley steal her underwear along with the uniform? Surely A pickle?

[Trackman281]

First of all, to answer your question. Yes! I really do want to see more of these script style stories of your Darth. Their really enjoyable, plus with me being such a big fan of your work, I'd definitely never say no to having more pictures or more stories from your awesome self.

The script style itself was really good too, I did like the cheeky comment Assault said as she was undressing the woman about "not getting any funny ideas".

It was a really good story and then to really put the cherry on top, you then provided us with some amazing pictures to go with it. So that's a win / win in my book.

As I said, I'm definitely up for seeing more of these stories of yours in the future, because if there all as good as thing one, then I know I'll love them all.