suggestions for my new story rookie infiltration

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Re: suggestions for my new story rookie infiltration

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pc305435632 wrote: Thu May 05, 2022 11:50 am
dummy76 wrote: Thu May 05, 2022 10:12 am that's actually a smart idea. but her colleagues patroling would certainly notice something wrong.
You can put the plot of "finding the body" at the end of the story, and the protagonist is preparing to evacuate at this time.
Designing the plot of "the body was found" means that we can describe the appearance of the body at this time.
for example, "piss-stained pants"
Of course, I'm just making my suggestion. how to design your work is your freedom :D .
I've always enjoy your story.
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