" Miss Smith chews it over" ( illustrated- completed)

" Miss Smith chews it over" ( illustrated- completed)

Postby esercito sconfitto » Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:20 am

( Author's note )

WELCOME TO ‘MISS SMITH CHEWS IT OVER – PART 2’. We begin with two title pages. These are in the traditional ‘Detective Magazine’ style format: the major difference being the fact that the title pages here bear a closer resemblance to the contents of the magazine itself (perhaps I had better call it a comic). I know that most of us would have bought a detective magazine just because the front cover contained an illustration of a pretty girl bound and gagged in her underwear; the possibility of finding a story within the magazine’s pages which the image had clearly been meant to illustrate, was remote in the extreme. But let’s face it: we all knew we were being conned. But, what the heck, a coloured picture of a pretty girl tied up in her undies was well worth 2/6d – or was it 6d? Can’t remember. Too long ago now. In ‘Miss Smith’, however, what you see is what you get. The one thing you won’t find in part 2 is Miss Smith herself. She and Miss Starling are still tied up in the basement getting to know each other really well. You will, however, see a brief (geddit?) appearance of a certain item of underwear once worn by Miss Smith. I know some of you were wondering what happened to her white cotton panties: this will be your opportunity to find out.
One change you will notice in Part 2 is the addition of a narrative: I am still experimenting with a comic format and I thought I would include the story in the gallery as I went along, so you will have a better idea of what is happening. The complete story of ‘Miss Smith Chews It Over’ is to be found in my gallery.


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Re: " Miss Smith chews it over" ( illustrated- to be continu

Postby darth chlorophorm » Mon Oct 10, 2016 11:18 am

this was a really fun read. cant wait for the rest.
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Re: " Miss Smith chews it over" ( illustrated- completed)

Postby esercito sconfitto » Sat Apr 14, 2018 8:20 pm

variant scene


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( Author's note)
In SCO18 of 'Miss Smith Chews it Over Part2' we reached the final scene of the bank heist. (see below) Ruby was keen to leave the scene ASP, but Chloe had other ideas...Chloe and Ruby had been responsible for 'casing the joint' before their heist and had noticed that Miss Smarty Pants Manageress had a rather nasty habit of foul mouthing the security guard at every opportunity. Now, Chloe hated people who abused their position of power but Chloe also enjoyed taking offenders down a peg or two if ever an opportunity presented itself... So I commissioned this scene which depicts an alternative outcome. It is almost identical to SCO18, but shows the gun girl, Chloe, leaning over to whisper in the manageress' ear. (take note of that rather erotic scissor hold which Chloe is using) Chloe is suggesting to Miss Smarty Pants Manageress that it would be a good idea if she were to tell the security guard that she is deeply sorry that she keeps on foul mouthing him in front of all the other staff and could she make it up to him in some way...Chloe then goes on to explain what she means by 'some way'. Miss Goldilocks, sitting on MSPM's right, is embarrassed by the conversation, but is deeply grateful that she has, herself, always treated the guard with respect. Miss Neat and Tidy is thrilled at the prospect of her boss experiencing even more indignities, following her sound spanking earlier on in the vault (see SCO16}. And Miss Smarty Pants Manageress?
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Re: " Miss Smith chews it over" ( illustrated- completed)

Postby FeMilImpos » Mon Apr 16, 2018 4:07 am

Love It!!!!!!
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