Of course, I'm just making my suggestion. how to design your work is your freedom .pc305435632 wrote: ↑Thu May 05, 2022 11:50 amYou can put the plot of "finding the body" at the end of the story, and the protagonist is preparing to evacuate at this time.
Designing the plot of "the body was found" means that we can describe the appearance of the body at this time.
for example, "piss-stained pants"
I've always enjoy your story.