Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Be advised. This is part ONE of the story, please start HERE. :D

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CHAPTER 36: CROUCHING TIGERS, HIDDEN CLONES


Like all infiltrators, Soph has been fully trained in a wide variety of fighting styles, including Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu, Muay Thai, Filipino martial arts and Krav Maga, just to name a few. Now Soph is greatly outnumbered, all of her opponents have weapons and her chances of winning seem bleak……Well, this is what anyone would think, but Soph knows that these golden tigers enforcers can give themselves fancy and intimidating titles, they can wear expensive and flashy suits, they can use any weapon they want to try and be tough. But Soph see’s through this deception, because all she see’s are a bunch of mindless thugs, that are probably poorly trained, they’re used to people running from them and not fighting them…….In other words, they were just bullies and if there’s one thing Soph absolutely can not stand in life…….Is a bully. As the golden tigers get ready to lunge, Soph smiles before she notices a sound system to her right. She smiles, casually turns around and reaches inside her bag, where upon she pulls out a USB stick, she calmly walks over to the sound system and plugs it in, where metal music starts to play.

“Move fast baby, don’t be slow.
Step aside, reload, time to go.
I can’t seem to control.
All this, RAGE that’s inside me.”


Soph starts nodding her. She’s ready. The golden tiger enforcers rush her, all at once, hoping to use the numbers to quickly overpower her, but Soph knew they were going to do this. Hell, she was hoping they were going to do this……….Two enforcers swing their machetes down, but Soph side steps and kicks one in the wrist, this enforcers staggers and hits her colleague, causing them both to wobble, a third enforcer tries to punch Soph but Soph grabs her by the hand and swings her around whilst still holding onto her hand, so she smacks face first into a wall, one of the machete enforcers, rushes Soph trying to stab her, but whilst still holding onto the third enforcers arm, Soph ducks causing the other enforcers machete, to pierce the wall, getting jammed in the process. Soph kicks the machete enforcers ankle, causing to fall on the floor, the third enforcer she’s holding onto tries to spin around, but Soph violently cracks the enforcers arm right across the top of her knee, the enforcers arm snaps and Soph let’s go, letting her fall to the floor with a broken arm. As Soph goes to punt the enforcer who’s on the floor, the second machete enforcer grabs Soph tackles her and pins her against the wall.

The first machete wielding enforcers, gets back to her feet and tries to pull her machete out from the wall. Whilst she is struggling to get her weapon free, Soph quickly uses all the power she has and viciously slams her forehead straight into the enforcers (who’s pinning her)nose. Her nose bends to the right and she cries out in agony as she let’s go. Soph kicks her right in her stomach, causing her to fall backwards, Soph uses this moment to grab the enforcer who at this point is still struggling to free her weapon and Soph slams her forehead straight into the wall, knocking her unconscious. Enforcer four unleashes a flurry of strikes towards Soph using her knuckle dusters, yet Soph just dodges and misses every one, enforcer four tries to throw a straight forward punch, but Soph ducks causing enforcer four to punch the enforcer with the already broken nose, right in the mouth, she must regret standing up now as now she has a busted lip for her trouble. Enforcer four’s eyes widen as she realises she’s hit the wrong target, but Soph uses this distraction to grab her ankle and yank her onto the floor. Enforcer five tries to dive on Soph but Soph rolls off of enforcer four and out of the way, causing enforcer five to drop right on top of number four instead. Soph quickly jumps into the air and lands her boot right down onto enforcer four and five’s heads, bonking them both together, knocking the two of them out at the same time.

“Pulling shots, aiming dots, yeah I don’t miss.
Branded by fire, born in the abyss.
Red hot temper, I just can’t resist.
All this VENGEANCE inside me.”


Enforcer six who’s wielding a baseball bat and enforcer seven, who’s also wielding a machete both try to take on Soph, enforcer sisx takes several swings but Soph’s quick and prime state reflexes enable her to see all the swings and duck around them, the bat smashes off the wall several times and even knocks a couple of pictures hung up, enforcer seven takes a swing, but Soph forward rolls out of harm, the machete swings upwards and chops enforcer six’s baseball bat in half, they both look at each other to which Soph grabs them both in a headlock. But just as she does, enforcer eight tries to grab Soph, but Soph, who’s still has enforcers six and seven in tight headlocks, just use’s her feet and keep trying to kick her away. Enforcers six and seven start trying to punch Soph in her sides so she’ll release them, but Soph maintains her grip and keeps trying to smack their heads together, this however actually fails and enforcer eight manages to land a kick of her own and cause Soph to let go as she staggers back. She needs to act quickly as her opponents regain their surroundings, so Soph desperately grabs half of the baseball bat, and stabs it right into enforcer six’s shoulder, enforcer six falls to the floor in pain as she desperately tries to yank the bat that is now firmly lodge in her shoulder. Enforcer seven crawls for her machete but just as she grabs it, Soph stomps on her hand as hard as she possibly can. Enforcer seven has no choice but to let go and she start rubbing her hand, meaning a couple of her fingers could be broken at this point. Soph’s eye’s widen as she see’s enforcer eight has pulled out a dagger and using both hands she tries to stab Soph. Soph grabs the knife with both of her hands too and they try to overpower one another. This enforcer actually seems a little tougher than the others as she starts to win the standoff, Soph thinks quickly and when enforcer eight thinks she’s about to get the upper hand, Soph leans in and bites down on the enforcers hand as hard as she can. Enforcer eight cries out as she feels Soph’s teeth sink into her skin.

The enforcer drops her knife to which Soph kicks her backwards, Soph grabs the knife before it hits the floor and hurls it straight at enforcer eight. The knife goes through enforcer eight’s blazer and pins her against the wall, just as Soph wanted. Soph then knee’s the pinned enforcer three times in the stomach, before landing six punches to her face, three left and three rights. Enforcer eight is out cold now. Enforcer seven grabs Soph by her throat and tries to choke her, but Soph just uses her hand and grabs the same hand that she stomped on earlier and bends enforcer’s sevens fingers backwards, enforcer seven immediately lets go and grabs her hand in agony, to which Soph grabs one of the pictures from the floor and smashes it right over the back of the enforcers head, knocking her out. Enforcer six who has removed the bat that was stabbed in her shoulder, now stands by the enforcer with the broken arm, both enforcers don’t seem to want to give up. Enforcer six throws the bat at Soph, but naturally Soph ducks, it in turn flies straight over and whacks the enforcer with the broken nose, right in the eye, causing her to fall down to the floor for a third time. So now this enforcer has a broken nose, a busted lip and a black eye for her trouble……..At this point, it is believed that this particular enforcer, should stay down.

“All these thoughts, running through my head.
Arm on fire, veins burning red.
Frustration is getting bigger.
Bang, bang, bang, pull my devil trigger.”


Soph and the two enforcers attack each other, Soph doges their blows and gives them both several punches in their sides and their stomachs before kicking them both in their ankles and smacking their heads together knocking them out in the process. Enforcer nine runs in and manages to punch Soph causing to stagger backwards right into the employee toilets. Enforcer nine, accompanied with enforcer ten try to rush in to continue their attack, but this toilet isn’t exactly a full bathroom, it’s more like a cubicle with a sink and a mirror. Soph kicks enforcer nine’s legs causing to stagger forward so Soph grabs her in a headlock, enforcer ten tries desperately to reach over and grab Soph, yet using her other hand she grabs hold of enforcer ten’s hair and pulls with all her strength. Realizing she’s still technically cornered, she hops onto the toilet itself and using her foot, she forces enforcer nine’s head, straight into the toilet bowl and into the water. Soph then uses her free hand to pull the chain, giving enforcer nine a hell of a swirly in the process, while Soph keeps her foot down on enforcer nine’s head for a moment, enforcer ten tries to land a series of punches to Soph leg, she blocks most of them, but because she’s only using one hand, one of the enforcers punches catches her, right in her side, this winds Soph for a moment, but if she coughs or splutters, she’ll get beaten, so before the wind gets knocked out of her, she unexpectedly grabs enforcer ten by her hair and smashes the side of her head right into the mirror, smashing it, into several pieces. She then quickly drops enforcer ten’s ten right onto the sink itself, enforcer ten’s head, bonk’s right off the side of the sink, knocking her out. Soph jumps off the toilet and takes a couple of well needed deep breaths as that punch did take the wind out of her. This allows enforcer nine to pull herself out of the toilet and get to her feet. But with her face still covered in water, she doesn’t see the fist that smacks her right in the face, the punches takes her by such surprise that she slumps backwards, sitting on the toilet seat, completely knocked out too.

Soph catches her breath, just in time for enforcers eleven and twelve to punch her straight through the doors, they initially arrived in. Soph flies through the doors and straight into the restaurant area itself, where she smacks right into a table, this causes many people and families to scream and get to their feet as they see Soph fly into the room, with two enforcers chasing her. Enforcer elven, pulls out a dagger and attempts to stab Soph, but Soph grabs a dining room fork and catches the tip of the dagger in between the slits of the fork itself , the sight of this causes many families and restaurant staff alike to flee the restaurant. Soph twists the fork causes the dagger to turn too, she then grabs a dining plate and smashes it over enforcer eleven’s head, this doesn’t knock her out as she staggers backwards. Enforcer twelve picks up a dining room chair and hurls it straight at Soph. But Soph ducks, causing the dining room chair to fly over her and smacks the enforcer with the broken nose right in the head, who seems to have once again got to her feet and tried to follow them. So now she has a broken nose, a busted lip, a black eye and now a pounding headache………Seriously, one must wonder, why this particular enforcer, just doesn’t stay down.

Soph grabs a chair of her own, just as enforcer elven grabs another to, both women suddenly joust each other and collide head on into each other. Both chairs smack but lock firmly together. Both Soph and the eleventh enforcer try to outdo one another, in the corner of her eye though, Soph notices the twelfth enforcer and grabbed her dagger and is heading towards them. Soph acts quickly and releases one of her hands from the chair, she grabs and rakes her nails across the eleventh enforcers face, this causes enforcer elven to close her eyes, allow Soph to drop to knees and roll out of the way. Because the eleventh enforcer had her eyes closed and she was still using all of her strength to battle Soph, she had realised that Soph had rolled away, so in turn she just ran straight at enforcer twelve, with her chair still in hand. She accidently smacks the chair right into enforcer twelve, causing her to smack right into a table behind her. Soph then grabs a pot of decorative flowers from one of the dining tables and smashes right across the back of the eleventh enforcers head, knocking her out. Finally before the twelfth enforcer can get up, she has just enough time to see Soph’ foot come down nd kick her right in the side of face, before she too see’s her world fade to black and she falls unconscious.

But all is not over as it seems the broken nose enforcer, has yet again gotten back to her feet, but she’s managed to grab her pistol from her holster. She cocks the gun and Soph turns around to meet her gaze, but before anything else can happen, a green ball, comes hurtling through the air. It smacks the broken nose enforcer right in her face, releasing the green knock out gas, which swiftly sends her off to slumberland and finally keeps her down and out. Soph turns around to see Stasis, Libido, Tinker and BB standing in the restaurant, who have managed catch up to her and the rest of the sisters.

“Let me guess, they ran out of chilli sauce.” Stasis jokes as she puts her slingshot away.

Soph takes a few deep breathes then notices the sheer amount of chocolate bars Stasis has on her.

“Wait, why do you have all those bars of chocolate?” Soph wonders.

“Don’t ask.” Tinker replies still embarrassed from what she had to do earlier.

Soph just nods, before they regroup in the back alley with Tina, Angel, Mag and Marie.

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Inside an old warehouse by Hong Kon’s port, a lorry has pulled up and several golden tiger enforcers are forcing women out the back fo the lorry, either by force or by gun point.

In the middle of it all, a woman in her early fifties stand watching it all with a smile, she’s wearing black high heels, white suit trousers, a hot pink blouse and a white blazer over it. She has Asian skin, dark brown eyes, medium length black hair, which is greying in area’s. She is flanked by two enforcers who are guarding her.

“Zhèxiē shì nǎlǐ lái de?” (Where are these ones from?) The woman in the white suit asks.

“Chén fūrén, zhèxiē nǚrén dōu shì cóng tàiguó yùn guòlái de.” (Lady Shen, these women have been shipped here from Thailand.) One of the enforcers replies.

The lady in the white suit, now revealed to be lady Shen, smiles and approaches the women who have been lined up by the lorry with several golden tigers aiming their guns at them, just in case any of them try to run. Lady Shen, does a slow walk passed each and every single one of the women, but she stops when she crosses paths with one of the women.

“Zhè shì jǐ suìle?” (Hold old is this one?) Shen asks.

A golden tiger wearing one of the grey suits, which is a sign that they are one of lady Shen’s lieutenants, checks a clipboard.

“Tā shíbā suì, wǒ de fūrén hé tā de dǎng'àn biǎomíng, tā réngrán shì chǔnǚ.” (she's eighteen, my lady and her files indicate, she is still a virgin.) The lieutenant responds.

Lady Shen smiles and approaches her.

“I’m sorry, but I’m not very good at Thai, do you mind if we use English?” Shen says to the eighteen year old woman.

The female just stares at Shen out of fear.

“Now, I’ve just been told that you’ve never slept with anyone yet, good for you and I mean that, because you see. I can charge a LOT of money for a virgin, because everyone always wants a virgin don’t they.” Shen gloats.

The eighteen year old female, pulls an angry face and spits right into lady Shen’s eye. Her two enforcers raise their guns to her, but a different female immediately grabs hold of the eighteen-year-old and covers her. Lady Shen raises her hand and the two enforcers lower their guns, she then grabs the ladies hair and yanks it backwards so she can take a look at her. It only takes her a few seconds to see the similarities in the two women and quickly deduces that they are mother and daughter.

“That’s beautiful, it really is. A mother should always protect her daughter. But your daughter did just spit in my face and I can’t accept that. Now since hurting her would be fruitless, I’m afraid YOUR going to have to take the punishment.” Shen says shrugging.

Two enforcers bring a table to lady Shen and pass her a hammer.

“Ràng wǒmen jiǎn duàn tā de chìbǎng. Wúlùn rúhé, wǒmen zhǐ xūyào tā de zuǐ hé kuà bù jiù kěyǐ gōngzuò.” (Let's clip her wings. We only need her mouth and crotch to work anyway.) Lady Shen replies as her smile disappears from her face.

The two enforcers grab the woman and pin her face first to the table, they then stretch out her arms. Lady Shen then smiles sadistically to the daughter who’s being forced to watch this. Lady Shen then picks up a hammer and lifts it into the air…….BUT………Before she swing the hammer down on the woman’s arms, breaking her elbows, her phone suddenly starts to ring……..Normally Shen wouldn’t answer this, but it’s her emergency phone, so she casually puts down the hammer, reaches into her pocket and pulls out her phone.

“Zěnmeliǎo, wǒ máng!” (What is it, I’m busy!) Lady Shen spits down the phone.

After a couple of minutes though, Shen gently hangs up and puts her phone back in her pocket. She has both an angry and shocked look on her face. She’s just been given the news that her main base of operations, the restaurant has just been taken down, all of her enforcers have been arrested and all of her slaves have been rescued. Lady Shen then looks at the woman on the table then turns to walk away.

“Líkāi tā. Zhànshí bǎ suǒyǒu dōngxī dū liú zài wǒmen de kòngzhì qū, kàn lái wǒmen zhèngzài yǔ mǒu rén jiāozhàn.” (Leave her. Keep them all at our holding area for now, it seems we're at war with someone.) Lady Shen walks to her car where an enforcer opens the door for her, they climb in before the car speeds off out of the warehouse.

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The sisters have since all gotten changed and they driven the vans as quickly as they could to the nearest hospital, right now doctors and nurses are currently bringing in all the rescued sex slave workers. Outside Marie is currently checking Soph over for any injuries, Stasis has blown a load of cash of some vending machines and the rest of the sisters are talking to a group of workers which are about to take Mikasa and her sisters into foster care.

“What do you mean, you can’t guarantee that they’ll be together?!” Angel snaps at one of the workers.

“Look, we’re very sorry ma’am, but sometimes couple aren’t looking to adopt more than one child, so I’m sorry but it seems that these girls will eventually be separated.” One of the workers responds.

“But you don’t understand, there sisters, they only have each other, they can NOT be separated like that!” Angel further argues.

“I understand your concern, but my hands are tied on this one, honestly, we should just be hoping that they actually get adopted in the first place.” The worker replies.

“FINE! Give me a pen and the paperwork and I’ll adopt all three of them, right here, right now!” Angel opens her hands for the adoption paper.

“It doesn’t work like that, we need a few days to get them into the system, get them processed and give them a full medical examination each, plus they’ll also need a full psyche evaluation too.” The worker states.

“This is ridiculous!” Angel walks away in a huff.

At one of the vans, Stasis is leaning against it as she pulls a massive chocolate bar out from one of her pockets, she unwraps it and goes to take a big bite out of it, but before she can she feels a tug at her shirt, sheer looks round to see the eight year old Erika, looking at her with wide puppy eyes, or more specifically, looking at Stasis’s chocolate bar.

“Eeerr, sorry but this is my chocolate bar.” Stasis says.

Erika doesn’t say anything instead, she just stares at Stasis, without moving. Stasis looks around then bends down.

“Fine, you can have one bite. But just ONE and don’t tell anyone.” Stasis says.

She passes Erika her chocolate bar, but Erika just shoves it straight into her gob and devours the whole bar almost instantly, she then stares at Stasis with those puppy dog eyes again, wanting another bar. Stasis’s eyes widen.

“Well, that was different, but I bet you can’t do that again.” Stasis hands Erika another chocolate bar.

Erika does the same again. She rips it open and devours the whole bar nearly instantly, she then once again gives Stasis, the puppy dog eyes, wanting a third bar. Stasis raises her eyebrows in disbelief.

“Oh….My…..God……Your like a MINI ME! You love, your snacks as much as what I do, this is so cool, here have another one.” Stasis passes Erika another chocolate bar.

“Hey, come on Stasis, don’t keep giving them junk food. Children their age need plenty of fruit and vegetables, so they can grow up to be strong and healthy.” Marie says as she packs her med kit away.

Stasis just waits until Marie isn’t looking then bends back down to Erika’s level.

“Don’t listen to her, there’s ALWAYS time for snacks!” Stasis whispers as she passes Erika a bag of crisps and watches as she runs to her sisters, Mikasa and Aika.

Stasis then opens up a bag of crisps of her own, before she shoves a handful of them into mouth and starts crunching away. Shen then goes to see what the rest of her sisters are up to. Behind one of the vans, Angel paces back and forth tapping her fingers constantly on her arm.

“There you are.” Tina says as she finds Angel.

“You know, those sisters remind so much of us……..They don’t have any parents, their probably scared, they only have each other……I just…….I just see so much of us in them.” Angel explains as she paces.

Tina watches as the foster workers put the three girls into the car, then drive off down the road, she then see’s Angel, shaking her head in annoyance.

“I’m not sure how yet, but we will help them and ensure that they are never separated.” Tina suddenly says placing her hand on Angel’s shoulder.

“Do you mean that?” Angel asks in hope in her voice.

“Of course, I do, now they said that they wouldn’t be ready for adoption for at least a few days didn’t they. That’s actually perfect as that will give us some time to properly formulate a plan.” Tina replies.

“Thank you!” Angel says as she cuddles Tina.

“Come on, your my sister, I’d do anything to see you happy.” Tina replies as she too cuddles onto Angel.

Just then, BB and Tinker appear.

“Okay, so I hacked into several phones that were recovered from the golden tigers we took out at the restaurant and I found a gold mine of information, including this.” Tinker shows Tina a video on her iPad.

Tina watches as lady Shen, makes several announcements before the video ends.

“So that’s lady Shen is it, good, at least we now know what she looks like. BB, do you know what she’s saying?” Tina says after passing the iPad back to Tinker.

“Yes, I do and believe it or not, it’s actually good news for us. For you see, thanks to the way Soph took down the golden tigers back at the restaurant, they now think that this was an attack from a rival gang, trying to move in on their turf, this means that they still don’t know who we are.” BB explains.

“That also means, that they still have don’t know that we’re actually infiltrators, this is perfect, that means we still have the advantage over them.” Tina replies.

“And that’s not even the best part. You see, I managed to gain access to the golden tiger’s email servers. Then with BB translating it all for me, we found everything. Their lieutenants’ names, their safe houses and I even managed to get a list of all the cops on Shen’s payroll. It seems that the restaurant we were at, was one of the golden tiger’s main base of operations. Now they still have one more active location, probably a secondary base where they keep the new slaves or it’s back up place should the main one ever fall. To top it all off as well, we even have the location as to where lady Shen is currently hiding.” Tinker continues.

“Excellent, well done, both of you. Now we just need to actually bring her in.” Tina replies.

“Well there is one little snag, you see, I can gather every little bit of information needed to bring the golden tigers down for good, but the only way I can properly do that is by infiltrating one of the police stations and manually uploading it all onto the main frame via the servers themselves. Now I could just do it here from my computer, but it would be a lot safer is I just uploaded it manually, that way every major law enforcement in the whole of Hong Kong will know everything.” Tinker states.

“Right, so we need to hit three locations at the same time. Okay we need to split up into three teams, that way we guarantee that tonight, the golden tiger’s and lady Shen fall.”

“I’ll be a part of the team that goes after the remaining slaves, it might them calm down a bit of they hear someone talking to them in their own language. But we do have one small problem.” BB says.

“What’s that?”

“It’s worked so far, but eventually their going to start to question where a group of non-Asian women came from when we infiltrate their compound.” BB follows up with.

An idea forms in Tina’s head and she reaches into her pocket and pulls out her blow pipe with the hypnotic darts.

“Wow, been a hell of a long time since I’ve seen that, honestly I make all these gadgets to protect you and you barely use them.” Tinker jokingly states.

Tina just smiles to Tinker and passes the blowpipe and the dart to BB.

“Are you sure about this?” BB asks.

“Definitely. The serum works of where the victim will fall under the spell of the first person they see, which means, you need to make sure that you are the first person they see when the dart hits them and they’ll be completely under your control.” Tina instructs.

“Thank you, this is great, if we use this on one of the lieutenants, they can get us into the compound without any issues.” BB says as she slips them into their pocket.

“Oh, and before I forget. We must never allow Libido to learn that I still have those hypnotic darts, good god, can you imagine what happen if she found out.” Tina says.

“AGREED!” Both Tinker and BB say without hesitation.

With that, Tina waves over the rest of the sisters and she goes through the plan with them………

“Okay so that’s the plan, now for the teams. Team one will consist of myself, Angel and Soph as we hit lady Shen’s safehouse. Team two will consist of BB, Marie, Libido and Stasis as you’ll hit the compound. Finally, team three will consist of Tinker and Mag, it’ll be more subtle with a smaller team, plus a Hong Kong police station is the safest one of the three.” Tina instructs.

“Eeerrmm, actually I was kind of hoping, I could go with you Tina.” Libido suddenly calls out.

“You want to go with us? Why’s that?” Tina wonders.

“Well this lady Shen is a disgrace to love and all things sexy. I mean come on, if couple want to get kinky with each other and have sexy bondage roleplay, then that is perfectly fine and I’m ALL up for that. But what this Shen woman is doing is just flat out wrong. There’s no love, no nothing, it’s just sick, so I want to come with you to make sure she’s stopped.” Libido explains.

“Very well. Soph are you okay to go with team two instead?” Tina says.

“Yeah, no problem at all.” Soph replies.

“Great, okay then, Libido you’ll come with Angel and I to Shen’s safehouse.” Tina says with a delighted tone.

“Sweet!” Libido responds as she grabs her whip.

With the plan set and the teams ready. The nine sisters disappear into the night with the sole intention of bringing an end to the golden tigers and most importantly, putting a stop to lady Shen, once and for all.

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About an hour later…….

A police car pulls up near an alleyway, down a very quiet and dimly light street. Two female officers get out of the car.

They are both standard Hong Kong police uniforms which are, very light blue button T-shirts, dark blue trousers, black laced shoes, black ties, equipment belts, their department insignia’s just on top of their shoulders and they have dark blue police caps.

The first police officer has midnight ruby black hair styled in a long pixie look, dark brown eyes, she’s 27 years old and her name badge reads “Baozhai”.

The second officer has crushed garnet dark brown hair styled in a choppy lob look, she has hazel brown eyes, she’s 33 years old and her name badge reads “Hualing”.

“Wǒ bù míngbái, diànhuà shuō tāmen zhèngzài zhè tiáo jiē shàng dǎjià, dàn wǒ shénme yě kàn bùjiàn.” (I don’t understand, the call said there was fight going on down this street, but I can’t see anything.) Baozhai says to her colleague.

“Yěxǔ zhè shì yīgè èzuòjù diànhuà. Zài zhèlǐ děng yīxià, wǒ qù nà biān kàn kàn.” (Maybe it was a prank call. Wait here, I’ll have a little look over there.) Hualing replies as she gets out her torch to go and have a look.

As Hualing goes to the alley and has a look for any sign of a fight. Baozhai is standing by the police car watching her colleagues back. But what she doesn’t realize is that Mag has manoeuvred her way around the two officers and she is now right behind Baozhai.

“Hhhuummpphh?!” Baozhai is suddenly taken by surprise as Mag wraps her hand around her mouth and quickly pulls her behind the police car.

Mag doesn’t waste any time and quickly applies a nerve pinch right to the back of Baozhai’s neck, in just a few short seconds later, Baozhai makes a moaning noise through Mag’s handgag before she gently falls to sleep.

Meanwhile Hualing finishes looking through the alleyway.

“Bù, zhèlǐ méiyǒu rén.” (Nah, there’s nobody here.) Hualing says, unaware of what’s just happened to her colleague.

As Hualing makes her way back, a butterfly starts to fly around Hualing’s head and face, but as Hualing stops to take a closer look at what she thinks is just a harmless butterfly, it suddenly sprays a load of sleeping gas directly into her face.

“Uuunnn.” Hualing moans as she falls flat on her back, completely knocked out.

Tinker emerges from shadow and turns to see Mag carrying Baozhai’s unconscious body.

“Thankfully, they believed the fake call that BB made.” Mag says as she lays Baozhai to the floor.

“Indeed, right I’m going to give these ladies just a little injection each, to make sure that they stay asleep through the night.” Tinker fills two syringes with a sleeping serum and injects both the officers with it, ensuring that both women will stay asleep throughout the night.

“Okay then, let’s do this.” Mag says as she starts to unlace Baozhai’s shoes.

Several minutes later, both of the officers have been stripped down to their undies with Hualing wearing a coral pink T-shirt bra and a pair of crimson red cheekster panties. Whilst Baozhai is wearing a sapphire blue push up bra and a pair of grape purple butt booster panties.

Tinker opens her backpack. “Ebony, Ivory. Go and do the honours.” Tinker whispers. Moments later Ebony and Ivory come scurrying out of the backpack and do their usual routine of webbing their targets up, mummify style. They web up both Hualing and Baozhai from the tips of their toes, all the way up to the tops of their shoulders, they then finish up by wrapping more webbing around the ladies mouth as gags before they both scurry back into Tinker’s backpack.

With them two out of the way, Tinker get’s changed into Hualing’s uniform whilst Mag gets changed into Baozhai’s uniform.

“Here, we will leave them in the back seat of the police car, it’ll be safer than just leaving them down a dark alley.” Mag says as she unlocks the police car.

“Good idea, I’ll let Tina know when we’re finished too.” Tinker says as she gives Mag a hand.

They place Hualing and Baozhai into the back of the police car and shut the door, thankfully the back windows are tinted which means nobody can see in. Tinker then climbs into the passenger seat, whilst Mag hops into the driver’s seat. Moments later, Mag turns on the engine and drives off down the road, looking for the nearest police station.

“Remember, keep your hat over your face as best as you can when we’re inside.” Mag reminds Tinker.

“I know, don’t worry, I’ve got this.” Tinker replies.

Thankfully it doesn’t take them too long before they find a police station. Mag then steers the car inside and drives it straight into its underground car park. Once they’ve parked up, Mag doesn’t lock the car, just in case the two real officers wake and set off the alarm by wriggling around.

Mag and Tinker use the police officers ID cards and scan their way into the station itself. Once inside they move swiftly and in single file, they keep their hats firmly over their faces as best they can and anyone who tries to look at them, they give them a swift but authoritative salute as they keep on walking. Tinker knows that the servers will be kept in the coolest room in the station and with the fact that neither Mag nor Tinker can read Cantonese, Tinker’s phone is monitoring the temperatures of every room they pass, until at last her phone vibrates when they pass a certain room. Tinker checks her phone and it’s showing that the temperature is drastically lower than the others they passed. Tinker nods to Mag, then gently opens the door. Much to their delight, the server room is empty right now so they both hurry inside and close the door. Then Mag keeps an eye out whilst Tinker plugs the USB into the main server port.

“So long how long before that’s…….”

“Done!” Tinker says with a smile as she pulls out the USB stick.

“Oh right. Well then, let’s get out of here.” Mag responds.

They retrace their steps and make their way back outside the station, swiping the ID cards again in order to get out, once they are outside Tinker calls it in.

“This is Tinker here. Mag and I have successfully uploaded everything onto the servers, give it a little while to start making it rounds, but believe me when I say, that this time tomorrow, the golden tigers will be finished. Oh and I thought you might like to know, that Mag and I have left the two police officers we replaced, in the back seat of their police car in one of the stations underground car park, sending a picture of the number plate to you now.” Tinker says over her mic.

She then takes a quick snap shot of the police cars number plate and sends it to Tina so she knows which car to reference when she makes the usual anonymous calls.

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The compound itself was an old storage warehouse which had been modified and now supported electric fences and a couple of watchtowers. Soph watched the compound through a pair of binoculars whilst Stasis, Marie and BB monitored the surrounding area.

“Damn, I’m hungry, hey when we get inside, do you think they’ve put on a descent spread, or maybe a cafeteria or something like that?” Stasis remarks as she hears her stomach rumble.

“I doubt it, they’re a criminal syndicate, not a charity function.” Soph replies.

“So, how do the enforcers eat then? Do you think they bring a packed lunch?” Stasis continues.

Soph just sighs.

“This is hopeless, no one has entered or left the compound since we got here.” Soph says, changing the subject.

“They must be on high alert, because have you noticed? They’re patrols are not venturing outside the front entrance.” Marie adds.

“Well, either way, if this is to work, we need two things. First we need disguises, second we need the lieutenant who runs this compound to actually come out in order for this plan to work.” BB says.

“So, who is the lieutenant here anyway?” Soph wonders as she puts the binoculars down for a moment.

“A woman by the name of Xiu. She’s a nasty piece of work. Multiple wounds with intent felonies, many accounts of theft and even a few accounts of drug smuggling, believe me, she’s doesn’t deserve any sympathy.” BB replies.

“None of them do. Look at them, they’re all human traffickers who run a sex slave ring, without being mean, but they deserve every damn punch and kick I give to them.” Soph says as she warms up her knuckles hoping for another brawl.

“HEY! I think I know how we can get inside. But it involves getting our hands dirty…….Or rather, greasy, I should say.” Stasis says as she suddenly sits up.

Marie, BB and Soph all just look at each other, but they hear Stasis out………Roughly twenty minutes later………….

Near the compound, but just out of sight of the compound itself a pizza bike pulls up and a female pizza delivery driver steps off.

She’s wearing a bright red shirt with a pizza logo on it, bright blue trousers, bright red converses and a bright red cap which also has a pizza logo on it. She’s 20 years old, she has ebony brown eyes, long leather black hair, styled in a blunt bangs look, although her name would not be important in this case, her ID in her wallet revealed her name was “Yanmei”.

“Nǐ hǎo, wǒ cóng pīsà chūfā, qù ba, wǒ yǒu nǐ de dìngdān!” (Hello, I'm from pizza a go, go, I have your order!) Yanmei calls out.

With Yanmei, purely just being an innocent delivery woman in all this, the sisters wanted to take her down, very quick and very swift, so they don’t frighten her. So with this, Marie waits until her back is turned before she double clicks her pen. The dart flies straight for Yanmei and hits her right in the back of her neck.

“Eeekk……Uuuunnnn.” Yanmei, moans before she quickly staggers backwards and begins to pass out.

“NO! The pizza!” Stasis yells as she baseball slides right underneath Yanmei, catching both her and the pizza before either of them hit the ground.

Stasis then gently lays Yanmei on the floor, then opens up the box and takes the biggest slice she can find then shoves it into her gob.

“Mmmm – mmmmmm, oh yeah, this is freaking delicious.” She says as she bites down.

The rest of the sisters just roll their eyes, although they are thankful that Stasis did also catch Yanmei before she hit the ground and not just the pizza itself. The sisters then get to work and strip Yanmei. With three infiltrators stripping one woman, it really only takes them mere seconds to strip Yanmei down to her undies. When she is stripped, it is revealed that Yanmei is wearing a pair of pine green two side knot Brazilian brief panties and an apricot orange built in bra.

The sisters then decided to easy on Yanmei, again purely just because she was an innocent victim in all this, so they used some rope from one of their bags and they only tied up Yanmei’s ankles and her wrists so she couldn’t run off. They also used a fresh clean cloth to gag her with. Once this was done they dragged her behind a few crates and made sure to drag her bike their too, so no one would steal it. Stasis was the one who closest to Yanmei’s size so she was the one got changed into her clothes.

“Oh, hold on second, we’re infiltrators, not thieves.” Stasis then rummages around in her bag and pulls out a big wad of Hong Kong dollars. She then opens up Yanmei’s bra and shoves the big wad of bills straight down her bra, so in all fairness, Stasis has now just paid for the pizza BB ordered for them.

Stasis then picks up the pizza box, taking another slice for herself in the process and walks towards the front entrance of the compound.

As Stasis is walking towards the compound, she opens up the box and takes a third slice out, just as she starts to eat it, her mic cracks to life.

“Stasis, stop eating the pizza, otherwise this plan might not work.” BB says over the mic.

“Hey, I paid for this, which means technically it’s mine, plus if you think I’m sharing any slices with these scumbags, then you are surely mistaken.” Stasis replies down her mic.

As Stasis approaches the compound entrance, two golden tiger enforcers, wearing the traditional enforcer clothing. Black zip up boots, black suit trousers, white suit shirt and black blazer, notice Stasis approaching the main gate.

One of the enforcers is 35 years old, she has long dark golden-brown hair tied back in a bun, she has tweak wood brown eyes and although it wouldn’t matter, her name was “Qingzhao”.

The second enforcer is 29 years old, she has long black hair styled in a tousled lob look, she has sable brown eyes and again, her name wouldn’t really matter, but her name was “Rong”.

“Hēi, nà shì yīgè sòng pīsà de nǚrén xiàng wǒmen zǒu lái ma?” (Hey, is that a pizza delivery woman heading our way?) Rong asks.

“Shì de, tā kàn qǐlái xiàng...... Hēi, tā zhēn de zài chī pīsà ma?” (Yeah, it looks like it and.......Hey, is she actually eating the pizza?) Qingzhao responds.

“Shuō zhēn de, shénme yàng de sòng huò sījī húndàn jūrán huì chī pīsà!” (Seriously, what kind of a jerk of a delivery driver actually eats the pizza) Rong further continues, making a fair point.

The gate opens up and both Qingzhao and Rong exit the main entrance and approach Stasis.

“Zhèlǐ méiyǒu rén diǎn rènhé shíwù, suǒyǐ nǐ yǒusān miǎo zhōng de shíjiān xiàng guǐhún yīyàng xiāoshī.” (No one ordered any food here, so you've got three seconds to make like a ghost and vanish). Qinzhao shouts.

Stasis just stands there, with her cap firmly over her eyes, she can’t understand, but in this case, she didn’t need to as she was watching BB get into position.

“Báichī yīdìng shì lóngzi. Hēi biǎo zi! Wǒ de tóngshì shuō mílùle!” (Idiot must be deaf. HEY BITCH! My colleague says get lost!) Rong shouts next.

Qingzhao and Rong move closer to Stasis, but just as they do, BB wraps both of hands around the two enforcers faces. “Hhhmmmppphhh!” Both the women shout as BB picks up both women with ease and carries them both into the darkness from where she just emerged from. Once their secluded in the darkness itself, BB activates her gloves. “Bbbzzttt!” Both the enforcers mutters as BB firmly gives them both a knock out stun shock from her gloves, she then lets go and both women fall face first onto the floor, moaning and groaning.

“Awesome work!” Stasis says as she helps herself to a fourth slice of the pizza.

Soph and Marie then appear too and together, all four sisters strip the two enforcers are heavily knocked out at this point. Once they’ve been stripped, it revealed at this point that Qingzhao is wearing a tawny brown seamless bra and a pair of camel beige adhesive panties. Rong on the other hand is wearing a bumblebee yellow silicone bra and a pair of cerulean blue cheekster panties.

Unlike Yanmei, these two women were hardened criminals so the sisters didn’t go easy on them when it came to tying them up. Using zip ties, they bound both women’s ankles and their wrists, before they stretched them back and place additional zip ties in the middle, to secure them in a hog tie position. But they weren’t finished yet, as they then rolled both women on their sides, so they were facing one another and used additional zip ties to secure their bellies to one another, so now not only were they both hogtied, both they were both ties to each other at the same time. They used some ballgags, courtesy of Libido and strapped them in and around the two enforcers mouths before securing them tightly. They then hid the two women in between a bunch of barrels to hide them. BB then got changed into Qingzhao’s clothes whilst, Marie got changed into Rong’s clothes.

“Okay, now onto to part two, once we’re inside, Soph and Stasis, can you two find us a vehicle to get everyone out. We should be able to buy you enough time to slip pass, once we get in through the gate.” Marie explained.

“Yep, leave it to us.” Soph replied.

They then got into position for the second part of the phase. Stasis stood back at the front gate, pretending to still be the pizza delivery women, whilst BB and Marie, now disguise approached the main gate. BB grabbed a walkie from just inside the gate and held it to her mouth.

“Xiū zhōngwèi, wǒmen zhè biān yǒu qíngkuàng, wàimài xiǎojiě bù zǒu, tā shuō nǐ diǎnle pīsà?” (Lieutenant Xiu, we have a situation out here, some delivery woman won't leave, she says you ordered a pizza?) BB said over the walkie.

“Hǎo ba, wǒ méiyǒu, gàosù tā líkāi zhèlǐ!” (Well I didn't, tell her to get out of here!). Xiu replied over the walkies.

“Wǒ yǐjīng shìguòle, chúfēi tā cóng nǐ zuǐ lǐ tīngdào, fǒuzé tā bù huì líkāi.” (I've already tried, she won't leave unless she hears it from your own mouth.) BB further continues.

“Báichīmen, wǒ dé guǎn zhèlǐ de yīqiè! Hǎo de, wǒ mǎshàng chūlái!” (IDIOTS, I have to do everything around here! Fine, I'll be right out!) A rather angry Xiu replies.

Moments later a woman emerges from the compound, she’s 32 years old, she has long hair that’s seems to have been dyed copper shimmer, she has dark brown eyes and she’s wearing a basic golden tiger lieutenant outfit which is, brown zip up shoes, light grey suit trousers, light grey blazer and a white suit shirt.

Xiu marches right passed BB and Marie who have their backs turned so Xiu didn’t see their faces as she walked passed them and marches straight up to Stasis.

“Hǎo ba, wǒ jiùshì nǐ zhège bù zhíqián de wàimài xiǎo gē,zài wǒ shēngqì zhīqián zòu nǐ!” (Well, here I am you worthless delivery girl, now beat it, before I get mad and beat you!) Xiu shouts out.

But before this conversation goes any further, BB whips out the blow pipe, takes a deep breath and blows into it, a dart flies right through the air, catching Xiu right on her right bum cheek.

“EEKK!” She shrieks and she quickly spins around to see what done that to her.

Good thing she did too as the serum quickly overflowed her body and she found herself staring straight at BB. Then it happened, Xiu started to see BB as this incredibly tall, majestic vision of beauty, an overwhelming desire of both lust and passion flowed through her veins as all she wanted to do was both satisfy BB both with chores and with her body. She then playfully pulled a cheeky grin and started chewing the ends of her hair, in a cheeky, playful and seductive way.

“Tā zhēn de qǐ zuòyòngle ma? Nǐ néng tīngdào wǒ ma?” (Did it actually work? Can you hear me?) BB asks, as she wasn’t quite sure what the signs were.

“Ó, wǒ tīngdào nǐ de shēngyīn, wǒ fúcóngle, wǒ de gāodà měilì de qíngfù.” (Oh I hear you and I obey, my tall and oh so beautiful mistress.) Xiu replies is a seductive tone.

BB turns bright red with embarrassment. “Judging by that look on your face, I’m guessing it worked.” Stasis adds as she takes a fifth slice of pizza.

“Eerm, duì, hǎo ba....... Nǐ yào hùsòng wǒ hé wǒ mèimei chuānguò zhège dà yuàn, zhíjiē qù zhǎo nǐ de núlì, rúguǒ yǒurén wèn, nǐ huì shuō wǒmen shì Heartfelt fēnzhī de yībùfèn, nǐ yǒngyuǎn bù huì dà shēng yǐ cǐ lái zhíyí. Nǐ míngbái ma?” (Eerm, right, okay then.......You are going to escort my sister and I through this compound and straight to your slaves, if anyone asks, you will say that we are part of the Heartfelt branch and you NEVER allowed to be questioned by this. Do you understand?) BB gets straight to the points.

“Nǐ de yuànwàng shì wǒ de mìnglìng wǒ de qíngfù.” (Your wish is my command my mistress.) Xiu responds as she seductively rubs her breasts up and down.

Marie and Soph look at each other as they have no idea what’s being said. “Well, it’s official. We can NEVER allow Libido to discover that this gadget exists.” Stasis says as she helps herself to a sixth slice of pizza.

With this, Xiu marches straight towards the compound with BB and Marie following her closely, they leave the front gate open, allowing Soph and Stasis to quickly sneak in and disappear again into the shadows as they search for a way to get everyone out. Once inside the compound itself, approximately two dozen enforcers are seeing just going about their business. Some are playing Mahjong, some are just sitting around eating and drinking Maotai. Some are actually on guard duty at various posts and a couple of them are just making idle chit chat, whilst having a smoke.

“Hēi, zhōngwèi, zhèlǐ zěnme huì yǒu wàiguó rén, dǎbàn chéng wǒmen?” (Hey lieutenant, why are there foreigners in here, dressed as us?) One of the enforcers shouts as she lights up her cigarette.

“Cóng wǒmen de Heartfelt fēn gōngsī nàlǐ, nǐ yǒu shé me wèntí ma?” (There here from our Heartfelt branch, why, do you have a problem with that?). Xiu quickly snaps at the enforcer.

“Bù, wǒ zhǐshì rènwéi wǒmen méiyǒu rén liú zài Heartfelt.” (No, I just thought that we didn't have anyone left in Heartfelt.) The enforcer says as she takes a drag from her ciggy.

“Suànle, nǐ yào dàjīngxiǎoguài, bùrú gēn chén niángniáng fā gè láosāo. Wǒ gǎn kěndìng tā hěn xiǎng tīng tīng xiàng nǐ zhèyàng de dījí húndàn zěnme shuō.” (Well, if you want to make a big fuss about it, why don't you go a whine like a little bitch to lady Shen. I'm sure she'd love to hear what a low level prick like you has to say.) Xiu gets into the enforcers face.

The enforcer takes her ciggy out of her mouth and sweat drips down her forehead as she feels the other enforcers staring at her too.

“Bù……bù, wǒ juéduì bù huì wèn chén xiǎojiě rènhé shì.” (No......No, I would never question Lady Shen on anything.) The enforcer nervously replies and backs off.

Xiu just glares at the other enforcers and they all quickly get back to what ever it was they were doing. Xiu then continues and leads Marie and BB straight into a room where the new prisoners are being held. Once they get inside, they quickly shut the door and both Marie and BB let massive sighs of relief as their plan had actually worked. They then notice ten women have been locked inside cages, BB quickly hurries around and finds a set of keys in a desk side draw, then after trying a few of them, she finally finds the correct one and unlocks the cages. The ten women nervously step out, among the women is the eighteen year old and her mother who almost had her arms smashed earlier on. In order to try and show a sign of trust, BB speaks to them in Cantonese but they don’t respond. She then tries Laos, Vietnamese and evil Indonesian before she tries Thai. When she does, the eighteen year old looks at her. BB then knows that this is the correct one.

“Xỳā klạw pị ley reā khæ̀ plxm tạw reā xyū̀ thī̀ nī̀ pheụ̄̀x ch̀wy h̄ı̂ khuṇ xxk pị cāk thī̀ nī̀” (Please don't be afraid, we're only in disguise, we're actually here to help you get out of here.) BB says in a very calm and soothing voice.

Marie hurries into the bathrooms and finds a couple of med kits on the walls which she swiftly swipes and brings out.

“Reā ca phā khuṇ pị rong phyābāl cāk nận tảrwc ca h̄ā thāng phā khuṇ klạb b̂ān xỳāng plxdp̣hạy tæ̀ k̀xn xụ̄̀n phī̀ s̄āw k̄hxng c̄hạn t̂xng trwc r̀āngkāy khuṇ thậngh̄md doy rĕw pheụ̄̀x dū ẁā mī xākār bādcĕb dı «thī̀ khuṇ xāc dị̂ rạb sụ̀ng cảpĕn t̂xng dị̂ rạb kār rạks̄ʹā phyābāl thạnthī.” (We are going to get you to a hospital, then the police are going to find a way to return you back to your homes, safe and sound, but first, my sister needs to do a quick medical examine of you all, to see if there are any injuries you may have sustained that require immediate medical attention.) BB says pointing at Marie.

At first the women are all very reluctant to move and rightfully so, yet after a minute, the eighteen year old who spat in Shen’s face earlier, bravely steps forward and approaches Marie. When she gets there, Marie gives her a warming smile and gently sits her down on a chair.

“Hi there, I’ll only be a minute, I just want to have a quick look and make sure you haven’t sustained any cuts that requires stitches as well as any other injuries.” She calmly says as she kneels down. Marie isn’t sure if the young woman understands her, but she hopes that her calming and gently voice, is enough to make her see, that she is not a threat.

Marie very carefully, gently and slowly examined all the women, when she was satisfied with she removed her blue medical gloves and slung them into a bin, she then gave BB the thumbs up to say that all ten of the women were safe to move. BB then turned to Xiu who was ogling her, probably hoping that she asks her remove all of her clothes.

“Wǒ ràng nǐ gǎndào jiāo'ào ma, wǒ de nǚ zhǔrén?” (Have I done you proud, my mistress) Xiu says in a sexy voice.

“Quèshí nǐ yǒu, xiànzài wǒ xūyào nǐ wèi wǒ zuò de xià yī jiàn shì jiùshì……” (Indeed you have, now the next thing I need you to do for me is this......) Bb then explains her plan to Xiu, before she explains it to Maire, then finally explaining it to the slaves.

Few minutes later……..

The doors fly open and Xiu marches out with the slaves following her. BB and Marie are right behind them all, holding them all at gunpoint and pretending to be escorting them.

“Zhōngwèi, zhè shì zěnme huí shì?” (Lieutenant, what's going on?) An enforcer calls out.

“Zhǐshì dài zhèxiē gōngrén chūqù xiǎobiàn, yīnwèi wǒ zhēn de bù xīwàng zhège dìfāng yǒu niào wèi, érqiě wǒ dāngrán bù huì ràng tāmen shǐyòng wǒmen de cèsuǒ, xiànzài rúguǒ yǒurén xiǎng wèi cǐ bàoyuàn, jiù xiàng nà biān de biǎo zi xiǎojiě yīyàng, nàme lái ba, xiànzài shuōhuà.” (Just taking these workers out for a pee break as I really don't want this place smelling of urine, plus I'm certainly NOT letting them use our toilets, now if anyone wants to moan about it, like little miss bitchy over there, then come on, speak now.) Xiu says pointing at the enforcer from earlier.

The other enforcers just bowed their heads in silence and resumed their business, to which Xiu just scoffed at them, then escorted all the slaves as well as BB and Marie back out through the compound and out the front. When they were outside, they found that Soph and Stasis have commandeered a truck made to look like a fresh fish delivery truck.

“How’s this?” Soph asked.

“Perfect, okay let’s get these ladies on board.” BB replies.

As they quickly load the women onto the truck, Xiu approaches one more time.

“Yǒu shé me kěyǐ wéi nín xiàoláo de ma, wǒ de nǚ zhǔrén?” (Is there anything I can do for you, my mistress?) Xiu asks with a hopeful tone.

“Shì de, shíjì shang yǒu. Nǐ kěyǐ tuō diào nǐ de yīfú, dàn nǐ kěyǐ bǎoliú nǐ de nèiyī, ránhòu ràng wǒ hé wǒ de jiěmèimen bǎng zhù nǐ bìng dǔ zhù nǐ.” (Yes, actually there is. You can strip out of your clothes, you can keep your underwear though, then allow my sisters and I bind you and gag you.) BB announces.

A massive smile goes across Xiu’s face as she quickly strips, she even wriggles her hips from side to side as she slips out of her trousers, probably to try and be kinky for her mistress. Once she’s stripped, it is revealed that she is wearing a watermelon pink wireless bra and a pair of wine red caged bikini panties.

Xiu then crouches into a ball position and eagerly awaits her gag and bonds. The sisters don’t disappoint as they tie up her ankles, then secure her thighs to her legs, then ten tie her hands to the front of her legs too and place additional bonds around her waist and legs as well, to make she retains her ball like position. Xiue then smiles and opens her mouth as wide a she can when she see’s BB pull out a ballgag. Xiue even makes a bit of a sexual moan as she feels the ball gag get strapped around her mouth. The sisters then chuck her clothes into a bin and BB turns to her.

“Nǐ gàn dé zhème hǎo, wǒ xiǎng nǐ xūyào xiūxí yīxià, zhèyàng nǐ xiànzài jiù shuìzhele, dāng nǐ xǐng lái de shíhòu, nǐ jiù bù zài shòu wǒ de mó zhòule.” (You've done such a great job, I think you need a little rest, so you will fall asleep now and when you wake up, you will no longer be under my spell anymore.) BB instructs.

Xiu nods and tilts her head sideways as she gently drifts off into a deep sleep, the sisters did contemplate in hiding her body, but then they realised that with the police sure to arrive soon, they thought it would be embarrassing for Xiu for when the police show up, just to find a random golden tiger lieutenant bound and gagged in her undies by the front entrance.

“Sweet, dreams.” Marie said as she climbed into the back of the truck.

“I’LL DRIVE!” Stasis shouts as she chucks her now empty pizza box away.

“Hell no, I heard about what happened the last time you drove.” Soph says as she quickly grabs the keys.

“Pfft, spoil sport.” Stasis remarks as she climbs into the passenger seat.

Ad the truck drove out the still open front gate. Marie and BB stayed in the back the truck, so Marie could keep a watch over the women in case any of them required further medical attention and BB could continue to translate for her, should she need it. Stasis was in the passenger seat and Soph was driving, they were on their way to the nearest hospital.

“Hey, it’s your FAVOURITE sister reporting in, just to let you know, the slaves have been rescued and we’re on our way to the hospital now and I got a pizza, so everybody wins. Okay we will be in touch!” Stasis says over her mic.

The truck travels down the road, heading straight for the center of Hong Kong.

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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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be advised, that this is PART TWO. Scroll to the TOP to read part ONE! :D

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At the same time, whilst all of this was going on, Tina, Angel and Libido have made their way to the safehouse where Shen herself is hiding, now their actually aren’t many guards here, only about six or seven, this is actually a wise thing to do, as too many guards in one location automatically gives it away that either something or someone important is being held there, so by only using a handful of guards, it won’t be seen as a high value target, lady Shen knows this, which is why this tactic is in play.

The safehouse itself, is actually a quaint a peaceful villa sitting in the middle of a suburban part of Hong Kong, it’s sounds by crafted stone walls and the gardens are filled with delicate and beautiful beds of flowers, a bamboo water fall gently flows into a small pond. Anyone just simply walking passed this villa from outside would never believe that such a peaceful, serene and beautiful place is housing such a vile, evil and twisted individual.

Tina, Angel and Libido observe the villa, from the rooftop of a different villa across the road.

“Six enforcers in total, three groups of two, they seem to have a set patrol route.” Tina says as she monitors the villa.

“Okay then, so how should we play this?” Angel asks.

“Well, maybe we take out one the patrols and replace them whilst the third climbs onto the roof to get the jump of Shen.” Tina suggests.

But as the sisters ponder over this plan, they see a van pull up outside the villa, a female gardener steps out. She is 25 years of age, she has long black hair styled in a short face – framing layers look, she has Paris Brun brown eyes, she’s wearing a pink shirt, dark brown trousers, sandals, a red and white chequered jacket over it and a straw hat. The gardener proceeds to start getting some equipment ready.

“Okay change of plan, how about this. One of us replaces the gardener, lures two enforcers out here so we can replace them too, then using our disguise we can march up to Shen’s office on the pretence that we’ve just caught the gardener stealing from the villa.” Tina plans.

“I like it, I want to replace the gardener though.” Libido says as she sticks on some of her fake knock out lips.

“Okay, but please go easy on her. She’s just an ordinary woman trying to make an honest living, she might not even know who’s really in that villa.” Angel says with concern in her voice.

“Don’t worry sis, I’ll be gentle, I promise.” Libido says as she hops down with a bag of bonds and gags.

“Libido meant that, she won’t do anything to harm her, you know, she also wants nothing more than to see you happy too.” Tina says placing a comforting handle on Angel’s shoulder.

Angel smiles and nods in acceptance.

The gardener is so busy fiddling around with her tools that she completely fails to notice Libido creeping in behind her, suddenly the sound of a whip cracking is heard and the gardener suddenly finds herself entangled in Libido’s whips. “Hhhuurrkk!” She mutters and Libido pulls her towards her.

“Pucker up cutie.” She whispers as she moves in and gives the gardener a long, but extremely passionate kiss on the lips.

The gardener’s eyes widen in both confusion and somewhat fear, but her eyes slowly fall limp as the serum from Libido’s gadgets seeps into the gardener’s saliva and starts to take hold. Libido listens as the woman makes several moans before her body goes completely limp, when this happens, Libido immediately scoops her off her feet and holds onto her bridal style.

“Don’t feel embarrassed, I take everyone’s breath away with how passionately I kiss.” Libido says to the very unconscious gardener.

Libido then lifts the gardener into the back of her own van and climbs in with her closing the vans door behind her. Libido then feels off the fake lips and licks her own lips to get them all moist again. She then pulls her whip off of the gardener before her mic comes to life.

“Don’t forget Libido, Angel and I are still out here, so please don’t try any funny stuff with that woman in there.” Tina says over the mic.

“Don’t worry sisters, I got it.” Libido says with a smile as she replies.

She then strips the gardener of her clothes and underneath it is revealed that the gardener is wearing a pair of Khaki brown V-Kini panties and a moave purple bridal bra. Now Libido hums and contemplates tying up this woman in a kinky, yet sexually pleasurable way, but then she remember that the van is probably going to be needed for the other unknowing uniform doners, so Libido just rolls her eyes and smiles to herself. “Maybe, next time.” She says as she gets ready her bonds.

Libido swiftly ties up the gardener by tying strands of rope around her ankles, her legs, her wrists and her arms, although she couldn’t resist putting just one stand of rope through the gardener’s crotch and in between her butt cheeks, she didn’t do it too tightly, just enough of where every time the gardener wriggles, she feel it lightly brushing and rubbing against her crotch, this made Libido feel a bit better. She then used one of her ball gags with the holes in and swiftly strapped it in and around the gardener’s mouth. Once she was taken care of, Libido swiftly got changed into her clothes. She then stepped out the van and gave both Tina and Angel a thumbs up and a wink. It was time for the second part of the plan.

Libido grabbed some sheers from the van and closed the doors, she then went into one of the gardens and just started chopping away at everything, including all the flowers themselves. It wasn’t long before one of the patrols noticed her. Two golden tiger enforcers, wearing the typical enforcer outfits as all the others before stopped in their tracks when they saw Libido chopping away at everything.

One of the enforcers had nut brown eyes, medium length blowout burgundy black hair, styled in a sweeping pixie look, she was 31 years old and named “Shuchun”.

The second enforcer was 23 years old, she had light brown eyes, long jet black hair styled in a shoulder grazing layer look, her name was “Zongying”.

“Zhè báichī dàodǐ zài gànshénme?!” (What the hell is this idiot doing?!) Shuchun shouts out.

“Wǒ bù zhīdào, dàn kàn tā de pífū, tā fēnmíng shìgè wàiguó rén……yě jiùshì shuō, wǒ gǎn dǎdǔ, tā bù zhīdào tā zhèngzài kǎn shuí de huā.” (I don't know, but look at her skin, she's clearly a foreigner........Which means, I bet she doesn't know just WHO'S flowers she's hacking away.) Zongying angrily replies to her colleague.

“Hēi, nǐ zhège chǔn biǎo zi, nǐ zhīdào nǐ zài zuò shénme ma!” (Hey, you stupid bitch, do you even know what you’re doing!) Shuchun shouts to Libido.

Libido just turns around and tries to act all guilty and takes several steps backwards towards the front of the villa. “Oh, I’m sorry, I’m sorry!” Libido says, faking a sincere tone as she steps backwards.

“Xiūxí yīxià, tā xiǎnrán bù lǐjiě nǐ.” (Give it a rest, she clearly doesn't understand you.) Zongying replies.

“Ó, shì de, yěxǔ tā huì míngbái zhè yīdiǎn!” (Oh yeah, well maybe she’ll understand this!) Shuchun pulls her gun out and points at Libido.

But just as she does, they don’t realize that they walked straight into a trap as Angel was waiting patiently, as soon as the two enforcers crossed paths with her, Angel fired two darts from her dart gun right at them. Both darts flew right through the air then pierced both women, right on their butt cheeks. Both women making faints sounds, before they fall face first down on the floor with their arses pointing right up towards the sky.

“Mmm, I like it when they pass out like that.” Libido says as she watches them fall down.

“NEVER point a gun at my sister!” Angel says as she holster her dart gun.

“Are you alright?” Tina asks Libido as she emerges from cover.

“Yeah, I’m fine.” Libido replies.

“Okay then, let’s get ourselves a change of clothes.” Tina says as she grabs hold of Shuchun and Angels grabs hold of Zongying.

Libido opens the door for them and allows Tina and Angel to get inside whilst carrying their burdens. Libido closes the door and keeps watch whilst Tina and Angel strip the two enforcers. Once they have bene stripped, it is revealed that Shuchun is wearing a pair of orchid purple butt lifter panties and a mauve purple convertible bra. Zongying on the other hand is wearing a pair of admiral blue tanga panties and a spider black front open bra.

Tina and Angel then tie up the two enforcers using various stands of rope, they secure their forearms to their sides and tie several bonds around them to hold them in position, they then tie their wrists before they tie their ankles, their legs and their thighs together. They then use some strands of duct tape and seal their mouths shut. Finally Angel pulls out a few dart from her dart gun and injects the serum into the enforcers as well as the gardener, just to make sure they stay asleep through out the night and don’t wake up frightened. Angel goes one step with the gardener and covers her with a blanket for warmth, she just props the two enforcers up, side by side, so they will have each other’s body heat to keep them warm. With that done, Tina agets changed into Shuchun’s clothes and Angel gets changed into Zongying’s clothes. They leave the van and close the doors behind them, the van has several small holes underneath so fresh air will continuously flow in.

“Okay, you ready for the next part?” Tina asks.

“Ready!” Both Angel and Libido respond.

Tina quickly uses google translate and quickly familiarises herself with a few words and hopes that her accent doesn’t give her away. Then Libido slips her whips into the back of her trousers and holds her arms out so both Angel and Tina can hold onto them.

“Okay then, let’s do this.” Tina says.

Tina and Angel escort Libido into the villa itself, holding onto her arms. Libido kicks around and continuously wriggles, which in turn causes Angel and Tina to constantly wriggle around, pretending to struggle with her, this is of course all a front to as the more they wriggle and move around, the harder it will be for the remaining patrols to notice things like their facial features.

“Yúchǔn de xiǎotōu....... Gěi nǚshì dāng....... Nǐ zhège xiǎotōu.” (Stupid thief.........To lady Shen.......You thief.) Tina says again and again, trying to sound convincing.

Now the other patrols do notice them, but when they hear Tina’s words, big smiles go across their faces, they think that it’s just their colleagues who’s caught a foolish thief and dragging her to lady Shen so she can personally deal with her. So the other patrols just chuckle and continue their routes. Finding lady Shen’s office as a whole wasn’t actually all that hard as most of the doors in the villa were either bronze or silver, they eventually found one door that was gold and that was the only door that had a CCTV camera above it, so naturally one would assume that, that was her office. The three sisters got to the door and Tina quickly banged on it, they quickly lowered their heads to avoid been seen from the camera above them.

Inside the room, lady Shen herself was busy listening to soothing music whilst sipping a cup of fine and very expensive red wine, when she heard the knocking outside, she checked her camera to see what she though was two of her enforcers holding onto a gardener.

“Zéi……….. Zéi…….. Zéi.” (thief) Was all lady Shen could hear being spoken, so she foolishly pressed a button which unsealed the locking mechanisms on her office and allowed the three sisters to gain entry.

Once inside, she hit the switch again sealing the office and invertedly, sealed her own fate in the process.

“Phew, damn, that thing was messing up my hair.” Libido says as she throws the hat off of her head when Angel and Tina let go of her arms.

Lady Shen panics and drops her glass of wine when Tina and Angel reveal their faces too, she immediately goes for the switch but the cracking of a whip is heard and before Shen knows what’s happening, Libido’s whip wraps around her wrist and flings her straight over her desk and onto her back, Libido then brings her whip back in.

“So……..Infiltrators huh? I should have known…….Tell me, which one of my rivals hired you?” Shen asks.

“This may come as a surprise to you, but nobody hired us, we just couldn’t stand the idea of knowing you and your little syndicate were active, so we’ve come to put an end to you.” Angel replies.

“Nonsense! Your infiltrators and if I’ve learned anything in my life, is that infiltrators only care about money and only work for people who have deep pockets! So please, tell me who wired you and what ever it is their paying you, forget about doubling it. I’ll flat out TRIPLE it, how does that sound!” Shen shouts.

“My sister wasn’t lying, nobody hired us, we just genuinely hated the idea of your sick little sex trafficking ring, so we made it our mission to put a stop to it.” Tina rebuffs Angel’s statement.

“In all my years, I never thought I’d actually see the day where a group of infiltrators of all things, actually grows a conscience.” Shen remarks.

“Well believe it, because yeah their exactly many of us and most infiltrators still have that mercenary like attitude to this life, there are still a few of us that just actually want to do some good in this world.” Angel replies.

Lady Shen makes a dash for her desk and reaches for a revolver she has stashed away, but Libido just uses her whip and pulls the revolver right out of Shen’s hand, she then uses her whip again and wraps it around Shen’s body before slinging her straight into a wall, knocking a load of ornaments off in the process. Shen gets to her feet, just in time for Libido to whip her ankles together and quickly pull her back down on the floor again. As Libido is busy teaching Shen a lesson, Tina suddenly gets the messages down her mic from her sisters, saying that they’ve completed all their tasks.

“Great work everyone! We’ve got Shen right where we want her too.” Tina replies over her own mic.

Libido then spins Shen around with her whip and watches her stagger and fall to the floor all dizzy.

“Well, Shen, your finished, right now all the information about all your safe houses, your lieutenants, your bank accounts, your little whore houses and everything else is currently popping up on ever single computer and across every law enforcement network, all across Hong Kong. This is the end of the line for you.” Tina proudly says.

Shen’s eyes widen in fear as she hears the sounds of police sirens in the distance, indicating that Tina was telling the truth, finally Libido wraps her with her whip one more time and presses the blue button, causing a knockout shock to zap Shen until she is unconscious. With her knocked out, Libido insists that she gets to be the one who strips her. Both Tina and Angel agree to this and Libido takes sheer delight in stripping Shen of everything. Shen was wearing a dove white thing, but this has been stripped off of her and shoved straight into her mouth, she was also wearing a angelic white push up bra, but this too has been stripped from her and tossed out the window. Libido gags her with a ball gag, then blind folds her with a black cloth. Libido then lays Shen’s body out into a star shape and secures her wrists and her ankles to all four corners of the room, using whatever she can find, such as the desk, the cabinet, the pipeline and even a filing cabinet. With Shen bound completely naked in a star shape and thanks to her gag and blindfold she has no idea where she is or what has happened to her.

“You know, I hate people like you. Bondage games can be fun and quite sexy and if couples want to tie each other up for sexual pleasure, then good on them, that’s what they like. But then there’s you. What you do is heinous and disgusting, I mean come on, where’s the love. So, I’m glad I got to be the one who did this to you.” Libido says as she brushes her hands together.

Tina looks out the window and see’s multiple armed police officers forcing the rest of the patrols to drop their weapons and be placed into custody.

“Okay sisters, that’s our cue to leave. Well Shen, I would say it was fun meeting you, but honestly, after seeing everything what you’ve done, you’ve made me sick to my stomach and I hope we never meet again.” Tina says as she switches the button, unlocking the office.

Moments later, the three sisters slipped out the office and managed to slip away into the night amongst all the chaos and confusion.

“Hey Angel, I know your greatly against things like that, but she deserved a hell of a lot worse than what I did to her, I just wanted to you know that.” Libido says as the three sisters run through the streets.

“I know and believe me, I also know that you could of some so much worse to her, but honestly, thank you for not doing it.” Angel replies.

“Anything for you sis, as long as your happy, I’m happy.” Libido replies.

This makes Tina smile greatly, she loves it when she hears her sisters sticking up for one another.

A little while later when the dust had settled and everything had calmed down, the sisters regrouped and both Tina and BB made anonymous calls so everyone could be discovered safely including. The tattoo artist, the four waitresses, the three Japanese metal singers, the two police officers, the pizza delivery woman, the gardener and all the golden tigers they had replaced along the way. The cowgirls were also released, but they were only untied just so the officers could handcuff them as their criminal activities were exposed by Tinker as well.

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The next day, all nine of the sisters were peacefully sitting outside a restaurant enjoying the bright sunshine and the clear blue skies. They’re all wearing various shorts and shirts, pending on their tastes and this even includes their shoes as they are wearing a mixture of things like converses, sketchers and even running shoes and of course, they are all wearing sunglasses.

Stasis is happily tucking into a big portion of Dim Sum, whilst the rest of the sisters casually sip of cold non-alcoholic drinks.

“So that’s the golden tigers taken care of, a few of the lesser known one’s might slip away, but all in all, the golden tigers are broken and beyond repair, there’s no way they’ll ever get back to the position that they were in before we arrived.” Tina says as she sits back and relaxes.

“So, what shall we do now then?” Mag wonders.

“Well, our plane isn’t scheduled to leave for a few more days, so screw it, why don’t we just treat these next few days like an actual holiday.” Tina replies.

“I’m up for that, there’s many sights and attractions I wouldn’t mind checking out.” BB says as she checks a tourist brochure.

“Me too, plus theirs still plenty more delicacies I still need to try.” Stasis says as she finishes her food.

“Mmmm, plus I haven’t had my fill of checking out all these cute Asian women.” Libido adds.

“Then, it looks like we’re all agreed, let’s go sightseeing.” Mag says as she finishes her drink.

Tina reaches into her pocket and pulls out some Hong Kong dollars and leaves them on the table as a tip, then just before they leave, both her and Tinker quickly turn to Angel.

“Hey, you know we haven’t forgotten about Mikasa and her sisters, we will find away to make sure that they can both be safe and stay together.” Tina says gently squeezing Angel’s hand.

“Just give me until the end of today and I promise, I’ll have a solution for you.” Tinker says as she gently squeezes Angel’s other hand.

“Thank you!” Angel says with a massive and hopeful smile.

“Now, let’s go and see what we find eh?” Tina says as the nine sisters head of.

Over the next few days, the sisters do everything that they said they were going to do. They travel all around Hong Kong and take in all the sights, including going to Victoria peak, visiting the Tian Tan Buddha statue, going down the avenue of stars and even visiting the Sik, Sik Yuen Wong Tai Sin temple. During this time, BB took dozens, potentially hundreds of photos of both herself and all of her sisters in all these various locations, she never missed an opportunity to take as many family photos as she could. With everything that the sisters go through back home at Heartfelt City, they all agreed that for once, it felt nice to just act like a bunch of normal sisters and enjoy a nice family holiday together.

Needless to say, for now, life was good for the sisters.


END OF CHAPTER THIRTY SIX
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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A very interesting story indeed. Just a couple of points and I'm just being helpful:

The language in Hong Kong is Cantonese not Mandarin, likewise the officers would also have local names, something like Lau, Chan, Yau, Leung etc. The rank structure in the HKPF is modelled on British lines, so you'd have constable, Chief Inspector, Superintendent etc. too. No captains or officers.

Hope this helps. Very exciting story. Please push on. :)
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Great chapter! A fun conclusion to the Hong Kong arc. :)

I really like how the action keeps moving in this one. The opening action with Soph sets a distinctive tone, something different from what we're used to. Not quite expected, but I like when you try new experiments. And the story hums along from there.

The infiltration of the police station provides a good spine for the chapter, as well as of course ample opportunity for a lot of USB scenes. Great opener there with Baozhai and Hualing, and an even better follow-up with the pizza girl. I love it when the heroines lure potential uniform donors to their hideout so they can spring a trap. And Stasis' reaction to watching the pizza fall... perfect. Funniest moment in the story. :lol:

Nice little detail explaining how the sisters can walk around disguised as cops despite not looking Asian. It makes sense, though I'm not sure how well-known Heartfelt City is that Hong Kong police would recognize it as a branch. In any case, it's these little details I appreciate.

The USB scenes were woven quite well into the story, such as the gardener's uniform being stolen to fool the two enforcers - who, in all honesty, sounded like they deserved the lesson of having their clothes stolen. And it leads right up to a great and satisfying showdown with Shen, who certainly deserves her punishment.

I guess my one problem (which isn't really a big deal) is that constantly reading the Chinese language and then the English translation can get a little distracting. I appreciate the effort you go to for authenticity, but I think one language (say, the English in italics, to indicate that the language is being translated) would be enough. Having to read two languages can be cumbersome and interrupts the flow of the dialogue, since I find myself having to skip past a lot of the Chinese sentences in order to understand what is being said.

Beyond that, top-notch stuff. I continue to marvel at the speed of your writing, and wish I could write as much even half as fast. Great job. :)
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Mr. Peaky Blinder - First of all, many thanks and I'm pleased that you liked it. :D

Naturally I was using google translate for this chapter when it came to the Cantonese scenes, and I was informed that Cantonese is traditional Chinese because it has eight different tones whilst Mandarin simplified as it only has five tones for it's characters, so I was using the traditional Chinese on google translate. Hhhmm, I guess it must have been wrong. :D

It certainly does help and thank you very much for the tips and I appreciate you wanting to give me a hand for future instalments. So thank you again. :D

At some point in the future as well, I would like to do a couple of chapters set in South Korea, now I know that, like myself, you are also a big fan of Korean women (rightfully so too). So if there's any specific uniform you'd like to see, please let me know so I can make a note of it, to include it for you. :D

Many thanks again. :D


Tirepanted - The opening fight scene for me was actually the hardest part to write, purely because, after watching so many elaborate fight scenes, naturally a lot of them are very fast and very high octane and it turns out putting them into words, was a lot more challenging than what I had initially thought, so I am very pleased that you thought it came out well. :D

From the moment, I started writing this chapter, I had my heart set of using some HK police women, purely because having some of their uniforms getting stolen, was just too great an opportunity to pass on. :D

Naturally their have been so many great food delivery women getting replaced in your stories and even multiple Asian shows have featured some scenes of delivery women getting replaced as of late, so I thought I wouldn't mind getting in on the action, plus I always wondered what would happen if Stasis had to replace a pizza delivery woman and now we know haha. :lol: :D

Oh no, no, it was the Golden Tigers who thought BB and Marie came from their branch in Heartfelt and Not the HK police department. This was so they could infiltrate the Golden Tigers in full disguise and not have their appearances questioned. :lol: :D

Thank you very much, I thought I'd add a little bit of a variety with the uniforms in this one as I can imagine just watching golden tiger enforcers and lieutenants, would get very repetitive, very quickly. So I am pleased to see that I was able to add enough variety for you. :D

Yes, I was just going for the whole authentic feel to it and just tried to make it seem natural as possible, but you are right, I guess for some of the more extended scenes of where two languages are being used, I could snip off a few of the lines and only include the English but naturally retain the Italics so people know that another language is being used. It's certainly some food for thought, thank you very much. :D :D

Oh heck, I'm never anyone to be envious over, I'm really not. It's only because I've had this entire story mapped out in my mind for a couple of weeks, so I knew exactly what I wanted to do and how I wanted to do it, that's the only reason I was able to produce this Arc so quickly. Plus if I'm being honest, I've always been a little bit jealous of the way, your stories contain so many puns, jokes and overall comedic scenes. Your stories have always made me smile and laugh, so I wish I had the ability to create awesome comedic scenes like you do. :D :D

Thank you so much and of course, I am extremely pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. :D
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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I just realized now that the 'Tigers' of the title reference the Golden Tigers... Though I swear that if Chow Yun-fat doesn't appear at some point, then I'll... do nothing because I'm alone in front of my computer right now. :lol:

The previous chapter set the bar pretty high, and this one is a worthy follow-up.

In general, the balance dark moments/light moments was a lot more... well, balanced. (Sorry... wasn't very inspired this time... :P ) I guess it's because the lighter 'humorous' moments are peppered throughout the chapter, being featured as brief interactions, while the longer 'lighter' moments are ones of comfort (Stasis and Erika :D ), which have more their place in this kind of atmosphere. I'll admit, the dark moments felt a little too tamed at some points though compared to the previous chapter.

- About the fight scene:

Soph VS an army of bullies. Poor Golden Tigers... They never stood a chance. A clear illustration of why sometimes ganging up on someone is not an effective tactic. Fighting together actually requires cooperation and training, and these thugs were clearly lacking of the latter. The detail of the song being played in-universe was just the icing on the cake. More seriously, I can reassure you that your fight scene was worth all the hype surrounding it. Its violence, its brutality and its realism when it comes to the injuries clearly set it apart from your other fight scenes, and the fight scenes of most stories in general. Though let's be honest, after the description of their sex slave ring, if there was one group we wanted to see receive realistic injuries, it's the Golden Tigers. I know I joked about the goons' incompetence, but I appreciated the detail of Soph being in difficulty when she reaches enforcers 6, 7 and 8, and the fact that she keeps being in difficulty afterwards with some thugs getting a few good shots at her. It makes the fight scene more intense and realistic. Bonus point for the swirlie and the 'smashing of the face' in the mirror, a way to highlight Soph's resourcefulness. She used her environment to her advantage. Finally, the fight scene has the perfect length: long enough to really feel like Soph is battling a small army by herself, but not long to the point that it becomes boring. I will however offer my sympathy to this poor enforcer with the broken nose (number 3 I think?). I can't help but admire her determination. But at least she offered the red thread that this scene needed to become pitch-perfect. I'm sure this thought will bring her some solace.

- About the uniform stealings:

Nothing much to say. I of course appreciated the detail of featuring Hong Kong police uniforms. The detail of the sisters putting them inside the car instead of leaving them in the open was well-thought.

Same for them going easy on the pizza delivery girl because she's an innocent third-party (and even paying the pizza). Or for them on the contrary NOT going easy on the Golden Tigers because they're criminals. I know I'm saying it often, but the rigour with which you feature the details of your characters' personalities is a strong point.

Butt booster panties. Just the name cracks me up!

Stasis' baseball slide was just the perfect detail. But tirepanted already mentioned that part, so I'll simply say I concur with him. Though I'll say that while Stasis had the funniest scene, Libido had the funniest lines. “Don’t feel embarrassed, I take everyone’s breath away with how passionately I kiss.” "Mmm, I like it when they pass out like that." Plus, as expected, she gets to teach Shen a lesson.

Golden Tigers being mugged has become a habit as of now, but it's always satisfying. Seeing the hypno dart return and being used in a different setting than just a small interrogation was a nice way to bring more variety.

And another Aika pose with the last two uniform donors!

- About the villainess:

After several chapters of being teased, Shen finally makes her appearance. And she doesn't disappoint, for the brief time she's actually on-screen. Her introduction is pretty chilling, displaying in one scene exactly the kind of woman she is. Very efficient. Her defeat is also very satisfying. I'll never get tired of watching these rich corrupt people trying to buy their way out, only to realize that they are facing one of the few still selfless people out there. Priceless. I admit that I regret that she was defeated so quickly and so easily, in that regards I understand perfectly why you were hesitating to make this a trilogy. Though an other part of me doesn't mind, as the sisters have already a lot of enemies as it is, including the Phantoms and the Company who have yet to return, so it's good to see them defeat the lesser ones one after the other. While I enjoy a lot the current format and status quo of your universe, I'm still hoping to see the plots revolving around the Phantoms and the Company to be solved as well. Because I imagine that these won't be solved in one chapter...

- Brief conclusion: This Hong-Kong escapade was definitively worth it. It brought two memorable parts, and the rest was of good quality.

Question at the end. So the sisters are going to bring Mikasa and her siblings with them, or to find them an adoptive family? The ending wasn't very clear.

There was no Chow Yun-fat... Why have you forsaken me? :lol:
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Trackman281,

All my pleasure. Here to help!

For South Korea, Korean Air flight attendants stand out as top draw steals. Very beautiful young ladies with highly detailed uniforms that would take ages to strip and replace.

South Korean policewomen are always good too. They make up more than fifty percent of the police force and are generally drop-dead gorgeous. Some ideas might include something involving a chaotic street protest. A couple of years ago, dozens of female railway stewardesses went up against them and even stole a few police hats as trophies during the confrontation. South Korea is also heavily controlled by the super rich and the Korean mafia is very powerful. Lots of potential happenings there.
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Rufusluciusivan - Hahaha, I was hoping someone would realise what I was doing with this title, nicely done for spotting it. :lol:

Thank you very much, the fight scene was actually the scene I spent the most time working on, purely because I had to get it spot on, but I see it was all worth it as everyone seems to have enjoyed, excellent stuff. :D Yes, Soph is a very adaptable fighter, in other words she'll use whatever she gets her hands on in a fight, because let's face it, when your severely outnumbered, you really do just have to use anything and everything at your disposal. :D

Oh yeah, that is something that does need to mentioned, is the fact that the Golden Tigers, are terrible and downright horrible people, so they really do NOT deserve any sympathy what so ever and how we saw them treating their slaves, just means that the beating Soph inflicted on them, was even more deserving and more satisfying to behold. :D

Yes, that is something that did very much need to be highlighted, is the fact that the ordinary women, the sisters were mugging for their uniforms, were in fact , just normal everyday working women, so it made sense for the sisters to go easier on them, whilst the golden tigers are scumbags, so naturally the sisters were a bit more punishing with their bondage techniques and takedowns, rightfully so too. :D

Goodness, Libido was the standout sister for you in this one, I genuinely thought you were going to say BB this time round. Libido will be so pleased. :D

I was originally going to make Shen have a marge larger role in here, for instance.......I had this idea that she got wind that the infiltrators were in her villa before hand, so she waited until the sisters were inside, before she revealed that she had a lot of slaves being held at gunpoint and every thirty seconds the sisters don't surrender, she'll put a bullet in one of the sex slaves heads.............Now, it's sounds like an itneresting idea and sounds like something that Shen would do, but when I actually thought about it more and more, I realised it was going to become too complicated to write properly, so I thought of a different scenario, in this case, the villa infiltration. :D

YES!........There is indeed a LONG arc coming which will feature the companies return and the phantoms full time return too.........It still in the development stage (my mind) at the moment, but don't worry, it's coming.......It's coming. 8-)
Question at the end. So the sisters are going to bring Mikasa and her siblings with them, or to find them an adoptive family? The ending wasn't very clear.
I might need to send you a quick message about that, don't worry, it's all good! :D

Mr. Peaky Blinder - Very well, that means when I get to the South Korea arc, I'll make sure to include both some stewardesses and some policewomen for you too. :D

Plus, I'm going to do a little bit of reading about what you said about South Korea being controlled by the super rich and the mafia itself, because you are right. There is indeed loads of potential there, and plenty of opportunities to work with! :D
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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YES!........There is indeed a LONG arc coming which will feature the companies return and the phantoms full time return too.........It still in the development stage (my mind) at the moment, but don't worry, it's coming.......It's coming. 8-)
Actually, that worries me, for the future of the sisters! But it's the good kind of worry I guess. :lol: Plus, they are the main antagonists, so it's logical they'd want to take central stage at some point. Gradually, all the minor antagonists are defeated one after the other (Evans, the various gangs...) Only the main ones remain.
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Re: Chapter 36: Crouching Tigers, Hidden Clones

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Rufusluciousivan - it's strange because I've always viewed Kuebiko as the true main antagonist, especially when it comes to Tina. :D

Yes because as you see, I have many countries in mind I wouldn't mind the sisters going to. For example...... South Korea, Japan, Mexico, various parts of America and several countries in Europe.......... BUT......... We still need to deal with the fact that the Phantoms and the company are still out there, so the sisters will need to deal with them first. :D

Speaking of which........... We know that the Phantoms and the company have been locked in a stalemate for quite some time, but the wounds are clearly showing. When we first saw Kheshig she had this bright and vibrant bright white power armour. Now when we last saw her, her armour had pieces blown off. Some of it was being held together with makeshift straps and its even been modified to accommodate with the war. So we know that both sides are clearly hitting each other with everything they've got, so this could leave us with three potential outcomes............

1. The sisters could take advantage of the factions weakened states and swoop in and take them both down.

2. The sisters could even find potential allies in both factions that only want peace, which could lead to a revolt.

3. The sisters might even make a deal and join one of these factions just to see the end the war end.

.......... Oh choices, choices. :D
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